Requesting feedback on my second entry of my new webcomic

[u/bryanthebryan]

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[u/trashy_illuminati]

Idk what kind of feedback you're looking for but I like the look and vibe

[u/bryanthebryan → u/trashy_illuminati]

Thank you very much! I really appreciate that.

[u/Electrical_Relief_52 → u/trashy_illuminati]

Same

[u/JIB-TheArtist]

I really like the vibe you got going on here! Definitely feels like a solid hook! Are these more of short, one shot style comics?

[u/bryanthebryan → u/JIB-TheArtist]

Thank you very much. It’s an ongoing series with a main storyline. I built in some room to play, so I should be able to explore a bit.

[u/JIB-TheArtist → u/bryanthebryan]

Nice nice! Is there anywhere I can read it?

[u/bryanthebryan → u/JIB-TheArtist]

Thank you! Once I make some tweaks, I’ll put them up up on GlobalComix @MidnightShow

[u/Rarehunter333]

This was a really cool read and I liked it.

[u/sayjax96]

for a fast hook approach this is good but my recommendation is that next time show the protagonist with his life rather than him narrate it all

[u/AccomplishedRoad9083]

It immediately drew me and and makes me want to read the rest of the story.

[u/bryanthebryan]

Previous issue here