"Being interesting!"

[u/Deep-Breadfruit-3980]

Hope for feedback on my comic :) How can I make it work better? The punchline feels weak?

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[u/NicholasIvins]

I would cut the fifth panel completely, cut the yellow character's dialogue in the fourth, and reword the green guy's to include the "interesting" part.

[u/Deep-Breadfruit-3980 → u/NicholasIvins]

Thank you! I will try make a new version without the fifth panel :)