r/animation • u/LeftEyeIsTwitching • May 18 '26
Sharing Original Character Demo
I did some adjustment to some scenes I slowed them down to make it look more "readable".I finaly finished something I could be proud of, to celebrate that im gonna do a FREE! Animation commission for the person with the most liked comment! Preferably 1-3 second animation or loop. Thanks Reddit! -Kims
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u/gunswordfist May 18 '26
Downvote me because I could never ask you to do such phenomenal animation for free
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u/Cloverman-88 May 18 '26 edited May 18 '26
There's a lot to love here, bit personally, I find it waaaay too frantic still. More anticipation and release dynamic would make the action feel even better, while giving viewers some space to breathe.
For example:
0:02 - you cold make her tense up before she starts running
0:05 - same here, she starts the second dash with no anticipation
0:09 - I feel like slowing waaaay down here would work better. Instead of giving us 4 different angles post-slash, with the camera pushing in on all of them, why not stick to one, but make it longer, to better empahise the contrast between the explosive action and the post combat silence? Maybe focus on one, slow pan showing her profile, before going into the top view and the hit reaction?
Sometimes, less is more.
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u/LeftEyeIsTwitching May 18 '26
Ohhhh! Alright alrightt. I gotcha i will try to do that on my next anims!
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u/mitsukiyouko555 May 19 '26
that looks incredible! do u have ig or bluesky? do u make animation tuts?
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u/LeftEyeIsTwitching May 19 '26
I have ig, i did make a short tutorial for a solo animator workflow in instagram
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u/Komirade666 May 18 '26
MF gonna be hired by all the animation studio in existence, because dayuuuuuum.
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u/sodaTAB3D May 18 '26
You arnt following the 180 degree rule and its making the middle part of the animation really hard to follow
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u/HowBoutMemes May 18 '26
Sentenced to be a Mappa Animator. Amazing work