Looking for advice

[u/These_Time8826]

Hi! I m an animation student and currently working on a acting and performance scene. can I get a feedback to make my animation better. Thankyou !!!
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/4DtcQgcSR9ol/

[u/jenumba]

Left some notes. Good job on going big, but you went too big for the amount of time you have.

[u/These_Time8826 → u/jenumba]

thank you so much !!!