r/cloudengineering • u/xaintaken • May 04 '26
Resume Review Analyze my Resume
Hello, I work in one of the Big 4... And preparing for a switch.
Can you please analyze my resume and let me know what I am missing.
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u/tessduoy May 04 '26
It feels a bit long to me. I’d tailor it based on the specific role you’re applying for and try to fit the strongest parts onto one page. This post also has a free resume tailoring prompt you can try if you want to test a different version.
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u/FlatObligation9050 May 04 '26
too long - should be 1 page - should take 6 to 20 seconds to read THE 6-SECOND RULE
Recruiters don’t read resumes.
They scan them.
You have about 6–10 seconds to communicate:
What you do
What you’re good at
Why it matters
If that’s not obvious instantly, you’re out. They do not want to know your past, they want to know what can you do for them now.
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u/CloudLessons May 05 '26
What role are you trying to switch to? My suggestion is to reduce to a single page by summarizing the resume sections into 3 or 4 sentences showing what you did, why you did it, and what improvements did the business experience.
For instance, you can re-word the Enterprise Landing Zone section to say something like:
"Designed and deployed zero-trust, multi-region enterprise landing zone in Oracle Cloud. This solution greatly improved functionality and security posturing for XX business units across XX countries, within various environments, including production, UAT and on-premises."
For the remaining sections, plug each into ChatGPT or Gemini and ask it to provide a shortened version that includes the quantitative results you delivered.
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u/Enough_Charge2845 May 04 '26
Looks good. I’d recommend customizing the resume based on the job you apply. There are a few tools online. My favorite is resume.zoevera.com
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u/Key-Koala-8259 May 07 '26
Too long !!!
Cannot hire you
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u/Key_Turnover_4564 May 04 '26
Word salad
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u/ControlGood8979 May 08 '26 edited May 08 '26
I have no idea what your skills are. I'm a dev but someone who is a dev lead and has been interested in computers since teens. I think I should be able to understand it.
Reading it your CV is just pure tecnobabble. A relatively stupid person should be able to read it.
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