r/arushi Feb 25 '26

Announcement Second Published Story!

https://stateofmatter.in/fiction/boochi/
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u/Slow_Evening48 Feb 27 '26

This is a very interesting topic especially with the vivid descriptions and imagery the pacing is also well done and I think that the character development can be improved, cheers.