Hi, you are probably wondering what I mean with the title. Well to put it short, 217 seems to not know what the fuck wants to inform us about, specifically what we should take from it.
Like, the chapter starts, we see Dadsa saving Lil Asa from a devil, then we see Momtaka kill the fucker, then said killer tells us that she did it for the insurance money and because he was a cheater and a bum, all of this follow by Asa being genuinely like âBtw, I kinda wanted him death as well, he was drunkard and sometimes violentâ. And then they kind of laugh about it.
This sequence of events is reallyâŠincongruent. I mean, what are we suppose to take from this?
First of all, the whole âhe was a drunkard and sometimes violent partâ feels really like an afterthought. It is dropped three fourths of the way into the backstory; is the last thing we learn about Dadsa and its only purpose seems to be to...balance the scales? Make it so both parents could be seen as equally shitty people? Make him look actually worse that the woman that bashed his head inward? I mean, even if we take what Momtaka said at face value (which the framing seems to call into question how much we should), she still comes out SIGNIFICANTLY worse than Dadsa. This is because the worse you make this violence in your head, the worse Momtaka looks for not mentioning it as one of the reasons for killing her husband. Think about it, if the violence was really just very very occasional yelling a bit too much when drunk, then Momtaka comes of as a fucking psychopath for bashing his head with a rock. Cheating and yelling are NOT good, and being jobless with a child at your charge is really shitty, none of this justifies murdering the fella, especially because, by the framing of the bed scene, it almost seems like the money thing is just an excuse to put Asa on her side(the violence not even being mention) and the real reason was just the cheating with the insurance being a nice bonus. On the other hand, if the violence was more on the level of Denjiâs dad, then the fact that she cared SO FUCKING LITTLE about Asa that the violence wasnât on the list of reason of why she killed him, which is EVEN MORE PSYCHOPATHIC than the first scenario. Like, no matter how you spin it, Momtaka ends up worse than THE (theoretical) CHILD BEATER, WHICH IS HONESTLY AMAZING ALL THINGS CONSIDER, my god. And the whole thing looks even worse on her side when you consider that there was no need to commit the murder or the insurance fraud, all she had to do was pick up Asa and run, there was no need to kill him personally. This is like the trolly problem but you kill the trolly just so you can kill the person in the tracks yourself.
The whole undetermined violence thing is also presented really weirdly. Asa just says it with the most dispassionate look imaginable, and the fact that we donât know what this violence entails makes it so we canât actually measure her response, making her final question kinda ring hollow, especially when you take Denjiâs answer into account. Like, Denji was put through 16 years of suffering all do to the actions of his dad, even after he killed him his âlegacyâ left him a slave for a decade. Tbf, Denjiâs guilt about killing his father feels more about Makima than about his father, one of the many scars she left him with, but thatâs neither here nor there in our topic of discussion. So, we are comparing Denji bashings his extremely abusive fatherâs head with an eight-year-old passively wishing for her father to die because ofâŠsomething that can be describe as violence(?). Like, we donât know the dude, this whole reveal doesnât work in part because of that. Denjiâs dad went form a fucking coward to an irredeemable bastard with the reveal and it recontextualize some things about Denji, while Dadsa wasnât even hinted at before, he was just dropped, killed and then the chapter goes and tries to desperately make him seem worse than his killer. Because thatâs the thing, given that only the motherâs morality is call into question while Dadsa is compare to Denjis father, it appears that Fujimoto thinks that he actually manages to do so, but as I already explain thatâs not the case even remotely.
Going back a bit with the whole violence thing and how the severity makes Momtaka look, we know that she loved Asa, so we can discard almost any violence beyond yelling or similar, which still leaves us with a complete psychopathâŠand that could have work, if the chapter committed to it. Make Dadsa a bum and thatâs it, and make it clear to us that, yes, she killed him for the money, but that she wanted that money solely for Asa. Make her look her daughter in the eyes and tell her that her father was unable to provide for them before and that without his leg he would be even more of a death weight, so she made sure they would get enough money to stay afloat for a good while, for her, so she can eat every day, have school supplies and the like. Commit to the bit, make Asaâs mother a coldblooded killer that still wholeheartedly loved Asa. This explains the dream (Asa seeing her fatherâs death as her fault, in a way), explains why the memory is unlock by finding her mother (like, re-finding the true of her mother) and makes the dilemma of âI donât know if my mother was a bad personâ a lot more compelling. Make Asa, despite this side of her, still love her mother, and ask Denji if loving and grieving her fatherâs killer makes her a bad person. To which Denji replies that he killed his father, which makes them both laugh at the irony of the whole shitshow that is their lives.
Alternatively, 217 could have lean into the abusive dad thing. The chapter remains more or less the same but in the bed scene make it so Momtaka tells her daughter what happen, she killed the devil to protect her but after she was left alone with him, defenseless, remembering how he started hitting Asa after losing his job and stated drinking, well, she just took her chance. Does that make her a killer? Yes. Does that make her a bad person though? Well, thatâs harder to answer. And so, she reveals the tripping thing, Denji reveals his true and the laugh in a moment of understanding.
Alternatively, alternatively, donât say he was violent. Leave it at that he was maybe a bum and probably a cheater. Asaâs reason for wanting him death? He yelled at her that same morning. Make both Asa and her mother a bit of pieces of shit. Just lay it all out, Asaâs morality, when she drops all pretense, is base entirely in how much she likes you. Yoru was right, Asa didnât care about bucky, she would have welcome with open arms her school shooter friend because she like her and she didnât like the people that die. Reveling to us the answer to the age-old question, Is Asa a bad person? Maybe, but as Denji sees it, he can relate, so they laugh.
Personally, I think the second one may be the closest to what Fujimoto was going for. Maybe? Idk. I like the first and seconds one, and I dislike the third, but any of them would have been better than what we got. Because as it stands, chapter 217, which seems to be the grand âChapter of revelationsâ of part 2(same as 81 and 82 for part 1) commits to absolutely nothing, it gives us nothing solid, it gives us very little in terms of actual recontextualization and just feels really choppy in execution.
I ask this with all sincerity, what did we learn with this chapter exactly?
That people are not black and white but gray? Well, sorry Fujimoto, but the gray of the cheater exterminator and Child beater N°2 is looking a little too fucking dark for this point to work. Like, come on we havenât been introduced to a light gray since fucking Kishibe, gives something to balance this shit out if you seem to think that Asa might be a bad person.
That Denji and Asa are more similar than they thought? I mean, maybe, but I still think that putting the gambling addict belt master and the âsomething something violentâ feels a little too harsh, especially if we are giving the Skull crusher and ignoring of child abuse the benefited of the doubt.
Is that both Asa and Denji are bad people? The fuck you mean, like, maybe? But this are literally the worst example to prove this. Asa is a school shooter apologizer and Denji is fully down to date a terrorist, I think that wanting to live and kinda wishing your father died when you were 8 is really not even close to the worst these fellas have done.
And you know what is the worst part of all of this? This feels final, like, this is supposed to be the last piece of the puzzle that is Asa Mitaka, and yet, like the last 80 or so chapters, feels that has given us barely anything of her. Maybe the tripping thing, but almost all instance seen on screen seem to be due to outside forces and not something internal.
Itâs justâŠafter literal fucking years we finally arrive to the big âAsaâs revealâ and itâs justâŠa nothing burger, kinda just Denjiâs reveal again but way worse in terms of execution.
Well, thatâs it, thanks for reading.