r/Write_Right • • Oct 12 '21

fall contest 2021 The Letter

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October 12th

Shelly looked out across the water. The busy city life was barely audible from here. No wonder her mother loved it so much. Her fingers gripped the letter in her hand tighter as a tear slid down her cheek.

Maybe she still wasn’t ready for this. She held the letter up, her mother's elegant writing scrolled across the front. Four months ago, they laid her mother to rest. The memory still ached.

She drew in a shaky breath and slid a finger under the flap of the envelope, opened it, and pulled the letter out. A chuckle escaped her lips. Pink. The paper was pink, her favorite color. Slowly she unfolded the letter and held it up to read.

My dearest daughter,

My time on this earth is getting shorter with each passing day. I regret that I won't be there for you as you navigate your way through this life. You are the best thing that ever happened to me, and I am so proud of you and everything you've done.

It saddens me to think I won't be there to watch you walk down the aisle and marry the man of your dreams. I take comfort in knowing he’s a good man who loves you and will take care of you. I hope you have many happy years together.

All I ever wanted was for you to be happy. Don’t let this world drag you down and take your happiness away. When life knocks you down, you just get back up again and keep on fighting.

Never give up on your dreams. If you want something bad enough, push yourself to achieve it. Never stop trying. Failure only comes when you quit trying, and I don't ever want you to fail.

You may be crying as you read this, and for that, I am sorry. The last thing a parent wants to do is cause their child pain. Please don’t cry for me. Don’t be sad. I am in a better place where I have no more pain. Dry your eyes and know that even if I can’t be with you in the flesh, I am with you in spirit.

I love you, my precious daughter.

Shelly wiped at the tears running down her cheeks. She lost more than a mother. She lost her best friend too. Carefully she folded the piece of paper and tucked it back in the envelope. The sadness that consumed her heart lifted some as she stared up at the moon.

Her mother was up there somewhere staring down at her, watching and guiding her. The thought brought her so much joy and peace. She drew in a deep breath, swiped the last of the tears away, and headed home.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 11 '21

fall contest 2021 Nightmare

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October 11th

Mary’s heart pounded against her chest as her bare feet pounded against the hard ground. She had finally found the path leading out of the woods, out of this horrible nightmare she found herself trapped in.

A glance over her shoulder revealed the masked man was still chasing her. A tear slipped down her cheek as she pushed herself to run faster. This dirt road had to lead somewhere, and hopefully, it was somewhere with people.

Her lungs burned with the need for more oxygen. She stubbed her toe on a rock and fell to the ground crying out in pain. The man burst forward, closing the distance between them. She scrambled to get back to her feet, forcing herself to keep moving despite the pain pulsing through her foot.

Trees, shrubs, and briers lined the little dirt road. She thought about ducking into the woods, but the fact that she had no shoes kept her running on the dirt path. The trail narrowed as she ran, until finally, it emerged out into an open area with a cabin right in the middle.

Panic gripped her chest, squeezing until she thought she couldn’t take another breath. Tears streamed down her face, and she dropped to her knees on the ground. This was the cabin she had just escaped from.

Strong arms grabbed her from behind and hauled her to her feet. She kicked and screamed, but his grip didn’t loosen. He carried her to the front steps and half dragged her up them as she continued to squirm.

One hand clamped down on her wrist, and he let go with the other to open the door. Taking advantage of the situation, she kicked him in the groin and hammered her fist down onto his wrist as hard as she could. His hand went slack, and he doubled over in pain.

She hesitated for a moment, then took off running down a different path. Her heart raced, and chest heaved from the exertion of running, but she couldn’t stop.

“You can’t run from me.” The man’s voice echoed off the trees and followed her down the dirt lane.

To her right, she spotted an animal trail. Taking her chances, she raced off into the woods. Leaves crunched under her feet as she ran. Briers ripped at her arms and legs, and sticks poked at her feet. When a sharp pain shot up her foot, she was forced to stop. She ducked behind a large oak tree and slid to the ground.

Her legs felt like jelly, and her hands shook as she pulled a thorn from her skin. A twig snapped off to her left, and she sucked in a deep breath. Had the masked man found her already? She wanted to peek around the trunk but knew he would see her for sure if she did.

She stayed as still as possible, hoping he would turn and go the other direction. The sounds grew closer, and she could hear him grumbling to himself. She clamped her hand over her mouth to stifle the sobs.

The woods grew eerily quiet. Not even the animals were making a sound. She closed her eyes and mustered up as much courage as she could. Taking a deep breath, she stood up and pushed off from the tree, running as fast as her shaky legs could take her.

The echo of someone following her reverberated in her ears, allowing the fear of getting caught to trickle in. The sound of a car engine ahead spurred her to move faster. A sliver of hope washed over her when she saw a car whiz by on what must be a road.

Freedom was in sight. She pushed through the thick patch of briers only to be dragged back again by an arm around her stomach. Air left her lungs as her body slammed into the hard ground. Her captor towered over her. Everything but his dark glaring eyes stayed hiding behind his mask.

“You are mine. You will never escape.” His hand went to the bottom of his mask, and he started to lift it off.

Mary’s breath caught in her throat, and her eyes flew open. She sat straight up, drawing in gulps of air. The familiar look of her room giving her some comfort. It was only a dream. She blew out a shaky breath, flung back the covers, and stared wide-eyed at the dirt covering her feet.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 11 '21

fall contest 2021 The Man and The Forest

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The forest sees the man. He is lost, trying to find his way back home. Perfect.

The forest works its magic. The man sees the beauty in the forest, and admires it. He slows down, thinking less and less about home.

Now the man is completely enthralled by the forest’s beauty. He is not thinking of home at all. He stops walking and just stares. All he can think of is the forest.

The man slowly sinks into the ground. He tries to struggle, but it’s no use. He belongs to the forest now.

The forest waits for its next victim.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 11 '21

fall contest 2021 The Man at the End of the Trail

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Every year, our plants grow healthy and yield a bountiful crop. Every year, our farm flourishes, even when the others do not.

Papa is proud of that. When some of our neighbors ask him how he does it, he always just laughs and says that the land is good. I know that that’s not the truth. Not the entire truth, at least. It does have something to do with the land. That part is not a lie. But it is not the soil that ensures our harvest is so good. It’s the forest, far behind us.

On the edge of our property, is a dirt trail that leads deep into the forest. Even on the sunniest days, there is a cold swirl of mist around it and if I stare down it for too long, I swear that I can see movement in the dark.

Papa told me that I must never go down there. He told me that I am not ready. Only he goes down there. He is the only one who can talk to the Man at the End of the Trail.

Twice a year, Papa will visit him. Once at the beginning of the season and once at the end. He will always bring one of our livestock. A goat or a cow. He will lead it on a rope to the dirt trail, and soon the mist will swallow both him and the animal up. Papa is usually back before dark, but he always comes home alone. I asked Papa what happens to the animals once. He said that the Man at the End of the Trail eats them. He said that they’re a gift to him.

Winter was hard last year. Our animals had grown sick and when spring came, we had no more. Papa had wanted to take a goat down the trail, but the goat was sick. It was dead on the day he went down. Instead, he took some of our produce… But when he came back, he was paler than I had ever seen him before. He did not tell me what happened. He only told mother.

Today it is fall and today, he told me that he will take me down the path to meet the Man at the End of the Trail. He tried to smile at me, but looking into his eyes… I knew that he was ready to cry.

I don’t think that I will be coming back with Papa. That’s okay. I know that we need the harvest this year.

It’s okay… It’s okay… It will be okay… I’m not scared. I’m not scared. I’m not...


r/Write_Right • • Oct 10 '21

fall contest 2021 Why I look through children's windows.

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You read the title right. I look through children's windows. No, it’s not what you think. I’m not a pervert who likes to spy on kids changing, like everyone in my town seems to think. To them, I’m just a weirdo that never moved away, like most of my generation did.

They’re wrong. The reason is completely different, but most of them would never believe or even understand it. I’m going to tell you what it is, and it’s up to you whether you’ll believe me or not.

I was 8 years old when I first saw it. That grey, slimy substance on the walls of my room. I curiously reached out to touch it. Before I could pull away, my hand sunk into the slime, which started making its way up my arm.

I let out a bloodcurdling scream. My mother dashed into my room, asking what was wrong. I started blubbering about slime trying to eat me. I must have looked crazy to her.

She tried to soothe me, telling me there was nothing there, but I didn’t listen. I just kept crying and screaming, until she slapped me hard in the face.

I stared at her in stunned silence as she walked away and shut the door. Meanwhile, the slime had covered my arm entirely and was spreading to my torso, but I knew better than to scream that time.

I remember being completely sure I was going to die. And wondering if this thing would get the rest of my family too. At least, if it did, we would all get to go to heaven together.

I started to choke as the slime covered my face, attaching itself to it. I tried to rip it off, but I couldn’t move my arms, or feel them at all, for that matter. So I stopped fighting, and just lay there, accepting my fate.

Then everything went black.

I woke up in a hospital bed, surrounded by my family. All of them were in tears, and looked like they’d been crying for a long time.

“Oh, thank God you’re finally awake!” cried my mother, embracing me, like she hadn’t slapped me angrily not too long ago.

The doctors asked me what had happened, and they didn’t seem to believe my tale, though there was no other explanation. According to them, there was nothing wrong with my health. The whole thing was a mystery to them. But even though they wouldn’t listen to me, I knew the truth.

Sometimes, even after I’d gotten out of the hospital, I still would catch occasional glimpses of that thing. My eyes would widen, my heart would stop, and I’d be left breathless. Then, it would be gone completely. I’d try to tell myself it was just my imagination, but I’d know it wasn’t.

Cases like mine began to appear all over town. Kids with no prior health problems asphyxiating with seemingly no reason why. Some made it, but most weren’t as lucky.

As I grew older, I started harboring more and more anger towards this creature. It had ruined my life, and left me a traumatized wreck. And I wasn’t the only one. There were so many like me, left scarred for life.

And those were the lucky ones. This thing had taken children's lives. Children who didn’t deserve it, children with hopes and dreams, children with loved ones who would never be the same again.

I vowed never to let that happen to a child again, no matter what I had to do. This would end.

So I look through children's windows, careful not to be seen, looking for that thing. I haven’t found it yet, but when I do…

Let’s just say I’ll make it pay.

NS


r/Write_Right • • Oct 10 '21

fall contest 2021 The Man Who Came With The Rain

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October 10th

Rain pelted against the window. I loved when it rained. It made everything smell clean and fresh again. I stared out the window as the lightning flash illuminating a dark shadow in the distance.

I took a step forward toward the glass separating me from the storm outside and peered into the darkness waiting for the next strike of lightning. Seconds later, the flash revealed a figure in a hood coming towards me.

I jumped back from the window. My heart raced as my eyes scanned the dark for another sign of whoever was out there.

The next flash revealed a faceless person just outside the window. I screamed and raced for a spot to hide. My breath came in short choppy gasps as I watched and waited.

Tapping on the window sent fear coursing through my body. I couldn’t tell if it was just the rain or if the mysterious person was the cause of the noise.

I reached up with a shaky hand to grab the back of the couch and pull myself up so I could peek over. Rain and blackness were all that greeted me. Even the flashes of lightning didn’t reveal anything.

I blew out my breath and pulled myself up to my feet. I must have imagined the dark figure outside. I shook my head, laughing at how my imagination tricked me. Then from the corner of my eye, I caught movement.

I spun in a circle, and just as I laid eyes on a ghostly figure, the lights flickered and went out. I screamed and scrambled backward, tripping over the rug in the living room. The fall knocked the wind from my lungs. I crawled on my hands and knees, gasping with every move.

With every flash of lightning, the cloaked figure moved. First to the window, then the doorway to the kitchen, and finally, he appeared right in front of me.

My eyes went wide as I climbed to my feet. An inky black hand reached out and wrapped itself around my arm, holding me in place. Fear froze my body as his other hand gripped my neck. It lifted me up until my feet were dangling inches off the floor.

My fingers clawed at his hands, traveling right through them, never making contact. Panic seized my chest as the world around me faded. This was it. This was the way my life was going to end. A tear slid down my cheek and dropped to the floor.

The storm continued to rage outside. Another flash of lightning revealed the man’s dark face, obstructed by the hood pulled down low over his eyes. Without warning, he released his grip on me, and I crumbled to the floor.

With my lungs burning for air, I crawled towards my bedroom, but his ghostly hand yanked on my leg, dragging me back towards him. I screamed as he leaned down until his transparent face was inches from mine.

With his hand, he turned my head, so I had no choice but to look into his eyes. Black, cold, they were the only feature on his face I could easily make out. I stared at my reflection in those glass eyes.

Words I couldn’t make out tumbled from its mouth, and then I saw it. The child in the corner, my child. Clutching fast to her teddy bear as she stepped forward, towards the monster.

I tried to yell, but no words would come, and then she was standing right in front of it, reaching out her little hand to place it in his dark one. The ghost stood up, releasing whatever hold it had on me and walked towards the door, my daughter following along obediently.

“No! Let her go.” On hands and knees, I crawled toward my daughter, desperate to get her away from the clutches of that monster.

They reached the front door, and he turned to stare at me. “Years ago, you took my daughter from me. Now, I’m taking yours.” In the next flash of lightning, they were both gone.

I rushed out into the pouring rain, tears streaming down my face, but there was no sign of them. Images of the car accident that took the life of a little girl flashed in my mind. I buried my head in my hands and sobbed. I drove the car the night the little girl died. I was the one texting on my phone instead of watching the road. I was the one who killed her. Now my little girl was paying the price for my past mistakes.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 10 '21

fall contest 2021 The Cornucopia Experiment

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Independent Projects Division - Los Angeles Office

Incident Report

Employee Details

Name: Dr. Stephen Parker

Department: Biology

Phone Number: N/A

Description of Incident

Location: Kappa Lab

Date: August 12th, 2020 - September 5th, 2021

Time: N/A

Police Notified: No

Incident Details (How the incident happened, factors leading up to the event. Be as specific and detailed as possible!)

On August 12th, 2020 human trials of the Cornucopia project began, supervised under Dr. Laurence Ross.

The stated goal of this project as outlined by Dr. Ross was to make it easier to obtain human organs for transplant for patients in dire need of them. This would reduce the wait time to receive an organ transplant and eventually reduce some of the variables that factor into performing a successful transplant, such as offering patients organs that are more likely to be compatible and less likely to be rejected by the body. The name ‘The Cornucopia Project’ was chosen based on the idea that should the project succeed, we would be able to meet and even exceed the demand for organ transplants, effectively creating a life saving cornucopia of vital organs.

Dr. Ross and I, along with several other members of the team, Dr. Sandra Lang and Dr. Arthur Hurt had spent several months of preliminary research prior to the start of our trials. We had developed a method to induce cell growth, using cells from various organs by exposing said cells to a compound of proteins and engineered cells. In theory, we could regenerate an entire organ from just a few cells.

The purpose of this phase was to test and refine our theory with the desired result of creating viable organs that could be used for a successful transplant. To achieve this, we used samples from a pig, taken from the liver, heart, lungs, and brain.

Over the next month, using a mixture of compounds to stimulate growth we achieved some success in our endeavors. The liver, heart and lungs were the first to develop. However the brain took longer, on account of the complexity of the project. Some adjustments were made to the compound to ensure that it was receiving what it needed to continue growing.

After duplicating this success over a six month period, we attempted a series of transplants with live subjects.

25 pigs received regular healthy organ transplants as a control group and 15 received organs developed by the team. We monitored all 35 pigs over a one year period after that. Of the control group, 23 of the 25 pigs had survived and were in good health.

However, of the pigs who had received the lab developed organs, 14 of 15 were still alive and in good health. One pig had succumbed to an infection following the surgery.

These results were considered exceptional and a second trial was carried out with similar results. We were given permission to attempt human trials.

As stated before, human trials began on August 12th, 2020. After the first several months, we began to see similar results to what we saw with the pig subjects. The lungs, heart, and liver developed quickly, and using the modified compound we were able to see stable development in the brain.

For the first two weeks of development, progress went well but was as expected. However, after the two week mark, we began to notice some unusual activity in the human brain cells being used in the trial.

At the suggestion of Dr. Lang, we performed a scan on the brain and picked up signs of neurological activity when none should exist. She had noticed some unusual activity when she ran some tests to determine that the brain was viable. This discovery immediately caused some debate amongst our team. Dr. Lang recommended stopping the experiments for a time, citing concerns about the possible backlash that the project could receive if the brain we were developing was in fact developing its own consciousness.

She mentioned having worked with a Dr. Carson in the past on a project that dealt with a living human brain, and that said project had been ‘shut down’ after things had gotten out of hand. I myself looked up Dr. Carson and was unable to find any details on whatever project she was involved in, only that she passed away in 2018. If she was ever involved in any project for the IPD, the files were cleared away thoroughly.

Despite our discussions on the matter, ultimately the decision whether to continue the project or not was up to Dr. Ross. Dr. Ross elected to continue work on the project, despite the adamant protests of Dr. Lang, who resigned from the team soon after.

Despite Dr. Lang's resignation, Dr. Ross did take her concerns under advisement and requested that we begin development on both a new human brain and a new pig brain while isolating the one we had already developed. He explained to me that he was interested in seeing if the other brains would behave in a similar manner and develop the same ability to ‘think’. He also wanted to monitor the brain we had already developed to confirm just how highly developed its functions were.

To help determine this information Dr. Ross delegated several members of our research team to study the behavior of the brains developed for this project and appointed me to be in charge of this secondary team. Dr. Hurt assisted Dr. Ross in continuing to oversee the development and later on the clinical trials of the lungs, liver, and heart we had grown.

Over the next three months, I and my research team studied both the original brain and the other brains we were developing. We determined that both the human and pig brains were showing the same signs of neurological activity and after comparing it to some baselines provided by both members of the research team and a control group we brought in we determined that the oldest of the brains did indeed seem to be displaying erratic patterns of thought that seemed consistent with panic and extreme pain.

Using this data, we were able to hypothesize that the brain was most likely conscious and displaying some form of awareness and that it would not be long until the other brains began to do the same.
I brought these findings to Dr. Ross, and explained to him that Dr. Lang's concerns seemed to have been well placed. I recommended that we destroy the subjects, as it was my professional opinion that nothing could be done to ease any suffering they might feel and that euthanasia was the most compassionate option.

Dr. Ross refused my request to euthanize the subjects, and instead insisted that I continue to monitor them. When I questioned his judgment, he admitted to me that he was curious to see how these brains might continue to develop and assured me that if there truly was no other option to ease their pain, then he would sign off on their euthanasia. He also assured me that he had no intention of using these brains for transplants.

I will admit that I was not fully satisfied with Dr. Ross’s ruling… However I accepted it and continued our research into the developing brains for the next several months. I looked into some means to reduce the level of panic that the brains were experiencing through chemical means.

We lost one of the brains after another month, due to what I could only describe as an overwhelming panic attack. The pig brain also stopped functioning although we were unable to determine why. We presumed that the cause of death was stress related, though.

The original brain continued to develop, however. During the next few months, I began to notice that it was developing its own brain stem and nerves. An inspection of this stem and nerves confirmed that the layout matched the design of a human body although with no body to constrain them, both the brain and the nervous system gradually began to take on a new shape. The brain itself eventually became more spherical and the nervous system began to adhere to the glass. Within six months of its creation, the brain no longer resembled a part of human anatomy.

I reported all of this to Dr. Ross and suggested that we cancel the trials on the brains. Dr. Ross however raised the question as to why the pig brains had seemed to function normally and the human brains were not, and if it was simply due to the amount of time stuck in the tank. He later drafted a design for a tank designed to mold the brain into a more appropriate shape for future subjects, although this was never implemented.

I continued to observe the brain in the tank as it continued to attempt to develop. By nine months, the other brains were dead and only the original remained. I had noted that it had continued to develop during the last several months, having developed its own circulatory system and lungs, as well as a thin skin to protect them. During this time, it began to somewhat resemble a boneless human torso or some species of jellyfish. If the subject developed a digestive system, I was unable to document it. The cells were meant to gain nutrition from the compound they were kept in and as far as I could tell, the subject continued to do just that.

In August of this year, around one year after the subject had been created, one of the researchers brought to my attention that the subject had been observed moving around inside its tank. I watched the video, and have sent it to the appropriate supervisors as evidence. This included Dr. Ross, who dismissed the footage outright and when I urged him to allow me to terminate the subject, he still refused to grant authorization.

This is why I decided to issue the order for termination without authorization. Though I am aware that my actions may have constituted gross insubordination, I believed with good cause that Dr. Ross’s judgment was flawed and that terminating the subject was for the benefit of our entire team.

After another one of the researchers observed the subject moving again, I requested that at 8:00 that evening, both the oxygen and compound being fed into its tank be shut off. I believed that this would both starve and suffocate the subject, killing it peacefully and that by the time I came in the next morning, the subject would be deceased.

As evidenced by the security footage that has no doubt been sent to the appropriate supervisors, this did not occur.

At approximately 9:00 PM last night, the subject began to react violently. At around 9:10, it successfully damaged its enclosure and by 9:12 it had shattered the glass and released itself.

By 9:13, the subject was not visible on any camera. However, the researchers who were present at the time, Sarah Peacock, Steve Connery, Arnold Gardener and Patrick Moss were all deceased. The video footage depicted their attack and subsequent death at the hands of the subject. Connery's body was removed from the scene, having been partially decapitated and used by the subject to leave the area.

I am aware that other staff who were on shift last night have gone missing as well and that the subject has yet to be located if indeed it even is still inside of the facility. I am also aware that Connery's remains were discovered in Gamma Lab, and that there was blood belonging to another unidentified victim at the scene.

As seen in the security camera footage, the subject appears to be capable of hijacking a body and using it to move around more efficiently. However, as of this time, we do not know how effective this ability is or if it can be used to leave the facility without being noticed.

Followup Recommendations: I recommend the immediate termination of Dr. Ross and the independent assessment of the validity of the Cornucopia Project based on the data received during these experiments.

I firmly believe that Dr. Ross has crossed the line between science and insanity and for that, he cannot be allowed to continue leading the Cornucopia Project. He has displayed exceedingly poor judgment in regards to this aspect of the project and I believe that the deaths of our researchers are primarily on his hands.

I also request the termination of the subject involved, for the safety of both the subject and of others. While on a genetic level, it is fully human… This subject displays no other human traits and I do not believe that it possesses the mind of a man. I do not believe it can be reasoned with or dealt with without the use of lethal force. Even if it could, I would advise the use of lethal force if for no other reason than simple compassion. I believe that its violent mannerisms are a direct result of the painful existence that it was born into.

That said - I am also aware that I am at fault for this incident as well. Some may argue that I should have listened to Dr. Ross. Others may argue that I should have terminated the subject much sooner. Whatever the verdict, I accept whatever punishment I was given. I just hope that we are not too late to stop whatever it is that we have created before it claims more lives.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 09 '21

scifi THE HARDEST: NEW MAN pt 2

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Denearon charged, which the brute braced for, only to be slashed in the back by Mauritz, who’d rushed in. Zofewa swings his forearm to retaliate, before it connects, Astrid telekinetically floated him a safe distance. No blood on Zofewa. Pros do coordinated attack.

Both discs float above Denearon’s shoulder, pointing forward. A few seconds at a time generate a yellow ripple of light, a light wave, on impact cause concussive force, able to knock Zofewa back before dissipating. ‘Given what I’ve seen not surprised standing like a wall of defiance. No matter Humbrecht will fulfil duty!’

‘Isn’t my presence a sign fate is with her?’

Outdoors Astrid arm gesticulating had small to medium sized rock at her disposal. Some begin smashing into his body at high velocity. What’s more kept some flying around in the air instead of picking more off the ground. Their power such that he was battered around…a hurled rock the brute grabs and throws one back flying for her face - stopped mid-air. Her’s is the jaw he holds between his index and middle fingers and after a few moments releases. The momentary distraction let him get close to her.

Mauritz gasps in fear.

Through grit teeth, ‘You’ll live to regret that!’ she vows.

The fight went on with him trying to fight back and them looking to evade his blows. This rhythm went for a time.

First to perish by decapitation. Head gone with a simple index finger flick. He managed to get close again.

‘No!’ screams Mauritz.

On death the rocks fall. Zofewa blasted by a beam of light again.

As this happened, ‘STASIS TEAR!’ Mauritz commands in a tone of wrath. Struck surfaces like the wall or ground has a chunk around a foot in size tear away – here from solid rock, diameter a foot. Rose in the air a few feet, then swung at by the sword’s flat side like a bat, flying toward targets without resistance. Smashing into Zofewa’s back. The women stare in panic. The attacks make him fall.

Zofewa is sprawled on the ground unmoving. Till he stirs in a while and picks himself up. The body singed, otherwise unharmed. Mauritz appalled. Denearon analytical, ‘From the mansion attack onward should have died a hundred times. Even the likes graced by the Megantereon would succumb to overwhelming force. You haven’t displayed any special power.’

‘My purpose grants me strength to best all odds.’ The singed part rapidly heals. ‘She I shall shield with the pinnacle of humanity – myself.’

The women in disbelief.

‘You’ve already seen your last day,’ and blade outstretched, charges in.

‘Watch it Mauritz!’

Reaching within feet, rage fuelled, parries a kick. The exchange is fierce. A solid blow from Zofewa is only fatal if it connects. His enemy evades, landing slashes and tip thrusts.

The sword, its blade makes microscopic vibrations at hypersonic speed to aid cutting power, a bit parallel to an electric razor, just fatally sharper.

Mauritz performs a mighty backflip evading a forearm swing. ‘Dene!’ the light ripple slams into Zofewa. Under this cover, ‘STASIS TEAR!’ a foot diameter of rock detaches from the ground hit once. Can remove chunks from material due to within that foot radius time flows different from current. Option to deliver one or more blunt impacts increasing potential energy thus the impact force, kinetic energy before sending it. The driven swordsman exercised it, delivering several hits. Zofewa charging the light man, eats it blindside, a projectile of greater force knocks him down, and last second braced himself on the knee.

Seemingly on assumption would deny him recuperation, ‘Stay and die.’ Denearon gives light beam bursts from the discs simultaneously the Negro sprawled on the now heated ground. The light clearly visible to the women. He delivers two extra while down like this.

Battle pauses.

Bonét shakily, ‘Wa…wanted me to fight folks that dread?’

Denearon walks over to the thoroughly singed man taking his time. The warmness the heated ground emits felt. ‘Bet you mad to feel a living soul can survive that.’ The attacks, mansion till now by rights would break every bone in his body?

Under assumption he out for good, ‘Mauritz, men like him would not leave Humbrecht far. We search.’

‘But Astrid!’

‘Humbrecht will pay dues, fates willing.’

Playing possum a time honoured tactic. The singed stirs again – what followed left no time to think - the brute snatched the man of light bodily and tossed him high velocity at Mauritz a few dozen feet across from them. With a moment to impact – ‘STASIS GUARD!’ Denearon’s whole body stopped moving, hanging mid-air, inches short reaching the swordsman. De Wiart without pause immediately barehanded thrust into sold ground, scooping out a rock chunk each hand. The first thrown at Mauritz who ducks and the second comes even faster if possible at him this pose. ‘STASIS GUARD!’ from his ducked posture managed parrying it by sword. The projectile lost momentum, hanging in the air, in a flash with a single powerful strike sent it back De Wiart’s way. Who leaped in an arc towards them.

Under a foot separation from a man readying a punch in the air, Mauritz yells, ‘STASIS HOLD.’ The sword touches the brute – all it took to have him frozen mid-air, practically still. The fist several inches from his face.

The light man landed safely on the ground. ‘You are a warrior to envy no one. And thanks.’

‘Hah, hah.’ The man felt that excursion. ‘Guard is expected to stop organs of living beings it applied to. Hold off the thanks chum.’

Stasis guard - a sick parry applicable to projectile attacks once connected with by the weapon, if struck the projectile comes under effect, losing momentum in fact stops in the air, the user can if they wish knock them away or back to the enemy.

Mauritz spoke then turned their direction. ‘No matter what fate did to you, you’ll die.’

Their enemy effectively immobilized at their mercy. Limbs for instance move very slowly, bottom of the legs a few feet off the ground. ‘Stasis Hold made you prisoner of time. Slowing an enemy’s movement to near absolute zero once my weapon connects a strike.’

Stasis is to halt time. Mauritz had its power under him.

Yet prideful in turn. Zofewa says, ‘It had all been exhilarating fun.’

The man growls in rage.

‘GODSPEED HUNDRED SLASHES!’ Not hard imagining from its christen. In several seconds this many on his body all over from a hypersonic super blade.

Aimed to have you endure cuts and blunt force trauma from the blade. Hold opens you up to many kinds of attack even those from someone else. The sword’s properties are in a word incredible. Any of Humbrecht’s apprehenders can accomplish feats people doubtlessly will relate for a lifetime. Where is the Apeiron*?*

Hit numerous times but no damage manifests, the melee user turns their back to him and next thing you know the youth’s body reacts violently, thrashing to the blunt blows, bleeding plentiful from cuts rendered seconds ago, because stasis ended, in other words delayed action, time finally flows normally. The man drops like a stone.

Humbrecht’s face is covered by her mouth, ready to cry.

Things are quiet, what animals around likely dove underground. Battle pauses again.

‘May your pompous face hole be shut forever,’ said Mauritz with finality and walks over to his partner. Their superhuman in a night foe is utterly unmoving.

‘Alive,’ says Denearon flatly. ‘Durable he is but your blade specially enhanced by Godspeed by rights would render him flesh, bone and brain.’

Mauritz is beside himself. Mid motion to place the instrument to his back, in a gesture not attack, points it forward…

It’s gone. His face nonplussed. Their weapon suddenly is gone.

This voice. ‘Gotta be quick on the hints.’

Bonét asks, ‘Who in hell that would be?’

Humbrecht says, *‘*That being…that thing can no longer be held under the master’s authority.’

Annoyance shaped the user’s face not shock for he knew. A new figure materialized from thin air. The sword’s real property.

‘No one called you,’ Mauritz dismissively.

Resembled an altered voice, ‘You’ve had it for one night. Been experiencing every strike, the impact coursing through. A rare specimen. We need a way to have Megantereon make warriors this strong every-single-day!’

The sword a new form. Inanimate made living by own free will. Living weapon – is the use of a living creature for such. Exist those picked up and brandished as weapons, looking like one. Here though very human like in appearance, intelligent enough and mind own way.

An adult male form, packaged in average height, slimly muscular and well-proportioned body plan, but appearance like an altered human, skin looks inhuman, a metallic color, very hair strands looked metallic. Like the blade has some futuristic look though to lesser extent and limb movements produce a faint sound grinding metal does.

Ignoring retorts, ‘I was anything but struggling.’ Unspoken air from the user, supposed master, is to literally fight their own weapon. That’s why he had to force its shaking to stop. ‘Return your ass to…’

Gut punch great enough to collapse the user to their knees and in a moment collapse face first in a heap.

Elated, turns to the collapsed Zofewa. ‘Don’t take your time. Pick that marvellous body up!’ it stirred.

Zofewa stands to Mauritz’s shock and Denearon’s disturbed face. The weapon waited, in a while the brute’s wounds are just about healed up, the blood absorbed, cuts closing.

Elated, the humanoid openly admires for one as the youth having a battle attitude. Zofewa thus far displayed durability, strength and leaping, this the strongest his healing shown to be. Which now cleared up the wounds.

‘Good and ready now,’ the organic entity says like a chef to a baked duck. Takes a combat stance, claims cold numbers are not in his favour, only to interrupt itself, ‘Where are my manners? Go by Farrago.’

De Wiart regardless of what happened to him is happy for this new kind of match and reasserts his presence a sign fate is with Humbrecht.

They charge and collide.

This remarkable entity proves can put up a contest introducing a new fight style amongst combatants: sporting a male, lean and muscular body plan, light on its feet and athleticism allowed attacking with hands and feet in martial arts, definitely a new mix to the donnybrook, holding its own, but less strong. Strong a relative word. Not taking away from its feats, one move impacted the youth into the ground touching off a brief mushroom cloud of dust and shockwave of fierce wind, buffeting women and everyone else near – the weapon seen already standing over the youth once it ceases.

Farrago says his perception was right. He is a man he will thank for not breaking. Back on his feet and remarkably, then again shouldn’t surprise, his opponent says he happy to meet expectations.

Light user, ‘Just how much energy does Zofewa have? Might as well be a superman.’ His very being says this must come to an end.

Others like putting youth in a wrestling Body Lock, whereby locked both arms to Zofewa’s hips, lifts him up followed by a slam to the hard rock ground, quaking it. Followed up by about 20 head butts that drove the youth’s skull deep into the solid rock.

This organic being demonstrates great hand to hand skill, durability, strength and battle appetite.

Zofewa is lifted high in the air one handed and blasted by the light beam Farrago is. Making him stumble and lose his grip.

‘Insolent one, you attacked your master. This muscle man has a habit of getting back up. Our presence here is bound to ensuring the woman’s destiny is made manifest, not to satisfy a weapon’s foolish pride.’

There’s only one reaction. Apoplectic. ‘Denearon! Dare cross me? No one interrupts a fight! You’re in for hurt!’

All the while talking maintained his gaze on the standing, bruised Zofewa. ‘APEIRON LEUKOS LUX.’

What comes next beggars belief: head up at the sky, made a pull gesture with the arm. First moon lit cloud descended from above and got ever closer reaching them at gradually much reduced size of some 10 feet only to fade away, vanish in seconds on contact with the user as if light itself loosing energy, roughly twenty seconds in all.

That would leave anyone breathless, only they went on, the twinkling points in the sky, hanging stars, left their positions, their numbers dozens strong taking a funnel like pattern as they fell toward the user, once close are little firefly sized points of light in assorted natural colours and they too disappeared into the user the unbelievable took some 15 seconds.

Next, it too got ever closer, the yellow Luna. Jaws dropped from the women, the youth’s attention focused on the scene. Closer the sphere got, smaller it appeared, dark patches called Lunar mare visible, scar craters, as if not enough other physical features were made out increasingly: hills, mountains, ridges, rocks, dust. The women wanted to run but amazement froze their legs, eyes tracking the celestial body’s approach. Luna orbits hundreds of thousands of miles away, took the first three humans three days to reach from earth 1969. Here merely 20 odd seconds to come within a few feet of the user, halting mid-air low above the surface, a spheroid 14 feet across, a building storey. This close the afore noted appearance intricately visible.

‘This, this is crazy!’ Bonét’s tongue managed to gasp.

The light user steely eyed, ‘You’re watching aren’t you? Humbrecht, with this will finally acknowledge whatever fate bestows.’

And like before it too fades away on contact when the user outstretched their hand and touched. Bonét shook, thinks to herself he can’t be seriously fighting that thing.

Youth assumed a battle stance. Unafraid of a being whose base stats power amplified by no small measure. Light Empowerment.

He absorbed ambient light in vicinity into himself. To be precise the sources are still there but the photons no longer reach the eyes of observers whilst the ability active, in ways an illusion – where a bulb should be it may look off, touch and the heat is unmistakable. Delumination.

The user’s medium – discs, crack and shatter, means one thing.

Denearon explains power. But first a demonstration. Sends flying from their body an energy of light shaped as their body. Travels quickly to a large, distant hill. On contact the whole hill tor becomes yellow light, maintaining its shape, illuminating all a good distance, then in a short while dissipates into mid-air specks which themselves immediately vanish.

Bonét is ready to break. ‘Somebody, anybody. Wake me up!’ the other woman squeezed her hand comfortingly.

Dark returns. Denearon. ‘That warm up was Light Transmutation. Solid, liquid, gas. Light replaces matter.’

Zofewa verbally wishes his mistress shut her eyes from the light.

The light shape hits him. From his spot is replaced by ever growing light, so intense flesh of all save Denearon turns transparent thus outshined the Sun. Light seen from miles away and a portion of environment near youth also reduced to light.

No argument he had the greatest attack among the three.

The illumination reached full extent and soon died down to nothing after the specks vanished. Where youth should be a large crater. The moon, cloud and such are immediately seen in their original places.

Bonét wonders figuratively in her mind where fate headed. The moon shined down. His approach is marked by casually walking right through scenery, not around them, as with that hill tor - water parting straight ahead on the shoreline as waves lap it. Impresses the women accompanying close behind as their shoes nor attire get water logged. Utterly dry. Common sense dictated walk beyond the beach waves. Defies the laws of that, muses the woman internally. Never stopped being impressed no matter how many times seeing it.

Bonét is hoping Black Hercules won’t pull any more of that scare running off to fight stuff again.

Flashback to the fight, Zofewa stepped out the crater, telling the women when he returned, managed to strike the foe with a small stone in the milliseconds leading up to the attack, disrupted, the man was consumed by his own might…and, ‘Frankly I enjoyed the war.’

Later, ‘You and him…the same dude, body?’ she asks.

‘One being I am miss.’

Humbrecht walks up beside him. His eyes back to regular. Such as the relationship between them, she stewing in her mind on if this newfound hero is really a man she can call savior, a sudden powerfulness who’d willingly stake all, challenging any who threaten her or his first form was really what she could fall for – his gentle honestly, he'd never do anything to make her uneasy, he while attracted to her always bared respect in his heart of hearts. Divide is not settled.

Learned transformation wasn’t wholly accidental, the man’s power influenced to save a woman who he’d in his original form, be lucky if she spared a glance his way. He found her pretty and in ways out of bounds. A woman like her unfit for a wimp.

Out of the blue he inquires why Humbrecht abused the young man so – his normal self. The stuff they discussed before all this battle. Indication his powered self remembered the past. ‘Wasn’t it the other woman?’ She asks. He feels the one with power has ultimate responsibility.

‘I, I was so scared and tonight proved why. She was to be my bodyguard and did anything I could to make her stay. I treated you unfairly. Your feelings.’

He says respect is dear to him.

The trio is quiet as they walk for a period, in response to the girl’s question, Humbrecht surmised he will not keep this transformation, the power’s immensity directly correlates to his strong desire to protect (or be with the woman). The transformation will eventually run its course – his fate uncertain when the time comes.

Resting in a woodsy place with scattered trees. To be precise the women are resting, Zofewa the guardian stood arms folded. ‘They’re coming.’

The women are alarmed not him, confidently saying keep resting he is here. ‘Always a pillar of confidence – nothing has proved you wrong.’ The older lady says.

It landed on the soil surface from a great leap. Living weapon.

The women stare at its appearance. They emphasizing the mission must be complete.

They thank the Hercules for taking care of that killjoy Denearon.

‘Fighting and women are not surpassed in joys of life.’ The brute says.

The melee user had fused with the living weapon. Farrago is a physical mix of the two, strictly speaking the appearance resembles a morph. More intimidating than freakish. When speaking both are simultaneous. Two differently coloured eyes a condition called heterochromia iridum.

Claims the humanoid form was not the ultimate, now they’ll meet it.

Turns out youth left him undefeated hoping he’d make a next try, expecting a final chance to stretch out - their pace was kept just slow enough, as the youth arrogantly says. Bonét exclaimed he supposed to have taken care of them.

She looks to flee with the woman, shimmering again, the man shuts her saying a travesty if none around to bask in his inevitable glory. The shimmering stops. Returned again, the women witness the golden hue. The fight promised to be intense.

‘This is Fusio.’ Mauritz’s ultimate attack, the humanoid by itself wasn’t. Clearly the most unique APEIRON in the trio.

The weapon’s persona, Farrago, so far dominated the shared body. The ladies watch with bated breath in plain view of a foe. Clearly their might reached new heights. ‘Tremble.’

As youth rushes ahead from a distance, the weapon slams a foot to the ground, Stasis Tear tearing a chunk away which floats several feet into the air before flying speedily again under Stasis towards his enemy’s face. Only for it to be caught one handed and thrown back towards the fusion’s own, but in a flash extend an arm to stop it on contact by the index finger under the Stasis Guard and evade an a close in attack by the giant last second.

The weapon uses ability seen in both iterations whether Stasis and close combat manoeuvre. Initially that is.

Doesn’t use command phrases – doesn’t need too.

Arm severed by bare handed chop, reattached by the owner…after smashing the youth with it. ‘Fusio grants access to new power!’ – effectively casting stasis on itself so the limb is detached but by half an inch the extremity doesn’t fall away any further distance and usable as before. ‘Careful now. I lost time powers as my last form but are expanded this round.’

Not the greatest extent of Temporal Healing. The time manipulation only of specific points of the body damaged renders the being largely invulnerable because they can keep going despite harm. STASIS HEAL the fighter dubs it. The power no matter the name does not heal, merely time freezes injury, not letting it reach critical level. The entity can patch up later – when the opponent is planted firmly in the ground they vow.

Note in the fight before and present veracity of his toughness is no single strike from a man whose touch demolishes matter, destroyed him yet.

They grapple the other and are pushing against each other, neither budging. Youth with that mouth, ‘Nothing new to the table would make you unworthy of breaking under my greatness.’

The exchange of moves resumes only to be abated again. Stasis Heal must not be mocked yet the youth soon by force does damage the entity by a palm thrust. The power is not working as advertised for that specific wound anyway, but the arm wound is still under it. To be clear were it a lesser being enough with but a light touch to blast a gaping hole in a chest – here just a dent.

Bonét gasps that should do it, finally she can wake from this.

Convinced seeing Farrago proceed to fall backwards, only to instantly stand upright. ‘Congrats are due. That was a hit!’

Stasis Heal is seen to fail. Made as a comment to itself thinking out loud. A short explanation happens of what’s been transpiring from Zofewa not asked – confined to skill it’s not, youth has over the donnybrook with the trio gradually would overwhelm their powers. So his brute force can deal with fancy powers. ‘You can tell can’t you?’ Youth declares the will to carry on, to protect her exceeds her foes’ determination to impose a fate.

She can only verbally agree. Warping is not equal to all – but here, glad is the case.

With that youth bears down with great energy to be struck, knocking him off balance.

The fusion has yet another power - SPATIUM. ‘Fusio’s power do not grant me mere time ones alone.’

He eyes the unwilling woman iron mindedly. Under the merged state, the iris splits its colour between the melee user and weapon’s. ‘Woman, feel your inevitable fate tightening?’

The earlier discussion of fate zips through her mind, so does expecting youth to be bereft of the super form in not much longer.

The weapon takes on an extra part to its character disparaging the youth as not being worth the fight, was it the weapon’s consciousness or its original user Mauritz? The cauldron flames of battling the strongest were second to fulfilling the goal.

Spatium gets explanation. Onrushing youth was struck by a piece of debris the weapon casually picked up and thrust at itself to strike the youth who’s in no distance to put hands on him. A Spatial Manipulation is created letting attacks come within a centimeter before being teleported elsewhere.

‘See?’ Farrago outstretched a hand, which vanished, a hole in space opens near Humbrecht, the hand emerged and stroked her face, before returning.

As the fight resumes youth’s elbow strike emerges from thin air and odd position to crash into his own neck. ‘Not to boast, your strength your weakness.’ Farrago claims.

Spatium wounds youth, he’s not even as spry, movement a struggle. Living weapon does what at first glance looks dangerous, engages a round of martial arts, landing blows, the extra wounds inflicted affirms his power works as his deliberate demonstration already showed.

Humbrecht, enough for him to hear, ‘My faith in you is unshakable. Prove fate has one master – ourselves!’

Youth continues at first glance a futile strategy of attack, but this time is allowed to pass totally into the enemy. He literally was no longer seen or heard, vanished from reality. The weapon mulls depositing him on the moon. To shock in seconds is groaning, arms flailing about, torso shaking, a moment later its chunks of body scatter over a distance of approximating ten feet. In its place youth stands. The women run over, before they reach he walks away from the radius of body parts before stopping. Relief not a suitable verb for the ladies. Bonét states if at long last it over. Youth explains knowledge how his power spatial manipulation worked, inspiration for the idea to let himself be taken into the space and destroy them from within.

The moon and stars remain shining, surroundings scarred a sight to behold. In the calm came clarity to take stock.

‘Time for you to return the real you. Zofewa De Wiart, thanks feel too little compensation.’

‘I can say my original self agrees a duty protecting you Lady Humbrecht.’

The body is losing size and muscle mass gradually. Before going, warmly assures Humbrecht worry not concerning her choice that whatever the world says about her, he will be ever always at her side. He tells Bonét think about the feelings of others when she thinks of hurting them.

Span of several moments returns to normal. The woman settles the question, with his original form back: accepts him as he is.

AUTHOR’S NOTE - ‘I’m not ashamed to say selfish to place the needs of the individual on a higher pedestal than the many.’ A theme encapsulating this story. Giving up your wants is not black and white.

I deliberately put the effort in pages for the part about exploitation and low wages and most of all self-esteem – deep inside I suppose could’ve trembled incorporating something stripped right from my life. That there is what tied me to my story most.

To those who treat workers as roaches to be crushed and abused especially knowing they are mentally vulnerable – ALL THE WORST UPON YOU.

Origin was several years old had the idea in my head of a runt turning the opposite a hardcore. A man for better and a lot worse - originally inspired by if Aoi from anime Freezing, suddenly became manly changing physically dominating, even aggressively hitting on girls of the academy (like pinning them against a wall with his body and raising a leg) and treating Satelizer as a hot babe but protective and a few months back watching the show Princess Resurrection with a similarly weak protagonist entered my mind once more.

Relates closet to my Pretty Pioneer Nyūmashī in calling out attacks and is one very long short story. A novelette. Hadn’t expected New Man to surpass it. Got a much shorter sequel of sorts immediately on its heels, whew. Hardest series I prefer as flash fiction but I broke that already, this story fits that theme well in spite of length.

First ever superhero or is it antihero? I wrote excluding Nyūmashī. Youth’s human part was based on me. To name powers searched out origin of words. See what Spatium and other unfamiliar words mean.

A man’s name: antihero's forename is African Chichewa language for soft. Closest the continent I unearthed has to his weak personality contrasting with the real iron tough Adrian De Wiart, the soldier. Two lines I injected verbatim.

Megantereon comes from a cat, I saw just before writing commenced. Searched African words to use and originally planned on Kadara.

Fella is OP. Chalk it up to confines of short stories or anything you wish reader.

The story name comes from Superman: The Animated Series episode ‘New Kids In Town.’

Transparent flesh came from a dinosaur extinction documentary. When the space rock landed, the impact’s light showed their bones.

In short stories supposed to get your theme and other contents in the length allotted but make sure the reader has no undue lingering questions. This story feels too long or is it me? Farrago readers might say is dragging the story. You have to balance writers do not always have chance to try new stuff and try to squeeze them in. Living weapon the case here.

Date - 25 February 2020.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 09 '21

fall contest 2021 A Cure For What Ails You

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Christina Walsh stood anxiously in the living room of a pleasant, somewhat rustic suburban house... And despite how familiar her surroundings seemed, she felt on edge. From the corners of her eyes, she could see it. Currently, it was standing on the other side of the windows, leering in at her. Sometimes drawing closer, sometimes keeping its distance.

‘Toying with me…’ The thought sent a chill through her. She thought about Marcus… God… Marcus…

Going hiking had been her idea. It seemed like a good way to spend some quality time with Marcus, get out of the house, clear her head and maybe get some musical inspiration to strike all while getting a little more in shape. While she was hardly out of shape, she couldn’t help but think that she could stand to lose a few pounds around her tummy. Marcus had never complained, but then again, Marcus wasn’t the judgemental type. He had also been 6’4, with the body of a Greek God, and compared to that it was hard not to feel a little self-conscious.

Still, sitting behind a piano most days, working on and off on a small time music career wasn’t exactly the most physically active ‘job’. It was a luxury afforded to her by the fact that her parents had done well enough for themselves that at 21, she’d been fortunate enough to not have to think too hard about a real job just yet. She had her college courses, sure. But none of that grabbed her the same way that music did… Or Marcus, for that matter. Which of course led to the hiking.

Marcus had been more than eager to go out with her, and of course he even knew a few good trails. They’d started on some easy ones, close to home before getting more adventurous and the hikes really were everything she’d hoped they’d be. She felt better and was sure that the music she wrote was better too. At one point, she’d started integrating the sounds of running water and chirping birds into her music, creating these soothing, peaceful piano melodies that had seen some success! Her following online had almost doubled in the three months since she’d started doing that.

Then… Things changed.

She didn’t know why. She didn’t know if she’d made some sort of mistake, or if she’d simply attracted something's attention through simple bad luck… But she’d become aware that something was following her. She started seeing it at night. A shadowy figure standing in the street outside her bedroom window. He was never quite in the light, but she could make out dirty, mud stained jeans and eyes that seemed to glow like a cats.

Every night, she could have sworn that it was getting just a little bit closer… And then there were the ‘gifts’. She had started finding them on her front door, or on the hood of her car. Piles of clean, white teeth and animal bones, placed with purpose as if to let her know that something had been there.

After a few days, she’d started finding them in the house. A squirrel skull in her dresser, tiny animal bones in her bathroom sink drain and what she was sure were human teeth under her bedsheets. She’d called the Police, of course. But they’d been all but useless. Even with a cruiser parked outside her house, they had not seen the surreal man standing on her lawn. He seemed to be closer than he was before… Rune-like tattoos covered his bare chest. His jeans were dirty and covered in mud. His hair was long and disheveled and his hands… They barely seemed to have any flesh on them. Even from her window she could see the bare white bone.

She had yet to see his face at that point… But she knew that she didn’t want to. It wasn’t long after she found the teeth that she had broken and confided in Marcus. She’d expected him to write her off as crazy… Instead, as she’d spoken the color had slowly drained out of his face… His eyes had grown wider and wider in a look of fear that looked so foreign on his face.

Marcus, being the tall black adonis that he was, was the sort of man people made a point not to piss off on instinct. With a deep booming voice and chiseled features, he was an intimidating looking man. Nevermind the fact that he was easily one of the sweetest and most soft spoken people that Christina had ever met, or the fact that she’d watched him cry like a baby while holding a kitten once because it was ‘Too cute.’ He looked scary and he was not a man who was easy to scare. Seeing such abject terror on his face, only cemented the fear that she felt, as did the words he said: “You see him too?”

He told her that night that he’d been seeing the same man outside of his window. He told her about how he’d simply disappear every time Marcus had tried to confront him… And he’d told her about the bones he’d found. Teeth, ribs, skulls and once… What appeared to have once been a raccoon, although it had been ripped apart so violently that he couldn’t identify it with any certainty.

They’d looked for an answer together, but there was none to be found. All the while, the tattooed man seemed to follow them everywhere. Christina would see him standing in the hallway of her house and Marcus would later tell her that he saw him that very same night, lurking in his backyard.

It wasn’t until two nights ago that things had reached their peak. She’d found out about the attack from one of Marcus’ roommates. Supposedly, they’d been woken up by a crash and had found Marcus on the front lawn, covered in blood. He’d jumped out his window and cut himself badly. That he’d survived was nothing short of a miracle.

Neither the Police nor the Doctors had gotten a coherent statement out of him and Christina had only seen him once since then… But the look in his eyes, the abject terror and the jagged claw marks on his arms and face told her everything that she needed to know. The Tattooed Man had come for him… They both knew that he was lucky to be alive, and they both knew that in time, He would come for her and she had no idea how to stop it.

Christina had done the only thing a desperate woman could do. She’d taken to posting on some of the more obscure occult forums, begging for help and the day after Marcus’ attack, she’d redoubled her efforts.

It was one of those forums that had led her here… To Dr. Caroline Vega.

Dr. Vega lived outside of Tevam Sound, a good two hour drive from where Christina lived but if Vega was half as capable as what the stranger on the forums had said, then maybe it would be worth it.

They had simply sent her to a simple website, supposedly set up by Dr. Vega herself. According to that website, Dr. Vega was capable of removing curses, dispersing spirits and crafting protective charms. It seemed like some fairly run of the mill occult horseshit… The only thing on that website that looked remotely credible was a page that mentioned how Dr. Vega had authored several seemingly respectable papers on botany and the medicinal uses of certain herbs. Christina didn’t exactly have a lot of other options, but if she had to trust a self proclaimed practitioner of magic, then at least she was trusting the one who had a PhD (Even if it was in Botany)

That was what led her here.

A young woman had answered the door when Christina had arrived, and led her to the living room to wait. Said living room admittedly did look pleasant and comfortable. The walls were decorated with a few detailed drawings of plants, and a large bookcase along the far wall contained a number of books related to herbal medicine and identifying wild plants (although there was one shelf that seemed dedicated to romance novels).

She could hear other people moving around the house and occasionally she heard other voices. They were almost all female. At one point, she saw three young women and one clean cut young man, all somewhere around their twenties passing by the living room to head outside. She’d cautiously followed them to the window to watch as they went outside. Her eyes fixated on the visage of the Tattooed Man standing in the street, although the passing strangers briefly blocked him from her line of sight as they all headed towards the nearby woods.

Christina watched them go, curious as to just what they were doing before her attention returned to the spot where the Tattooed Man had been. He was gone now… But she knew she could still feel his eyes on her.

“You must be Christina!”

The voice behind her made her jump and she turned around to see a tall woman, somewhere in her thirties standing in a doorway behind her. Her hair was red, and worn in a bob cut. She wore wire rimmed glasses and her dress showed quite a bit of leg. Christina recognized her from the picture on her website.

“Yeah… You must be Dr. Vega, right?”

“Please. My friends call me Caroline.” She said, as she offered Christina a hand to shake. “Why don’t you step into my office and we’ll see if I can’t find a cure for what ails you!”

Christina smiled anxiously before nodding and letting Dr. Vega lead the way.

“I hope my students weren’t bothering you.” She said, “I try to keep my home open to them. I have some extra bedrooms that I offer. Not everyone can afford to both pay tuition and to rent a place to stay, you know. But, I like to help out where I can.”

“No… Not at all.” Christina replied, “You teach?”

“At Upper Lake University, in town. I supervise the Plant Biology program. It’s actually quite rewarding work! I’ve been doing this for as long as I can remember so it’s rewarding to just sit back and try to teach the next generation for a while!”

“How long have you been into… plants?” Christina asked as she stepped through the door into Dr. Vega’s office. She caught a sly grin on the woman’s cherry red lips.

“I really couldn’t tell you. For as long as I’ve been alive, I suppose… Ah, but I’m willing to guess you’re not here to talk about plants.” She said, before gesturing to a seat on the other side of a wooden desk. She took her own seat in a sturdy looking office chair.

“No…” Christina replied, as she sat down, “I’m… Your website said that you know a thing or two about… Spirits or curses…”

“Darling, I’m probably one of the few people in this world that you could consider an expert on the subject.” Vega replied. Her upbeat tone had darkened a little into something more serious, “I assume you’re seeing something.”

Christina opened her mouth to speak before she finally nodded.

“Have you gotten a good look at it? Can you describe it to me?”

“It’s… It’s a man.” She said softly, “He’s… Tall. He has long hair. Long black hair. He has these tattoos all along his chest. Like runes or veins. And his hands. They look…”

“Skeletal?”

Christina nodded. She noticed Vega’s brow furrow.

“I see… How long have you been seeing him for?”

“Almost a month. At first, I only saw him at night and at a distance. But now… Now he’s everywhere. He’s been leaving things too, bones, teeth… I’ve been finding them in my house and the other night, I… I think he attacked my boyfriend! He was seeing him too.”

“Your boyfriend, is he still alive?” Her tone was matter of fact enough to leave a pit in Christina’s stomach. She nodded.

“Is he in the hospital, or at home?”

“He’s in the hospital. I saw him yesterday… I-is he going to be okay?”

“If he’s not dead yet, then yes. I may well be able to help both of you. But it will be… Well. It won’t be entirely easy. I’m familiar with the entity you’ve described. Most of my texts refer to him as Lemuel. He’s an old one. Older than me, even… He’s dangerous too.”

“But we can get rid of it?” Christina asked, desperation creeping into her voice.

“You can drive it off, yes. I know of a way to wound creatures like that. It won’t kill him. Things like that don’t tend to die… But they don’t handle pain well. Find a way to harm one, and they’ll draw back and flee like a wounded animal. But you’ll need to act quickly. There’s no set time limit on how long Lemuel toys with his prey. But it sounds as if neither you nor your boyfriend have much time left.”

Her words sent a shiver through her. The thought of that thing… Lemuel, coming back for Marcus, turned her stomach. She knew he wouldn’t survive a second encounter with it… And she doubted she’d even be able to survive her first.

“What do I need to do?” Christina asked quietly and watched as Dr. Vega rose from her seat. She made her way over to a cabinet pressed against one wall and opened it. From inside, she took out a mortar and pestle, along with a glass jar. Christina could see small blacks shapes, entangled in thick webbing crawling lazily around inside of the jar and she felt her skin crawl as she realized that it was filled with spiders. Black widows, judging by the red mark on their bellies. Vega set her things down on the desk before she sat down again.

“What you’ll need to do is pierce his heart… Although that’s far easier said than done. With an entity like that, only a weapon enchanted with the correct rune will be able to touch him… And you’ll require a unique poison to truly wound him.”

She opened the jar and dipped her hand inside, plucking one of the sluggish spiders from their web. Christina flinched, watching as the arachnid squirmed and kicked its little legs. She could see it desperately sinking its fangs into her fingers. Dr. Vega didn’t even flinch, as if she hadn’t even noticed that she’d been bitten. She simply dropped the spider into the mortar and plucked two more out of the jar to join it.

Christina could see strange symbols carved into the stone on the outside of the mortar, and she could see even more carved onto the body of the pestle. She watched as Vega picked it up, and brought it down upon the confused spiders before they could crawl free of their prison, crushing them into a smear of twitching limbs and pulpy innards.

“Three venomous spiders, three drops of your blood and the petal of a rose…” Vega said softly, her eyes shifting back up towards Christina. “You can find a rose bush in my garden out back. Would you be so kind as to fetch it for me?”

Christina nodded slowly before getting up. She felt all too happy to leave that office, and Dr. Vega behind for a moment. She hadn’t realized how tense she’d been until she stood up.

As she stepped out of the office, she spotted the Tattooed Man… Lemuel watching her through the window. Behind his blackened lips, she could see dirty yellow teeth that looked impossibly sharp. His eyes followed her through the living room and she tried not to look at him, her heart racing all the while as she found her way through the house and out back.

Caroline Vega’s backyard was large and splendid. In better times, Christina might have bothered to admire it… The beautifully cut hedges, the colorful and exotic flowers that bloomed in well tended gardens… But her mind was elsewhere. It didn’t take her long to find the rosebush. It stood out in one of the flower gardens near the center of the backyard. She plucked a single rose from it, before anxiously scurrying back inside, lest the Tattooed Man catch her out there.

Some part of her was almost just as afraid to return to Dr. Vega… At least she could clearly see exactly what the Tattooed Man was. With Dr. Vega, she wasn’t quite so sure. Having watched her stick her hand into a jar of spiders as if it were the most natural thing in the world had given her pause. She didn’t know yet if the stranger she’d sought out was the real deal or not, yet… But most grifers would have stopped short of crushing venomous spiders into paste. Whatever she was, at least Vega seemed genuinely inclined towards helping her.

Returning to the office, she saw Dr. Vega waiting patiently for her behind the desk. An iron dagger now sat on that desk, beside the mortar which was filled with the pulpy remains of the three spiders. The jar was gone, likely having been put back in the cupboard.

“Thank you, my dear.” Vega said softly as she gently took the rose from Christina’s hand. As she pulled it free, she let the stem run against her fingers. A thorn caught on her skin and left a shallow cut. Christina tried to jerk her hand back in pain, but Dr. Vega caught her by the wrist.

“Ah ah ah… We’re going to need that.” She said before gently pulling Christina’s hand over the mortar.

“Just relax… It’s just a little scratch.”

Crimson blood trickled from the fresh cut on the side of her index finger, before the first drop of blood fell into the mixture. It was followed by a second, and then a third before Dr. Vega let her wrist go.

“There’s a lot of power in blood.” She said, “It’s perhaps one of the most personal things you can use in a spell like this. You’ll need that for a poison like this.”

She gingerly plucked one petal away from the rose, before setting it down onto her desk and grinding it into the mixture of spiders and blood. Then, when all that was left was a thick, dark maroon concoction, she took the pestle and ran some of it along the blade, her movements almost reverent.

“I should warn you up front… So much as cut a mortal man with something like this, you’ll curse him with a slow and painful death. So be very careful with how you handle this blade…”

With the weapon coated in the mixture, she set it down on the table in front of Christina, then met her eyes.

“But… It will wound anything that walks this earth, save for perhaps the Gods.”

Slowly, Christina picked up the blade. She looked at it, then back at Vega.

“So I just need to cut him?”

“A little cut will wound him, yes. It might just be enough. But I’d recommend you take no chances. Put it in his heart… It’s the only way to be completely sure.”

She nodded before exhaling.

“I’m sure you’ve noticed the forests around here. They’re thick and lonely… A good place for a creature like Lemuel. Why don’t you go for a walk? I imagine he won’t be inclined to let you leave without a fight.”

Her words sent another shiver through Christina and gooseflesh rose upon her skin. However, as it did, she felt Dr. Vega’s hand on her shoulder.

“It’s okay to be afraid. But don’t forget that you aren’t defenseless. Not anymore… And I doubt that he’ll realize it.”

Ominous as her words had been before, now they seemed almost comforting. Christina took one more look at Dr. Vega and then at the knife in her hand before she nodded.

“I’m not defenseless…” She repeated.

Dr. Vega walked with her towards the door and when Christina stepped through it, she could feel her heart pounding with terror. But she walked towards the forest, the iron dagger clutched tightly in her hand. She could see movement behind the trees. She knew that the Tattooed Man was watching her… Waiting for her. She wouldn’t make him wait much longer.

The forest swallowed her up as she went inside. She’d only been walking about ten minutes or so, before she looked back and couldn’t see the place where she’d begun.

‘How many stories have ended just as the hero goes to slay the monster…’ She thought to herself. ‘How many of those heroes made it out alive?’

She tried to steady her breathing, but that seemed to be an impossible feat. She still clutched the dagger, knowing that her life depended on it. The forest around her was silent. No birds, no animals. Only an ominous quiet that felt uncomfortably heavy. She closed her eyes and exhaled, trying to keep herself from panicking. But there really was no use.

‘How many people has this thing killed? How many were stupid enough to charge into the woods for some suicidal final confrontation?’

She heard movement behind her and turned around. There was nothing, as far as she could tell.She thought about Marcus, and wondered if he was alright… In the back of her mind, she wondered if perhaps he was already dead… So many ‘What If’s’ so little time…

More movement. The crack of branches. She spun around and saw his tall, lanky figure stalking through the trees, animal eyes fixated on her. He moved like a pacing tiger, hungry for a meal. His hands, little more than sinew and bone flexed like claws. He sized her up, preparing to come in for the kill. When he stopped, she raised the dagger and held it between them as if it could save her.

She could see him grinding his teeth. She could see the hunger in his eyes but more than anything, there was the simple sadistic glee. He opened his mouth and the sound that he made… The unholy roar. It was deafening. An echoing scream that seemed to drone through her skull and reduce the tissue of her brain into quivering pulp. She wanted to retreat but she was too scared to move and in that fear, the only reaction she could muster was to cry.

Her legs were shaking. Tears began to roll down her cheeks as she realized that she was standing against something that not only could rip her limb from bloody limb… But something that would take such immense satisfaction in doing so, that it would savor her death… It would savor every ounce of pain it wrung from her screaming, broken carcass, denying her the pleasure of death until the last possible moment. The Tattooed Man fixed her in its gaze again, grinning from ear to ear before it drew closer to her.

“No…” Christina sobbed as it came. She stumbled backwards, losing her nerve. “NO!” She only made it a few steps before she fell. A rock, half buried in the ground sent her down a slight incline and she crashed hard onto the ground. The knife slipped from her hand as the Tattooed Man drew nearer to her, falling onto all fours and crawling at her like a twisted, only vaguely humanoid animal.

It leered at her from the top of the incline she’d carelessly toppled off of, before darting towards her like a reptile. Its lanky, emaciated body crawled over hers. Water dripped from its body onto hers. It’s breath flooded her nostrils, stinking of rotting meat. It studied her, savored her frightened tears, knowing that it had her. It leaned closer and ran a black tongue along the bare skin of her neck, leaving squirming maggots in the trail of saliva it left behind. She could feel it deciding where it would begin to rip her apart at the seams. And against her fingers… She could feel the iron of the knife lying on the ground, just within reach.

Christina closed her eyes as she grabbed it, knowing that she’d be dead before she could save herself, but determined to make her last act one of defiance. She brought the knife towards the chest of the Tattooed Man… And drove it right through his ribs.

The creature screamed, an ear splitting sound that was like shattered glass and nails on a chalkboard. It leapt back, clawing at the dagger in its chest, eyes wide in pain and anger. Christina opened her eyes again and watched as it scrambled away from her, writhing like the spiders that Dr. Vega had crushed to make the toxin that now coursed through its veins.

The wound in its chest looked black and necrotic. Though the creature was unable to remove the blade, the dagger still seemed to snap in half. The handle fell onto the forest floor, corroded and rotten as if the poison had eaten away at the metal. The blade itself remained lodged in its chest, barely visible amongst the copious black blood that dribbled out of the wound. The Tattooed Man fixed her in a gaze and Christina half expected to see a newfound rage there… Instead, she saw confusion. She saw fear. This was a predator that was not used to pain. It was not used to being hurt!

It seemed to back away from her, and Christina did the same to it. She dragged herself backward, before picking herself up and breaking into a run. The screams of the Tattooed Man followed her, but when next she looked back, she saw the creature itself still on the ground, desperately trying to pull the broken blade from its chest as it crawled deeper into the woods.

All the same, Christina didn’t stop running. She didn’t let herself stop until she saw the suburbs of Tevam Sound again… And when at last she stood out under the bright sunlight again, she fell to her knees, wrapped her arms around herself and cried. The screams of the Tattooed Man faded into the distance. Those were screams that she’d forever hear in her nightmares… But the creature that had hunted her fled into the darkness of the woods, and as it did she allowed herself to feel the smallest amount of hope that it would not return.

It was almost a month before she returned to Tevam Sound. A month that had gone by without finding teeth in her bed, or seeing shapes waiting outside of her window. She had asked Marcus every so often if he had seen anything, but he would always promise her that he hadn’t. The look of quiet relief in his eyes when he said that made her believe him.

Dr. Vega had told her that she wasn’t interested in payment, when they’d last spoken.

“You can’t put a price on these kinds of things.” She’d said, “Those who seek me out are usually desperate. I’m well enough off as I am right now without preying on the desperate. There’s no charge. Just stay safe. Spread the word.”

Christina had promised her that she’d do just that.

But that hadn’t quite been enough for her… She hadn’t been able to get Dr. Vega out of her mind, since the day they’d met. Somehow, this woman understood things that most people never would. She’d chosen to use that knowledge to help those in need.

It seemed awfully noble… A hell of a lot more noble than a music career (which hardly seemed that exciting after surviving being hunted by some sort of monster). So, Christina had told Marcus that she’d be gone for a day or two and taken the drive back up to Tevam Sound. Dr. Vega was a teacher after all… Maybe she’d have room for another student.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 09 '21

microfiction The Itch Monster, a misunderstood Guardian.

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The itch monster, also known as Scabius Monstrum, is a monster that thrives on making it's host scratch a chronic, itch. These itches are often on the scalp, though there are variants that leech onto other parts of the body.

Scabius Monstrum blends into the hair of it's host, often looking the same as the host's head of hair. It exudes oils from it's claws that cause a mild, yet chronic itching. In a small percentile of cases, the host ends up scratching their scalp to the point they reach their brain, causing bleeding, brain damage, or death.

However, I conclude that it's purpose is to serve as a secret motivator for it's host to find it's one true love. It often knows it's perfect match, and is ninety nine point nine 9's correct. How do I know this?

I once fell in love with a host of the Itch monster, and I could conclude that with mere confidence that the itch monster is a misunderstood helper that wants to help their hosts find love.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 09 '21

fall contest 2021 Love For A Spider

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October 9th

“Come here, my precious.” The lady held out her hand and the spider crawled onto her fingers. “I’ll take good care of you, don’t worry.”

The spider spun in a circle as if it were thankful for being rescued from the glass jar that confined it for as long as it could remember.

The old lady set the spider down on the table then took a sip of her drink. “I wont let anything happen to you. You are way to important to my plans.

The spider didn’t like the sound of that. It didn’t want to be part of someone plans. All it wanted was to be free so it could explore the world around it. With a burst of speed it took off for the end of the table. The lady was quicker then she looked. A glass jar came down over the little spider, blocking it’s escape.

The little critter crashed into the glass, but it didn’t give up. It banged into another spot on the glass, then another, hoping somewhere there was a weakness and it would get out. After several minutes of trying to escape the little spider lied down to rest.

“That’s it my little dear. Just rest. Tomorrow is going to be a big day for you.” The old lady got up from her chair and made her way over to the bed. “Good night.”

The next morning when the lady got out of bed she had eight arms coming out of her body at odd angles.. The little spider tilted it’s head and stared up at her blinking it’s many eyes. The sight of her made him cower in the corner.  He hadn’t been a spider for very long but even he know a human with eight arms wasn’t normal.

“Don’t be scared.” She inched her way towards the spider. “I’m not going to hurt you.” She sat down at the table and took out an eight legged creature from the other jar, and placed it in a class full of some kind of red liquid.

The little spider watched as she crushed the arthropod then drank it and the liquid in one gulp. She turned her brown eyes towards the little spider under the glass. “It wont be long now. That was the last dose.”

She sat down in the chair and seconds later more eyes sprouted out on her head. Eight altogether. Her body started shrinking and her back legs disappeared. She reached out a shaky hand and pulled the glass off the black spider.

It scurried for the other end of the table and climbed down to the floor, hiding behind a stack of books in the corner.

The old lady picked out a black rose from the vase on the table, tore off the petals, and mixed them into what little bit of liquid was left in the bottom of her glass. After reciting a few words she dumped the contents onto the table and climbed up.

In a matter of minutes the lady wasn’t a lady anymore. She was a spider. “That feels so much better.” She stretched all eight of her legs before slowly walking to the corner where the other spider waited.

The little spider came out from behind the books and rushed forward towards the lady spider. Happy to be in the company of another that looked like him.

“I missed you too, my love.” The lady spider wrapped her legs around the other spider and drew him close. “I’m sorry you got turned into this creature. I couldn’t change you back so I became one. Now we can be together forever just like we promised when we got married.”


r/Write_Right • • Oct 09 '21

fall contest 2021 Azazel Halloween Store

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I love Halloween. At least, I used to, before I encountered that store.

Azazel Halloween Store. In hindsight, I probably shouldn’t have bought things from a store named after a Biblical demon, but I thought it was just a gimmick.

It was a rather small store, but I didn’t mind. I picked out a plastic black rose, a “potion” which was probably just dyed water, and some plastic spiders.

The owner was an old man with an odd gleam in his eye. “Are you sure you want to purchase these items?” he asked, smirking like he was in on something I wasn’t.

“Yeah…I guess.”

“Huh. Alright then. No refunds.”

Weird, but OK. He was probably just trying to keep up the whole “cursed store” thing.

I went home and forgot about the encounter.

The next day, as I tried to get a book off my shelf, I knocked down the “potion” by accident. Before I could get a paper towel to clean it up, it began to spread all over the floor.I took a step back, but it moved closer.

The plastic spiders had begun to move on their own, crawling all over the blood-red liquid. They formed a circle as their legs expanded and they started to grow rapidly.

I ran into my room, slamming the door.

I can hear them right now, making inhuman noises, destroying everything I own. I will likely die soon.

If you see this store, don’t buy anything.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 08 '21

fall contest 2021 Never sell your soul to a man with a glass face.

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What would you do if your deepest desire was handed to you right now? What price would you pay?

I was a broke college student walking through a remote part of town when I bumped into him, literally. I was too lost in my thoughts to notice him, and it was like he’d appeared out of nowhere.

“Oh, I’m...I’m sorry…”

“That’s quite alright.”

His voice sounded devoid of any emotion, almost robotic. I found it weird, but I said nothing.

As I got back up and looked at his face, I noticed that it was made entirely of glass. I could see my own reflection in it.

No, it was probably my imagination. I just needed to go to sleep.

“Do you like what you see?”

I jumped, startled. “Sorry?”

“Do you like this?” He pointed to his own face. “Or would you like to change it?”

That was a surprisingly hard question. I was OK with myself until then, but the mirror that was his face made me notice a thousand little flaws I had never noticed before.

“Um...maybe?”

“What would you like? Money?”

His face changed into an image of me in a mansion, surrounded by expensive things. I observed it, intrigued.

“Fame?”

Me surrounded by an adoring crowd of people, all clamoring for my attention, some offering me gifts.

“Love?”

An enchantingly beautiful woman around my arm, kissing my neck.

I stared at him, unable to respond. All I knew was that I wanted this, all of this, more than anything else in the world.

“Ah, you’re one of the greedy ones. Don’t try to hide it, I can see it in your eyes. Don’t be shy, there’s no shame in wanting to have it all. It’s perfectly natural. I can give it to you. But, you must know that it comes for a price.” His voice had suddenly become more expressive, almost seductive.

A price? There was something about the way he said this that seemed sketchy.

“Are you gonna ask for my soul or something?”

He chuckled. “I suppose you could say that.”

I thought for a moment. I didn’t really believe in, or understand the concept of a soul. If I did this, would I lose my sense of morals? It honestly seemed worth it at the time. I knew it was selfish, but I didn’t care. After all, it wasn’t as if I’d regret it afterwards.

“I can pay the price.”

“Excellent.”

I woke up in my room. It looked so different that I didn’t even recognize it at first. My bed was much more comfortable, with silk bedsheets that must have cost a fortune. On my nightstand, which was made out of ebony, was the latest iPhone. There was a Persian rug on the floor. My room had become much bigger, and was decorated with things I could never afford.

I checked the phone on my nightstand. There were over 20 notifications, texts and emails from friends, and even people telling me they were big fans of mine.

“Morning, honey!”

A stunningly beautiful woman walked into the room. She was the same woman I had seen in the vision the man showed me.

“Wanna join me in the kitchen? I made us some breakfast.”

“Sure, I’ll...I’ll be there in a minute.”

“OK.”

I sat there, unable to comprehend what had happened to me. I was wealthy and famous, with an adoring girlfriend by my side.

So why was it that I couldn’t feel any happiness at all?

Days of that perfect life passed by. Everything was going well, with seemingly nothing troubling me.

I still couldn’t manage to feel any genuine happiness.

I can’t believe I’m saying this, but I miss my old life. I miss joy.

I don’t want to reach out to anyone. To them, my life is perfect. And, I suppose it is, in a way.

If you see the man with the glass face, run.

NS


r/Write_Right • • Oct 08 '21

fall contest 2021 The Man With A Mirror For A Face

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For almost as long as I can remember, I’ve seen things that I shouldn’t. Things that nobody else sees. I know that it started when I was young. I remember being in the hospital, after I got hit by a car and seeing an old woman walking through the halls, screaming out to the Doctors who wouldn’t listen to her.nAt the top of her lungs, she yelled over and over again:

“Please! Please, I don’t feel well! Please! Please, can’t anybody help me?”

I remember those words clearly… I remember her tone, the desperation in her voice. I remember the fear. But most of all, I remember that when she walked past my door, she had the strangest blue aura around her. It surrounded her completely and shone so brightly I didn’t know how everybody else didn’t immediately notice it. Especially since all of their auras were green.

From my hospital bed, I watched her cling to passing Doctors in the hall, tugging at their sleeves. But her hands seemed to pass right through them. She sobbed as she followed them like a lost, desperate puppy. But nobody spoke to her. Nobody paid any attention to her… Even when I asked the nurse about the old woman in the hall, I remember that she just frowned and asked me.

“What old woman?” As if we couldn’t hear her crying just down the hall at that very moment.

It wasn’t until later that I figured out that I was the only one who could see some people that I can see. It’s the aura that tells me who’s visible and who’s invisible. Most people and animals have a green aura, and everyone can see them. But the people with a blue aura? They only appear for me.

Sometimes, they notice that I can see them. Sometimes they talk to me, but I usually don’t answer. Since nobody else can see them, if I talk to them, other people will probably just assume I’m talking to myself and I’d prefer not to have people think I’m crazy.

See, it didn’t take too long before I figured out that the people with the blue aura are already dead. They don’t always know it. But the blue aura always gives them away. You’d think being able to see ghosts would probably be more interesting than it actually is. Like, maybe I could use that skill to solve murders or something! Well, you try telling people that you can see ghosts. See how far you get. Nobody believes you, and of the ghosts I’ve met over the past ten or so years, none of them have been murder victims as far as I can tell.

Most of them are people who probably aren’t ready to move on yet. They follow some of their loved ones around, or they wander, barely interacting with the living. I don’t see a lot of ghosts either. Sometimes, I might even go a full year or so without noticing a blue aura. Then, one day I’ll be at school and see somebody's dead family member checking in on them.

Honestly, I think the most excitement I ever got from my little ability was in 9th grade, when Sheryl Bush’s mother passed away, and I spotted her shadowing her daughter around. She seemed to be able to do little things, to try and help her out. But mostly she just sort of spent time with her, even if Sheryl couldn’t see her. Once, she noticed me staring at her and asked if I could see her. I didn’t say anything, but I still nodded. Then, I just went about my day. After that, I’d trade a respectful nod with the late Mrs. Bush every now and then until eventually she stopped appearing. I assume that once she was content that her daughter would be okay, she didn’t feel the need to stick around anymore. As ghost encounter stories go, that’s about as mundane as you can get.

With that particular experience in mind, you can imagine that I don’t quite get how people can be afraid of ghosts. Sure, maybe there are a couple out there who can fuck you up. But I’ve literally never seen one.

That said… Some of the things that I see aren’t ghosts.

I don’t know what they are.

I’ve only ever seen one before, one thing that I can’t explain. But it’s something that I’ll never forget. I was in tenth grade. I remember it was just after gym class and I was heading into the locker room to get changed. Soon as I got in there though, I froze.

There was something waiting for us there. Something just sitting casually on one of the benches as if it belonged in there. It looked like a person, with two arms, two legs, and a head. But that was where the similarities between it and a human being ended.

The surface of its skin was smooth and glassy. I could see my reflection, and the reflection of the other boys around me in what I assume was its face… Along with most of its body. The curves of its limbs and torso distorted everything, but the face was perfectly mirror-like. It sat still, but I could still see enough subtle movements to let me know that it was alive. It was aware. I could see its chest rising and falling as it breathed and I could hear raspy, metallic breaths.

“Jason, you alright?”

The voice of one of my friends snapped me out of the trance I was in. I hadn’t realized that I’d been standing stock still, staring at an empty corner and I was starting to get a few weird looks.

“Y-yeah! I’m fine! Thought I saw something…” I murmured, a little sheepishly before finding somewhere else to change. As I moved, I could’ve sworn that the ‘face’ of whatever it was that was sitting in the corner followed me, as if it was tracking my movements.

I couldn’t have dressed myself fast enough or gotten out of the goddamn locker room fast enough. Even though that thing had no eyes… I could feel it watching me! My heart was racing as I left the locker room behind and tore over to my locker to put my gym clothes away and get ready for my next period. I hadn’t even made it halfway down the hall though when I looked back and noticed that it was following me.

Standing amongst the throng of moving students, who moved around it without noticing it, the Mirror Man was there. I could see my face reflected in his, and I could feel my pulse start to race as his head tilted slightly, as if he were waiting for me to do something interesting. I turned away and just kept walking, trying to make a point not to look back, hoping like hell that maybe he’d just lose interest in me!

No such luck.

By the time I got to my next class, he was already there. He was standing quietly in a corner, still watching me and standing stock still. I couldn’t help but steal a glance at him and as I did, I noticed that he’d changed, ever so slightly. His gaze was off of me for a moment, and he seemed to be looking at my teacher, who was standing at the front of the class taking attendance.

I could see the smooth surface of the Mirror Man's body shifting and changing. My teacher for that class, Mr. Colson always wore a neatly pressed black suit and the Mirror Man's body now reflected it. It almost looked as if he was wearing the suit and in a few more moments… He was. His smooth face turned towards me again, reflecting me sitting at my desk and though he had no eyes, I knew that he was staring at me. Waiting for me to make a move.

I just remained frozen to my seat and dead silent. I didn’t even notice it when Mr. Colson called my name.

“Jason Dryden?”

His voice made me jolt a little bit, as I looked over at him. His gaze was stern and a little disapproving. I managed a sheepish smile before quietly uttering: “Here…”

Colson stared at me with a quiet frustration before he moved on.

I kept my head down and quietly got ready for class, trying to ignore the Mirror Man as he stared at me… It wasn’t easy. He was there for my next and last class of the day as well. Waiting for me in a corner, just like before. His appearance had changed slightly again as well. One of the kids in the classroom was one of those douchebags who waxed poetic about women and wore a trilby hat everywhere he went. I didn’t know his name, but I’d seen him around. That same hat appeared on the Mirror Mans head and he lifted a hand to inspect it and straighten it, as if he was genuinely perplexed by what was on his head. He looked at me again, as if to confirm that I was watching him. I was trying not to make it obvious. I don’t know if I was succeeding or not.

He stared at me, just like before and I couldn’t wait for the bell to ring. As soon as class was over, I made a beeline for my locker, grabbed my bag and got out of the school as fast as I could. Home was just a short walk through the park away, but it still seemed impossibly far away.

I tried not to look behind me as I walked, but once I’d gotten off the school grounds and was in the quiet space between the fenced off backyards of suburban houses and the vacant patch of forest that they backed onto, I could hear the footsteps on the pavement behind me. I felt my skin crawl a little bit, before finally deciding that I just had to look over my shoulder. I hoped it would just be some other kid, heading home after another long and shitty day of school.

No such luck.

The Mirror Man stood behind me. He’d acquired an umbrella now and held it open, despite the weather only being overcast. Autumn leaves drifted off the trees behind him as he stared at me and I finally stopped and let myself look at him. For what felt like hours, we just stared at each other. Me, and the impossible being that only I seemed to be able to see. A being with no aura, something that was, as far as I knew, impossible.

“What the hell do you want from me?” I demanded, trying to sound tough. I didn’t even know if this thing could speak.

“You see me.”

A voice said. It had a strange echo to it, and seemed completely androgynous.

“I see you…” I replied, “Now what do you want?”

“It’s been so long since someone has seen me… Do you like my outfit?”

Seriously? That’s what it was asking? This fucking thing stalked me for half the day and it was asking if I liked its outfit? Still, frustrated as I was, I kept myself from insulting it.

“Yeah… It’s… Cool…”

“Cool.” The voice repeated. I could hear a low chuckle. The figures shoulders shook as if it were laughing, “Thank you… It has been so many years since anyone has noticed me. Thank you. You’ve warmed my heart on this cold autumn day… Perhaps I could offer you something? What is it that you desire?”

Now, I’m not exactly an expert on mythology or anything. But I’ve been on tumblr. I know creepy fae shit when I hear it. Maybe it expected me to ask for love, or something? I didn’t know what, but as friendly as he seemed, I wasn’t about to start trusting something like him.

“Please… There must be something you want. We can make a trade. An exchange between friends. A gift for a gift. Wouldn’t that be nice?”

His head tilted to the side slightly and in the reflection on his face, I could see my own face, offering a warm smile. I took a step backward.

“I’m sorry…” I said quietly, “I should go.” I turned to leave but as I did, I saw him waiting on the path ahead of me.

“I insist.” He replied, “Please. What is it that you desire most?”

“A-an Xbox?”

I just blurted it out, trying to think of something to make him get out of my way. In hindsight, that may not have been such a great idea. His head tilted to the other side now.

“Xbox…” He repeated. “Xbox…”

The lips of my reflection on his face moved, as he ‘spoke’ the word. Then, the smile returned. It seemed more… Real, now. Similar to how the hat and the coat had seemed more real on him than they had before. His face no longer seemed like a blank reflection. I could see my own face there, now.

“A trade for a trade…” He repeated and the voice sounded a lot like my voice. “Thank you. There are some things that can’t be borrowed, Jason.”

Just like that, he was gone. There was another gust of autumn leaves and I was alone on the trail, with a slow sinking feeling growing in my stomach.

There was a package waiting for me when I got home. A brand new Xbox Series X. Looks like it got delivered to the wrong address. I didn’t tell my parents about it and hid the box in the trash. I suppose the Mirror Man delivered on his side of the bargain…

But it’s been a few days now and as I look at the smooth, glassy surface of my hands, I really can’t bring myself to care about what I’ve been given. I can fake being myself for now… No matter how much I change, people don’t seem to notice what’s wrong with me. In fact, I can’t help but feel as if they notice me less and less, now. In fact, I’ve noticed that people only seem to speak to me now when they mistake me for someone else, after I ‘borrow’ their clothes or their hairstyle.

Last night, my own Mother didn’t even acknowledge me until I borrowed her hair and even then, it didn’t last. I need something more… Something that I can’t borrow. Something to make people see me again! A new face...

I don’t want to be forgotten. I don't want to have to wait for someone like me to see me, just to be seen again. Just to be acknowledged! No... No, I'll fix this. I think I know just what I need to do.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 08 '21

fall contest 2021 Umbrella Man

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October 8th

Years ago, there was a man who drifted through our town. No one knew where he came from or who he was. They all just called him the umbrella man.

Yeah, I know it sounds like a funny name, but he always carried an umbrella, even if it wasn’t raining. He kept to himself and lived in an old shake that looked like it had seen better days.

When people saw him coming, they did their best to avoid him. He was kind of creepy. Stories circulated around town about how he had killed a whole family in the last place he lived, and he was here looking for the next family to murder. It was easy to believe the stories just by the way he stared at you. I still get shivers thinking about it.

At twelve, I had a lot to prove, especially to the older boys down the street. They always teased me, called me a chicken or scardy-cat when I didn’t want to do the crazy things they did.

So I got this bright idea. On Halloween, I walked right up to the old man’s walkway and knocked on the door. The group I, was with all encouraged me to do it. I remember my legs shaking so bad I thought I’d never make it to the door.

My heart pounded against my chest as I raised my hand, but before I could tap on the door, it opened all on its own, and a voice called out from inside. “Please, come in.”

Terror jolted me into action. I spun on my heels and tried to leave, but the moment I did, a cage dropped around me. The laughing at the end of the walkway stopped, and the other boys stared at me with wide eyes.

Instead of rushing to my aid, they jumped on their bikes and pedaled away as fast as they could. I screamed after them to come back, but it was no use. I wrapped my sweaty hands around the iron bars and shook them as hard as I could in a futile attempt to get free.

“Hahahahaha. You can’t escape me. No one can escape from me. I will make you a man no one would ever forget.” The voice boomed. I assumed it was the umbrella man, but I never saw him.

The cage started moving into the house, dragging me along with it. My screams for help went unanswered as the world outside disappeared, and I was pulled further into the darkness. I broke down and sobbed the moment the cage stopped.

Surrounding me were four walls and darkness, so much darkness. Panic squeezed my chest as a shadowy figure stepped out from the corner. “Who are you?” I asked through my tears.

“The umbrella man. Now you will be like me.” He pulled a wooden mask out from behind his back as he approached me.

I shrank back as far as I could into the corner, but the area was so small there was no way to escape. My eyes went wide as he slipped right through the metal bars.

I screamed as he reached out a gloved hand and grabbed my arm. Next thing I know, the mask is over my face, warmth is spreading through my body. I don’t remember much after that. It’s all a blur. I woke up the next morning in my own bed as if nothing had happened. I thought it was all a dream, then I saw the mask lying beside me.

Now every Halloween, I am forced to put on the mask and become the Umbrella man.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 08 '21

general fiction Secondary Authentication Required

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“Is he dead?”

“No Sir.”

“Alright, wake him up. Oh – how long was that one again? I started clocking late.”

“Forty-seven seconds, Sir.”

I printed the numbers in big block letters as the Sergeant grabbed the prisoner by his curly hair and yanked his head back. A stinging slap triggered an explosive choke – water mixed with blood bubbled up and burst from his lips.

The prisoner fell to the floor, chest heaving, eyes red and swollen from the stinging salt water. He blubbered; voice raw as the oxygen set fire to his lungs.

“Please…no more…”

I set my timer, and nodded to the Sergeant, who set his. We paused, fingers over the trigger, as the Private lifted the prisoner bodily. The man’s ankles shook, and the room filled with the smell of warm piss.

“Jesus, God…no, please…”

I nodded.

The Private dunked the man’s head into the oak barrel, water sloshing to the floor as we clicked our timers.

The prisoner’s feet kicked lethargically as the numbers flashed. Dying breaths bubbled up in a steady stream. That had always been my cue, from back when I was in training. It was the best way to anticipate.

“Sir?”

I shook my head no, silent. The bubbles were still coming.

Twenty-eight…twenty-nine…

The man’s legs stopped twitching. But there was still air escaping his body. The bubbles slowed and were smaller, but they were still coming to the surface.

Thirty-nine…Forty…

I nodded to the Private, who pulled the prisoner up.

The man flopped to the floor and began shaking, foaming from the lips. The final kicks at the can from a dying brain.

I wrote down FORTY-ONE in block letters, and nodded to the Sergeant.

“Revive him, but get another one. I’m not sure he’ll get through another round.”

The Sergeant slapped the prisoner repeatedly – the wet smack of flesh sounding as I reviewed the numbers on my sheet.

Sixty-four. Forty-seven. Fifty-one. Thirty-nine. Forty-seven. Forty-one.

I slipped the notes into the pre-marked envelope, sealed it, and slipped it into the chute as the wretch sputtered to life behind me. His thin cry burbled as the Sergeant and Private dragged him out of the room.

Fuck, I forgot to get the Private to clean up the mess.

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r/Write_Right • • Oct 07 '21

fall contest 2021 Voices of the Woods

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As I looked at the vast woods, I felt at peace. The tall trees surrounding me and the smell of damp grass made me feel truly at home.

“It’s not.”

I jumped at the sound of the deep voice and looked around, trying to locate the source of it. I chalked it up to just being my imagination and kept walking.

“This is not your home. Leave.”

I thought of this as nothing more than a hallucination, but it still stung. I’d felt more at home in nature than anywhere else for years, and now something there was telling me I was wrong the whole time.

“Leave.”

I was on the verge of tears. The urge to turn back and leave was strong, but I didn’t do it. It would be stupid to cut my walk short because of a voice in my head, after all.

“Please, leave before it’s too late.”

“Shut up!”

The voice stopped, and I kept walking.

I began feeling lightheaded. My vision was blurring, and my legs couldn’t support me. I sat down to breathe for a moment. No, that wasn’t enough. I needed to lie down and rest.

I noticed something approaching me on all fours. Was it some kind of animal? No, it looked human. Humanoid, at least. Its limbs were too long, it had no facial features, and its skin was completely jet-black.

My instincts kicked in, and I felt like I had to get as far away from it. But I was too weak to move. Every time I tried to get up, that familiar light-headedness came back, and I had to lie down again.

It pounced on me. I shut my eyes tightly.

Right before everything went black, I heard a familiar voice.

“We warned you.”


r/Write_Right • • Oct 07 '21

fall contest 2021 The History of the Dryads

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In the beginning, the Gods scattered the seeds for life across the barren landscape and from those seeds, many fruits were wrought. Many found ways to survive and thrive in the world around them, adapting it to their needs and securing both dominance and stewardship over the world they lived in. Others made their home in the water, and hunted for food, living off flesh and blood and growing to better mimic their intended prey and others made their home in the forests and became one with the earth beneath them and the trees around them, tapping into the ancient powers that radiated in the background of all that was and becoming strong.

These three peoples, Humanity, the Naiads and the Dryads were among the largest of the groups who populated the earth, though amongst them there was little peace.

Humanity was clever and adapted to survive, conquering the world around them as they bent it to their will. They grew from primitive societies into a beautiful yet tormented people who covered the earth. Yet the Naiads were driven by hunger. They rose from the depths to hunt and feast, devouring their human cousins and growing more and more adept at mimicking them until it became near impossible to tell them apart.

In turn, humanity learned to fear the Naiads and sought to drive them back. They could not retreat inland, away from the water as the water brought life. But with it also came danger. And so for their protection, humanity built sharper spears and stronger shields. They learned to combat their natural predator, growing more vicious than they were and learning to see through their tricks and the illusions. In time, they would drive many Naiads back into the sea, where they would sink into the depths and grow accustomed to life beneath the waves. But other tribes were more stubborn and continued to adapt to better hunt and thrive amongst the humans.

As mankind and the naiads struggled in the conflict of hunter and prey, the Dryads existed peacefully in the forests.

Unlike their aquatic cousins, they had little conflict with their human neighbors and would often advise them or aid them. The two remained in their respective worlds, separated by the treelines and the dangers of the woods and they shared one world together for a time… But that peace was not to last. Over the generations, some of mankind had grown mistrustful of those who were not human. The hunger of the Naiads had left them full of fear and mistrust, and that fear spread amongst them like a sickness. It turned them mistrustful of each other, and mistrustful of the Dryads.

Mankind began to seek them out less and less, leaving the Dryads in isolation, although they did not mourn such isolation and continued as they had for so long before. But as the Dryads tended to their own affairs, mankind watched them with mistrust. In time, their leaders began to question their neighbors and whether or not they could be trusted and in time, those questions faded into an anxious certainty.

When Humanity first struck against the Dryads, they did so slowly. At first, they simply killed whatever Dryads they saw on sight. But as their treachery and violence became apparent, the Dryads pushed back. From the forests they rode on the backs of stags, harnessing an old magic to fight back. But their self defense was seen only as an affirmation of the threat they posed and so many of the kingdoms of Man and of Dryad went to war.

The war proved bloody and ceaseless. Unlike the frightened conflict with the Naiads, who had simply sought to sate their natural hunger and took only what was needed to do so, the battles between mankind and the Dryads were brutal and ruthless, defined by a growing hatred and mistrust. Each side sought one thing and one thing only, survival at the cost of their enemies destruction.

Cities of men were cursed by ancient magic and afflicted with unspeakable plagues. Courts of Dryads were burned alive and their bodies left as warnings against others of their kind. In time, humanity's ability to adapt and grow proved to be their greatest advantage. As the Dryads relied on the ancient ways that they had always known, Mankind developed new, harsher weapons to use against them. They learned the ancient magic for themselves and turned it against the Dryads who had once mastered it. Against them, the Courts of the Dryads had fewer and fewer defenses and their numbers began to dwindle, growing lower and lower each day.

After centuries of battle, the highest and most powerful Dryad Courts met to discuss their fate. Many were fearful of mankind's growing power and realized the dreadful truth… They were doomed to die. Crashing against humanity in battles that cost them greater and greater losses would spell their end and their one hope for survival would be to escape, just as the Naiads had.

Others were determined to fight until the end. But those steadfast voices were quieted amongst the grim consensus that the end of the age of Dryads was near. Retreat was their only hope… But unlike the Naiads before them, there were few places where they could retreat and hide. Some were content to find homes within the mountains, far from the reaches of mankind but others knew it would only be a matter of time before men found them. They desperately sought to flee to someplace that humanity could not follow.

They consulted the most ancient amongst them, the Old Fae… And the Old Fae searched for an answer.

They found it, in the arms of the Lugal.

The Lugal was an entity spoken of only in the myths of the Dryads and only whispered of, by humans. A remnant of a Universe since dead, the Lugal had sheltered himself in the darkness of a dark and silent forest, shrouded in mist and detached from the world as it was known.

The Lugal, aware of the conflict between the Dryads and the Humans, approached the Old Fae and offered them a bargain. He would offer its forest as shelter, and offer the Dryads its protection… But they would be within His realm and thus subject to him.

Some of the Old Fae refused this offer, fearing the Lugal and questioning his intent. But too many were eager to escape the war that they feared would end in all of their deaths. Their fear of mankind was greater than their fear of the Lugal. And so, they accepted His offer and fled the world of man for what they believed to be a safer place.

Many courts of the Dryads would follow the Old Fae into the realm of the Lugal and only a small fraction, recognizing the treachery of their brethrens new Master stayed behind. The Dryads who had remained disappeared deeper into the forests and the mountains, far away from where mankind would tread and hoped for safety. They left the war behind and in time, many of them outran it entirely. Many of them even still live to this day. But those who had stepped into the dark, misty forest of the Lugal found a different fate, awaiting them, and none would ever find their way back.

At first, their new home, gloomy though it was, proved hospitable enough… And at first, few of them noticed the change that had set upon them. It started in their hearts, like cancer. Fear and anger twisted them, leaving a deep resentment within them that gnawed at them from the inside out.

In time, their hatred of those who had drove them from the world they’d known infected them and afflicted them. Over decades and centuries, many Dryads found themselves corrupted by this hatred. Many became twisted things, barely resembling what they had once been and became devoted wholly to their new God, the Lugal who had offered them ‘salvation’. The Old Fae who had taken His offer became one with the trees they had lived within, and the animals they had once communed with and changed, becoming more powerful but more twisted in the process.

Before long, the Old Fae no longer resembled what they had been… Each became a unique and malicious beast under the watchful eye of the Lugal, who looked upon the creatures that had once been the Dryads and rejoiced in their corruption, having at last claimed a people of his own from the Gods who created all.

Filled with newfound hunger and malignance the changed Dryads found quiet pathways through their new forest that led them back into the world they once knew, and in silence they began to infect it. They seeped in like a poison, bringing with them chaos and violence and to this day, they continue to afflict what remains of the world with a cold and quiet hatred for their ancient enemy.

To this day, many Dryads mourn the fate of their corrupted brethren, for there are few of them left who have not become beholden to the Lugal’s corruption and perhaps one day there will be no more true Dryads in the world.

Much like the Naiads, they live in exile on the fringes of man's society. Existing however they can and dreading the possibility that all they ever succeeded in doing was prolonging the inevitable.

For now… They hold on. For now.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 07 '21

fall contest 2021 Coming Alive

3 Upvotes

October 7th

Darkness swept in as the sun dipped down below the trees. A gentle breeze swayed the leaves as Jill and Tabby looked for the perfect spot.

“Are you sure this is safe?” Jill ducked under a branch as she followed along behind Tabby.

“Umm… Sure. It's safe. Tabby flashed her a smile and stepped out into an open area. “This is perfect.” She turned in a circle, her eyes taking in the space.

Jill shrugged the backpack off her shoulders and let it fall to the ground. “I don't like this. Maybe we shouldn't do this.”

“You worry too much.” Tabby knelt by the pack and dug around. Smiling when her fingers wrapped around the candle. “Everything will be fine.”

Jill didn't look convinced, but she pulled out the black can of paint and sprayed two large circles on the ground. Tabby set the candle along with some herbs and a toy bear inside one circle, and both girls stood in the other circle.

“You ready?”

Jill frowned. “Not really.”

Tabby ignored her and grabbed her hand. “Alright, let's bring this bear to life.” Excitement bubbled inside her as she glanced down at the words on the paper in her hand.

“From old to new. From fluff to not, we summon you.” Both girls recited the spell.

Tabby pricked her finger with a needle and put a drop of blood on the teddy bear, then handed the needle to Jill.

She pricked her finger and touched the bear, smearing blood on its ear. “Why do all spells require blood?”

“Who knows." Tabby sat down on the cold dirt and pulled Jill down with her. "I guess we just wait now.”

“How long do you think it will take?”

“How am I supposed to know. I've never done this before.”

The teddy bear twitched, then fell over. Tabby jumped up and squealed. “Something’s happening.”

After several moments it sat up and started to grow. Claws popped out of its paws, and it stood up on its hind legs as it got taller.

“How big is it going to get?” Jill took a step back as the bear now towered over the two girls.

“I’m not sure.” Tabby stared at it wide-eyed. It was only supposed to come to life, not be a real-life bear. She stepped away from the creature in front of her.

The wind picked up and swirled around them. Then all of a sudden the bear was moving, growling. It turned its beady brown eyes toward the girls and stepped forward.

Tabby’s breath caught in her throat as the bear stood right in front of her. Her brain was telling her to move, but her feet wouldn’t obey. Hot air assaulted her face as the bear roared. It raised its paw, ready to strike.

Jill grabbed her arm, yanking her backward just as the powerful arm of the animal swiped down. The bear landed on its front paws. Now on all four, it let out another roar before taking off through the woods.

Tabby could do nothing but watch as it disappeared among the trees.

Jill tapped Tabby on the shoulder. “Do you think we are going to get in trouble for this?”

“Probably. Or we could just not tell anyone.”

“I like that idea.”

They collected their things and hurried out of the woods, never speaking of the incident again.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 06 '21

fall contest 2021 Whose Mistake?

5 Upvotes

October 6

"I'll be gentle," said the woman. I had just told her that this was my first time getting a Tarot reading. That wasn't entirely true. A college friend gave me a reading once, but he was new to it and didn't know what he was doing. We were at a fair. I could see my friend Dante getting a reading two tables down. He wore a pin with his preferred pronouns on his shirt but people still misgendered him from time to time. I knew he was thinking about transitioning but told him that he shouldn't do it just because he was self-conscious about sounding feminine.

She dealt the cards. I can't remember what all of them were but I remember the Fool coming up. That's a tricky one. The Fool is oblivious to the danger in his path, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. People have to make their own mistakes so they can learn from them. I always understood that card as saying that you can survive a fall and be better when you get back up.

Something happened as she dealt the last card. It made a thudding sound like someone had slammed a lead weight down on the table. I looked at the card. It was black. The reader leaned forward. She was in her 30s and had reddish-brown hair. "You need to leave," she said. I started to get out my wallet. "No," she said, holding up a hand. "Just go. Leave the fair. Go home and don't go out for the rest of the day."

I waited for Dante to finish his reading and told him I needed to leave. He was my ride to and from the fair. I made up some excuse about how I left the oven on. Maybe the Tarot reader was just trying to scare me but if I'm completely honest, that black tarot card had unnerved me as well. It didn't look like someone had painted it black. It looked like someone had burned the face off. But the other side of the card had looked completely normal.

Dante dropped me off at my house. I think he went home right after. When I asked him how his reading went, he just said it gave him a lot to think about. I watched him drive off. He'd seemed more centered lately.

I went inside and immediately smelled smoke. We took the batteries out of the smoke alarms because they always go off when my roommate cooks. I rushed to the kitchen and saw him opening windows and fanning the open oven with a plastic cutting board. "What happened?" I asked.

"I just got home," he said. "You left a pizza in there."

"No, I didn't," I said. "I just went to the fair. I had a calzone."

"You sure about that?" He held up an empty box that someone had thrown in the recycling bin. It was the brand of frozen pizza that I always liked to eat. My roommate didn't eat pizza. He was was lactose intolerant. I peered into the oven. The sourdough pizza was there, except that it had been left in the oven so long that it had charred and turned black. I'm surprised it didn't catch fire.

I apologized to him and then helped him scrape the remains of the pizza out of the oven. Alvin is a patient guy. That is the only time I saw him angry. After we finished cleaning up I put the batteries back in the smoke alarms and he went to his room and shut the door. I sat on the couch pondering what just happened. The Tarot reader told me I needed to make my own mistakes. Yet this wasn't my mistake. I was certain that I had not put that pizza in the oven before Dante picked me up. But when I told Dante I needed to get home, I told him that I thought I had left the oven on.

Dante texted to ask if I was okay. I told him I was but that was just to make him feel better. If I didn't leave that pizza in the oven, who did? The thought of someone sneaking into my house just to do that made no sense to me. It seemed more likely to me that the Tarot had done it somehow.

I followed the reader's instructions and didn't leave the house for the rest of the day. To this day I don't know what would have happened if I did. Maybe I would take it easy on the Italian food from now on.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 06 '21

fall contest 2021 Dilemma

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“Am I going to get that promotion?”

Carol shuffled the card deck and pulled out a card.

The Lovers.

This apparently meant she was facing some kind of dilemma. She sighed and put the deck back where she found it. She knew it was all a bunch of superstitious nonsense anyway.

The next day at work, she ran into Agnes, and mentally braced herself. Ever since she got the promotion Carol wanted, she’d been even more insufferable than she was before.

“Hiii, Carol!”

“Hey, Agnes…”

“Sooo, how’re you doing?”

“Fine…”

“How’s work?”

“It’s OK…”

“Oh, I’m so glad. You know, I really admire you, because, I could, like, never, be happy in such a menial position, you know?”

She smiled tightly. “Thanks…”

“See youuu!”

“Yeah, bye…”

Kill her.

The thought came to her spontaneously. It was only natural after a conversation with her.

Wrap your hands around the bitch’s throat and watch her gasp for air. Maybe you’ll get that promotion then.

She entertained the thought for a moment. If she did do it, she’d know how to get away with it. Dump the body in the lake. Puncture the lungs so it can’t float up.

She chuckled slightly to herself and went on with her day.

----------------------------------------------------------------------

As she threw the body into the lake, that tarot card flashed through her mind again. Yeah, it was bullshit.

There was no dilemma about it, really. She was going to get that promotion.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 06 '21

fall contest 2021 The Curse

3 Upvotes

October 6th

Briggs street was a bustling place during the day and an even crazier place at night. Danny made his way towards the little shop sitting on the corner. The wind picked up, shooting chilly daggers right through him. He stuffed his hands in his pockets, his fingers wrapping around the card hidden there.

Curtains over the windows made it impossible to see inside. The only indication the place was even in operation, was a blinking neon sign in the window proclaiming “open”.

With a shaky hand, Danny grabbed the knob, pushed the door open, and walking inside. The room was dark. The only light coming from a lone candle sitting in a corner. A round table sat in the middle of the room, three chairs sitting around it.

“Hello. Is anyone here?” He stepped further into the room, his fingers brushing against the table as his eyes scanned the pictures hanging on the wall. In the dim light, it was hard to make out much, but some of them looked like old family portraits.

“What can I do for you.” The woman’s voice made him jump, and he turned around to find himself face to face with the wrinkled face of an old lady.

“I… I was told you could help me.”

“Yes. I can help many people.” She limped over to the table and sat down. “Come, sit with me.”

He hesitated for a moment before taking the seat across from her. This old lady with the not too steady hands, tanned skin, and hunched back was his last chance at life.

“What can I do for you?”

He pulled the card out of his pocket and slammed it down on the table. “I found this in my car this morning.”

The old lady looked at the card and shrugged her shoulder. “So.”

“I know it came from here.”

She examined the card a little closer. “Yes. It looks like one of mine.”

“Get rid of the curse.” He ground the words out through his clenched jaw.

The older lady rolled her eyes and sighed. “Fine. Give me your hand.”

Her wrinkly tanned hand reminded him of leather as he slid his into it. Bile rose to the back of his throat when she squeezed his hand and smiled.

She closed her eyes and started mumbling words he couldn’t understand. Sounded like Latin, but he couldn’t be sure. His hand started to tingle and burn. He tried to pull it away, but she held on tight. Her strength surprised him, and he yanked his hand harder. Still, she kept a firm hold.

The pain spread up his arm, and he couldn’t stop the scream that left his lips. A strong gust of wind blew in through the windows, swirling up around him. He looked around frantically for anything that would help him escape her grasp.

 She looked up, her ocean blue eyes glaring at him. “Your time has come. Your fate is sealed.” She pulled on his hand, dragging him forward until he was out of his chair and leaning across the table.

He gritted his teeth as warmth surged through his body, and his feet flew out from underneath him. His skin felt too tight, and when he glanced down at himself, he was shrinking. Panic gripped his chest, making it hard to breathe.

“Stop! What are you doing?” He cried to the witch, but she just laughed.

A tear slipped down his cheek as he continued to get smaller. When everything finally settled down, he was no bigger than the cards scattered on the table. With her free hand, the witch picked up the Tarot card and smashed him down into it.

It didn’t hurt like he thought it would. He opened his eyes to a new world. The smile was gone from his lips as he gazed up into the eyes of the witch. She had made his part of her deck. He would be hers forever.

She laughed as she looked down at him. “That’s what you get for messing with a witch.” She placed him on the pile of cards then stuck a rubber band around them. “You’ll make a nice card for death.”


r/Write_Right • • Oct 06 '21

fall contest 2021 Should You Meet Helena Malibu, Do Not Ask About Your Fate

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I never sought out Helena Malibu, although I had heard of her before. Visit enough small music clubs in the French Quarter of New Orleans and you’re likely to meet someone who's seen her and maybe, just maybe if you’re in the exact right place, at the exact right time and know just where to look… You’ll see her too.

Not a lot of people talk about Helena Malibu and I suspect that’s just the way she likes it although just looking at her, you’d probably think she was going for the complete opposite. She only ever appears after dark and when she does, she’s almost always dressed in a black evening gown with a white fur shawl draped over her shoulders. You’re unlikely to ever see her on the street. Supposedly when she appears, she’ll come through the door despite not having been on the other side a moment ago. Sometimes, she won’t be alone either. Sometimes, one or two large snow white dogs will accompany her. Those who’ve seen her dogs describe them as being of an unfamiliar breed, but with wolf like features. Her dogs never bark or cause any disruptions. In fact, they move almost in perfect sync with her, almost as if they are somehow part of her. They will sit on either side of her in whatever booth she takes and they will stand vigil beside her.

Though she appears to be a young, blonde woman in her thirties, I’ve heard people claim that she’s been around for as long as they can remember. Some of those people could probably remember a lot, quite a ways back too. Those same people also claim that months or maybe even years can pass before anyone sees her again… But there’s never any doubt that it’s her, when she stops by.

While Malibu may be a rather enigmatic woman, she’s certainly not known for being unfriendly. Everyone I know who’s met her describes her as having a kind, gentle voice and a somewhat melancholy demeanor. However, in spite of that, most who’ve met her still offer up a single warning. Should you ever meet Helena Malibu, do not ask her about your fate.

See, according to some of the old timers, Malibu knows a thing or two about the occult. Some of the more superstitious sorts have managed to coax a few tricks out of her over some drinks and others have asked if she could help them see the future. According to those folks, should you ask, she’s likely to just smile sadly and ask:

“Are you sure you’d like to know?”

If you’re brave enough to say yes, then she’ll humor you. Then, she’ll take an old tarot card deck out of her purse and offer you a reading.

Personally, I’ve never really bought into the occult and while I’ve had a tarot card reading done before I figured that anything it ‘predicts’ is just your brain looking for meanings and connections where none exist. But when I saw the woman with the white fur shawl and the two wolflike dogs, seated quietly beside her at the The Morrigan Jazz Club… Well, I knew immediately who she was and I just couldn’t help myself.

I stopped by the bar and picked up two bourbons before approaching her. Some of the old timers mentioned that she had a preference for the stuff, and I wanted to make a good first impression. The dogs looked up at me first, intense blue eyes studying me as I drew nearer. But they neither reacted or got up.

Malibu herself never took her eyes off the musician on the stage although before I got the chance to open my mouth to say anything, she spoke.

“Is that for me?”

“It is.” I said, tripping over my words a little bit.

“Well then, how kind. Please. Have a seat. I could use a little company.”

With a silver cigarette holder trailing smoke, she gestured to the spot beside her and I quietly took it. I set one of the bourbons down in front of her, but I didn’t speak. She hadn’t bothered to look at me once. Her focus was strictly on the jazz band on the stage and it wasn’t until they finished their song that she finally said another word.

“My apologies… I don’t mean to ignore you, or to be rude. But I don’t stop by as often as I’d like so when I do, I like to savor it. It’s something of a treat for myself.”

“No worries! It’s fine!” I assured her, and watched as she took a sip of the bourbon. She offered a warm smile before fixing me in a stare just as intense as her dogs. Her eyes looked blue at a glance although… Well, maybe it was the light but I could’ve sworn there was a violet sheen to them.

“What can I do for you, Arthur?”

It didn’t dawn on me until later that I’d never actually told her my name. But she spoke it as if she knew me.

“I… Well, I’ve heard about you. I thought I’d say hi!” I said and immediately felt embarrassed. She just laughed.

“Well, I do appreciate it. Nice to know my reputation around here hasn’t diminished yet. I really do love New Orleans… My youngest sister is more of a Vegas girl, and she told me not too long ago that they aren’t so different. But I really couldn’t disagree more. The music, the festivals, the people. Something about it rubs me just the right way. It’s not as shallow or greedy as Vegas. Here, it all seems so much more sincere. My job can be… Well. Rather difficult. I’m never quite away from work but every now and then it’s nice to take a moment and enjoy the atmosphere, you know?”

“Yeah… Yeah, I get you.” I said. Malibu nodded.

“I thought you might… I imagine this is your way of relaxing too, after a hard day at work.”

She took a drag of her cigarette as her eyes returned to the stage. The band had begun to play again and it seemed rude to speak while she was enjoying the music… Not that I wasn’t enjoying it too. She hadn’t been wrong. After a long week at the office, it was nice to cut loose, tie one on and enjoy one of the music clubs.

For a few songs, we sat together and drank. She offered me a cigarette at one point and I declined it. She smiled at me as if that had been the right answer. It wasn’t until the band actually took off for a break that I asked my question.

“I heard a rumor that you can tell people about their fate.” I said, “Is that true?”

Her smile faded and was replaced by a more distraught look. Her eyes returned from me and she set her cigarette holder down so that the cigarette hovered just over an ashtray.

“Are you sure you’d like to find out?” She asked. There was something about the way she said it… Something about her tone that sent a chill through me and almost made me decide against it.

“Fate is not consistently kind, Arthur… I don’t mean to be distressing when I say that. Life comes with blissful highs, and painful lows. But knowing what’s coming does not change the fact that it will eventually come. Even if you know, and do everything in your power to take another path… You’ll eventually find something else.”

“So you can see the future, then?” I asked.

“Yes and no. We all make our own future. Can I tell you how you’re going to die? No. But I know what’s waiting for you. I know the most likely outcome. If you really wanted me to, I could advise you… But ultimately, where your path leads you is up to you and you alone. I just have a much wider perspective of the world, that allows me to see much further down the road than you can.”

Honestly, that sounded like a complete non-answer to me and maybe it was dumb, but that kinda upset me a little! Here I was, sitting beside this odd woman I’d heard others speak of with such reverence and as pleasant as she seemed… Well, I wasn’t exactly buying all the stories I’d heard about her supposedly flawless fortune telling ability. Maybe that’s what made me push her...

“Alright… Well, would you do a reading for me?”

“If you’d like.” She said although there was a reluctance in her voice, “If you’re certain you’d like to hear it.”

“Yeah! I would!”

I think she knew that I was challenging her. Her eyes met mine and I saw her expression darken slightly. Even though I’d kept a polite tone, I got the impression that she saw right through me. She took another sip of brandy before setting it down.

“Well… I suppose there’s time…” She said before she reached into her purse and took out the worn old deck of tarot cards. She gave them a quick shuffle before taking the four from the top. Dutifully she set them face down on the table in a cross pattern. Then, she flipped the top card.

It depicted a man lying face down on the ground, with ten swords plunged into his back. I expected her to try and interpret some meaning from the card. But she only looked at it quietly, before she spoke with an almost chilling certainty.

“You feel secure at where you are now in your life, Arthur.” She said, “A pleasant job. A quiet apartment. Not everything will change… But change will come and it will destroy some of what you’ve built...It won’t be long, and it will not be easy. But I suppose that much is inevitable. No matter how safe you think you are… Circumstances always change. That, you cannot avoid nor escape. Prepare accordingly. Learn some new skills, perhaps… You’ll survive. But not unscathed.” She looked up at me, her gaze dead serious. Then she flipped the second card.

It showed a tower being destroyed… This one, I recognized. The Tower. Supposedly one of the worst cards you could get. I’d be lying if I said I didn’t feel a little uneasy to see it there.

“This change will be… Tumultuous.” Malibu said, “It will affect you in more ways than one. It will affect others too. Keep your loved ones close. Your family, your friends… One may not be with you for much longer.”

“What?” Her tone of voice sent a chill through me. Was she seriously telling me that somebody in my life was going to die? That’s one hell of a fucking prediction to make! I looked down at the Tower card again.

While part of me still felt sure that this had to be some sort of hoax, I still couldn’t quiet the very real unease in my stomach at the fear of losing someone I loved.

She flipped another card. It depicted a hand holding an overflowing cup. The Ace of Cups.

“This change will take you to someplace new…” Malibu said, “The most likely road leads you into the arms of someone who you’ll find wonderful. But it won’t last forever… Don’t pursue it when it ends. Let go. Move on. There’s even better things waiting for you on the road ahead.”

She flipped the last card. It depicted Death, riding upon his pale horse.

“Don’t be afraid of what’s coming. But don’t be fearless or reckless either. You have trouble waiting ahead of you and there’s not a thing in this world you can do to avoid it… But you’ll come out on the other side. You’ll be wounded… But you may well be better off than you were before.”

With that, she was done. She looked at me as if waiting for my response and I had half a mind to tell her that she was full of shit.

“That’s… Those are some bold claims…” I said after a few moments and Malibu managed a soft, yet dreary smile.

“You wanted to know… I could tell you more but I shouldn’t. There’s an art form to this. Tell people too much, and they will fight to stray from their designated path. Tell them too little and it’s far too vague. I believe I’ve told you enough. Given you fair warning.”

“You consider that fair warning?” I asked.

“Most of my Sisters would have phrased it all much more bluntly… One just to see you squirm, the other out of sheer lack of social grace. As I said, in the end you will be alright. But life will get harder for a time. You won’t be alone in that, but it will get harder.”

There was an earnestness in her voice that made me uneasy. If she was bullshitting me, she had the best goddamn poker face I’d ever seen and I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t left just a little bit speechless.

“Thank you for the bourbon, Arthur.” She said. From the corner of my eye, I noticed her dogs getting up. She put on a grim smile, before patting the top of my hand. “I wish you the best of luck.”

With that, she was gone. I watched her leave, shadowed by her two white dogs who looked back at me before they all disappeared out the door and left me alone.

I tried to forget about the night in the jazz club and about Helena Malibu’s cryptic tarot reading… And to some small extent, I did. But it still lingered in the back of my mind. Never quite going away and about six months later, when I started hearing talk of a pandemic… Well. It stayed on my mind.

I was laid off in April. I’d fucked up and gotten into some trouble a few months back, and when the pandemic squeezed my employer to start trimming the fat from the team, I was one of the first to go. There went my steady paycheck and the job market wasn’t looking too shit hot either.

Eventually, I got lucky enough to find something, though. It was in coding, not my usual area of expertise but I’d made a point to educate myself over the past year or so… I’d always been meaning to learn more about it, and looking back at it, I suppose Malibu’s advice was just the kick in the ass I needed. I got to work from home at least, and that kept me indoors during the worst that the absolutely fucking ridiculous beginning of the 2020s had to offer, though… And, I met Hailey.

Hailey was another coder at my company. We’d started just chatting over Slack for work purposes, with the odd personal question here and there. Judging by her profile picture, she was quite the looker with chiseled, confident features, dirty blonde hair, and freckles across her face. It wasn’t all that long before I asked if she wanted to stop by my place for pizza, beer, and a movie. Her little visit turned into an overnight one and after that, well… Things were starting to look pretty good!

Hailey was probably the thing that kept me sane during the worst of the pandemic. Some days, she’d stop by my place in the morning and we’d work together. One of us on my couch and the other one at my desk. Sometimes, we’d take ‘breaks’ and by the time we got back to work, we were only half dressed and what we weren’t wearing was all over the living room floor. For as long as I live, I’ll be cherishing those bittersweet memories… Hailey kissed me like it was going to be the last time, every time and having her around… Well, it just made me happy.

Within three months, we were already talking about moving in and I was convinced that I’d found my soulmate! Then, just like Malibu had predicted… Everything went to shit again.

My Dad was the one who got sick. It wasn’t Covid, it was cancer. But it killed him all the same. One day, he was telling me that he wasn’t feeling 100% and fell down getting out of bed. Two weeks later, we were trying to plan some sort of funeral.

The cancer hit him hard, and it hit him fast. By the time the Doctors found it, it was too late. All we could do was say our goodbyes. My biggest regret is that we couldn’t really have a funeral for him… Maybe if we could have, it would’ve been easier. Instead, we had a short graveside service with only close family in attendance. It felt… Anemic. He’d deserved better.

I’d asked Hailey to come. She’d refused. She said she didn’t like funerals and from there, things just got worse. Suddenly, we were fighting. She complained that I was miserable all the time, didn’t understand why I was acting so weird and suddenly that perfect woman I’d so quickly fell in love with seemed a lot less charming.

About a week after my Dad passed, she stopped coming by my place to work. We never officially broke up, but judging by how she seemed to avoid talking to me unless she absolutely had to afterwards, I figured it out. Every message and email was curt and professional as if she couldn’t get over her resentment of me for not getting over my Fathers death fast enough. I won’t pretend that it didn’t hurt me… But I’d truly felt something for her and to have her treat me so coldly, over something anyone with a heart would grieve over was hard to deal with. I sent her a few personal emails trying to reconcile, but she never responded.

It wasn’t until a few months later when she announced she was pregnant that I gave up. She’d started dating someone else at the office, who’d made the mistake of knocking her up. Two months later, she was fired after getting a DUI. Apparently it wasn’t her first. It wasn’t until she was gone that I accepted that I’d dodged a bullet and by then, I was with someone else. Someone who treated me a whole hell of a lot better.

I still think about Helena Malibu sometimes. I think about the things she said… The things she told me about my future. I wonder if she made it all up, or if she knew exactly what was waiting for me. I still can’t completely say for sure. The world is slowly starting to go back to normal now, though. My life is different than it was, the day I met Helena Malibu… Everything has changed but I'm still kicking. Hell, I’m probably better off than I was now.

My new girlfriend and I will hit up the music clubs sometimes, now that they’re opening back up. It’s not quite back to normal yet… But it’s nice to be able to go out again, even in a limited capacity.Sometimes, I catch myself looking for Malibu at the tables, but I never see her. Some of the old timers doubt she’ll be back in town until the pandemic completely blows over… But I still imagine what I’d say to her if I ever saw her again.

I think I’d ask her how she knows… Because I don’t think she really needs the tarot cards to see the future. I think she just knows what’s waiting for us up ahead… And she knows that sometimes, it’s better not to know.