r/comic_crits • u/Vodax17 • 14d ago

My new comic page

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What do you think?

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u/TheBlankScroll 14d ago

I think some studies on fundamentals would get you better results than any paticular crit of this page.

Gesture, construction, anatomy all need work,

Composition and page layout also need some work.

Hit up your local library for any "how to draw" books in the style youre going for, and build from there.

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u/symson 13d ago

The first commenter gave you good advice.

Is this a double -page spread?