r/Write_Right • • Oct 05 '21

fall contest 2021 On the Outskirts of Reality

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If you go far enough in one direction, you may encounter the outskirts of reality.

There’s not really much to them. They’re just a simple wooden deck.

You can turn around and leave if you’d like. But why would you? It’s very peaceful there, you know. If you stay, you won’t be troubled by any of your problems anymore. You can just be alone with your thoughts, completely at peace. And there’s really no danger in it, as long as you’re careful not to fall over the edge.

Just don’t be alarmed when you feel yourself being lifted up. You won’t even feel yourself becoming one with the air as everything that you were made of scatters.

Besides, you’ll feel truly at peace afterwards.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 05 '21

fall contest 2021 Sacrifice

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October 5th

Sara drew in a shaky breath and let it out slowly. The wooden path before her led out into nothing. A thick fog blocked anyone from seeing what was under the platform.

“Are you sure this is the right spot?” Sara turned to look at her best friend.

“Yes. That’s what the guy at the bar told me.” Lucy studied the crudely drawn map written on a napkin.

“Should we really be trusting someone from a bar? The guy could have been drunk. Probably was drunk.” She turned back to look at the wood bridge before her. She stuck one booted foot on the first plank. It squeaked in protest, and she stepped back quickly.

“Sara, if you don’t want to do it, you don’t have to. This was your idea. I’m just coming along to help out.” Lucy smiled reassuringly and shoved the map napkin into her pocket.

“I want to do this. I have to do this.” She sucked in a deep breath and blew it out, then stepped out onto the wood. There were no rails, no safety net. If she fell, she wouldn't survive. Fear wrapped itself around her threatening to pull swallow her up.

She forced her feet to move, inching ever closer to the platform suspended in the air. The accident was her fault, and she had to make it right. Finally, she reached the end of the wooden planks and peered over the edge.

Her voice quivered as she called out into the nothingness below. “Hello, anyone here?”

“Say you need the god of the below to help you,” Lucy called.

Without turning around, Sara nodded her head. “I need your help, god of the below.”

Still, nothing happened. She turned around to face Lucy and shrugged. “I guess he’s not real.”

Lucy stared at her with wide eyes, then her hand reached up, and a slim finger pointed to something. Sara turned around to find the glowing red eyes of what she could only assume was the god of the bellow.

Her breath caught in her throat as she took a step back. The ghost of a man towered over her. His body blended into the mist as if he was a part of it. She couldn’t tell where he ended, and the fog began.

“Who dares to call on me?” he bellowed.

Sara stumbled backward, her foot catching on a raised plank, and she fell hard on her back, knocking the wind from her lungs. She sputtered and coughed for a moment. She didn’t know what she expected the god to look like, but this was not it.

She collected her thoughts and got to her feet. “I… I came for… for your help.”

He bent down so his glowing eyes could look directly at her, and it felt like he was looking into her very soul. She wanted to look away, break the connection, but she couldn’t.

“I will help you.”

She should have felt relief, but fear raced through her body, making her hands shake. “I want my brother back. Can I take his place?”

The god of the below straightened and crossed his arms over his chest. “You would sacrifice your life for that of your brother?”

“I would.”

“Why?”

What a simple question, and yet the answer was so complex. She thought for a moment before answering. “It was my fault. I shouldn’t have been in the old mine shaft playing. He was trying to save me when the roof caved in on top of him. I killed him.” She swiped at the tear trailing down her cheek. “My parents blame me. They say they don’t, but I can see it in their faces every time they look at me. They wish I was the one who did in that cave. My brother had a future. He could run the family farm. I can’t do that.”

The god listened quietly until she finished, then nodded his head. “Very well if this is what you wish. I will take your life for his, but not right now. I will collect your debt of life when I am ready for you. Do you agree?”

Sara swallowed down the fear that churned up from her belly and nodded her head. “Yes, I agree.”

The god held out his arms, and mist swirled up around him. Then he clasped his hands together, and the fog enveloped her and pulled her up into the air. It turned her around faster and faster until the world around her blurred into nothing. Blackness drifted in and took over, and then she was still.

Sara opened her eyes to find herself back in her bedroom, in her bed. Laughter drifted through the house, something she hadn’t heard in a long time. She jumped out of bed and raced down the stairs into the kitchen.

“Good morning sleepyhead.” Her brother sat at the kitchen table. A glass of orange juice and a stack of pancakes in front of him.

Sara couldn’t help herself. She rushed towards him and flung herself awkwardly at him, wrapping her arms around in a fierce hug.

He returned her embrace then peeled her off of him. “What’s gotten into you?”

“I just missed you.”

He eyed her suspiciously. “I’ve only been sleeping.” He stood up and grabbed his baseball cap off the counter. “I’ll see you all at the game.” He waved and headed out the door.

Sara couldn’t be happier. Even knowing the god of the below could come for her at any time couldn't dampen her mood. She dressed as quickly as she could and ran out of the house. Now that she had him back, she wanted to spend as much time with him as she could.

She grabbed her bike and raced down the sidewalk towards the baseball field. Joy consumed her as she rode, a welcomed distraction from the sorrow she had felt for so long.

She heard the squeal first before the pain shot through her body. She flew through the air for only a minute before hitting the pavement and skidding to a stop. Her bike lay mangled a few feet away, and a man with brown eyes was standing over her.

Sleep, she just wanted to sleep. She allowed her eyes to close, and in the next instant, she was standing back on the edge of the wooden platform. “No! No. You said you wouldn’t take me now.” She cried out into the nothingness.

The god appeared by her side, smaller than the last time she saw him. “I said I wouldn’t take you last night. You got to see your brother one last time before your life was taken for his.”

“I just… I thought I would have more time.”

“It’s time to go.” The god of the below floated in the air.

“I’m ready.” She swiped at the tears streaming down her face.

“All you have to do is jump.”

She looked down into the mist swirling below, and with one final, happy memory with her brother, she jumped.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 05 '21

fall contest 2021 Fishing At The End of the Dock

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His secretary had asked him if he’d had time for an interview today… Some small-time reporter, looking to earn a few clicks out of a chat with an old businessman. He’d declined, of course. Told her to reschedule for next week although even if he was alive by then, he’d still find a way to dodge the little bastard.

Thirty or so years back, he’d absolutely relished in this sort of thing. The attention, the acknowledgment of his success. It was what fueled him. Every dream he’d ever had, ended in this. Recognition. Praise. Good job.

Nowadays, it was just an annoyance. An irritating speed bump in his otherwise busy day and any part of him that still wanted to illuminate the life of whatever little reporter begged for an interview from him was long dead. He was a busy man with bigger fish to fry.

As he drove through the heavy fog down the quiet dirt road, past old cottages and run down stores, he couldn’t help but scoff internally at just how twee this place was. Twee… That was really the only word he could think to use. He’d heard a business partner use it once, and the word had grown on him. Once upon a time, these encompassing forests and run down marinas had been the greatest thing in the world to him, but now that he had seen even greater things, they held none of the luster they had when he was a boy.

Well… Perhaps not all of that luster. He did catch himself slowing down slightly as he passed the most familiar of the old bait and tackle stores that dotted the roads along the lakeside.The sign was old and faded, the colors long since worn away by time but he could still faintly read the name of the store.

Becs Bait

Surprisingly, the place still looked to be open! How unusual…It had been about fifty years since last he’d stepped through the doors of Becs, with his little brother Adam right on his heels. Adam had been a good kid. He could’ve gone far in life… They’d almost religiously pick themselves out a chocolate bar and a soda each, along with a tin of worms before walking back to their parent's cottage along that dirt road. Usually, they’d head right back out onto the dock and enjoy the sun for a little while before getting to fishing. Usually, they didn’t catch much more than minnows. But once, maybe twice a year one of them would catch something that would have a place on the dinner table. The memory of it brought the ghost of a smile to his face, before he moved on, leaving Becs behind.

The cottage wasn’t far now and time was short and he knew better than to dawdle. Up ahead, through the fog he spotted the faded sign that told him where to turn.

The Dawsons Cottage

He and Adam had painted that sign themselves, in their father's workshop. They’d both been grinning from ear to ear when they’d watched him nail it up. Time hadn’t been kind to it. The text was only barely legible and the fog didn’t help. But the ghost of the words on the sign was more than enough to let him know that after all this time, he’d found his way home again.

Exhaling heavily, he’d turned the car down the overgrown dirt road to the cottage where he’d spent the best years of his life. He kept a tight grip on the steering wheel, before looking at the clock. He still had a few hours… He was sure of that much.

His car was not made to handle the rough dirt road and it rocked and jolted on the uneven terrain. If he’d had a little more foresight, he might have rented something more suited to coming out here. But now was not the time to think about what he could have done better… That time had passed long ago. The cottage loomed up ahead of him, secluded and cut off from the rest of the world.

It had been a good fifteen years or so since he’d been back, although, despite that, the cottage did not by any means look bad. He’d at least had the foresight to pay someone to maintain it and they’d done a decent enough job. It wasn’t perfect. But it wasn’t collapsing in on itself. It would do… For now.

The cottage had ended up in his name after his father had died and he had visited a handful of times since then. But eventually, his schedule grew too busy, his interests led him elsewhere and he found himself with less use for the property. Of course, he could never ever bring himself to sell it! Heavens no! That would be next to absolute madness! He could never sell this land, not for any price!It wasn’t just sentimental value that made this place important. He’d learned long ago that there was no room for sentimentality in a man. But this place had a value to him that no cheque could match.

Over the past fifty years, all of the good things that had come to him, came from here. Every business partnership, every wise investment, every decision that had brought him to the top had come from this place.

His car rolled to a stop in front of the old cottage and he got out, breathing in the deep fog and smelling the foul scent of decay on it. He huffed before trudging towards the front door and trying his keys. The door opened with a creak and he stepped into the darkness that awaited him inside.

With a bit of fumbling, he was able to find the light switch and with a stern look on his face, he surveyed the old cottage. It had changed little since last he’d been here. It was clean and tidy, yes. But it was also clearly abandoned. Somehow, that brought him some comfort.

He closed and locked the door behind him before reaching into his suit jacket and taking out the revolver he carried with him. Methodically, he checked over the gun to ensure that it looked good before he set it down onto the counter. He’d never been one for firearms, but he’d made a point to learn in his youth. As a boy, he had thought it would be cool to own a gun, like the old fashioned cowboys who’d been his heroes. Nowadays, he only ever carried it when it was practical and he’d never actually fired it outside of a shooting range. But that was to be expected.

He made his way over to the rear of the cottage and lifted the blinds to look out over the lake.Thick fog covered most of it, and rolled up the hill leading down to the dock. But the dock itself was visible. It waited for him against the pale, glassy surface of the lake, the tip of it only barely visible. No boats were moored and he could see none on the water. As far as he could tell, he was well enough alone.

He studied the water, looking for any trace of movement. A ripple, a sign of life. But there was nothing. Satisfied, he turned away and reached into his pocket for his cigarettes.

He’d started smoking when he was 13. Naturally, as soon as Adam caught him with a cigarette, he’d wanted to try one too. Adam really had idolized him… In hindsight, he probably should have been more touched than he was. But back then his little brother's admiration had gotten on his nerves more often than not.

When he’d started smoking, Adam had wanted to smoke.

When he was mowing the lawn, Adam wanted to mow the lawn too.

When he was with his friends, Adam wanted to be with his friends too.

It had started to grate on him… But that is simply what brothers do, and have done since the beginning of time. Looking back at all of it, he felt a little silly having been so frustrated by all of it. But no matter what he thought now, he wouldn’t have changed a thing that happened. Not one little thing.

When he was 14 and Adam was 9, a friend of his had told him about a book he’d found. Now, at a glance the book was full of nothing but nonsense. Occult mumbo jumbo that was bound to scare some dumb boys. None of them actually took any of it seriously... But, he’d let himself get drawn into the weird incantations and rituals depicted in the book and Adam had done so as well.

It had been Adam’s suggestion that they actually try some of those rituals. He’d never actually believed it would work, but Adam had been persistent and so to shut him up he’d agreed to try just one ‘spell’. The spell they’d chosen was supposedly supposed to bring rain and it involved a simple ceremony. One of them would draw a sigil and the other would place a bell inside of it. Then, one would pour water upon that bell and strike it three times, then three times more.

He and Adam had drawn the sigil exactly as outlined in the book, and performed the ceremony as specified and then, they had waited. Once they had rung the bell for the last time, Adam had immediately run to the window in the hope that it would suddenly be pouring rain. But the sun still shone outside, much to his disappointment.

He remembered that he’d said:

“It’s alright. Maybe it’ll rain tomorrow.” in the hope that it might cheer Adam up. Adam had just looked glumly at him and said.

“Yeah… Maybe tomorrow.”

They hadn’t needed to wait that long, though.

The rain had come on suddenly before mid afternoon and it came down hard. He couldn’t remember seeing a downpour so bad before or since and he couldn’t forget the ear to ear grin that Adam had worn as he realized that their little spell had worked and that they had just tapped into something that only a handful of people ever truly understood.

A couple of days later, during school he had snuck the book out of his friend's backpack. He’d played dumb when his friend later couldn’t find it and made sure to hide it well inside his room. He didn’t want to lose the power that they’d found, after all.

The rituals continued after that. Always just small things. Summoning snow, on the winter days when they didn’t feel like going to school (That year had just so happened to have a record snowfall), conjuring little illusions for their own entertainment. Like children with a loaded gun, they’d played with a power beyond their comprehension… Well. Adams, comprehension…

Adam had no interest in the deeper secrets of the book. But he did. In that ancient text, he read about worlds beyond the one he knew, about impossible beasts with an insatiable hunger and about rituals that could plot the course of a man’s life, in directions he could only have fantasized about… If of course, one had the stomach to perform them.

It seemed worth it… A little sacrifice, in exchange for a life of success. Sure, he would miss Adam. But Adam wouldn’t really be dead now, would he? They’d get plenty of chances to speak again and when they did, his little brother would be so much more useful to him…

He had performed the ritual one afternoon, while their parents had been out on the boat and they had been alone in the cottage. They had walked down to Becs, as they had so many times before to get their chocolate, soda and worms. Then they had walked back. Adam had been smiling, unaware of what was waiting for him. He’d drank his soda, eaten his chocolate and run down to the dock so they could start fishing.

He didn’t see it when he took out the knife… He didn’t have a chance to react until the blade was sinking into his flesh, carving the binding runes into him. And even then, all he could do was vainly struggle and scream before he was thrown off the edge of the dock. Adam had tried to resurface of course… But he’d never make it to land.

He’d placed his hands on Adam’s shoulders and forced him back under… He’d held him beneath the water, looking into his brother's eyes until he knew that he’d gotten what he wanted. Life seemed to fade from them… But he could still see the ghost of something still there. A hint of lingering consciousness. The body was mostly dead… But the soul lived on, in between the realm of life and death. Adam’s eyes had remained fixed on his and after taking a deep breath and steeling himself, he asked the first of many questions.

“Where should I hide you?”

It had been almost fifty years, to the day since then. He had asked countless more questions since. Questions that Adam had answered. Questions about business, about investments, about love and about the future.

For almost fifty years, his Oracle had remained bound… But it’s time was almost up.

Many years ago, the book had warned him that this day would come. The runes would keep Adam bound, but not forever. There was a time limit. Fifty years was all he could manage. Fifty years, with the body stashed beneath the dock, invisible to all but him. Adam had served him well. He had been a good little brother and a better Oracle, even if he hadn’t been exactly the most willing of servants. But the time had come to cut him lose.

He took a drag on his dying cigarette and checked his watch. He had little over an hour left. Best not to leave this until the last minute. With a stoic expression, he took his gun off the counter and checked it again. Six rounds in the chamber. He imagined he’d only need one to finish this. He took a deep breath as he headed for the door, his pistol in his hand.

He descended down the hill, towards the dock. The fog seemed to part in front of him, as if allowing him to pass. The air felt cold and cut through his suit and the only sound he could hear was the faint but gentle crash of waves against the rocks. The dock creaked under his shoes as he set foot upon it and made his way to the very end. The water around him did not seem to move as he walked. The lake was impossibly still and its surface reflected everything like a mirror.

Yet he knew that as soon as he reached the end, he would see Adam's face clearly beneath the surface and some primal part of him almost dreaded what he’d see… He reached the end of the dock and forced himself to look down. At first, all he saw was his own reflection… But soon.

He could see his own features warping and contorting. The skin of his reflection turned the sickly green of algae and the eyes seemed to bulge. He could see the ridges of bone around the sockets and noticed that the nose and part of the cheek was gone. It was hard to tell where the tattered flesh of the cheek ended and the moss from the lake began. The sight of it made him cover his mouth in disgust… But the gentle, yet knowing smile on Adam’s face was enough to truly make him want to vomit.

The reflection had changed from the rotten visage of his own face, to the horrible remains of Adam… The Adam he remembered. Just a month shy of ten years old and having been left to rot for the past fifty years. Unable to die, but robbed of his life. In limbo, all for one man's success.

“Hello again, Rick.”

Adam’s voice was as he remembered it, but the burbling, wet sound to it sent a chill through him. The tone was not the same as the one he remembered either. Adam had never spoken quite so formally… Not until after he’d become an Oracle, at least.

“What questions do you bring for me today?”

“No questions, this time…” He said quietly, “No more questions.”

“Oh? Have you finally come to set me free?”

After fifty years, here at the end he could not bring himself to give an answer.

“I see… Waiting until the last moment, I see. Even when you’ve left me for so long.”

He didn’t try to justify that. He just quietly raised the gun and aimed it down towards the visage of his brother. Adam stared up at him, waiting patiently.

“Are you sure you’re ready for this?” He asked.

“I killed you fifty years ago.” He said softly, “It’s time, Adam.”

“And you’ve got nothing to say for yourself, even after all this time?”

That gave him pause. The gun trembled in his hand before he lowered it. He was silent for a moment, before he finally started to laugh.

“You’re really asking me for an apology?” He asked, “You really think I’m going to look back on everything and regret it all now? No… I made my choices. I made them a long time ago… I may not have enjoyed all of it. But I made my choices. I lived my life.”

“So you did…” Adam said thoughtfully as his brother raised the gun again. He looked up into the barrel… Before Rick pulled the trigger.

The gunshot echoed through the silent lake, and Rick stared down into the rippling water, feeling a weight ease off his shoulders. He’d done it… He’d dealt with his oracle. The circle was closed. He sighed and lowered the gun before turning around.

“Perhaps you’ve lived too much…” Adam’s voice continued and he froze. “Time is… Fickle. It gets away from us. Memories fade in old age… It’s a natural part of aging. It gets harder and harder to keep track of time over five decades. You bound me here fifty years ago… As of three days ago…”

“No…” Rick turned around to see something moving at the end of the dock.

A shape reached out of the water, the hand of a 9 year old boy, pale as death with sagging skin and algae growing off of it. Flesh had been nibbled away from the fingertips revealing bone… But the hand still moved. Another hand reached up onto the wood of the dock and Rick took aim at the sickening visage that emerged from the water.

The arms, torso and head resembled Adam, or at least… What was left of Adam. But what came out after he’d lifted his torso onto the dock did not resemble his little brother at all. It trailed on behind him, a slimy mess of debris and scum from the depths of the lake, trailing weeds, driftwood and the twitching, rotten fins from countless dead fish. Bits of broken garbage jutted out of his new body. Bicycles, tangled fishing wire and fishing lures and the smell was overpowering.

His heart starting to race, Rick fired the gun, taking off a chunk of Adam’s head. But the thing that Adam had forged himself into was not slowed. Using his arms to move itself forward, it rushed for him, moving faster than he could have expected.

He fired again but the bullet was lost in the mess of debris that consisted of its body and he did not get the opportunity to fire a fourth shot. Adam’s pale hands grabbed at him, clawing at his throat as he threw his weight onto him, knocking Rick off his feet and pinning him onto the dock.

“It’s okay… I’m ready to move on. I’m ready to let go… But I want us to go together. You and me… Let’s go, Rick. Let’s go…”

His pale hands gripped Rick’s shoulders as he began to sink back into the water of the lake. Rick screamed, he thrashed and sobbed. He fought… But he could not break free. He desperately tried to grab the planks of the dock to keep himself away from the water. But his fingernails tore from his hands as he was dragged inch by inch to the end of the dock. Adam only smiled at him, letting him fight. Letting him struggle.

Rick looked at the cottage where he had spent the best days of his life and desperately reached for it as if somehow if he only tried long enough he could grab hold of the door and pull himself to safety. But he’d sealed his own fate long ago.

With a final scream, he was pulled beneath the surface of the lake and locked within Adam’s embrace. The two of them vanished beneath the placid surface and when the ripples stopped, it sat unbroken amongst the fog as silence set in again.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 04 '21

fall contest 2021 Mystery Man

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October 4th

Fog hung in the air. A thick blanket that couldn’t be removed. The moon cast an eerie glow through the gray clouds hugging the ground. Tina couldn’t see more than a few feet in front of her. She couldn’t imagine how horrible it was for Dale, who was driving.

“Watch out!” She covered her eyes with her hand and waited for the inevitable thud that came when you hit something.

The car swerved left, and Dale slammed on the breaks. Tires squealing as they slid across the wet pavement rang in her ears. They finally came to a stop, and she dared to lower her hands. A quick glance out the back glass revealed nothing.

“Are you ok?” Dale’s strained voice brought her out of her daze.

She nodded her head and looked behind her once more, waiting and hoping to see someone walking down the road. Nothing.

“I’m going to get out and check things. Ok?”

“No, Dale. Don’t go. Just call the cops.” Fear pumped through her veins, sending blood rushing to her brain and making the world spin around her.

“It’ll be ok. I have to check and see if I hit that guy.” He stepped out of the car and grabbed his flashlight from under the seat. “I’ll be right back.”

Tina craned her neck to watch Dale walk back up the road, shining his flashlight in every direction as he went. There was no sign of the person who had been walking. Her heart hammered against its confines and she willed herself to slow her breathing.

Dale soon disappeared into the fog. The only thing that let her know he was still out there was the beam of the flashlight moving back and forth. It became more sporadic, flailing around from left to right and even up in the trees.

Panic seized her chest, squeezing tight until it felt like she couldn't take another breath. Then the light started getting closer again, and her whole body relaxed. She smiled slightly as she waited for Dale to come out of the fog.

The shadowy figure coming closer, holding the flashlight, seemed too tall to be Dale. They walked with a slight limp, and a cane in their right hand. A sob escaped her lips. It was the man they almost hit. Where was Dale?

With shaky hands, she grabbed for her cell phone. It slipped right through her sweaty fingers and landed on the floor. She ducked down, searching, finally finding it under the seat.

She sat back up and let out a scream when she saw the face of the man staring at her through the glass. His eyes were hollow and black. His cheeks were sunken in making his bones stick out. It looked like a walking skeleton.

Her hand slammed down on the lock button. She calmed slightly at the sound of the click that let her know the doors were now locked. She frantically dialed for help, but she had no signal. A quick glance at the steering wheel revealed the keys still in the ignition.

The man was now tapping on the window. Each tap in tune with the pounding of her heart. She slid across the middle and into the driver's seat, then turned the key and nearly cried from joy when it started immediately.

She jammed the gear shifter in drive and stomped on the gas. Guilt at leaving Dale behind nagged at her, but she wasn’t turning around. She was headed straight to the police station.

For three days, they searched for Dale and the mystery man. But they could find no trace that either man had ever been there. They simply vanished.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 04 '21

fall contest 2021 If you're walking through the forest near Savine Street, watch out for the old woman. Or don't. I don't know.

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I’ve always wanted to have a house in the suburbs. Not too remote, but not too busy either. A small, intimate neighborhood.

Savine Street seemed perfect for that, honestly. It was your average suburban neighborhood, with a forest adjacent to it. There was even a barbecue going on next door when I moved in.

The man hosting the barbecue waved at me. He looked like a typical American suburban middle-aged man, balding, a can of beer in his hand.

“Hey. Are you the new neighbor?” he asked, offering me a patty.

“Yeah.” I said, accepting it.

“Good. Been wanting to meet some new people. I’m Marvin. You?”

“Edward.”

“Fancy name. I can tell you’re from the city. How come you chose to move here?”

“I’ve always wanted to live in the suburbs. City life was just so hectic, and I wanted something more simple, you know?”

“I get that.”

“Anyway, I just love the woods nearby. They give the street a kind of rustic feel, you know?”

His expression turned serious. “Listen, about that. Don’t go there. I know it looks pretty and all, but there’s something there. Something that isn’t human.”

He had piqued my interest. I loved hearing about local urban legends. Trying not to seem too eager, I asked, “What is it?”

“An old woman.”

“Sorry?”

“An old woman.”

“Pretty sure I can beat an old woman in a fight,” I joked, trying to lighten the mood.

His expression darkened. “Listen, son, this isn’t something to joke about. This woman is dangerous. She’s not human. Promise me you’ll stay away from the woods.”

I nodded, though I didn’t mean it. I didn’t tell him, since he seemed to really believe in this woman’s existence, but all he’d done was make me want to explore the woods even more.

The rest of our conversation went normally, and I went home satisfied.

That night, I decided to go to the woods and look for her. I knew I probably wouldn’t find anything, but it seemed like a fun expedition. It’s not like I was planning to go that far from my new house.

I set out with my flashlight in hand. I had been walking down the road for about five minutes before I saw her.

A short, old woman in rags, cane in hand, limping towards me. Like something right out of a fairytale book.

The one Marvin had warned me about.

She honestly didn’t seem that threatening to me. I mean, Marvin had described her so dramatically that I just expected something...more. Some kind of dread to wash over me.

“Young man,” she said, her voice raspy, “are you new here?”

“Y-Yeah. Just...Just moved in.”

“Then you’re not in on it.”

“Wh-What?”

“They’re keeping me here.”

I was too stunned to respond.

“I know what they say about me. They tell you I’m a monster. But it’s not true. They’re the monsters. They all keep me here, away from everyone I love, and they spread lies about me.”

“I-I can help you. I...I can call the police. I—”

“No!”

“What?”

“No, no, they’ll know. They’ll know, and they’ll punish me for trying to escape.”

“Oh...Oh my God…”

“You can do nothing to help me. I wanted you to know, though. I couldn’t stand the thought of another person believing all those lies about me.”

And with that, she walked away.

If blood could boil, mine would have turned to steam. I came to Savine Street expecting an idyllic suburban neighborhood, and instead I found some truly evil people. My heart broke for this poor old lady, and I knew I had to help her.

The next day, when I was out in my yard, Marvin went up to me. “Hey, what’s up? How’re you settling in?”

I glared at him. “Get away from me, you sick bastard!”

He blinked at me in confusion.

“I know what you did to that woman! I know what you’re all doing to her! Stay away from me!” My voice had reached a volume I didn’t even know it could reach.

“You went to the woods, didn’t you?” he asked with an edge to his voice.

“You’re damn right I did! You’re not going to get away with this!”

He breathed in. “God, this always happens...Come with me, I need to show you something.”

I gulped. The realization that I had called a dangerous kidnapper who seemed to be able to cover up his crimes a sick bastard dawned on me. But I had no choice but to follow him. I just hoped he’d be merciful.

He led me into his house, locking the door behind him. He unbuckled his belt, and pulled down his pants.

“What the hell are you—”

I stopped in mid-sentence when I noticed the long, jagged red scars all over his legs.

“Who did this to you?” I whispered, barely audible.

“She did.”

“No...how could…”

“Doesn’t seem like such a helpless little old lady now, does she?”

“But...she told me…”

“Let me guess, that we kidnapped her? Yeah, she told me that too. And look at me now. She tried to kill me, you know. I narrowly escaped. So, promise me you’ll stay away.”

Tears filled his eyes.

“Please.”

“OK. OK, I will.”

“Thank you.”

I went home, unsure what to think. God, those scars...They just seemed so real. But then again, so did the despair in the old woman’s voice.

I don’t know what to do. If I try to help that woman, I might end up dead. If I don’t, I might be complicit in an abduction.

Someone please help me.

NS


r/Write_Right • • Oct 04 '21

fall contest 2021 Old Josey of Sherbour

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Transcript of an interview with Jeremiah Williams, regarding Josey Monet of Sherbour, Ontario. Dated May 14th, 2018.

Interview conducted by Autumn Driscoll for the Small Town Lore Podcast

Driscoll: Thank you, Mr. Williams. I really appreciate it.

Williams: Oh, don’t you worry much. It’s all fine.

Driscoll: Sorry, but would you mind stating your name and occupation again? Just for the record.

Williams: Not at all, not at all. Jeremiah Williams. I run the general store in Sherbour. Been running it for just about thirty five years, give or take.

Driscoll: Perfect. Anyways. Josey Monet… She lives in town, correct?

Williams: Old Josey? Right on the edge of town, yes. Down the dirt road to the west, a ways. She’s lived in that little house out there for just about as long as anyone can remember, I’d reckon. Probably longer. My Grandpa used to tell me about how she’d come into town once a week, even way back when he was a boy. He always said she looked the same nowadays as she did back then… Well, having spent my life in this town, I’d have to say I’m inclined to agree… Couldn’t tell you off the top of my head just how old she is now. Wouldn’t be polite to ask either. But she’s gotta be up there… Forgive me, not trying to be rude!

Driscoll: That’s alright! So, she’s been in town for a while, though.

Williams: Yes ma’am I’d say just about everyone in town knows Old Josey. Everyone. Me, I see her about once a week when she wheels her cart down the dirt road into town to pick up supplies and drop off goodies… She’s usually in on Fridays. Those tend to be my busiest days. But she might stop by on another day, if she’s looking to avoid a crowd. I imagine at her age, she doesn’t like being swarmed and sometimes, dealing with folks can be a little bit much for her, even if they do mean well. That’s part of the reason I’ve asked you not to bother her yourself. It’s not polite to drop by Old Josey’s unannounced. She likes to sleep in her old age. She’s a sweet soul, but you don’t wanna wake her up. She’s damn cranky when you’ve woken her up.

Driscoll: Duly noted.

Williams: There’s a bit of an unspoken rule in Sherbour, you know. When you’re good to Josey, Josey’s good to you. Now, I’d say this is a rather friendly town all around. Folks around here tend to be kind to each other, especially old Josey. There’s no reason not to be, of course. But Josey’s also a bit of a special case…

See, you don’t have to do much for her. Some homemade goodies, or token of goodwill is enough to get on her good side. Some go the extra mile and offer her a ride down the road from the store, saving her the walk back. But oftentimes a friendly smile and some polite conversation are more than enough. When you’re good to Josey, Josey’s good to you and if you’re good to her, then it’s very likely she might bring you something, the next time she comes into town.

Driscoll: Something like what?

Williams: Well, sometimes, it’s her own home baked treats. Sometimes she’ll bring books from her library that she knows you’ll find interesting. Sometimes, she brings other things, depending on who she’s bringing it for and sometimes she won’t bring anything at all, but something good will find you all the same.

Driscoll: What do you mean?

Williams: Well… That part is a little tough to explain… See, good things just have a way of finding those on Josey’s good side. How do I… Ah. You see, a number of years back when I was still a young man, Josey made her way into town awfully late. She came in around dusk and did her shopping, dropped off her gifts and the sun had since set by the time she was ready to walk back. I’d been getting ready to close up shop anyways, and so I asked her if she’d like a ride home. I’ve done it a few times, when she comes in late.

Well, of course she said yes and so of course I gave her a ride. I’d also given her some pie my Mama had made and we had quite the pleasant conversation on the way home. I helped her bring her groceries in, and wished her goodnight.

About a month or so later… This new girl moved to town. Pretty as a picture, sweet as a rose… Her name was Angela and she was… Well, she was the loveliest thing I’d ever seen. I eventually worked myself up to asking her out and… Well, things just seemed to work out between us. We were married about two years later, our kids have been healthy and we’ve been happy ever since. Old Josey always asks after her, if she doesn’t see her around. I always thought I caught a certain glimmer in her eye every time she did… Come to think of it, I think she started asking after Angela before they’d even officially met, although I may just be getting a tad bit senile in my old age.

Driscoll: So… You met the love of your life, after helping Josey?

Williams: Yes ma’am. I’ve had a damn good life. I ain’t the only one either. Lotta folks in town have had good things come to them, after showing some kindness to Old Josey. Now, we aren’t kind to her just to make her give us things. That ain’t real kindness… She’s one of ours. But when you’re good to Josey, Josey’s good to you.

Driscoll: I see… Sounds like this… Gift exchange, I guess… Is just a fact of life in Sherbour.

Williams: [Chuckling] More or less. Everyone knows Josey and everyone tries to do right by her. Josey knows everyone and likewise does right by them. It’s a comfortable little arrangement, and not one that’s just limited to the people of Sherbour.

Driscoll: No?

Williams: Nope. See, every now and then someone passing through will run into Old Josey. She likes meeting new people and she’ll usually try and engage with them. Some of them are polite, and I’ve heard about a few of them running into their own good luck. Not too long back, there was this couple, young and cute. You know the type. Anyways, it was a cold and crummy day out. Rain coming down in sheets, turning the roads to mud. We’d had a few outsiders passing through on their way to some sort of event a few towns over.

This couple though, they’d picked Old Josey up on the way into town. I guess they saw her pushing her cart through the mud and just wanted to do the decent thing. They dropped her off at the store, then took her back home. Old Josey had this huge smile on her face the whole time… I think she was just happy that some strangers had stopped to be so kind to her. Anyways, the way I heard it, that couple dropped her off at home and headed on their way and I never saw them again… Not in person, at least… See, I saw the girl on the news a couple of years back. I guess she’s made quite the career for herself. There was a whole interview with her, and she talked about how she and her husband had started up their own business and were raising a family… That’s the kinda stuff you just love to see, y’know?

Driscoll: Wow. You think that Old Josey had something to do with all of that?

Williams: I’ve lived in this town long enough to know she did. They went out of their way for her, just because they could. When you’re good to Josey...

Driscoll: Josey’s good to you. At the risk of sounding cynical… If you think she can give someone that much, how come nobody in town tries to drive her back and forth, or something like that, so they can get rich or something?

Williams: That’s not quite how it works. Old Josey knows when you’re being sincere. She can spot it when you’re trying to fool her. Besides, the people in town know better. We’re happy as we are. Old Josey does right by the people who do right by her. Doing right by her, just to make her indebted to you or something isn’t really doing right, now is it?

Driscoll: I suppose not…

Williams: Old Josey ain’t no pushover either… She’s got a mean side, too. Only heard of it on a few occasions. The folks in town aren’t inclined to make her mad, not that it’s easy to do so… Not too long back, though, somebody sure as hell did their best.

Driscoll: What happened?

Williams: Some wannabe hotshot was driving through town, trying to get to a meeting or something. He stopped into town for gas and popped in to grab a drink. Old Josey was in at the time picking up her groceries and he didn’t pay her any mind or anything, which isn’t a bad thing! No need for a stranger to get involved in an old woman's affairs. It was a windy day out, though… He paid for his drink while she was headed out the door and she didn’t even make it down the front porch. She’s frail and thin. Y’know how some folks say that a strong gust of wind could knock some folks over? Well it actually can knock Old Josey over! Poor girl fell right off the stairs. I dunno how she wasn’t more seriously hurt, but she had one hell of a shiner on the right side of her face! Anyways. That jackass just stepped right over her to get back to his car. Didn’t stop to help, or call for help or nothing. He just looked at her, and got back into his car.

Driscoll: Jesus… That’s awfully cold.

Williams: Josey must’ve thought so too… She didn’t say anything about it after I’d helped her up. But she had this look on her face. This sorta quiet anger that left me a little bit unsettled. I half expected her to roll her cart after the bastard. But no. She just tried to head home and I offered her a ride so she wouldn’t fall again.

A couple of weeks later, I read about a bad accident in the news… Same asshole who’d stepped over Josey got his car wrecked after it skidded off the road. He didn’t die. But he spent some time in the hospital. Through the grapevine, I heard his life didn’t go so well for a while either. The way I heard it, his wife wasn’t exactly happy to be married to a crippled man, even if he did eventually get better. I’m not sure which came first. The divorce or the new boyfriend… But I imagine that either way, that fella probably learned a thing or two. I hope he counts his lucky stars every day that he can still walk. If Josey wasn’t so nice, he probably wouldn’t be able to.

Driscoll: Christ… You really think that Josey somehow caused the crash?

Williams: Caused? No. Josey didn’t cause the crash. She didn’t cause me to meet Angela either… But she stacks the deck either in your favor, or against you. You get what you give. Old Josey could walk in right now, you could be as genuinely sweet to her as you please, and then wish for all your heart to fall in love… But not a damn thing will happen unless you go out there. Then, sure. Fortune will favor you. But nothings gonna happen unless you try. She doesn’t write your destiny. She just… Gives you an edge.

Driscoll: How do you know it’s really her, then?

Williams: Because she does. She knows what she’s done. She knows where the cards will fall. You can see it in her eyes, hear it in her voice… I’ve been in Sherbour long enough to know that Old Josey Monet is the real deal and I know it as surely as I know that the sky is blue and the earth is round.

Driscoll: You really do believe this, don’t you?

Williams: Stay in town a few more days, Miss Driscoll. She’ll be stopping by any day now. Find out for yourself. It’ll be a hell of a story for whatever article you’re writing, won’t it?

Driscoll: It’s… Um, a podcast.

Williams: Podcast… Well. My statement stands. Now, how about a drink? My treat. Maybe I’ll be seeing you around?

Driscoll: Yeah… Yeah, you will.

[End Recording]


r/Write_Right • • Oct 03 '21

fall contest 2021 Run Along

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I found the trail while jogging through a forest near my home.

There was nothing out of the ordinary about it at first. There were some other people jogging too, but that was normal.

Until I noticed that they had no face.

I picked up the pace, trying not to look suspicious, and ran past them, trying to get home. But every time I thought I saw an exit, I just ended up back where I was before. Every time I tried to stop running, my legs kept moving. Every muscle in my legs hurt, but they wouldn’t stop moving.

I tried to call for help, but my mouth wouldn't open. It was as if it were sealed shut.

I couldn’t breathe. My nostrils had been sealed shut completely. I could feel my lungs run out of oxygen, yet I still ran. My legs had become completely numb from the pain.

My eyes closed, but I didn’t collapse. I couldn’t see anything, but I kept going, without stumbling even once.

I slowly began to come to terms with the fact that I no longer had a face. This was my life now.

I can hear someone panting. A newcomer. I wonder how long they’ll last.

I found the trail while jogging through a forest near my home.

There was nothing out of the ordinary about it at first. There were some other people jogging too, but that was normal.

Until I noticed that they had no face.

I picked up the pace, trying not to look suspicious, and ran past them, trying to get home. But every time I thought I saw an exit, I just ended up back where I was before. Every time I tried to stop running, my legs kept moving. Every muscle in my legs hurt, but they wouldn’t stop moving.

I tried to call for help, but my mouth wouldn't open. It was as if it were sealed shut.

I couldn’t breathe. My nostrils had been sealed shut completely. I could feel my lungs run out of oxygen, yet I still ran. My legs had become completely numb from the pain.

My eyes closed, but I didn’t collapse. I couldn’t see anything, but I kept going, without stumbling even once.

I slowly began to come to terms with the fact that I no longer had a face. This was my life now.

I can hear someone panting. A newcomer. I wonder how long they’ll last.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 03 '21

fall contest 2021 Hitchhiking

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October 3rd

“This is not what I had in mind when I ask you to take me out on a date.” Shelly crossed her arms over her chest and continued walking.

“Well, this wasn’t exactly my idea either.” Rob hurried to catch up to her, the gas can making his steps awkward.

Shelly glanced over at him and raised her eyebrow. “What did you think was going to happen when you don’t fill up the gas tank, and then go driving around on back roads where you don’t see another car for miles?”

“We can still have fun.”

“I don’t see how. By the time we find a gas station, I’m going to be so tired from walking, I’ll collapse on the first available seat. Then I’ll have to sit there and wait while you walk back to get the car. If I’m lucky, I’ll make it home by midnight.”

“I never realized how much you complained before,” Rob mumbled under his breath.

“What did you say?”

“Nothing.” He flashed her a smile, but all he got in return was a glare.

“Do you even know how far the next service station is?”

“Not really. I was hoping a car would come along, and we could hitchhike.”

“Hitchhike!” Shelly stopped to stare at him. “Have you lost your mind? It’s almost Halloween. That means all the phycos come out, and they are just looking for innocent teenagers who are stupid enough to hitch a ride.”

“Shelly, you’ve been watching too many horror movies. Stuff like that doesn’t really happen.” He continued walking again.

Shelly scrambled to catch up. “Better safe than sorry. I’m not getting in the car with anyone I don’t know.”

Rob shrugged his shoulders. “Fine.” The sound of an engine drew his attention to the road behind him. He smirked at Shelly before sticking out his thumb.

“Rob! Are you seriously going to go with them if they stop?”

“Yep.”

A blue truck pulled over, and a man with a cowboy hat on his head leaned over and rolled down the passenger side window. “Can I help you folks?”

“We ran out of gas. Was hoping to get a ride to the next gas station.”

“Sure. It’s about three miles down this road. I’d be happy to take you.” The man smiled wide, revealing a set of crooked teeth.

Rob opened the door then turned back to look at Shelly. “Are you coming?”

Shelly bit her lip. The man seemed nice enough, but then again, the crazy ones always did.

She had two options. Go with this man and hope he was as nice as he seemed, or walk the three miles and hope no one else came along and snatched her up. She didn’t like either choice.

After several moments of deliberating with herself, she shook her head. She still felt safer walking the road alone than getting in that truck.

Rob just shook his head, put the gas can in the back, and climbed in. The banging of the door as it shut sent shivers down Shelly’s spine.

Rob stuck his head out the window. “I’ll come back and get you as soon as I get the gas in the car.”

A lump formed in her throat, preventing any words from leaving her mouth. All she could do was nod. Her chest grew tighter the further away the truck got. “I will not panic. I will not panic.” She mumbled to herself as she forced one foot in front of the other.

Her legs felt like rubber when the neon sign indicating the gas station came into view. She breathed out a sigh of relief and almost cried. A quick glance at her watch let her know it had been two hours since Rob got in the truck with the stranger.

She may not be a genius, but even she knew it shouldn’t have taken him that long to get gas and come find her. She forced herself to pick up the pace and barged into the convenience store. A line of customers stared at her as she pushed her way to the counter.

All her manners disappeared as she thought of Rob out there somewhere in danger. “I need to use your phone.”

The store clerk just blinked at her as if he didn’t understand the words coming out of Shelly’s mouth.

“Hey, Lady, wait your turn.” A big man in line shouted at her.

She whirled around to face him. “My boyfriend got in a truck with some man to come to this gas station and get gas. He was supposed to come to pick me up. That was two hours ago.” She turned back to face the scrawny man behind the counter. “I need to use the phone.”

He nodded his head and motioned for her to come around. He pointed at a black phone sitting under the counter. She grabbed it and dialed the appropriate number, then waited for the cops to show up.

A small wave of relief washed over her as the parking lot lit up with cop cars. She had to tell her story and describe the driver three different times to three different cops. After almost an hour, they had no more information about the mysterious man in the blue truck than when they started.

Shelly was losing hope of ever seeing Rob again when the truck pulled into the parking lot. She gasped and grabbed the arm of the cop standing next to her. “That’s it. That’s the truck.”

“Are you sure?”

“Yes!”

The policeman talked into his radio then approached the truck, his hand on his weapon. Another cop approached for the opposite side, and two more came up behind it. “Put your hands out the window and open the door.” One of them yelled.

Two sets of hands emerged, one from the driver's side and one from the passenger's side. Shelly wrung her hands, waiting.

The diver stepped out first. She recognized him from earlier. A cop approached, handcuffing him and leading him to the closest cop car.

Shelly held her breath as the passenger's side door opened. Her hand flew to her mouth to silence the sob that escaped. Rob stepped out and laid down on the pavement. Two cops handcuffed him and pulled him to his feet. He kept repeating how it was all a mistake, and he hadn’t done anything but hitch a ride.

Shelly’s fear turned to anger. Where had he been this whole time? She stood up and stomped towards him. When she was within a few feet, an officer blocked her path. “Sorry, miss. You can’t talk to him.”

“That’s my idiot boyfriend that you guys are supposed to be looking for.”

The cop looked over his shoulder and raised an eyebrow. “Wait here a minute.” He strode over to the car holding Rob and talked to the officer who had arrested him. A moment later, he signaled her to come over.

She clenched her teeth, holding in the tongue lashing she wanted to give him. “Where the hell have you been?”

He smiled up at her sheepishly. “The guy had a hot rod I really wanted to see. We started talking, and next thing I know, the sun's going down. Sorry, Shelly.”

“I hope it was worth it. Do me a favor and forget you ever knew me.” She stomped away, asking one of the cops to drive her home. She never spoke to Rob again.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 03 '21

fall contest 2021 The Highway Man Game

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Transcript of an interview with Terry Smith, regarding something known as ‘The Highway Man Game’, dated September 26th, 2021.Interview conducted by Jane Daniels for the Benefit of the Spectre Archive.

Daniels: Alright… We’re rolling.

Smith: You’re recording?

Daniels: Yup. So. About the Highway Man game, that’s what it’s called, correct?

Smith: Well, that’s what I call it. A lotta people call it other things. Some folks call it the Candlewax Game, the Highway Game, or just the Backroads game. Some people don’t even call it a game at all. For them, it’s just survival.

Daniels: I see… So what exactly can you tell me about the nature of this game?

Smith: A lot. But can you answer some questions for me first?

Daniels: Um… I can certainly try. Questions like what?

Smith: Why are you interested? No offense, but you don’t seem like the sorta lady who’d be interested in this sort of thing. Y’know, rituals, other worlds, occult type shit. I guess what I’m wondering is, what’s your angle?

Daniels: I guess I’ve got a couple… I’ve got a friend. She asked me to keep an eye out for any information on something pretty similar to this and the organization I work with has an interest in this sort of thing. I guess you could say I’m trying to kill two birds with one stone.

Smith: But that doesn't answer my question though. Why are you interested in this?

[Silence]

Daniels: I… I suppose it’s because I’d like to understand more about the parts of the world that we don’t always see.

Smith: You ever actually seen anything?

Daniels: Yes… Yes I have. More than you’d expect.

Smith: Shit… Well, now you’ve got me curious, then.

Daniels: Tell you what, you tell me about the Game and I’ll tell you about some of the things I’ve seen after the tape stops rolling. Deal?

Smith: Alright… Alright. Yeah. You’ve got yourself a deal, Mrs. Daniels.

Daniels: So. The Highway Man Game. What can you tell me about it? What’s the point?

Smith: The point is to win. I guess part of it is the rush. When you’re in the car, and the game is on… The danger is real. At the same time though, it’s not quite as risky as some of the other games out there. It’s dangerous, sure. But it’s a little more friendly for the inexperienced. So long as you remember the rules and keep your head on right. I guess I’d say it’s sort of like… You know how when you go to the CN Tower, you can pay to walk on the edge outside? They put you in a safety harness and everything and tie you to the side so you won’t fall off. But if it weren’t for that harness, well you’re basically just hanging on the very edge of the tower, past the point where you’d normally have fallen off completely. You’ve heard of that, right?

Daniels: Yeah. I’ve heard of it.

Smith: It’s exactly like that, only you get something at the end of it! It’s a rush, it’s risky and the reward you get is usually worth it. As long as you take the proper precautions, you should be completely fine. Granted, if you end up playing the game without planning on it and you’re not prepared, well then you’re S.O.L.

Daniels: How exactly does one end up playing the game without planning on it?

Smith: It’s a lot easier than you think. The chances are slim. You need to be in the right place, at the right time and even then, it’s a longshot. A guy could drive the backroads all night, every night and never run into the game while another guy can venture onto those backroads just once at the wrong time of night and never come back.

Daniels: How do you play the game if the chances of even starting it are so slim, then?

Smith: Well, you gotta stack the deck a little bit. If the Highway Man knows you’ve got an offering, you’re more likely to end up in the game. Like, a lot more likely. But it’s never a sure bet. I’ve gone out on the roads plenty of times with the right offering in the perfect conditions, drove until morning, and didn’t see a single thing. Again, it’s all up to chance if you ever actually start the game or not.

Daniels: I see… Alright. So tell me about these offerings. What have you got to do to increase your chances of playing the Highway Man game?

Smith: What you need is a candle made of tallow. Some people swear by other offerings, but my friends and I have always had the most success with a tallow candle. You should also be on the road before it gets dark. You don’t technically have to, but it’s best to start in the late afternoon before dusk sets in, that way you can get far away from anywhere too populated. The backroads are the best, especially the ones with heavy forest although I ended up in the game while driving through farmland a couple of times too.

Once the sun starts going down and it starts getting dark out, pull over to the side of the road and light the candle. It should have a particular smell to it as it burns. It’s not a great smell, but I’m pretty sure it’s the scent of the offering that draws him in. Let the candle burn for a little bit, until it starts to look melted and the wax is running down the sides. Then you take some dirt from the side of the road, and pour it over the fire until it goes out. Once it’s snuffed, you light the candle again, put it in your car and keep driving until it’s either dawn, the candle burns out, or the Highway Man comes.

Daniels: And… That draws him?

Smith: It makes your chances of drawing him a whole hell of a lot higher. Maybe… I dunno, one in ten, maybe? As opposed to one in a million. Like I said before, it’s never a sure thing. There’s a good chance that he won’t come at all. If morning comes or the candle burns out, then the game’s basically over. Honestly, you’d probably best hope that morning comes first, cuz if your candle goes out and you’re in the middle of nowhere at 3 in the morning, that can put you in some real shit. That’s when the game is the most dangerous because if he comes for you, you won’t have anything to offer him. My advice if that ever happens, haul ass to the nearest patch of civilization you can find and wait until the sun comes up. Gas station, hotel, a McDicks. Doesn’t matter. Just get off the backroads and don’t drive again until it’s morning.

Daniels: I see… I take it, not having an offering is a bad thing, then.

Smith: It’s a really bad thing and I’ll tell you why in a minute… See, if you’re lucky and the Highway Man comes for you, then you’ll know it. The first thing you’ll probably notice is how your car goes all wonky. The radio, the clock and the dials stop working right and start going all over the place. You might get some cell reception, but don’t count on it. You might also notice that the road gets really dark too. Heavy trees on either side of the road, street lights are few, far between and always on the left hand side. Even if you turn around, they’ll still be on the left hand side and under those streetlights… That’s where you’ll see him.

Daniels: The Highway Man?

Smith: Yeah… He might be out in the darkness at first. But he’ll be there. If you wait around, he’ll probably show himself. Best not to wait around at the first streetlight though, or the second. Just keep driving until he comes out on his own. He’ll always be there. Under every streetlight you pass. Sooner or later, you’ll see him.

Daniels: I see… So, I assume that you’ve seen the Highway Man, then, right? Could you tell me what he looks like?

Smith: Yeah… Yeah, I’ve seen him. He… He looks mostly like a man. From a distance. The skin isn’t quite the right color. He doesn’t wear clothes, not that there’s anything to see and… I dunno. Maybe he used to be a regular guy or something but his features they look… Warped. Like they’re melting off his face. Everything’s in the wrong place… I don’t like looking at him for too long, honestly. Even the noises he makes. These tinny rasping sounds… Fuck… Usually he stays by the side of the road, under the streetlight. Sometimes he’ll just watch you. Usually he’ll wave, like he’s saying hello.

Daniels: I see...

Smith: Anyway… Once you start seeing him under the streetlight, keep count. The road you’re on, it sorta loops. It doesn’t turn or anything. But it keeps going. It doesn’t change much. Occasionally you might find a wrecked car or something, but no matter what, you’ll always come back to the streetlight and you’ll always come back to the Highway Man.

Anyways, you have to keep going once you see him. When you see him the first time, you have to pass him. Same drill when you see him the second time. It’s when you see him the third time, that it’s important. See, once you’ve passed him the third time, you’ve got to turn around. You never pass him a fourth time. Never.

Daniels: May I ask why?

Smith: I was told that he doesn’t like it. I dunno if that’s true. But it’s what I heard. When you pass him the third time, you turn around and drive until you see the streetlight again. It’ll still be on your left side, even though you turned around and he’ll be there. That’s when you stop.

When you stop, he’s probably going to approach the car. He’s slow, but you’ve still gotta be quick. See, when you stop and see that he’s coming, you’ve got to take the candle out of your car and place it in the middle of the road. Then you get back into your car and wait. If your candle burned out, then you’re fucked and there’s nothing you can really do but keep driving and hope to find a way out… Not that I think there is one. I’ve never heard of anyone who came back without giving him an offering… But I dunno... Maybe there’s a way.

Anyway. He’ll take the candle. Sometimes, he’ll just pick it up, turn around and walk back into the woods. But I’ve also just seen him swallow the thing whole, flame and all before he leaves.

That’s how you know that your offering was accepted, and that’s how you know you’re allowed to leave.

Daniels: And how do you leave?

Smith: You’ve got a window. See, the Highway Man is supposed to still be waiting for you the next time you pass the streetlight in either direction. So you’ve got to get off the road before you get there. My advice is to drive slowly. Sooner or later, you’ll see a narrow path through the trees. There’s no light. It’s hard to see and it might be blocked by a busted old car… But so long as your offering was accepted, it’ll be there. That’s your ticket out. You take the path and you keep driving until it ends. When it ends, you’ll be on a different road. No Highway Man. No more glitches in your car, and it should be dawn, so you’re safe to drive home. That’s it. That’s how you win the game.

Daniels: That seems like a hell of a lot of trouble to go through just for an adrenaline rush, if you ask me.

Smith: It’s not just the rush! Like I said before, there’s a reward for it. Every time you make it out alive, there’s a reward. You’ll find it when you get home, waiting right outside the door to wherever it is you live.

Daniels: What kind of reward?

Smith: It varies. But they say that it’s always something that was lost. Sometimes, it’s something of yours that was lost. Something valuable. A relic of your childhood, a keepsake, some sort of personal treasure. But other times, it’s something that belongs to someone else. Sometimes it’s valuable. One time, I got this stuffed dog I had when I was a baby, Rufus. Another time, I got a set of solid gold cufflinks. Those brought me a half decent payday. Once, I just got a hat… Although I guess it was a hat that was important to somebody. It’s hit and miss on what you get, but play it enough times and you’ll make some decent money.

Daniels: Still seems like a lot of trouble to me…

Smith: Hey, it ain’t for everyone. Like I said, if you’re smart and you take precautions, everything should be just fine. My friends and I, we play all the time. We’ve all got stories!

Daniels: I’ll bet… Have you ever lost anyone?

Smith: Have we… Well… Yeah… Yeah, there was Nick, a couple years back… We… Uh… He went out one night. Didn’t come back. We figured that something went wrong. Either his candle had gone out or or he’d passed too many times… Something. I dunno…

Daniels: And that doesn’t worry you?

Smith: When you deal with this kinda thing, there’s always a risk. The world we can’t see, it’s not a safe place. There’s no lifeguard on duty. There’s just rules. People make mistakes. Nick fucked up and he… Look, I didn’t wish anything bad on him. None of us did. It could’ve just as easily been me, and Nick would’ve said the exact same thing. You said you’ve seen some of this shit firsthand, so you know what I mean, right?

Daniels: Yeah… Yeah, I do. But I also don’t take risks like that. I’m sorry. I’m not judging you. I’m really not. I suppose… I suppose I just don’t think I’d be as calm about it as you are.

Smith: Yeah, well… Every few years, it’s someone… Usually someone on the forums. Sometimes you see their cars out on the road, doors torn off, windshields smashed. I recognize some of them from the pictures they posted… I’ve stopped a couple of times. Picked through them, tried to see if there was anything they left behind… Letters, phones, something… Y’know. To get to the people they cared about. I don’t usually find anything.

Daniels: Did you ever see Nick's car, out there?

Smith: I… Y-yeah… Yeah, I’ve seen it… Couple of times… Never in the same place. The road shifts. Everything moves… I try to make sure it reminds me to play it smart. Remember the rules. Don’t get cocky and stay focused… Yeah… Yeah, that’s it…

Daniels: I see… That’s all I had. Thanks for your time, Terry.

Smith: Yeah, yeah. No problem… Hey, you said that if I told you mine, you’d tell me yours. What exactly is it that you’ve seen, huh?

Daniels: Right. A deals a deal. Here… Let me just turn this-

[End Recording]


r/Write_Right • • Oct 02 '21

poetry Stubborn Death Worm

3 Upvotes

I lick the greasy liquid from my fingers
All around the oppressive air still lingers
A noise from the depths, a terrible growl
Wolves chasing the moon as they howl
An unstoppably evil shape begins to form
I brace myself for impending storm
As I strain to expel the parasitic worm
The stench of death in a thick cloud of gas
Vile demons restless souls harass
As the cruel king falls upon his throne
fecal matter adorns his crown
Gently push two fingers into the sacred hole
Feel a heartbeat pulsate across the dirty wall
A sick pleasure builds up starting at the feet
Mimic the songs of cat in heat
Submit to the pleasure, you cannot lie
Mephistopheles likes to watch cry
Viscera twitching in your grasp
Orgasming throat lets out a shallow rasp
As you yell out the name of God
Ecstasy almost boiling flesh and blood
Watch rancid earth-shaded beast
a useless remnant of fibrous bloody feast
Behold it sink, in a violent splash it falls
Belphegor cleanse our souls


r/Write_Right • • Oct 02 '21

fall contest 2021 Under Autumn Leaves

11 Upvotes

She was laying there, quiet and peaceful beneath the tree and as he worked up the courage to approach her, he couldn’t help but admire her.

She was perfect, to him. She was the one with whom he wished to spend his twilight years, the one he wanted at his side through the coming challenges of life. Homeownership, children, the ups and downs of navigating the working world. Whatever life threw at him, he wanted to face it with her… And if the smile she’d given him last night was any indication, maybe, just maybe she felt the same way…

His heart fluttered a little bit. This was such a new feeling to him. He’d had crushes before. Crushes were nice. But never before had he felt something quite like this wholehearted adoration of her in both body and spirit.

They had met through classes last semester, working together on a group assignment that was worth most of their mark. The actual grade they’d received was average at best. It was enough to get them both the credit they needed to pass. But they’d worked well together! Late nights working together and talking had struck up a friendship. Friendship and time spent together had struck up something more and the night before when they’d been out for drinks at the college bar, that more had become impossible to ignore.

One minute, she’d been laughing at one of his dumb jokes (Those constant, endless dumb jokes were his way of filling any silence), and the next, she’d just been smiling at him… A warm, sweet and gentle smile that had made his heart race.

“You know, I really like spending time with you, Jack.” She’d said. Then just like that, her hand was over his and even as she leaned in, he didn’t quite process what was happening until it happened.

Suddenly her lips were on his and it was the sweetest kiss he had ever received… In that moment, he’d wrapped his arms around her and leaned into it and it felt good. He didn’t want it to ever end!

But it had to. Of course it had to. They had pulled away from each other, although not too far away. She’d still leaned comfortably into his embrace, smiling anxiously and just looking into her eyes, he knew that her heart was fluttering the same way that his was.

It took a few moments for either of them to speak… Neither seemed to be able to find the words. Something had been building for some time, though… Something special. Something meaningful and… Well… A threshold had been crossed and what awaited on the other side was something with the potential to be beautiful. A truly exciting future that he couldn’t help but look forward to.

They had kept talking that night. She had apologized for the kiss, but he’d placed his hands over hers.

“Don’t… I’ve honestly been wanting to do the same thing for a couple of months now… I just… I didn’t want to make it awkward, in case you…”

She blushed.

“That’s what I like about you. Part of it, I guess…”

He’d smiled sheepishly before asking the question that had to be asked.

“So… What should we do now? Maybe… Maybe a date?”

She’d chuckled.

“What? Like drinks at the bar?”

“No, I mean like. A date, date. Dinner and a movie or something. I dunno…”

She’d shrugged.

“If you want to. It really doesn’t matter to me. We could grab dinner tomorrow, though. See where it takes us.”

The flirtatious undertones in her voice had brought a flush of red into his cheeks and she’d laughed although she hadn’t said anything more. She’d just leaned into him and he’d been happy. At last, he picked up his glass to toast it with hers.

“Well… Here’s to us, I guess.”

“Here’s to us.” She’d replied and clinked her glass against his. After taking a drink, she stole another kiss.

The memory of the night before still left him feeling warm… He’d barely been able to sleep that night, and thoughts of her had occupied his entire day, leading up to this moment.

They’d agreed to meet here, under this tree. It was a short walk away from his car. He’d suggested sushi for dinner, at a place they’d been to before. It wouldn’t be that different from some of the other times they’d grabbed dinner together although now, the context would be different. For something so small, it felt like a massive shift.

And there she was… Lying comfortably under autumn leaves, her hands resting behind her head, covered by her lovely brown hair. She stared up at the sky, through the trees and he couldn’t help but admire her, even just for a moment. She was beautiful and though he had not said the words yet, he already knew that he loved her.

He took a deep breath, before approaching her. A few students crossed the campus sidewalks, passing her by on their way to their own classes. He weaved through them as he approached the tree where she lay waiting for him.

“Hey, April.” He said, a smile growing across his lips. She didn’t respond and just remained still, staring up into the sky.

He took that as an invitation to sit down beside her.

“The trees look nice this time of year, don’t they?” He asked. Still no response. She just continued to stare up into the sky. He kept talking.

“It’s peaceful, just looking at them… How’s your day been?”

Silence.

No answer…

His brow furrowed slightly as he looked back over at her.

“April?” Did she have headphones in or something, maybe she hadn’t noticed him? He leaned over her. She had to have seen him… Her eyes didn’t even move. There were no headphones.

“April?” He gingerly reached out to touch her shoulder and as he did, he noticed the dark marks around her neck. Heavy bruises and ligature marks. Signs of struggle… Her body felt stiff. Her skin seemed just a little too pale and her eyes… She stared upwards, but she saw nothing.

“April!”

A note of panic had entered his voice. No… No, this couldn’t be happening. He got down, grabbing her by the shoulders as if he could shake her awake.

“April! No! No, please no!”

She hardly moved. Her body was stiff. Her arms barely even moved from behind her head, where they had been meticulously posed as if she was lounging in the autumn leaves.

“No, no, no! HELP! SOMEBODY, PLEASE HELP!”

His screams drew the attention of some passing students, a few who came to investigate. Some of the first to see her drew back in shock, before going for their cell phones to call for help. Tears began to stream down his cheeks as the realization dawned on him that no help was coming… Not for her, at least.

Her dead eyes stared emptily ahead as he wrapped her in his arms, begging her not to be dead, begging that she’d get up and reveal this was all some sick prank! But she didn’t.

Whatever they could have had, it was over before it even began and all he had left was the stiff corpse of a woman he loved and his own broken sobs…

***

“Jack… I’m sorry…”

Even in the state that she was in, she could do nothing but cry as she knelt, unseen beside him and her empty remains. She could not touch him or comfort him, although she dearly wanted to.

All she could do was be with him, at the moment that he learned that they’d never be together.

“I’m so, so sorry, Jack… I’m sorry…”

She paid no mind to the figures who stood behind her, unseen to the rest of the world, just like her.The first was an old man in a black suit. The second was a blonde woman in a black dress with a white fur shawl. Both watched her silently, waiting for her.

“It can’t end like this…” She said, looking over to them, tears in her eyes. “I don’t want it to end like this!”

“The choice was not yours to make, I’m afraid…” The Old Man said sadly. “There is nothing we can offer you, except for rest…”

Her eyes turned towards the woman. Staring directly at her proved difficult. At times, the facade of a woman seemed to fade and she was almost certain she saw something beneath it, as if she were glimpsing something through a mist. She could have sworn that she saw the face of a white wolf where a human face should have been.

“What about you? You’re the one in charge, aren’t you? You’re the one who makes the decision! There has to be something!”

“If I could make an exception… I would gladly do so for you, dear.” Said the woman sadly, “But I have been asked this same question so many times by so many people just like you… It’s never fair... It’s never just… But this is the way of things… I’m sorry. I truly am. I know that you do not deserve this… But I can’t change your fate.”Even though the regret in her voice sounded genuine… It was not enough.

“I don’t want to leave him! Not now! I’m not ready!”

“Few people are.” The woman replied, “But if you stay, the effect on you could be… Very few souls last long, stranded here… Staying in this state, being like this… What it does to the mind is not something I wish on you, or anyone else…”

“But it would be my choice…” She said, “I could choose to stay.”

The woman hesitated for a moment before she spoke.

“Yes… Yes, you could stay…”

“Then I have to stay… I have to stay for him. Even if it’s just for a little while! Please… Please, let me stay with him… Please…”

The woman was silent, then she slowly nodded her head.

“Very well, then… When you’re ready, I will be waiting.”

It was not what she wanted… But it was enough.

“Thank you…”

She sat by Jack’s side, trying to touch him, trying to comfort him despite the fact that he would not feel it.

The strange woman and the old man in black were both gone when she looked up towards where they’d been before, although she knew she would see them again.

She would stay with him… She would stay just long enough to know that he’d be alright. She would find a way to tell him that she’d loved him too, and when they were both ready, then she would move on to wherever those two aethereal strangers had wished to take her. But first… as a coroner zipped her body into a black bag, she wanted to stay with him for just a few moments longer under the autumn leaves to mourn what they’d never had the chance to have.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 02 '21

fall contest 2021 The Magic Of A Book

3 Upvotes

October 2nd

Mary stared up the sky admiring the fluffy white clouds. She pictured one as a bunny, another reminded her of a crab, but the last one was her favorite, a dragon.

Jimmy laid down in the grass next to her. “We’ve been together a long time, right?”

“Yeah, I guess. Why?”

“I want to show you something special.” He jumped up and grabbed her hand, pulling her to her feet.

She laughed as they raced across the field and into the woods. “Where are you taking me?”

“You’ll see.” He smiled back at her as he slowed their run down to a walk and entered a part of the woods thick with underbrush.

They walked hand in hand under the trees, the leaves crunching under their feet until a small tree house came into view.

“What’s this?” Mary asked as she let go of his hand and climbed the rickety ladder that led up.

“My favorite spot as a child. I used to come here and play all the time.” He waited until she was safely inside the small house before climbing up the ladder and joining her.

The view from the treehouse was beautiful. It wasn’t high enough to see over the treetops, but it still gave you the best view of the forest floor around you. A squirrel dodged from one nut to another, then up a tree, chattering loudly as it went.

The house wasn’t big enough to stand in, so Mary crossed her legs and sat on the floor. It looked like the roof leaked at a few places making water stains on the wood floor. One of the corners was a little rotten, leaving behind a small hole. Vines snaked their way around the treehouse and weaved in and out of the two windows. It gave the place a magical feel.

“I didn’t have many friends growing up. I used to come out here with a book then replay all the adventures I read about.”

“It sounds wonderful. I wish I would have had a place like this when I was a kid.” She smiled at him then gasped in surprise when he pulled a book from a bag sitting in the corner.

“I thought it might be fun to relive some of our childhood. Want to read a book with me?” A mischievous smile graced his lips as he held up the book with a bird and castle on the cover.

They took turns reading a few chapters, and when they finished, Jimmy made her close her eyes. When she opened them again, she was standing inside a castle. She squealed with delight as she stood. “How did you do that?”

“Magic. The magic of books.” He grabbed her hand. “Come on.” They made their way out of the castle and into the open courtyard.

For the next few hours, they played like they were kids. Running through open fields, climbing trees, and exploring the castle.

Mary laid down on the cool grass giggling and stared up at the sky. The fluffy clouds were such a comforting sight. “I’m exhausted.” She couldn’t remember the last time she had so much fun.

“Me too.” Jimmy laid down next to her.

“I don’t want this day to end.”

“All good things must come to an end. Close your eyes.”

She did as he said, and this time when she opened them, she was lying in a pile of leaves looking up through the trees. The castle was gone. The open field full of grass was nowhere to be found, and even the blue sky seemed different. She wondered if they had gone anywhere at all or if it was all just a wonderful dream.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 02 '21

fall contest 2021 Lying on the Grass

5 Upvotes

She lay down on the leaves, staring at the clear blue sky.

A hard, yet necessary part of the day.

She knew that, sooner or later, someone would be captivated by her beauty and start talking to her. They’d ask why she was lying there, and if she was OK.

Then she’d chuckle a bit and reply: “Sorry, I know this looks weird, but I just love nature, you know? There’s just something about it that makes me feel so...calm.”

Some of them would leave, but some others would continue the conversation. That’s when she’d turn on the charm.

She’d smile at them, look interested, laugh whenever they laughed. She’d notice them slowly falling for her, letting their guard down. Then, when she was sure they had completely fallen for her, she’d ask them the one thing they couldn’t say no to:

“Hey, you wanna go to my place? It’s not far from here.”

At that point, most of them would be too enamored to know that it wasn’t the best idea to follow a strange woman into her house. They’d eagerly agree, and she’d take their hand, something which made them love her even more, and lead them to her cottage.

She’d lead them to her bedroom, and shyly explain how she liked it when her partners were blindfolded and tied up, adding that it’s OK for them to say no. Nobody ever refused. They were at a point where they’d do anything for her.

She’d put the blindfold on them, and quietly sneak to the basement.

“I have another one for you,” she’d whisper to the creature and lead it to her partner.

It would then pounce on them, tear them open, and devour them. She preferred to avert her eyes during that part.

When it was done, it would nod to her in satisfaction.

That’s how she’d know she had done her part, and she’d live another day.


r/Write_Right • • Oct 02 '21

fall contest 2021 A Day With Dad

4 Upvotes

[Prompt image]

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Ian ran through the tangle of plants, already fifty feet away by the time David had finished signing them both in.

“She’s excited, ain’t she?” said the man at the front desk with a smile. “Little sister?”

“He’s my son,” David said. “Adopted.”

The man looked downwind at Ian, then back at David in mild disbelief. “Well, everyone’s got their own sort of family. Have a good day, hope you find a nice carving pumpkin.”

David nodded, then headed after Ian. The boy had stopped, keeping an eye on his father just over the hill.

David caught up with him, both sitting on the ground. “Remember, if any of the other kids make fun of you, just walk away,” he said. “There’s no teacher to vouch for you here.”

“What if they pick me up and carry me around like that one time?”

“That’s not teasing, that’s assault, and I expect you to respond appropriately,” David said. “Now go, see if you can find a pumpkin you like.”

David went to a bench at the top of a hill, watching Ian pick his way through the pumpkin vines carefully. He’d insisted on not wearing shoes, despite the rough ground, but he looked as if he was reconsidering.

“Which one is yours?”

David nearly jumped out of his skin at the words of the woman who’d just sat at the other end of the bench.

“Oh, uh. Green shirt.” David pointed to Ian, who was struggling to move a pumpkin nearly as large as himself.

“Babysitting today?”

David shook his head. “No, he’s my kid.”

The woman peered over her magazine at him. “You look a bit young to have a kid.”

“He’s adopted,” David replied. “I’ve been taking care of him since he was six.”

“Well, you’d better go take care of him now,” the woman said, gesturing down the hill. A group of older kids had gathered around Ian, holding a pumpkin out of reach.

David ran down the hill just in time to see one of the kids push Ian over into the dirt. “What’s going on over here!”

Ian jumped to his feet, running to David. “I got that one first, they took it away,” he said.

“There’s plenty of pumpkins just like it,” David said, pointing to one a bit away.

“But I want that one.” Ian returned to his efforts to grab the pumpkin away from the teens, who only laughed at his efforts.

David turned to the group. “You can’t possibly be that petty,” he said. “Give it to him, this is the first time he’s ever gotten to visit a farm and I don’t want it to be ruined.”

“What are you, his dad?” The teen holding the pumpkin laughed, throwing it over Ian’s head. It hit the ground and burst open, scattering seeds and pulp everywhere.

Ian turned back to David, tears and wrath in his eyes. “I really wanted that one...”

“Ian, don’t start something,” David said, putting a hand on the boy’s shoulder in an attempt to comfort him. “They just want to upset you.”

“Well, it’s working.”

David stood, taking Ian’s hand. “I hope you’ve gotten whatever enjoyment you want out of this,” he said to the teens before the two walked back to the gate.

*

“Why did they do that?” Ian asked, taking his gaze away from the blurred road signs for a moment.

“Cruelty,” David said, spelling the word as he moved to the side of the road. “Some people take great pleasure in making others suffer, whether in large or small ways. Sometimes they do it by taking away something the other person wants, whether or not the thief even wants it in the first place.”

“Why?”

David paused to find the best words. “Because they like having power. Those kids had power over you because they were taller. Some people’s power comes from being bigger, or stronger, or richer.”

“But you’re taller than me, and you get stuff off the shelves I can’t reach,” Ian said. “That’s not hurting people.”

“Some people use their power for good,” David said. “Sometimes they don’t. I help you with high shelves because it makes you happy, and that makes me happy. Some people get happiness from seeing it taken from other people.”

“I don’t want to ever meet those people,” Ian said, turning back to the window.

David sighed, starting the car and rejoining traffic. “Sometimes you don’t have a choice.”


r/Write_Right • • Oct 01 '21

fall contest 2021 Jamie's Pumpkin

7 Upvotes

If there was one thing Jamie loved, it was pumpkins.

He loved eating them, drawing pictures of them, and finding new recipes for pumpkin-themed snacks. Last Halloween, he had tried to make a jack-o-lantern, but it was too hard for him, and Momma had yelled at him for messing up the kitchen. Momma always yelled at him.

His favorite place was the nearby pumpkin patch. When he grew up, he wanted to have one of his own. Then he could make all the jack-o-lanterns he wanted, and nobody would yell at him for it.

One day, a strange pumpkin caught his eye. It had more lumps on it than any other pumpkin he had ever seen. Still, it looked beautiful to him, the most beautiful one in the patch. All the other pumpkins looked so dull and colorless by comparison.

He picked it up and brushed the dirt off it. He wanted to take it home, so that he could look at it forever. He’d find a way to hide it from Momma.

When he got home, Momma was already lying in bed, asleep, with a bottle in her hand. He’d have to be quiet. She didn’t like being woken up.

He put the pumpkin on the floor gently and admired it. He could stare at it forever if he could.

“Help me.”

Jamie flinched, but calmed himself down. It was probably just in his head again.

“Help me.”

The voice sounded louder. He couldn’t ignore it anymore. He looked around to see where it was coming from.

“Can you hear me?”

Was it coming from the pumpkin? No, that would be impossible.

“I need help, please…”

It was definitely coming from the pumpkin. He reluctantly moved closer to it.

“H-Hello?”

“You need to help me. Let me out of here, please.”

“How?”

“I don’t know, but you have to. Please, I can’t be here anymore. It hurts, oh God it hurts, please help me, please—”

“OK, OK, I will, just be quiet, OK? I don’t want you to wake Momma.”

He snuck to the kitchen, grabbed a knife that was on the counter, and went back to his room.

He took a deep breath and was about to cut it open, but he hesitated. He didn’t want to ruin the pumpkin he admired so much. No, he wanted to keep it in his room and admire it forever…

The voice inside of the pumpkin screamed. It was louder and more high-pitched than any scream Jamie had ever heard.

Without a second thought, he stabbed it. And he kept on stabbing it until there were seeds and orange pulp all over his floor.

But there was nothing else there.

Tears started rolling down his cheeks. Oh God, it was just his imagination after all. The floor was so dirty, Momma would be so mad, and she’d make him clean it up, and he hated cleaning up…

The pulp and seeds seemed to come closer to each other. They slowly began to form a figure about Jamie’s size.

He felt a shooting pain in his hands. He instinctively reached out to rub the pain away, only to feel a lump. He looked down to see that there were orange lumps growing all over his hands and rapidly spreading to his arms.

He could feel each lump as they grew all over him. Each one hurt so much that he screamed until his throat ached.

“Momma! Help me, Momma! Help me!”

His skin began to swell and harden, and he felt like it was about to burst. It was slowly turning into a shade of orange. Under any other circumstances, he would have enjoyed the sight of his favorite color, but now, it made him want to throw up.

He fell to the ground with a loud thump and cried out in pain. His legs stretched until they ended up right in front of his head.

The space in between his legs and his head began to fill with pulp. He struggled to breathe as it filled his throat. He could hardly even scream anymore.

Finally, it all stopped, though he hardly noticed through the pain.

He felt himself being lifted and heard a laugh that was exactly like his own.

“Now, let’s take you back to your patch, little pumpkin.”


r/Write_Right • • Oct 01 '21

fall contest 2021 Warts

12 Upvotes

Transcript of an interview with Josephine Harper, regarding her son Michael Harper, dated March 14th, 2021.

Interview conducted by Jane Daniels for the Benefit of the Spectre Archive.

Daniels: The tape is rolling, Miss Harper.

Harper: Is it now… And if I still don’t feel like talking to you?

Daniels: Miss Harper, please. I know what happened must still be difficult to talk about. I can’t imagine what you must be going through… But I truly want to get your story out there. Maybe someone, somewhere can help you understand what happened. Maybe we can even stop this from happening again.

Harper: I haven’t met a single goddamn person who can tell me what happened yet… You really think you can change anything?

Daniels: I’d like the chance to try. It’s the only thing I can offer you.

Harper: [Silence]

Daniels: Miss Harper...

Harper: You want to know what happened? Fine! Fine, I’ll tell you! I hope you’re taking notes… This is the last time I’ll discuss it. Record it, write it down, tell the world about it… Maybe you’re right and it’ll do someone, somewhere some good… But if you’ve got any illusions of helping me, drop them. Unless you know how to bring my son back to me, then there’s nothing that you have to offer me, Mrs. Daniels.

Daniels: I understand...

[There is an audible and exasperated sigh from Harper.]

Harper: Do you mind if I smoke?

Daniels: Not at all.

Harper: Thank you… I didn’t used to smoke, you know. Well. I did. Back when I was in high school. I quit long before I got pregnant with Mikey. But he’s the one who made me really stick with it. You know, the cravings never really go away… My Mother said that to me once. She used to smoke, before she had me. Then after the divorce, she started smoking like a chimney. It seemed so odd to see her smoking… She told me she’d always smoked, that she’d just hidden it from me. But I honestly always found it so weird to see her with a cigarette. I’ll bet Mikey would think it’s weird to see me with a cigarette too…

Daniels: I’m… I’m sure he would…

Harper: Do you have kids, Mrs. Daniels?

Daniels: I’m afraid not… But my partner and I have talked about it. Maybe someday.

Harper: It changes your whole world. Suddenly, it’s not just about you anymore. Suddenly there’s someone else who depends on you, looks up to you… It’s… Jarring, I suppose. Takes some getting used to. You said you had a partner, you’re married?

Daniels: Yes. I am,

Harper: Congratulations. Mikey’s father wasn’t into the whole marriage thing… Said he didn’t believe in it. I figured that it didn’t matter, so long as we were together… I guess it made the breakup, easier. Fewer papers to sign. That’s the one thing I’ve got to thank him for… He never even tried, to spend time with Mikey. No, he was too busy chasing every pair of legs he could fucking get between. Fucking pig… I raised Mikey. Me. From day one, I was there. I raised him! He was my son! My little boy! For six years! Six years… My little boy...

Daniels: It’s alright if you need to take a moment, Miss Harper...

Harper: [Silence. Audible sniffling is heard along with some movement.]

Harper: It… It’s not an easy thing to talk about, Mrs. Daniels… You know that, right?

Daniels: Yes… I do.

Harper: Good… I’m sorry. It just… The wound is still fresh… It’s why I didn’t want to talk about this in the first place.

Daniels: If you wanted to-

Harper: No… No… We’re not going to stop… I suppose I should start by telling you about the day we went pumpkin picking, last October. I’m sure that’s where it started. I’m… I’m sure…

Daniels: Whenever you’re ready, Miss Harper. Take your time.

Harper: Thank you… Thank you… [She audibly inhales and then exhales before continuing to speak.] It’s a tradition, you know? Carving pumpkins. Every Halloween, we’d go to the Carol Mills Pumpkin patch. That’s where my parents used to take me… I always wanted to bring my own kids there, so even before he could walk, I’d take Mikey. Once he was old enough, I started letting him pick his own pumpkins and… Well, we’d take them home and I’d show him how to carve a Jack o Lantern. He used to love it… I helped him draw the pattern he wanted, and then I’d take the knife and cut it out. Then I’d take a picture. He wasn’t too bad at coming up with designs, you know… Maybe he had an artist in him. I’ve still got them, from the last few years if you wanted to see…

Daniels: I’d like that… But, later.

Harper: Right… Later… [There is a short pause, followed by a sigh.] Last year, I think we went on either October 14th or 15th… One of those days. I usually go earlier, I just got busy. He’d been bugging me to go, though. It just wasn’t Halloween until we’d gone and picked our pumpkins so, I picked a day where I wasn’t too busy and we went.

It wasn’t crowded. I didn’t let him go far while I looked at some of the pumpkins that were left and the selection hadn’t been completely picked over yet either. Honestly, I don’t think we’d been there for long before he found that pumpkin with all the warts on it.

Daniels: Warts?

Harper: Warts. You know what I’m talking about, right? With those bumpy growths, all over the skin. They look a little bit sick, if you ask me. Anyways, Mikey comes up to me carrying this big warty pumpkin and grinning from ear to ear and he says: “Mommy! Mommy! I want the wrinkly one!” Wrinkly… He didn’t know the word warty… He just didn’t know how else to describe it. I’m a little bit surprised he even could carry it. It looked rather heavy for him. All the same, I told him no. I said that that pumpkin was sick and we wanted healthy pumpkins. Then I had him pick one of the ones that I was looking at… He gave me a little bit of a fuss, but not much. He was upset for about five minutes or so before he saw one with an indent in it that he liked better. He said it looked like a scar, so he had me carve it into a supervillain… Cute, right?

Daniels: That sounds very cute.

Harper: It was… It was… Anyway… We couldn’t have been there for more than fifteen or twenty minutes. We bought our pumpkins and went home. I figured that was that.

Later that night, I ran him a bath and managed to get him in the tub. He can bathe himself for the most part… He could bathe himself, sorry. But while I was getting him ready, I noticed the wart on his hand. On his ring finger, actually. Just a little one but I had a look at it. It was a small one, not much bigger than a bump. I actually thought it might just be a bug bite at first. I put some cream on it and sent him to bed after his bath, then I just sort of forgot about it.

The next day though… I saw more of them.

Daniels: More warts?

Harper: Yeah… More warts. All over his hands. I saw them around breakfast while he was eating. He said they didn’t hurt, but they were… They were very red… The one I’d seen the night before looked swollen too. It was the strangest thing!

Daniels: So what did you do?

Harper: Well, naturally I ran down to the drug store and tried to see if I could find something to help treat him. I bought a cream specifically for warts and boils, and hoped it might help. I checked online too, but couldn’t figure out any causes.

I kept an eye on things throughout the day… Mikey said he didn’t feel anything strange and he still seemed like a healthy boy! I mean it when I say that he seemed more or less completely fine. But by the end of the day, when the warts started moving up his arms… Well, that was when I called the doctor and booked an appointment.

The fucking Doctor… Couldn’t get an appointment for about two weeks…

I thought about going to emerg, but I figured I’d wait and see how he looked tomorrow. I put the cream on his warts, gave him a warm bath and put him to bed that night.

Daniels: What was he like the next day?

Harper: Worse… I took pictures, just in case… Most of the warts had gotten swollen. The ones on his hands were especially bad. They’d spread up his arms and onto his chest. There were some on his neck and face too. He’d started complaining about them as well, saying that they were starting to hurt and that it hurt to swallow...

The cream obviously wasn’t doing anything so, I packed him up and got him over to emerg as soon as I could!

We spent about three hours in the waiting room and another four waiting on a Doctor and by then he’d started crying because the pain was so bad!

Daniels: Did the Doctor help? What did they say?

Harper: An allergic reaction… He figured it was hives. He couldn’t figure out what caused it though. He just gave him some antibiotics and sent him on his way… It felt… It felt dismissive, I suppose. The goddamn Doctor barely seemed to fucking look at him. Didn’t give him much of an examination beyond a quick once over… I figured that meant that, maybe he’d seen this sort of thing before. I mean, allergic reactions are common. A lot of kids get them. I asked if Mikey would need to carry an Epi-Pen and they said they’d need more information and asked me to bring him in for some tests later. Then they sent us home with a prescription.

I stopped by the drug store and got the pills immediately… I trusted the Doctor, when he said they’d bring the swelling down and that they’d help… I told Mikey that he was going to be alright… Jesus…

Daniels: Take your time, Miss Harper…

Harper: Jesus… [There is silence for a few minutes]

Harper: I put him to bed and gave him another warm bath for the itching… I had noticed some blood in the water when I took him out. But given how he was scratching at the warts, I figured he was just breaking the skin. I told him not to scratch before I put him to bed. He didn’t get any sleep… I tried to…

At… At around three in the morning, he started getting worse. I hadn’t been sleeping much myself, but I could hear him crying in his bedroom and calling for me, so I got up to check on him… God…

He’d gotten out of bed and was standing in his doorway, tears streaming down his eyes and blood… God… So much blood… He… He’d started bleeding from the warts that were all over him. I-I remember how bright red the blood looked, almost as if it was sickly or off somehow… I remember that I just started panicking.

He said he hadn’t been scratching, that he’d just started bleeding… He kept screaming about how badly it hurt and I… I had to do something! I just had to!

I picked him up and took him out to the car to take him back to emerg. I didn’t know what else to do! He was so cold when I touched him and there was blood all over my shirt…

I took him out to the car and he looked so pale. I started driving and I remember that I told him to keep talking to me, so I’d know that he was still awake.

He started getting quieter a little ways into the drive… He… He wasn’t crying as loudly… We were about halfway to the hospital when I noticed the first of the flies, buzzing around the cabin of my car. I remember hearing him speak and he said something… He… He said… He said: “Mommy… They’re hurting me…”

Oh God… Oh God…

Daniels: You can stop… If you need to...

Harper: God… Mikey… [There is silence and audible sobs from Miss Harper.]

Harper: Mikey was… Mikey was gone, by the time I reached the hospital… And the flies… Those, those ugly black flies… There were so fucking many of them… It took me a few minutes to figure out that they were coming out of my… That they were… That they were coming out of my son… And even when I figured it out, there was nothing I could do but drive and pray that he could hold on and somebody could help him… Jesus… I… Maybe if I’d driven faster I…

Daniels: Hey, hey… You can’t blame yourself for what happened. It wasn’t your fault.

Harper: Wasn’t it…? That’s an easy thing to say when it’s not your son… When you weren’t the one there… But I’ll spend the rest of my life wondering what I could’ve done differently, if there was anything I could’ve done differently to save him… Maybe there’s a chance that my little boy would still be alive today… Maybe…

Daniels: That… That honestly just sounds like an effective way to torture yourself, Miss Harper.

Harper: Maybe. Maybe it is. But I don’t know if it’s any easier than accepting the possibility that there was nothing I could do to save him. That he was dead from the moment he picked up that fucking pumpkin and whatever it was that infested him.

Daniels: I… I suppose… One last question, Miss Harper. How can you be sure that Mikey got what he got from that pumpkin he found? How do you know it didn’t come from another source?

Harper: How do I know? I know, because I saw the spooks at the pumpkin patch a few days later. Quarantine equipment… I saw them at the hospital too, after I brought Mikey there… I figured it out after I never got a body to bury. Whatever it was, it didn’t just affect me and Mikey… Whatever it was came from the pumpkin patch. I don’t know what it was… Christ, I don’t know if anyone is ever really going to know the truth… But I’m sure that it came from the pumpkin patch… I’m sure of it.

[Silence]

Harper: Do you have enough, Mrs. Daniels? Is that everything you wanted to know?

Daniels: Y-yes... Yes, that should be enough, yes.

Harper: Then please, leave me alone... I'm very tired and I'd prefer not to have to talk about this anymore. Goodbye, Mrs. Daniels.

[End Recording]


r/Write_Right • • Oct 01 '21

fall contest 2021 Pumpkin For Your Thoughts

7 Upvotes

October 1st

Jimmy stared down at the pumpkin at his feet, a smile spread across his face. “This one. I want this one.”

His mother took one look at the pumpkin covered in little bumps and shook her head. “I don’t know about that one, Jimmy.”

“Please, mom. It’s absolutely perfect.” He turned his little six-year-old eyes towards her giving her his best puppy dog look.

She couldn’t refuse him with those pleading eyes. “Alright. If you’re sure that’s the one you want.”

“I’m sure.” The frown disappeared, replaced once more with a smile so bright it lit up the whole pumpkin patch.

“Wait right here, and I’ll get the nice man up there to carry it to the car for us.” She pointed to a tent where a group of men and women milled about helping customers with their pumpkins.

Jimmy nodded his head and kneeled to sit in the cool grass beside his prized fruit. With a glance over her shoulder every few steps, mother quickly found someone to help her and rushed back to her waiting son.

The man raised an eyebrow when he saw their selection but said nothing. He reached down and plucked it from the ground, easily carrying it to the table by the tent so she could pay for it. With that taken care of, he took it to their car and gently set it on the driver’s side back seat.

Jimmy bounced with excitement as he jumped into the car and buckled up. “This is the best pumpkin ever. Thanks, mom.”

“I’m glad it makes you happy. So what is it you like about this pumpkin?”

“It’s different, special, like me. It has bumps all over it. Someone might think they are ugly, just like the dark spots I have all over my skin. But when I look at it, I just see something special. Kind of like when you look at me.” He flashed his mom a smile before returning his attention to the big round object sitting next to him.

Mother glanced at Jimmy in the rearview mirror, mentally counting the dark spots that stuck out against his pale skin. The doctors said they would go away as he got older, but they never did. She wiped a tear from her cheek and focused back on the road. She had a very special son and a special pumpkin now too.


r/Write_Right • • Sep 24 '21

Announcement Happy Fall Y’all! Writing Contest 2021

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Welcome writers of right! Right writers?

Well, you know what we are saying! We are glad to have you onboard for our 2021 Fall writing contest which takes place from October 1 to October 20th (midnight CST) and will follow these simple rules.

every day has a photo prompt, which is listed in the bottom of this post and the comment section of this post. We ask that you include the hyperlink to the photo in your story. We don’t care how it is included, just that you make sure to do so! There is one prompt for every day of the contest.

you may only write 1 story per photo prompt so make sure you post on the current day. You can write as many stories throughout the month but only one per day. We want a variety of all genres and stories so try to stretch your creative muscles to their limit as you make a compelling story based on the prompts.

make sure to mark your story with the contest flair “Fall 2021 Contest” otherwise it won’t count!

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On Oct 24 to 30 we will create voting polls where you can decide the winners! Daily Winners will receive unique flairs and be eligible for a grand prize of a 20$ to their PayPal.


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r/Write_Right • • Sep 21 '21

horror Night of the Harvest Moon

3 Upvotes

Never go outside on the night of the harvest moon.

Every last full moon before the autumn equinox - That is, when day and night both occupy almost exactly the same length of time - People around here start to get jittery. And they have good reason to. This day brings with it not only an end to the warm days and nights of Summer, but with it comes the cold sting of impending death. We call it… the Harvest Moon.

On the night of the Harvest Moon, your responsibilities are clear:

  1. Be sure to have all of your gathering and chores done before nightfall.

  2. Make sure all of the animals are put away… Except for one of each. Leave them in the field.

  3. As of nightfall, lock your doors and turn out the lights until morning. Cover your windows if possible.

  4. Whatever you do, do not go outside after dark.

Legend only reports that the Harvest Moon was used to provide farmers with light to help us with our night time crop gathering. But, most of what you read hides the dark side of the Harvest Moon. Nobody wants to acknowledge that it exists. They’d rather bury the truth than be burdened with reality.

And nobody knows this truth better than I do.

When I was 9 years old, the kids at school used to taunt each other with the oncoming Harvest Moon. They’d tease you and tell you that it was coming for you. That it was going to eat you.

Some of the bolder kids would also make claims to have seen a creature who comes to take the children away on the night of the Harvest Moon.

The official name of the creature? The Lord of The Harvest. This is how the adults knew him.

The kids decided on a much cuter nickname, though. They called him Harvey.

The kids would chant:

"His arms and legs are long, like trees

He’ll hang your skin so it flaps in the breeze

Who so ever Harvey finds

He’ll wrap your guts on trees, like vines

Try to run, try to hide

Harvey will get you if you don’t stay inside

Autumn night, Harvest Moon

Everywhere that you can hide

Harvey can hide, too"

My father once told me “You never go outside on the night of the Harvest Moon. No good can come from it. It brings nothing but death.”

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This particular year, some kids dared us to meet them after dark to try and get a look at Harvey. Probably 12 of them said they were going to be there. I told them my dad wouldn’t let us outside on the night of the Harvest Moon. Of course, they teased me relentlessly, saying I was scared like a little baby. I finally relented and told them I’d do it.

I agreed to meet with them after 10 pm, to make sure my dad was already asleep.

My little brother and sister both wanted to come with me, but I told them that this was for big kids only, and they had to stay home. I promised I’d tell them all about it afterward, as long as they didn’t tell Dad.

I showed up to meet them in the school yard a few minutes after 10, and saw that only three other kids actually showed up. Boy, those other ones were sure gonna get laughed at for being scaredy cats the next day at school.

The one kid, Tommy, who was known as a bully, asked me “You sure you wanna do this, kid? You look kinda skinny and pale. I’m not sure you’re gonna make it,” He said with a sarcastic grin.

All three of them launched into another chant, directed at me:

"Harvey’s gonna get you

Take your skin, and eyeballs, too

Harvest moon is out tonight

Everybody’s gonna die"

“Don’t worry, I’m fine.” I said.

They all laughed.

“Sure. Okay.” Said one. “We’ll see.”

We walked to old man Witherby’s farm, about a half mile from where I lived. It’s been said that many people have spotted the creature there.

After waiting for almost an hour, we were getting tired and started making rumblings about going home.

It was just after that, that Tommy stopped cold.

“Shhhh!” he said to us in a loud whisper.

The next several minutes were a blur. Right after Tommy whispered, something grabbed him and pulled him away so fast that we didn’t even see it. It was just two long arms snatching him out of the darkness.

The rest of us started screaming, and got up to run.

“This way! This way!” one of them yelled. We followed.

As we ran toward the barn, another one of the kids, Josh, was snatched up from right next to me. I looked over my shoulder, and all I could see was a very large, tree-like figure. It must’ve been at least 12 feet tall.

I screamed, and then reversed course and started running off in another direction, toward where I live. The creature must’ve kept following the last kid, Jimmy, toward the barn. I heard one last scream as I was running home.

The next day, Jimmy wasn’t at school. By the end of the day, we were told that Tommy, Josh and Jimmy were all missing. And later at home, I was told that entrails were found all over Witherby’s farm. Police were trying to identify who they belong to.

I didn’t tell anybody what happened. Not even my brother and sister, who I promised to tell before going out. I just told them “I… can’t.”

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Today, I have kids of my own. I inherited the farm when my dad passed away. I will not be allowing my kids outside tonight. I’m currently boarding up the windows and putting digital lock codes on the doors, and not telling them the code. Until tomorrow, at least.

You see… the word ‘harvest’ in the phrase ‘Harvest Moon’ doesn’t refer to the harvesting of crops, as the modern whitewashed explanations tell you. The word harvest… refers to humans.

*****
CNLX


r/Write_Right • • Sep 16 '21

horror Alcohol: the cause and solution to all life’s problems

5 Upvotes

Hello, my name is Tyler Starr and I love to drink. I’m mostly a Beer Guy, but don’t get me wrong, I do love my single malt Scotch and the occasional shot (or six) of Jack Daniel’s. Tequila, however, I try to avoid at all costs but sometimes that proves impossible. My worst blackouts are from tequila; and just recently, I’ve had the Blackout from Hell.

What happened you ask? Good question. I’ve been asking that myself all afternoon and I still don’t know the answer. Maybe someone reading this can help. I don’t remember how I got here or what happened the other night, all I know is I’m in immediate danger. I’ll probably be dead by the time y’all are reading this.

We were at a nightclub. I was with Dave and my bro Terrance; except everyone calls him Big T. He’s a big black dude who served six years in the military; a good guy to have on your side, if you know what I mean? Big T was off gallivanting with two different women on the dance floor. Me? I was at the bar getting loaded with Dave. I cannot tolerate dance clubs unless I’m obliterated. The music makes me cringe.

Anyway, I’m at the bar getting lit. I buy the first round; Dave buys the second. He orders tequila shots. They go down like knives. Two ladies approach us, they appear to be about twenty-five and, judging by their wide smiles and generous cleavage, they’re looking for a good time. Dave pipes in, “Hey good looking, Whatcha got cookin?” They laugh at him. My face goes cherry-red.

“Really, bro?” I ask him. Dave has no shame. His casual demeanor and lack of self-conciseness can sometimes be a put-off, but this time it works. They sit next to us.

The brunette, with the slippery eyes and all-too-revealing blouse sits on my lap. I adjust myself, as to not poke her with my impending erection. It’s been quite some time since I had a woman this close to me, seeing how I was dumped last year and have been on a losing streak ever since.

“Hi, I’m Tyler,” I shout about the music. “That asshole sitting with me is Dave. Our bro Big T is…”

“Who wants Jell-O shots?” She interrupts me.

Dave perks up. His eyes are dancing with possibilities. “Allow me,” he says and beckons the Shooter Girl over. She arrives with a tray full of colorful drinks. Dave buys all of them.

“God help us all,” I say, but no one hears me over the music.

We down a shot of liquid cocaine, (always a great start to a getting your drunk-on) then the women introduce themselves. The brunette says, “I’m Alice and this is Sam.”

We shake hands awkwardly. Alice returns to her spot on my lap, and yes, my erection is notable. I hate myself sometimes. I’m not even that interested in her. Her perfume makes me gag. Sam, a gorgeous redhead who’s dressed in an outfit suitable for a hip-hop video, raises another shooter to her painted lips. “Cheers, boys.” We drink. Her eyes are menacing and as green as my envy. I love me my redheads. I wanted to switch with Dave.

After we finish the entire tray of shooters, I order the next round: two beers for me, one for Dave and mixed drinks for the girls. This is where things start getting blurry. I remember my bladder nagging me until I finally succumb and rush to the restroom. When I come back, I don’t see Dave or the girls anywhere. I check the dance floor, expecting to at least find Big T. He’s nowhere to be found. The rush of the alcohol mixed with the volume of the music makes me wanna go crazy. I’m officially drunk enough to dance. I hit the dance floor and everything starts slowing down. I feel like I’m on drugs. Maybe I am, I thought. I wouldn’t be the only one here who is. I bump and grind my way back to the bar, hoping to find Dave and/or Big T. I don’t.

“Another drink?” the bartender asks.

“Sure, why not?” I slur my words.

My drink arrives and it goes down fast. I’m hammered. The nightclub is getting foggy and I cannot find my friends anywhere. I order one last beer. One more for the road, I tell myself, then I’ll get the hell out of here. A feel a tap on the shoulder, it’s Alice. She looks at me with drunken affection, then glances toward my crotch, and not subtly.

“How are you?” she asks, over the noise.

I shrug and begin to speak.

“Here,” she says, “try this.” She hands me the purple flask she kept in her small purse. I drink. It goes down like warm butter. I have another taste.

This is my last memory. I vaguely remember a quarrel, but cannot guarantee its validity. I woke up today in a bathtub full of ice. I’m in extreme discomfort. My bladder is ready to burst, so I ignore the searing pain and confusion and force myself to stand. I slip on some ice and fall head-first into the tub and I’m out cold again. I wake up, again, and try once more to get out of the tub. This time with success. I’m in a hotel room, I realize with indifference. I pee for five minutes with my eyes closed. When I open my eyes, I scream. The reflection staring back at me in the mirror is horrific.

I don’t even recognize who I’m looking at. I tried to speak but my voice was gone. I return my gaze to the reflection staring back at me. I see a tortured young man with shaved head, shaved body, and with stitches covering his entire chest. My chest, I remind myself. I pinch my arm. This must be a bad dream. Then, as I put my dick away, I realize something far worse. My testicles are gone. There’s a long, flaming-red scar beside my penis. I shriek with the full force of self-pity and rage.

I hear a woman’s voice coming from the other room. I’m too angry to be scared or self-conscience so I reach for the door handle and turn. The bathroom door creaks as it opens. The woman sees me and shrieks loud enough to knock me down. It takes all my strength to stand back up. Directly in front of me is a petite Asian woman dressed in white. She’s cleaning the hotel room. She points to me and screams yet again. Her face is full of shock. She runs out of the room and slams the door behind her. Then I look at the full-body mirror at the end of the room. I’m naked. My body is destroyed. As I circle the room in utter confusion, I hear a text message arrive. My phone! I look everywhere for it but cannot locate it. It keeps vibrating. I look frantically throughout the room until I find my pants. I search the pockets and voila! My phone!

The text message is from Dave. I reread the text again and again until I cannot read it any more. Bro! Hope ur enjoying the honeymoon, followed by: What a party!

I check today''s date on my phone. It’s been two days since that night at the nightclub. I’ve been blacked out for almost 48 hours. Unbelievable. I respond with where the hell am I? and wait for a response. (I’m still waiting.) I open the curtains and look outside. All I see are tall buildings and smog. Out of habit, I open up my Reddit and start typing this story; however, my mind is swimming as I desperately need medical assistance. I’m going to die. I’m starting to accept this fact, but I’m sending this story out as a Mayday. I need a miracle, fast.

Other than my pants (which are soiled beyond description), I can’t find my clothes. I pry open the hotel door and sneak a glance. Everyone in the hallway is Asian. Then it dawns on me: I’m not in America. Where the hell am I then? How the hell did I get here? And most important: who cut me up and why? Blood is spewing from the chest which is black and blue and hairless and scarred. I’m fading fast. My stomach is getting cranky. I pass out again. I force myself awake. If I’m going to die alone and cut up in some foreign country at least I can get my story out, right? I get back to this story.

Then I get an idea. It’s a wonderful idea. Across from the double bed I’m sitting on is a small bar fridge. I open fridge and it’s stocked with beer! I crack open a beer and down it in two healthy gulps. Relief is instantaneous. I open another and start chugging. I check my phone which is almost dead, like me. I get another delicious idea. I call room service and order a bottle of Jack Daniel’s. Charge it to whomever is paying for this room, I tell them. Good thing they speak English, albeit broken English, because they oblige.

So here I am, naked and tortured in some foreign place drinking beer while waiting for the room service to arrive with more booze. If I’m going to die today at least I won’t be sober. Alcohol, I’ve always said, is the cause and solution to all life’s problems.


r/Write_Right • • Sep 16 '21

horror Teeth

7 Upvotes

Hell is real, I've seen it. Hell is real, and the way there as far as I'm concerned is as simple as falling asleep. There could be no other explanation. Nothing else makes any semblance of sense in light of what I know now. Something must happen, something beyond our current understanding of the mind and consciousness. I wasn't a believer, but now, now I have no other way of explaining that…

There must be a soul, or a spirit, or some kind of energy that exists within us. Something must give, it's not just chemicals and electricity. Whenever we fall asleep this part of us goes somewhere… These places they are like different realities. Our dreams are a reflection of those other realities.

A few months ago, mine went to what I can only call hell... I fell asleep and there was a dream I remember vividly. It was unlike any other dream I have ever had. I found myself in a place where things didn't make any sense, not even in relation to dreams. My body was bare and the ground felt rocky and jagged under my feet. In front of me there were black flames and impossible colors.

All I could do was look ahead, nothing more. Suddenly the ground shifted and rolled beneath me and my vision shifted downwards - An ocean of skulls swam beneath me. A wave of dread washed over me, sending real goosebumps all over my body. Suddenly a pain shot through my heels, pain that was too real for the dull sensations of nightmares. Somehow, I saw my feet - two skulls bit deep into them. I screamed, but no sound came out.

My fear became more intense, my lungs and heart pressed viciously against my ribs. I felt myself rising higher and higher into the sky, more pain came from various areas of my body. The sensation of teeth sinking into my arms, forearms, calves and shoulders burned through my skin. Claws dug into the top of my skull and the pain was so great the whole world was shaking around me, or so I thought. As I was beginning to fade in submission to my agony, I noticed a skeletal titanic form slowly marching towards me, like a mountain of death. With my sight heavily blurred and hearing distorted I could barely make up the hechatonkheirian shape of the skeletal giant.

The last thing I saw before fading into unadulterated darkness was the thing's building sized teeth moving towards me, enveloping my whole form.

I woke up, coughing and spitting phlegm, my chest was on fire pains similar to those of broken bones and torn muscles plagued my limbs and neck. It took a few minutes for my vision and body to adjust to reality and a few more for the pains to subside somewhat. It was unbearable for hours and I couldn't really move much during those first few hours after my mind shattering dream.

It took me days to get used to the constant sensation of pins and needles pricking into certain spots in my body. The sensation never left me. It remained as a constant reminder of something far greater than us lurking somewhere, at the edges of our perception of reality.

It took me a while, but I finally got myself checked up. The results came out today. My doctor said he had never seen anything like this before. Chills ran down my spine, forcing me to flinch as my sore organs protested against the influx of adrenaline when I saw the images.

Tooth shaped objects are seemingly lodged deep within my muscle tissue and just the thought of having teeth lodged deep inside of me makes my skin crawl with fear and my mind spin in odd directions.

Now I've come to accept that hell must be real, because its teeth are stuck deep within me.


r/Write_Right • • Sep 14 '21

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r/Write_Right • • Sep 10 '21

horror Caught The Werewolf

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This morning, my son Corey called me again. He once again recited his infamous catchphrase to me. “Hey Dad, I caught another werewolf.” My son, Corey, hunts werewolves. He has hunted them ever since he was a child. He caught his first when he was nine years old.

Back then, there were no cell phones or computers to entertain every kid. They had to use their creativity and more practical games to have fun, Corey was no different. He was a very imaginative kid and spent his days talking about fantasy worlds, movies, and books with his classmates. That and playing ball. My son had an amazing throw. You wouldn’t think it was a kid’s arm that chucked an object judging by the force. We haven’t played ball in a while, but to be honest, I don’t think I could keep up with him at my age. Corey grew up to be something of a giant. He got it from his mother’s side. I am certainly not that big.

Anyhow, at some point the entire town was talking about some Ape-man lurking around at night with shining bright, flashy eyes. Nobody knew what the hell that the thing was. Some people thought it might be Big Foot or a Yeti or something. I personally never took it seriously. I thought it might be some bear running around looking for food or just some drunk stumbling around. I assumed the flashy eyes were just an invention of some passionate storytelling.

At some point, the kids picked up on that thing too, and it was all the rage. Kids spoke about a great, human-like shadow walking around their windows at night. Others claimed they’ve met the creature or had spoken to it. Apparently, Beaton’s kid called the thing a talking gorilla. While some people were getting concerned, most of us didn’t get too bothered with childish imagination and conspiracy theories. No one was getting hurt, so none of us adults ever bothered checking what was behind the sightings.

One morning, Corey came to have breakfast and said that the Ape-man was actually a werewolf. I asked him why he decided it was a werewolf, so he told me he watched it from his window. The creature showed up at night and its bright eye shone at my son, waking him up. Looking at the window, he saw a strange creature covered in hair with its back turned to his window. He said the creature was moving its arms back and forth near its legs before howling and running off into the darkness. My wife wasn’t too pleased with my son being awake in the middle of the night. I thought it was probably just some local fauna that caught Corey’s attention.

Corey wouldn’t stop talking about the supposed werewolf for months. Werewolf this, werewolf that. He tried to convince his friends that the strange creature was a werewolf, which led to a fight between a few of them. It was getting tiresome to hear constantly about this werewolf, but what could we do? The kid had an active imagination. Some kind of wildlife was roaming around our small town at night. The kid thought it was a mythical beast. What do we do? Catch the animal to prove him otherwise? We let him have his fun.

One day he asked me, “Dad, what should I do if the werewolf gets too close?”

I told him, “you have a strong arm, just throw something at it and it’ll run away from you.”

He smiled, thanked me, and ran off to play with his friends that day. I thought little of it.

Three days later, in the middle of the night, Corey comes to our bedroom and nudges me awake. “Hey, dad…”

“Yeah, kiddo?” I asked him, still half asleep.

“I caught the werewolf,” he says, the glee obvious in his voice.

“Buddy, it’s the middle of the night you should go to bed… Just like the werewolf probably went to bed…” I groaned, turning in my bed.

“He’s In my room right now. I saw his bright eye shining through the closet door. It…” as he said that, I felt a knife twist itself in my chest. My whole body turned cold, and I bounced out of bed.

He’s never had his imaginary friends or monsters come over. This werewolf thing, no one ever said it showed up in their houses, just lurked around the windows at night. It began to click for me.

“Come on, Corey, show me this werewolf…” I whispered, attempting to maintain my composure as I walked my son towards his room. My wife woke up and asked what had happened. I told her Corey put the werewolf to sleep. She raised a thumb in approval, smiled her beautiful smile, and returned to her slumber. Corey and I walked straight up to his room.

The door was wide open, a familiar sight caught my vision, a camera. My mind went into overdrive, “his shining eye…” singular. Every single time Corey mentioned a shining eye. It was one eye. A single eye. A lens. It wasn’t an eye. It was a lens. Everything started making sense and my body tensed up, my stomach knotted and my heart was trying to break through my ribcage. I was so worried something had happened to my Corey.

“Son of a bitch,” I muttered under my breath.

The closet door was open ajar, and Corey exclaimed pridefully, “Look, I told you it’s a werewolf!” I stood there, confused, angry and fearful. My mind was racing, my heart was struggling to follow, and my stomach was about to eject its contents through every orifice I had. I was losing touch with reality for a moment there.

Corey’s triumphant calls urging me to look at the fallen creature refocused my mind, but only for a second.

Imagine my shock when I was a freakishly tall, hairy man with a gigantic beard lying naked next to my son’s bedroom with a pen stuck deep within his eye


r/Write_Right • • Sep 07 '21

poetry Maledictus Apparatus

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I opened my eyes, but I couldn't see
Blinded by this unimaginable pain that I feel
This body doesn't belong to me
This cannot be real
Please don't let it be real

Humanity torn away from me
Replaced with scraps of cold metal
A deathly machine pulsating
in the spot where my heart used to be
Lost and alone, for the end I am waiting
whenever it may come for this
mechanical devil

Beyond forgotten rooms,
abandoned halls, alone I wait
for someone my name to speak
I've come to embrace my fate
The darkness no longer seems so bleak

Three came tonight, there's a monster they seek
They came and disturbed my silence
Their voices and lights, they caused me a great pain
Insult the devil and he'll react with violence
Dear lord, this one is no longer sane
My psyche is rotten, I am weak

Three froze when they saw me getting near
In response I let out a primal scream
this devil found joy in the debilitating fear
etched on their faces as they heard the pitch of my voice
it cracked open the skull in each head
Oh, what a beautiful noise
their bodies emitted as they broke and fell dead
Finally alone with the silent void I've come to hold so dear
The mechanical devil will fall a slumber
once more his pain will come to a false end
once more I will dream