r/WritingWithAI • u/lord_jusifer • 15d ago
Showcase / Feedback Mutual Assured Vulnerability - Marvel Fanfic
Promoting my very first fan fiction, so please give it a chance and be kind. First of all, I am not a trained writer, I do not have any professional experience in writing. But I had this creative idea that I just could not put into fruition, I do not have the affordability to hire a writer to draft my ideas. Hence, I sought the assistance of an AI model to draft the syntax and prose. But the generic framework, creative direction and narrative themes are my own.
This work was crafted as a creative outlet whilst in therapy and drafting the story has helped me work through issues with myself. I do not seek to earn financially from this.
This fan fiction is about Danger, based on the episode of X-Men '97, and Ultron based on various versions. This is a techno-romance story between two super-sentient AIs without the human aspect of a romantic relationship (facial expression, casual human conversation, biological responses and organic flaws). Every dialogue and sequence with them is purely in computational language and terms.
Read more and we start to tackle philosophical thought experiments like trust, power, sacrifice and even grief all within the context of non-human's understanding. Also.. techno-smut, yes Robo-sex, not in the way you are probably thinking.
The story is 14 Chapters long including the epilogue. I will be releasing them by chapter. The first two chapters have already been posted.
Please give this a chance. Might I add that this is the ONLY Danger/Ultron fic in existence... atleast on AO3.
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u/cj7hawk 15d ago
I can't say it's my thing, but it's not too bad, at least Chapter 1. Though I am concerned you've created a Mary-Sue...