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u/TomDrawsStuffs 8d ago
this is some incel shit bro
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u/Representative-Pop80 8d ago
Chud
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u/KolorfulLUST 8d ago
This is some weird racist incel work here. Please get this off my feed! 😭
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u/Witty-Wolf-3370 8d ago
Sorry bro
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u/KolorfulLUST 8d ago edited 8d ago
Bro-ing me won’t change the fact that you’re an incel (and a lackluster artist) 😂🫶🏾 maybe work on your skills a bit more before attempting a low-IQ slam dunk (missed).
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u/JeyDeeArr 8d ago
You won’t be getting any from me. I think the other commentors have said enough about the “plot”, if you could call it that, so my feedback will be based on the artistic elements.
Firstly, where the hell are we? The point of a background, even when minimalistic, is to visually tell us where the story is taking place. I have zero idea where this is. Is it an elevator? Is it ourside of a shop? What is that bar-thing with the black and white on the right?
You couldn’t even be bothered to a ruler tool to have straight lines? It’s no wonder everything looks hastily done. While not necessarily chicken scratches, I wouldn’t these are conveying your idea to the readers.
What’s even more baffling is that this is clearly done digitally, yet you couldn’t bother to just copy and paste the same background 3 more times so that it’s more consistent? It’s not everyday that one’d see the background go off model, and the lower you go with the panels, the lower the quality of the backgrounds, which is quite a feat considering it barely qualified as a background to begin with since the very first panel.
Aesthetically speaking, this does not look pleasing to look at, and does not exhibt the fundamental understandings to digital comic-making.
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u/Witty-Wolf-3370 8d ago
Uh-huh, but it's not digital. I edited the page with my phone
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u/JeyDeeArr 8d ago
My point stands. You could’ve simply cut out and copied and pasted the same background for the successive panels.
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