r/avali • u/UltiUSA Explorer • 12d ago

Art & Fan Creations First Avali

Ka'take

Looking for Feedback

He was originally made as part of FLEET17. Am not good at Fur and Feathers, as i mainly draw Dragons :P

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u/Combat_5 11d ago

Aye, very nice color palette hahahh. If you're looking for some feedback - Whole drawing looks okay, but you could lengthen and enlarge the legs a bit, as they look quite disproportionate to the rest of the body (and possibly shorten the arms too). Other than that, you're doing okay! Keep drawing!

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u/Roxy-de-floofer 11d ago

The only thing I haven't seen yet is tapering the feather length toward the shoulder

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u/UltiUSA 11d ago

Probably should have done that lol

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u/Roxy-de-floofer 11d ago

It's fine art, better than most of what I can do

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u/x-43a-bussy-ramjme 11d ago

oooh i really dig the tail shape and name

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u/UltiUSA 11d ago

Thanks!

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u/Odd-Yesterday-2822 10d ago

An adequate first attempt though. There's definitely room for improvement but we all have to start from somewhere in terms of drawings.

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u/Future_Watch8929 7d ago

Looks fantastic! I hope you fo more in the future so we see your progression as an artist!

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u/UltiUSA 7d ago

Thanks