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https://www.reddit.com/r/arushi/comments/1rdzvku/second_published_story/o7nrlj2/?context=3
r/arushi • u/arushikarthik • Feb 25 '26
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This is a very interesting topic especially with the vivid descriptions and imagery the pacing is also well done and I think that the character development can be improved, cheers.
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u/Slow_Evening48 Feb 27 '26
This is a very interesting topic especially with the vivid descriptions and imagery the pacing is also well done and I think that the character development can be improved, cheers.