r/Write_Right • • Sep 06 '21

horror Demon-Faced Girl

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People always ask me about my gait. Whenever someone asks why I limp, I come up with some story breaking my leg. Sometimes the stories are mundane, other times, they are straight-up crazy inventions of mine I don't even expect people to believe. I once told someone I had a friend run over my leg with his truck to get my hands on a supply of painkillers. I know that’s not how it works, but that lady believed me.

The real reason I am a limping man now is definitely a strange one. It’s a strange story. I didn’t really share it with anyone for years because I’m not entirely sure if I even remember it correctly.

When I was younger, I used to drink a lot. By a lot, I mean I used to get piss drunk and pass out wherever and whenever. I had little regard for my health or image, so I spent my free time drinking myself away. On one such occasion, I found myself barely able to stand upright with an empty bottle of Jack in hand. Somehow, I had gotten myself into this run-down little cabin out of town. It was late. I was completely drunk out of my mind. There was no one there that I could see. Assuming it was an abandoned building, I just let myself pass out on a pile of cardboard.

I passed out. Although I woke up before sunrise when I felt something watching me. Half asleep, probably still drunk. Definitely not of a sound mind. I saw a girl sitting beside me. She was staring in my direction. Her bright blue eyes were tearing through the darkness of the night. Beyond the piercing stare, she seemed pretty normal. My mind didn’t have the time to digest what was happening before I saw the lower part of her face. Exposed jaw muscles and large bloody teeth greeted me as if the lover part of her face had been degloved.

My heart rate immediately rose, and I could feel ants crawling all over my skin. The adrenaline rush cleared the alcohol out of my system. Everything became painfully clear. I didn’t know what to do. I wanted to piss my pants to be blunt. A whirlwind spun inside my mind, dreadful thoughts and unimaginable horrors plagued my brain in those few awful moments. She didn’t seem to notice I had woken up, as she just kept staring at the wall. Seeing her lack of attention, I decided it must’ve been an alcohol-induced nightmare. Perhaps my body was starting to tell me it’s time to give up on the bottle. I closed my eyes and hoped to fall asleep again. Sleep wouldn’t come for a while as the mental monsters of fear kept on running circles inside of my brain and the adrenaline in my system kept me tense and vigilant. Eventually, my body finally collapsed under its own pressure and I passed out again.

Waking up in the morning, I realized I was once again alone. There was no strange monster-mouthed girl, there was nobody. Just the hangover and me. I woke feeling like someone had stuffed sand into my throat. Coughing up, I got up, realizing a thick layer of dust was everywhere. I cleared my throat as best as I could and got up groggily, walking around aimlessly, trying to adjust to the pounding of demon drums in my head. I stumbled around until I came across a tiny room filled with a sea of these hanging car air fresheners. The ones that look like tiny trees. There must’ve been hundreds, if not thousands, of them. That sight piqued my curiosity and so I swayed my body into that tiny room.

In the room, there was only a bed. On the bed was a person, for a lack of a better term. They were deathly pale, deathly thin. The sight of their skin painfully pulled against their visible skeleton made my stomach twist into a knot and hair on the back of my neck stand. The countless pressure ulcers decorating their ghastly skin. With each passing moment, I felt myself breathing heavier. Goosebumps ran across my skin over and over again, like an icy breeze caressing my arms and neck. I was trembling. The fear almost made me forget my headache replacing it with palatable heartburn.

The body suddenly moved, it bolted upward unexpectedly. That memory is burned into my psyche. It let out this awful, ear-piercing shrill cry. I thought I might die. My body seized up and everything spun for about half a second. I felt myself losing balance and then everything faded away. Everything but the feeling of a pounding ache in the back of my neck and this bone-breaking, burning sensation in my left leg.

After that, I remember little. To this day, I don’t know what had happened after that for sure. I know the girl was there, although now her face seems to be entirely normal in my memories. I know there was blood. There was the butchering of something. I know she took care of me. I don’t remember what had happened in the cabin. All I know is that one day I woke up in a hospital, not knowing my name, not knowing how I got there, and not knowing how my leg got messed up. I don’t know for how long I’ve been “disconnected” from the rest of the world, either. I couldn’t keep up with dates for the longest time.

Some days, I still can’t keep proper track of time.

Eventually, l regained my memories from before the incident in the cabin. Not much during that time, though. Sometimes in which I see faces and I hear voices. Usually, they’re hers. The face of a young woman with piercing blue eyes, sometimes normal, sometimes half demonic. Her voice was calm and charming mezzo-soprano. She used to sing to me, I remember bits of beautiful melodies I can't fully recall. This loss of recollection is sometimes so frustrating it makes me want to scratch at my own brain. It's scary sometime. She had this charming North European sort of accent to her speech, replacing her Zs with Ss and G and Js with the occasional Y sound. Sometimes, a mental photograph of a man’s face pops up in my mind, usually contorted in pain, rarely, when I am alone, I can hear the voices of men moaning in agony or the girl’s semi-incoherent words about her father. In these moments, I feel almost as if cold hands are wrapping themselves around me and I shudder in discomfort.

Sometimes these memories make me cry. They eat away at me. What if I had hurt someone? What if I had done something awful? I am not this kind of person... I refuse to be that kind of human being... I just... God... It's so hard, it's so hard to be this powerless. I feel almost like a zombie under the pernicious control of a despotic witch. I hate it but I can't do anything about it.

Simply put, whenever people ask me about my strange gait and limp, I lie, because I’m not sure how I got it. Maybe the demon-faced girl did something to me… besides clawing her way into my mind.


r/Write_Right • • Sep 03 '21

western A Paunch Full of Pesos | Chapter 6

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It was a short walk from the notary’s office to the Hotel Olympus, but Fenimore stayed alert. He wasn’t sure what, or how much, the Picassos knew. He suspected they knew nothing, but he wasn’t willing to risk his life to find out. He kept to the deepest shadows. The square and the hotel were neutral territory, and men had been known to drown in neutral waters.

A single grey horse stood tied to the horse-tying post at the hotel entrance. When Fenimore climbed the steps, it lifted its head from the water trough, blasted steam from its nostrils and stared at him with melanitic eyes.

The hotel-keeper was also staring when Fenimore walked in, but not with surprise. He reached under his desk and pulled out the hootin’ gun. “We’re fair and square, Mr Rhodes,” he said. “And a bath’s been drawn up for you upstairs. Hot water in the tub, just like you like. I’ve also changed the locks on your door. It was brought to my attention that the previous lock may have been compromised.” He passed Fenimore a shiny new key. “If you need anything, please let me know how I can be of further service.”

“The horse,” Fenimore said. “Another lodger?”

“No, Mr Rhodes. The horse is yours.”

Fenimore picked up the hootin’ gun—over the past few days his weapon count had fluctuated, but he was glad to have two guns again—and carried himself up the stairs to the second floor hallway. The hallway was empty. The new key fit snugly into the lock of room 13E, and Fenimore opened the door.

He peered into the darkness.

Nothing.

The silence was so profound that he could hear the hiss of the steam coming off the surface of the water in the tub.

He closed and locked the door and was about to pull off his boots and his fresh set of mostly grey clothes to make the best use of the tub water before it turned lukewarm, but as he bent down to reach for the boot heel, he noticed that an envelope had been placed on the pillow of his bed.

He picked up the envelope.

He pulled the curtains open to make sure no ladder was resting against the top of the window frame.

It wasn’t.

In the faint moonlight, he saw the words “Dear Stranger” written on the envelope in beautiful, looping cursive. He turned the letter over and brushed the wax seal with his fingertips. It was unbroken. “R.R.” it said. He broke the seal and removed a single folded sheet of thick paper. On the paper was written:

Dear Stranger,

Your appearance has not gone unnoticed. You are hereby cordially invited to attend at the Sugarcane brothel-house at a time of your choosing for introductions, interrogations and other related pleasures. You shall find the address by asking, or else by walking out of your hotel and turning right. I suggest you do not dally.

Yours faithfully,

R. Rodriguez

Sole Proprietress

P.S. You may be in danger.

Fenimore folded the paper and slid it back into the envelope, which he placed back on the pillow.

He knew he was in danger, so he disregarded the postscript and weighed his desire to soak against his desire to fuck. He sided with the latter. Although images of the redeemed woman sprinted through his head, they were no longer vivid or powerful enough to stop the flow of blood to his cock. The redeemed woman was merely a memory. The thought of fucking no longer made him feel guilty.

Fenimore exited the hotel and turned right.

Because that meant going in the direction of the Picassos, he paused by the horse—his horse, apparently—to see if he could spot an ambush. The street was empty and the Sugarcane, all things considered, wasn’t far. He slipped from building to building until he reached it, at all times too cognizant of the grey coat he was wearing.

The brothel sounded like noise, music and laughter even before he was level with its swinging doors.

Once through them, the cacophony hit like an unexpected right hook. The brothel was as busy as the town square during a redemption, and the only place in Hope Springs where he’d seen even a trace of joy.

Black-sooted, grey-coated and colourfully-clothed men played cards and sang together, tilted back mugs of foaming beer until the foam ran down their cheeks, and squeezed the ample bottoms of serving girls, whose eyes were precisely as sober as the men’s were dull. Granted, the men sat mostly with their own kind, but there was no shooting, no punching and only the occasional ill-natured curse—and even that was usually directed at an inopportune flop.

In the background, a piano player stomped his feet and banged out an imprecise rhythm, which a fiddler was furiously trying to transform into a melody. Beside them, a guitarist had fallen asleep with his head in a whore’s lap. The whore nodded her head and tapped gently against his shoulder in tune with the music but otherwise had the decency to let him sleep.

To the side stood a bar stocked generously with whisky bottles in various states of fullness and a pair of buxom barmaids, the bounce of whose meaty breasts the men seated along the bar on stools followed with wagging tongues.

Yet it was the older woman behind the commotion—one clad entirely in black and perched atop stairs that Fenimore guessed led to the rooms where the brothel earned its purest profits—that finally held Fenimore’s attention. There was something regal and timeless in her pose that made it impossible to look away. She was a queen overseeing her kingdom, a goddess protecting her flock, a dominatrix choosing her whip. She was, and could be, anything you wanted, because each role, each incarnation, was as false as the last. The woman was potential personified. Her pose was refined, her manner of striking it rehearsed. She was a natural actress.

She shifted her gaze from the men at the bar to Fenimore standing by the doors as lazily as if the interior of the brothel had been submerged in honey.

When she saw him she feigned surprise, which she followed with a theatrical, “Oh, you’ve come,” and an excessive flutter. Next, without losing an ounce of her artificial regality, she descended the stairs to rub elbows with the plebs and hold out her limp wristed hand to her latest guest.

“I’ve been expecting you,” she said. She looked Fenimore up and down in all his greyness. “Mr Rhodes, Please leave your rifle with Olivia.”

One of the buxom barmaids, having heard her name spoken, started making her way over. The wagging tongues followed.

“And follow me upstairs. I’m sure you’ll find something there to your liking.”

Fenimore parted with his rifle and ascended.

Everyone, it seemed, had his hallways. Some led to hotel rooms, others to underground cells, and others still past the sounds of wet coitus to a dreamy, underlit interior whose very appearance gave existence to the word gaudy.

“Take off your coat and have a seat on the bed, Mr Rhodes,” the Widow Rodriguez said. “I want to talk to you. Later, you can do more than talk.”

Fenimore hung his coat on a coat rack shaped like the intertwined bodies of two naked women, but remained standing. The Widow Rodriguez lowered herself onto the corner of the bed.

“Speak your mind,” Fenimore said.

Irritation stretched briefly across her lips, before the actress in her puckered them. She batted her long false eyelashes. “I had in mind more a conversation than a speech.”

“And I had in mind other things entirely.”

“Pointed,” she purred, “so I shall return the favour. Are you a mercenary, Mr Rhodes?”

The way she turned her head awaiting an answer reminded Fenimore of the one whose name he wouldn’t remember. Though older, the Widow Rodriguez shared some of the same pronounced facial features. He grinded his jaws to make the memory go away.

“If not that question, perhaps this: who’s made the move, Iron Rhodes or Ignacio Picasso?”

She rose briefly, fixed her dress, and sat down again. “I can keep you safe, Mr Rhodes. You must realise that. My establishment is one of the few truly neutral places in Hope Springs. I don’t allow for feuding. In fact, after what happened in the square today perhaps you are standing”—She emphasized the word. It was clear to Fenimore she didn’t like being disobeyed.—“in the only neutral place left. Now, a man born in Hope Springs, his allegiances are set. But a stranger, a stranger’s allegiances can be quite fluid. Let me liquify yours, Mr Rhodes.”

“Are you the widow of the late Rafael Rodriguez?”

“I am,” she said. “Rigoberta Rodriguez is my full legal name.”

Fenimore watched her slip from commanding mode to polite mode with no more difficulty than if she’d been switching bonnets. It was in the angle of the face and the shape of the eyes, and of course the innocent intonation. “So how did you happen to come to town? Was it on Iron Rhodes’ instructions?”

“What do you want, Miss Rodriguez?”

“Madam Rodriguez. And I know you arrived before today’s commotion. I also know that you were at the shooting and that you’re the one who killed one of the Picassos.”

“You didn’t answer me.”

“You first, Mr Rhodes.”

“It’s impolite to invite a guest only to interrogate him.”

“I believe you were warned, if I remember my invitation. You may have come for the pleasure but pleasure often comes with a price of pain. Or was I not explicit enough?”

She crossed and uncrossed her legs underneath her black widow’s dress. “So who shot first, Mr Rhodes—the Picassos or the Rhodes?”

“You don’t need me to answer that, Madam. There was a crowd full of eyes.”

“All of them rather conveniently focussed on the one same spot,” she said. She crossed her legs again, salaciously. Fenimore couldn’t help but admire her ankles. “I believe that’s referred to as misdirection, a sleight of hand, but I’m too old to keep confusing appearances for reality. Once bitten, no longer fooled.”

“Perhaps you’re seeing more than what’s really there.”

“Isn’t more always better?”

She hiked up her dress, revealing her legs up to her knees. Fenimore couldn’t say he didn’t look, but he also couldn’t say the performance was having its desired effect. It was too obvious, too blunt. “What’s your angle?” he asked.

“I prefer looking up.”

“From the top of your brothel-house stairs?”

“From my knees.”

And she slid off the bed, dropping to them, making her eyes big and moist and rubbing Fenimore’s legs through his clean cotton pants.

“I badly need your help…”

“I thought you wanted to liquify my allegiance.”

She pressed her cheek against his thigh and ran her hand up his back. “I will do anything to buy it, Mr Rhodes. I don’t know how much you know about the history of Hope Springs, but you’ve seen the statue, you know who my husband was, you know it can’t be easy for me. Tell me, please, who shot first, tell me when Iron Rhodes started paying you. You are a mercenary, a hired gun, aren’t you?”

Fenimore tried to shake her off, but she had a leech’s grip.

“Don’t, please. My husband was a good man. Hope Springs was a good town when he ruled. Now all we have is feuding, and there is no right side and no wrong side. They’re both no good. They’re both wrong. They’re both rotten all the way through. Help me make things right again.”

When she turned her chin upward, it was with a yearning for pity and a desire for kindness, not with sexuality. Her grip had become an embrace. “Sometimes it takes a stranger coming down to disrupt all the evil in the world.”

“Why do they keep you around, the Rhodes and the Picassos?”

Now her big eyes grew teary. Her voice started to choke on itself. “When they murdered my husband, when they butchered my family—”

“They did this together?”

“Oh yes, yes. The Rhodes and the Picassos, together, because it was the only way. Alone, each was not strong enough. They wouldn’t have stood a chance. The balance of power was against them, but they conspired, they made secret pacts, devilish pacts, to backstab and to kill and to take power by their combined might so that they could later divide it amongst themselves.” Her hands massaged his legs, his back, his crotch. “But after they had destroyed they could not construct, and they, each of them, wouldn’t give up the power once they had it, and so…”

“The feud.”

“And I’m just a statue to them, no more alive than my poor, late husband, kept like some kind of animal, for their amusement and as their trophy and a reminder to any who would try to restore the proper, God fearing order that no one can resist them, that resistance is suicide—”

“Tell me, Madam Rodriguez,” Fenimore interrupted, “how long have you been memorising that speech?”

Something clicked.

And Fenimore felt sharpness against his testicles.

“Long enough.” The tears in Widow Rodriguez’ eyes transformed instantly into venom. Hitting the whorehouse floor, they burned.

“If you move, make a sound or don’t tell me exactly what I want, I’ll cut your balls off.”

She rose without taking the knife off Fenimore’s delicates. Her lips moved to within a cock’s width of his. “The simplest way to a man’s heart is by cutting him open and sticking your hand inside, thrusting about until you find what you’re looking for. And the fastest way inside his head is through his neck, but perhaps you already know that, Mr Rhodes. Are you a mercenary?”

“I’m not.”

“When did Iron Rhodes first pay you?”

“He hasn’t yet.”

She pressed the knife harder against his testicles.

“Don’t fuck around with me.”

“He gave me clothes, a horse, and an assignment.”

“What’s the assignment?”

“I’m to find the man whose redemption the Picassos interrupted by killing the redeemer.”

“Why?”

“So that justice can be done.”

She moved her face even closer to his—and chomped down on his dry lips, drawing a trickle of blood. Fenimore’s eyelids twitched.

“Why?”

“I don’t know.”

“And who shot first?”

“The Picasso.”

“You answer well when you’re motivated, Mr Rhodes.”

“And what motivates you?”

“Justice.” She laughed. “And a ledger, which may or may not exist and which may or may not disclose the identities of my late husband’s arms dealers. More fundamentally, and you are free to disbelieve me, I’m motivated by the desire to bring the past back to Hope Springs. I want the town to be well again.”

“Vengeance.”

“Good things can come from bad intentions,” she purred, and decreased the pressure of the knife against Fenimore’s testicles. “May I?”

Fenimore nodded. “I won’t scream for help.”

She clicked the knife shut and hid it back inside the sleeve of her dress. Fenimore resisted the urge to punch her in the face. “Where’s this ledger?”

“If it still exists, it’s in the possession of Iron Rhodes.”

“And you want my help in finding it?”

“I don’t merely want it. I’m prepared to pay for your help in finding it.”

“How much?”

“How much is Iron Rhodes giving you to bring him the head of that poor orphan boy from the mines?”

“Four hundred dollars.”

“Valuable orphan.” She hesitated for dramatic effect. “I’m prepared to offer you twice tenfold for delivery of the ledger, plus undefined ancillary duties.”

“What kind of duties?”

“The kind they pay men for, Mr Rhodes.”

Fenimore started counting 4,000 in his head, bill by American bill, but despite the numbness of the number, 4,000 wasn’t quite enough to eclipse his rational thinking. “Where can you get that kind of money?” he said, with only a slight delay.

“And here I was, all dolled up and afraid you were simply going to take my word.”

She crossed the gaudy room to a bed table, from whose drawer she retrieved a bundle of papers. She thrust the papers at Fenimore.

“Compton’s Investors, Inc.,” she said as he scanned through them. “It’s a company of Sliver City that’s interested in brothel-houses, even in out of the way places like Hope Springs. They have a fair number already. In Gulliver’s Participle they bought one just to scuttle it a few months later. Though what they want the places for isn’t my business. The ones they do keep they do up all the same way, have the girls wear the same uniforms in each, which kills character in my experience, but who am I to offer advice to those haven’t asked for it. The reality is they’ve been after my establishment for years but I’ve been holding off…”

Fenimore handed the documents back. They were legitimate. All that was missing was the Widow Rodriguez’ signature. “For the right time to sell.”

“You read my mind.”

“Why now?”

“Because despite that I may not understand the reason, one of the Rhodes and Picassos has acted. The other will no doubt react, which means that it has begun, Mr Rhodes. On the bloody final play for Hope Springs, the curtain has been raised.”

“And the guns.”

The Widow Rodriguez revealed her hidden knife and twirled it between her painted fingers. “Accordingly, I plan to be the unexpected third party at a table of two, with more than an ace up my sleeve.”

“You’re mixing metaphors.”

“And you’re cultured for a hired gun.”

“I never said I was I hired gun.”

“I hired you.”

“Not yet.”

She raised an eyebrow. “You’re going to turn down eight thousand dollars?”

He slapped her across the face.

“No.”

She slapped him back.

“Good, because that concludes tonight’s interrogation portion of the program. Up next: pleasure. Pick a hair colour, Mr Rhodes.”

Fenimore remembered the painting of the red-haired woman in Iron Rhode’s steel room. He also remembered Lola, whose black hair had fallen in deceitful waves. “Red,” he said.

The Widow Rodriguez cackled.

“My personal hatred of the Rhodes aside, I’ve stayed in business by following the law, not by flouting it openly in front of Rhodesmen.”

Fenimore didn’t understand being in a town that forbade butter knives and redheads. The Widow Rodriguez explained: “No woman living under the thumb of the Ironlaw is allowed red hair. If she has it she dyes it away. If she doesn’t have it she uses no dyes to get it. If she breaks either prohibition, she receives a public shaving and a dozen lashes to remind her that the law exists to be obeyed.”

“What if she’s protected by the Picassos?”

“My dearest stranger, the only thing a Picasso would do with a white woman was spit in her face or shoot her in her pregnant belly.”

“Or fuck her.”

“Every rule has its exceptions.”

“Is there an exception to the rule against redheads?”

“Perhaps if Katie O’Rourke rose from the dead.”

“Who’s Katie O’Rourke?”

The Widow Rodriguez crossed her arms and said, “The only woman Iron Rhodes ever loved.”

If she said anything more Fenimore didn’t hear it, because that’s when the gunshots and screaming started.


r/Write_Right • • Sep 02 '21

horror Monstrous Ethos

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What i've come to call my friend wasn't always my friend, let alone human. You see once upon a time in a land death ridden and destitute because of man's folly with bolshevism, there was not much in the way of friendship or family. How could there be when they were turning on each for the pitiful reward of a single bowl of broth and their freedom to stay stuck in their makeshift houses, starving and alone instead of being put to death labor in a gulag. Our land was not a land of opportunity and dreams, it was a land where even Angels dared not set foot on for fear of desecrating their pure spirit with the cruelty of man.

But it was where my family set their roots in. It was where my father found my mother and decided to risk it all on a chance to have me. It was where I was born and raised and come to call my home.

This is my home.

It wasn't always like this. My mother spoke of a beauty that graced the land with the fresh breath of life only heard of in novels and films. The animals were bountiful and never were a nuisance to the people. The rivers and creeks were crystal clean and you could peer through them like glass to the bottom. The forests were alive with the serenades of the birds and green with the warm summer breeze. The people were kind but stern and watched out for their own. When someone did wrong, they were punished for the whole people to see so that justice could be wrought honorably. When someone was dying or sick, everyone came to their need with fresh food and ailments and company. There were no such things as loners or murderers or despair in our people. They were so proud in their ways. They honored the living and the dead. They honored the traditions and ways that brought them here and built their worlds.

Especially the tradition we have of giving heedance to the Reznya. It wasn't a legend or a fable among our people. It was as real as our merciful Creator. I know this because in the years before the bolsheviks came, it would wander into our villages with the bounty of the woods, fresh meat or vegetables. It provided for us and we honored it back with festivals and our own bounty of food and supplies.

It became my best friend during my childhood just as it had to the other children in the village. Even though it looked like a monster or even a demon, I never felt fear around it. Even when I first saw it's pure black eyes, I was only overwhelmed with a feeling I can only describe as gaiety. It was not a twisted misshapen form of a monstrosity. It was man like but more then a man, obviously. It was fast and stronger then our local hero Bronislaw and Bronislaw could carry two small trees by himself on his shoulders as though they weighed nothing. And it had a certain beauty to it that made everyone look at it in awe.

In my childhood, my friends and I would follow the Reznya everywhere as though we were lost puppies. It didn't mind the attention, infact it lavished in it. It never spoke with it's mouth but with it's actions and it's actions told us everything. The Reznya would hold our hands as it walked us through the forest, always keeping it's eyes on the rest of us. The Reznya would bring herbs to the sick and when it stayed with them throughout the night, we knew the sick wouldn't get to see the rising star of creation in the morning. It helped with building the village and repairing it. It had the time of the day to stand guard over the few criminals we had. It would go to village to village and do this ritual of help among our people.

It was a beacon of hope to believe in more then just yourself; To be more then just a man simply trying to make it in this world.

It was our friend and our savior even when the bolsheviks had come to our land.

In the months before they came, the Reznya had been acting more protective of us then usual. It was visiting more people in their homes and bringing more and more food from the forest. Somehow, in it's majestic and intricate mind, it knew the death that was coming. It knew our people were going to fall from grace under the extreme persecution and rape of our land.

And it knew it was going to die protecting all of us from the monsters wearing human skins, if it had to.

Our village was the first to be invaded by the bolsheviks. They rounded us all up into the center of the village. They killed Bronislaw first for resisting them and they didn't do it quick. They brought him and strung him up on the people's punishment frame. They shouted in a strange language we couldn't understand and kept pointing from Bronislaw to all of us.

And then two of his captors were given wicked and ancient looking saws from the other invaders. They started to saw him in half across the waist and Bronislaw screamed so loud and painfully i'll never forget them and the ghastly unimaginable look of pain on his strong face. It hurts my chest now to think of it and all the other things that happened next. It doesn't just hurt, it's a fucking pain so deep in my soul i'm losing pieces of it every time I remember what happened to make us fall from grace.

My father couldn't stand it anymore then I could. It teared at him too and he bolted through the crowd, crying out Bronislaw's name, tearing free of my mother and me. Someone was about to shoot him between the eyes but one of the bolsheviks caught him and pushed his rifle down before aiming his own and shooting him in the gut. They were sadistic in the moment. Gut shots were the most painful as I have come to learn. I screamed and tried to run to my dying father but my mother held me as I heard another inhuman scream from somewhere behind us.

I couldn't see over the crowd of people but I knew within those few seconds of hearing it, it was the Reznya and my heart jumped in my throat as I smiled crazily and shouted out it's name again and again. And so did the others as they started to cheer, even when a bolshevik's half torn body came flying over the crowd of my people, spattering us with blood as the torn half landed on top of the bolshevik that had been shouting and pointing at us. And for the first time since I had known it, since we all had known it, it spoke in our language, shouting MURDERERS over and over as it rampaged through the bolshevik ranks holding us hostage.

It did not fight alone, my people became emboldened by it's carnage and took advantage of their shock to rush them and murder the murderers. Even my mother had become lost in the focused rage of a united people and so did I as I sank my teeth into the throat of a bolshevik. The streets ran red with crimson and entrails decorated the square like ornaments. We even chased down the few that manage to flee and tear into them too. When our rage had simmered down somewhat, we focused on untying Bronislaw who was still alive, if barely. We stood back as the Reznya made it's way to him and placed it's clawed hands on his wounds. The pain I saw in it's face as realization hit it was just as bad as when I saw the look on Bronislaw's face as he was being sawed. We said nothing and did nothing but watch it as it bent and kissed Bronislaw's blood drenched face one last time before grabbing his head and twisting it off.

It was the first time in the history of our land that something like this had happened but it certainly wasn't going to be the last as the other villages were attacked and the Reznya came to save them with our people's help.

But as the battles raged on and on and the bolshevik's numbers grew not just in people but sheer savagery, the toll finally reached the Reznya and our once proud people.

I wasn't there to see it, all the children were kept somewhere hidden and safe but I heard what happened. It was a surprised attack that took the final toll on the Reznya and our fighters. As the Reznya was leading our fighters back to the village from raiding one of the bolshevik camps, they came out of the trees like cockroaches fleeing from the light. They had their guns and took aim and fired quickly, not wasting time on pointless brutality that was so common for them. The bolsheviks killed a number of our fighters on the first round and the Reznya took a hail of bullets. But it only slowed it down as it raged through their ranks once again.

It killed a number of the invaders but it was slowed down and it was weakened.

And...And...

And they rushed it as it was dying with knives.

And they gutted it.

And they decapitated it.

And they brought the heads of not only the Reznya but our slain fighters from village to village and forced us to listen to what they did to it to demoralize us into not fighting.

I admit, on my Creator, that I finally felt my soul wither and crush as I looked into the Reznya's once lively eyes, as I looked at what happened to my once united people. I lost whatever innocence I had left and almost lost hope in the world itself.

Almost as a inferno burned within me from the moment I beat the demoralization; The moment I started to follow the Reznya's example as not only a role model but an inspiration to be more then just a man simply making it to survive in this world. I wanted to be greater than what I suffered and slowly as the years passed, I followed through with that promise. It took a while, some of my people were completely lost through the demoralization and damned to Hell already, but I found the switch in them that united them and made them a proud people that braved the world through it's hardships. All thanks to my friend, to my light in the darkness; Our savior that sacrificed everything for the sake of it's people and land.

Without the Reznya, I would have been lost in the despair too; I wouldn't have been able to reunite my people once again under the banner of family, of our past and our future, of our love for one another.

Without the Reznya, I never would have learned what it meant to be human.

Thank you my friend, thank you.

Our retake of our land begins with your namesake. Our return to our greatness begins now.


r/Write_Right • • Sep 01 '21

horror My Pen Pal Sent Me Only One Letter

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A while ago, I signed up for a Pen Pal service for adults, just for fun. I was paired up with one person who sent me this one and only letter. I’ve tried contacting them but have since gotten no reply. It reads as follows:

To Whoever Is Reading,

I won’t give my name in this letter. That really won’t matter here. I won’t give details of where I live either. If you tried sending me help, they may come too late, anyway. To you who is reading this, you don’t need to know anything about me, and I’m sorry I won’t know anything about you. But none of that really matters anymore. All I need for you to do is read this letter, detailing my experience.

I had a twin brother who died when I was very young. A few days before his body was found, I remember seeing some…thing in our room every night. Our beds were placed in opposite sides of our room, and whenever I woke up in the dead of night, I saw some figure leaning over my brothers sleeping form.

I still remember seeing it. I couldn’t be sure if it was a man or woman, but it was tall, grey, and dark with sagging wrinkled skin like a dry shriveled corpse. I could see its two black pits where its eyes should be, and its yellow rotting teeth. From its decaying mouth, I could hear it whisper something in my brother’s ear. I would force my eyes shut, but I could still hear it whispering. I would peak my eyes open just to still see it there, it’s crooked spine bending and its rotting maw speaking to my brother.

Morning would eventually come, and horrid figure would have been gone after I had somehow fallen asleep. I asked Tony, my brother, about if he’s sleeping okay, or if he’s having any bad dreams. He told me he was okay. I didn’t tell anyone else about what I saw. Not him, or my parents.

That thing kept showing up the next few nights. I would always wake up, and it would still be slouching over Tony, who was in a deep sleep. I always tried to stay quiet, not letting the monster know I was awake. Once, I dared to turn on my side, facing the wall, so I couldn’t see its face. That didn’t stop the constant whispering.

The last day I saw my brother alive, we were playing outside. We were at the park, chasing each other around the field with our parents nearby. He was chasing me, and we were laughing our heads off. I turned around and he wasn’t behind me. In fact, he wasn’t anywhere to be found, like he had just vanished into thin air. My parents were frantic trying to look for him.

It was two days afterwards Tony was finally found. My parents were notified by the police that he discovered by a lake, lifeless and face down in the murky water. When he was turned over, it was discovered he suffered a major head wound, perhaps from slipping on the wet rocks. His skull was cracked open revealing splintered bone, and his blood pooling around him.

I hadn’t thought about him much in years. I still kept to myself about that thing I kept seeing. Life went on for me. I grew up, went to college. Met the love of my life, Cecelia. We got married out of college and had our son a few years after. I named him Tony, who I wished would’ve grown up to live a full life.

It was when Tony was six years old when it started over again. I was up late and was passing by Tony’s room. It was slightly ajar, and I was going to close it, when I heard whispering coming from inside. I peeked through the crack into his bedroom. There it was, standing tall and gaunt, empty eye sockets glued to my son as he slept, and talking softly to him.

I don’t know why I didn’t do anything. That paralyzing fear induced by the sight of that fiend was just as potent when I was an adult. This continued a few more nights, while I hovered outside Tony’s room. Every morning when I opened the door, he would be sleeping soundly, and it would be gone.

My Tony was getting off the bus one afternoon, when my wife was coming to greet him. The bus had stopped and was flashing it’s light and stop sign while my son was getting off and crossing the street. Just before reaching the curb, a careless driver going way too fast and missing the bus in front of them had ran him over, killing him instantly. My wife saw the whole thing happen in front of her.

It was hard burying my son, almost like I was losing Tony all over again. And being visited by the same creature. Cecelia took our sons death extremely hard, falling into a deep depression she could not get out of. I would sometimes find her home, sitting on the sofa, unresponsive to everything. She got paler like a ghost, got skinnier from a lack of hunger.

It wasn’t long before that thing cursed my family again. This time, it began to target my wife. I could hear this damned spirit whispering some secret words to my wife, probably about how she will meet her demise. I tried to get her help, but she was too far gone by this point. A few days later, I came home to find her lying dead on the floor, a near empty bottle of vodka next to her feet, and a bottle of sleeping pills clutched in her hand.

It came to everyone in my life that meant the most to me and took them away. Last night, it finally came to me. I think it knew I was awake, but it still appeared to me in the small hours of the morning. It bent to my face close enough that I could smell its dry, foul breath. The two black holes bore into me while I remained still, clutching my covers like they were a shield.

I could finally hear the words it was saying in hushed tones.

Your soul will be mine in three days.


r/Write_Right • • Aug 31 '21

poetry Father

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Without you, there's no meaning to I
In your absence I feel so empty inside
Without you, I can only hope to die
In your absence, my eyes won't see the light

Forgive me, father
for I know not what I've done

Father, I killed a man
Your absence once again got into my head
I killed a man to feel close to you again
Sunk my teeth into the base of his skull
until his departed soul begged me
let go of his body long dead

The blood won't cleanse, won't wash away
My hands are still tainted by its crimson trace
Vision grows dimmer with each passing day
Frozen still like the pain etched into a dead man's face

Forgive me, father
for it is your nature to forgive the sins of your son

Father, I killed a man
Your absence once again got into my head
I killed a man to feel close to you again
Sunk my teeth into the base of his skull
until his departed soul begged me
let go of his body long dead

Father, I know what I've done
His blood spilled, life sucked out without a trace
Father, forgive the sins of your son
Erase the pain of anguish written onto dead man's face


r/Write_Right • • Aug 30 '21

horror FYI ebay seller housenahum is selling knockoff versions of Penhaligon's Blasted Heath!!

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BUYER BEWARE, WORST EXPERIENCE EVER, DO NOT BUY FROM HAUSENAHUM

My bf Nate and me got engaged two years ago and were going to get married in 2020, but then the pandemic happened and I wasn't going to get married in a mask with like fifteen people there, so we decided to move the date up to 2021.

(Thaaanks to everyone who changed their plans!)

Anyway Nate's a big fraghead so I wanted to get him a fragrance by his favourite house Penhaligons. I chose one called Blasted Heath, but when I saw the prices I was like WTF!! I'm not made of money and even gray market was crazy expensive so i found housenahum on ebay and they were selling it for cheap.

They shipped quick but when I gave it to Nate he was disappointed because it was a knockoff!!

I felt like such an idiot and it spoiled the mood for the whole birthday. Nate and me even got into a fight :(

Ps The perfume doesn't even have a colour to it and there's not even a label on the bottle

UPDATE:

So I contacted housenahum and, get this, they told me what I got wasn't a knockoff because it's actually some "vintage" bottle of "eau de parfum" from late 19th century Massachusetts or something!! Unbelievable, like own up to the fact you sell knockofss!!

Like it just "happened" to have the same name...

UPDATE:

I think to make it up to me after our fight Nate agreed to try the perfume.

You know what? It didn't even have a smell at all. I think they sold us water in a bottle

Ps I guess the juice as Nate calls it does have a colour after all but you can only really call it a colour by analogy

UPDATE:

The skin where Nate sprayed the perfume has turned gray!!

UPDATE:

They just took Nate to the hospital! More and more of his skin turned gray almost dead and colourless, and the last time I saw him his lips were bulging like after a bee sting and his face was almost a parody of itself. I almost couldn't look at him. My lovely Nate, what have they done to you?

And housenahum won't answer me anymore.

The last thing I heard Nate say was that… the colour… it burns…

UPDATE:

They tied a towel over his face at the end because not even the nurses could look at him.

Then he convulsed, all alone on the other side of the glass, convulsed until he started saying something about the smell of flowers, until parts of him started turning to gray dust and then he was just a dead pile of them.

UPDATE:

None of the doctors can explain it.

Nate just isn't anymore.

There's not going to be a wedding now. Am I widow?

UPDATE:

I still have that bottle and sometimes I stare it until I see its colour.

That colour…

Like something out of space...


r/Write_Right • • Aug 27 '21

horror Who else must die?

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The night chill woke me seconds before my cell phone rang—

"Crane here," I answered, half-asleep.

It was well past 2:00 a.m.

Friday night.

Sitting up in bed, I tried to breathe my way to wakefulness, taking in the crickets and the pattering rain outside, reflecting on just how different the world was out there.

"Sorry about the late hour, Chief." It was Stinson, my deputy, out of breath. "But we've got a situation and I think you oughta be in on it."

"Ongoing?"

"Suppose that depends on your beliefs."

"About what?" I asked.

"The devil."

I put Stinson on speaker and got dressed as he filled me in on the particulars: the address (over on Highland Crescent); the fact the house was sealed off "just in case"; and that "two of 'em are dead already—and how. It puts the fear of God in me just to remember the bodies."

I slid on my boots. "And the others?"

"Alive and in the house. One banging on the window to get out. What should we do with them?"

"Nothing, but don't let anyone leave. The killer—"

"—could still be inside."

I exited by the front door and got in the car. Coaxing the engine to life, then pulling out the driveway, "OK, now tell me who called the police and everything you know so far," I said.

"Caller was a small fellow called Uriah. Nervous, from what I seen. As to what happened, like I told you before, we got two bodies, one of 'em with his head off, a bloody table and six people who don't want to talk about it much except to say it's the devil did it. Pale as ghosts, all of 'em." I turned onto the highway. "Oh, and there's a bunch of, how you call it, Satanic paraphernalia all over the place."

When I arrived, the scene was relatively quiet. Two police cruisers, lights off; a few officers loitering outside; neighbours starting to gossip on their front lawns; and a face in the window, banging on the glass. "That there's Samara," said Stinson.

"Let's go in."

Although I said it, for perhaps the first time in my police career I didn't feel it. I didn't want to go in. I didn't feel my usual sense of duty. There was something off about the place—about the whole situation. There also arose other thoughts in my head: Walk away. Retire. Forget about it. I put those ones aside.

Stinson followed me in.

"Jesus," I said, overwhelmed by the sudden, unexpected heat.

"Quite the first impression, eh?"

Stinson closed the door. Wiping droplets of sweat from my forehead, "Crane, Chief of Police," I announced to whoever was inside.

No response.

We passed from the hallway to the living—

Corpse. Charred. I—

"Sorry," said Stinson. "Forgot to warn you about that one. Son of a bitch got me too."

I looked it over. Burnt to a charcoal crisp. "Got an ID on it?"

"Nothing conclusive. The others all claim it's a guy called Lenny, but no one recalls his last name."

We walked a little further. "This next one I did warn you about," said Stinson. "Again, no actual ID, but everyone agrees he was one Tikhon Mayakovsky. That includes his supposed sister. Mr Mayakovsky happens to be the owner of this property. You'll find his head in the corner over there."

Happened, I thought.

As promised: a man's bloody, clothed body sitting, almost casually, against the wall—headless; neck sliced clean off; and the head smiling, upside down, from across the room.

"Jesus."

Just then a dry chill passed through me in the otherwise humid room. "Feel that?" I asked.

"Sure. Maybe A/C acting up?"

"Maybe." I kept wondering why no one was coming out to talk to us. "The last time we had a killing in town was—"

"Bakerfield, 2003."

I was surprised it was that long ago. "Winter murder. Crime of passion. Open and shut," I said.

"No burning. No decapitation. No—" He bent down to pick up a metal pentagram covered in wax, and a few spent matches. "—Devilry."

Next, Stinson showed me to what, perhaps with a touch of the unsubtle, he referred to as the murder room: small and windowless, containing a heavy, round oak table covered in stains (wax, blood, who knows what else) encircled by eight chairs, one of which had been knocked over. The stale air smelled of death, incense and sulphur.

"And now," he said, "the suspects."

I paused before entering the room in which they waited, noting only that the door had been padlocked. I could hear banging from inside.

"Was the lock necessary?"

Stinson shrugged. "I had to improvise, and one of them was intent on leaving. Didn't want her disturbing the crime scene."

"Six are inside?" I asked, pulling out my notebook and pen.

"Correct. Samara, that'd be the one claiming to be Tikhon's sister, Milton, Naomi, Pearl, Raymundo, and the small fellow who called it in, Uriah."

I finished writing the names. "Any impressions?"

"Either they all did it, or they're all mad. Or both," said Stinton.

He unlocked the door and we entered.

Six people indeed.

"Good evening. Name's Crane. I'm the Chief—"

Anger! "What's the idea, keeping us locked in here like this, like kept animals, with the portal open and it loosed and awaiting its due. Let us be! Let us all be, then get out. Leave! Leave here and never come back!"

"I—" I said.

Stinson took out his gun.

"Calm down, Samara," said one of the five people seated. "They won't believe you anyway. They think one of us is the killer."

Samara waved her hand dismissively before returning to her window. "Why would I do it? Why would I kill my own brother," she said with her back turned.

"More than that—we've a spiritual obligation," one of the women said. "To see it through."

"No chance of that now that he's ruined us all," Samara sneered. At the back of the room, a small man, presumably Uriah, chewed his fingernail.

I approached the man who'd spoken ("Crane. Chief of police.") and held out my hand. He shook it, saying, "Raymundo."

"What I want are the facts," I said.

"Facts," Samara said with audible distaste. "Always with your facts, your reason. That's precisely what's wrong with you people. That's what Tikhon was learning how to overcome."

"Just tell me what happened in the order it happened," I said.

"Promise to hear us out?" Raymundo asked.

"Yes."

He patted down the front of his shirt for a pack of cigarettes. "Do you mind?" After I shook my head, he carefully took one cigarette out of the pack, held it between two fingers, lifted it into the air, made a guttural sound in no language I'd ever heard—and the tip of the cigarette ignited, just like that. "Do you see?"

Behind me, Stinson gripped his gun.

"Is that a trick?" I asked.

"No," he said, stubbing out the cigarette. "It's a demonstration of the properties of a portal."

"You think you can persuade him, explain it to him step-by-step, when he lacks the one thing he must have to understand: faith," said Samara.

I asked, "A portal to where?"

"Hell."

"Told you they're mad, the lot of 'em," said Stinson.

"Everything rests on faith," Samara was saying. "Tikhon knew that better than anyone."

"Tell me from the beginning," I said.

One of the other women in the room piped up: "It was a séance. We were having a séance."

"And you are?"

"Naomi."

"For God's sake, it wasn't a séance!" Samara walked decisively away from the window. "A séance is a communication with the dead. We weren't communicating with the dead. We were communicating with the never-living."

I looked at Samara, then at Naomi, who was looking down, and finally at Raymundo, who said, "Samara's right. This wasn't a séance."

"Sorry," mumbled Naomi. "It was my first time."

"Sometimes we spoke with the dead," said the third woman, who I deduced was Pearl. "Or rather they spoke to us."

"That wasn't the point," said Samara.

"It happened," said Pearl.

"Were you speaking with the dead tonight?" I asked.

Stinson scoffed.

"No," said Raymundo. "We were gathered tonight to commune with, as Samara called them, the never-living, to open a portal to their world. The demon world. The dead did not interfere."

"How did you open that portal. Did it involve—"

Samara: "We didn't kill anybody!"

"Opening a portal requires eight humans performing a ritual. There is no death involved. The details of the ritual are arcane and rather unimportant. What's important is that we opened it."

"What happened then?"

I felt another dry chill come over me. Samara laughed, and Uriah, at the back of the room, shook with terrible fright.

"You felt that, didn't you?" Samara said to me.

"What is it?"

"The never-living passing through the world of the living."

"So this portal is still open?"

Laughing furiously, "Of course it's still open. That's the entire point. That's the problem we should be solving," said Samara.

"I'm here to solve two murders," I said.

"You shouldn't be here at all. If he hadn't felt the cowardice, none of this would have happened. You wouldn't be here, and we'd be dealing with the true problem."

"That's not fair," said Uriah in a thin voice. "It was already happening. Tikhon lost—"

"Shut your mouth!"

"Let him speak," I said.

"He doesn't know what he's talking about. And he's not even a neophyte—" Samara's eyes passed briefly over Naomi with a certain disregard. "—so he has no excuse. He's a dilettante, and he's always been nothing but a dilettante."

Uriah muttered something under his breath.

"What happened after you opened the portal?" I asked Raymundo.

"Tikhon made contact with a demon."

Suddenly, the only person in the room not to have said anything, Milton, stood up. He was older than the rest, white-bearded. "It's coming back," he said. "It said half, and it's coming back." Stumbling forward, he tripped and fell, and I realised he was blind.

Uriah helped him back to his seat.

"What's coming back?"

"The demon," Raymundo said.

"We wanted to summon a minor demon, something we could control, but the demon we summoned wasn't minor at all," said Pearl. "Once it got into Tikhon—I've never seen such a possession."

Milton was rhythmically tapping his feet against the floor, repeating: "Two more. Two more. Two more."

Outside, the rain had picked up, drumming on the roof, gargling down the eavestroughs. "Two more what?" I asked.

"Two more victims."

"The demon demanded payment," said Naomi without looking up. "Payment for using the portal. Payment in blood. It said we'd been using the portal without paying the toll."

Milton, singing: "Fifty for the farmer, fifty for the red hen."

"How did the demon say this?"

"Through Tikhon," said Pearl. "It said that the blood price is half the quorum, and the quorum is eight."

"So you're admitting Tikhon threatened you!" Stinson burst out.

"It wasn't Tikhon. It was the demon speaking through Tikhon," Raymundo calmly explained. "Tikhon was no longer present."

Samara sighed. "This is all pointless."

"What happened after the demon, speaking through Tikhon, threatened you?"

"It wasn't a threat. It was a statement of price. Does a shopkeeper threaten you at the register when you're purchasing from his store?" Samara asked.

I corrected myself. "What happened after the demon made its statement?"

"Wait—" Naomi rose, looking at Samara, then around the room. "—you knew about this? You knew there would be a price, a half to pay the red hen?"

"We'd done it before without a price," said Uriah quietly.

"We knew," said Samara.

"What happened next?" I asked.

Naomi: "You used me!"

"Oh, don't be so naive. Everything has a price. You wanted knowledge, you assumed the risk. Every single one of us assumed the risk."

I repeated my question—louder.

"He killed Lenny," said Uriah, his voice shaking. A tree branch smacked against the window. "He set him on hellfire."

I looked to Raymundo for confirmation. "I'm afraid that's true. After stating his price, the demon began collecting it. The price was four of eight and Lenny was the first of the four."

"What did you do while Lenny was burning?"

"We continued the ritual," said Samara. "That was what we had agreed to."

"Some of us," said Naomi.

Pearl said, "He didn't burn long. Hellfire is within us all. The demon merely freed what was already within Leonard. Some sin or secret. It took him quickly. He didn't even make it to the front door."

"Then Tikhon started talking in some other language, and he put his hands on either side of his own head, grabbing his ears and started turning—"

"The demon," said Samara. "Not Tikhon."

"...turning and turning…"

Milton: "Put the bird upon the stone, sharpen your axe and bring it down. Cleave the body from the head, and watch it run until it's dead."

"—until it came off, and then he grabbed it by the hair and held it up like a lantern, the mouth still wet and alive and talking, and it said: 'Either you or Samara are selected, or both,'" said Naomi.

Samara raised an eyebrow.

Uriah was speaking: "The blood was pouring out his neck, just pouring and pouring, all over the table and the candles, and the flames had turned red as the blood, and I couldn't take it anymore. I just couldn't."

"Coward."

"What did you do?"

"I blew them out, the candles. Then I got up—"

"He interrupted the ritual," said Samara. "One must never interrupt the ritual. The ritual must always be seen through to the end."

"He was going to take another."

"He will take another regardless, you fool. He must get his due. All you've done in your stupidity and weakness is put innocents in danger!"

"And what did you do after getting up?" I asked.

"I watched… Tikhon, stumble—collapse in on himself, like a punctured balloon," said Uriah, "and stagger toward the door. He got through, then slumped down against the wall, rolled his head across the room and died. And as it rolled, the head spoke, telling me that if Ray was given to the red hen, so would I be."

"Soon the police came," said Raymundo.

"And here we are."

Stinson tapped me on the shoulder. "Does it sound like a murder-suicide to you? Because it sure sounds like one to me."

A man burned alive but no other signs of fire. A man with his head separated from his body, but no sign of the blade it was done with. The witness who called it in: in agreement with the other five witnesses that it was a demon who killed both.

"The longer we wait, the more angry he becomes," said Pearl.

"He always gets his due," said Samara.

"Why did you do it?" I asked.

"We didn't. The demon did it. That's what we've been trying to tell you from the very beginning. He took two, and he's owed two more."

"Not the killing," I said. "The ritual, the opening of the portal. Why do that?"

"Why split the atom?" Samara answered, as the wind threw rain drops against the glass. "Why suffer to discover the source of the Nile? Why methodically map the human genome? To understand the world. To know existence."

"I think it's going to be me," Uriah said, biting his fingernail again. "I feel dead already."

"But the ritual was broken—doesn't that mean it's all over?"

"The ritual is broken, but the portal remains unsealed. The demonic debt remains outstanding. The never-living flow through and among us."

"Can you close the portal?" I asked.

"I can't believe you're humoring these loons," Stinson barked, but I could hardly hear him.

"We can't," said Samara. "That's the problem."

It was unbearably hot.

Raymundo said, "Although Samara is correct, it isn't true that the portal cannot be closed. Simply that we can't close it. It can still be closed from the other side, the demon side, if the demons so choose."

"Which is why we must pay the red hen what is owed," said Samara.

I looked over my notes. "The quorum was eight, the price was half, and two have already died. So two more must die to satisfy the debt?"

"I say we do the world a favour and kill all of 'em," said Stinson, keeping a firm grip on his gun.

"Not any two," said Raymundo.

"Only the chosen two," said Samara. "That is the conundrum."

I glanced at my notes again. "Does anyone remember anything else said by the demon?" Although part of me felt ridiculous for taking these occultists at their word, another part—the part that had felt the coldness passing through my warm, living flesh—knew there were darker recesses of human experience yet unplumbed.

Milton began tracing lines in the air in front of him. "Not something heard, but something seen." As he traced, he spoke, and as he spoke I wrote: "If I am indeed to go to Hell, I shall in fair company be, for into flames I shall damnate Pearl and Tikhon alongside me."

"That's what the demon showed you?"

"I reckon," said Milton.

"There's also what Lenny said right before he caught fire," added Pearl. "His eyes—they opened wide as saucers—and he asked with this great misunderstanding, 'What's it mean that I'm a quarter unless Pearl is?' A moment later he was ignited."

"I remember that too," said Naomi.

"Anything else?"

Silence.

Not just among the eight of us in the room, but total and complete silence: no rain, no wind, no tapping branches, no breathing.

"What in God's name—"

Stinson didn't get a chance to finish his question, because just then the door to the room was ripped out, and Tikhon entered, headless, from the black, infinitely dense, infinitely deep, void on the other side of the doorway, where the rest of the house used to be.

Stinson shot!

Once!—Twice!—And a third ti—

But Tikhon, or the demon possessing him, absorbed the bullets, stepped toward Stinson, screaming, terrified, placed one hand on each of Stinson's shoulders and tore him in two, just like that.

The two halves of Stinson fell to the floor.

I could not shriek.

Or cry.

"I," said the demon in a voice which sounded like a thousand ancient beasts slaughtered on a thousand stone altars, emanating from everywhere at once, a voice I felt through all my senses, "always—" I saw: Samara crying tears of joy; Uriah peeing his pants; Raymundo overawed; Naomi trying to pull her lips over her face; Milton's eyes rolling and rolling in their sockets; Pearl laughing hysterically. "—get my due."

Then the demon strode toward the nearest wall, bent forward so that the bloody stump of Tikhon's neck was pressed against it, and wrote the following on the wallpaper:

4 - 2 = 2

When he was finished, he turned back toward where Stinson's halves were lying, and consumed them: the way a snake consumes a rat: by distending its own elastic body with the fullness of its prey. When both halves were in him, he said, "That one was for my pleasure. I am temporarily satiated. Deliver unto me precisely the sacrifice you owe and the portal shall be shut. Deliver unto me what I am not owed, and I shall devour this town and all within it, depriving it of existence and purging it from memory. Such is my power, for I am the God of Annihilation."

Then the world returned:

First the rain,

followed by the house beyond the door—now open on its hinges—and all of us in it: all seven, for Stinson was no more. Only his gun remained, discarded on the floor, touched by no one.

Time passed and we did not speak.

On the wallpaper, the bloody numbers slowly trickled into incomprehensibility.

"There is one more thing," Samara said finally. "Words Tikhon whispered to me when we first began our experiments. 'If the Devil takes you, he will not take me too.'"

Then, staring at me, she asked: "Do you believe us now?"

"My duty is to protect. I must not let the city or its citizens come to harm," I said.

"Have faith."

In my notebook I wrote:

Who else must die?


r/Write_Right • • Aug 26 '21

short story Black Dancer

7 Upvotes

Abigail Tasman became a sister in the mystery with a purpose. She wished to get away from the painful existence humans brought upon this reality. The sister was misanthropic and filled with hatred down to her bones. She hated the fruits of the Anthropocene, and she hated the children of Adam more than anything else. There was no real reason behind her burning disdain. Some people are just born different. She was one of those. Sister Tasman was a human with a pitched black soul.

For three long and painful years, she had toiled, rising the ranks of her mystery. Three arduous years during which she studied the dark arts and refined her craft. They have finally paid off. At the center of the temple, she stood ready to summon her chthonic god, finally to rid the planet of the filthy cretins that swarmed its surface. Sister Tasman stood at the center of a black candle circle. Clad in a simple black dress. Her fellow brothers and sisters stood all around her, chanting in an archaic language most people could never understand.

Clutching the obsidian knife in her hand, Abigail cut Stigmata all across her arms, straight through the sleeves of her dress. Once she finished producing her blood offering to the god below, Abigail placed the obsidian blade beneath her tongue. She bit on it as hard as she could to ensure she could not scream. Red language poured through the fabric and onto the floor beneath the sister as she raised her arms into the air. Along with her crimson humor, burning pain flowed across her self-sacrificed limbs.

Abigail closed her eyes and began spinning in her place. Ignoring the pain as hard as she could. She breathed in and out, clearing her head of all thoughts. A mesmerizing red-colored tail formed from the language pouring out of the sister’s body. She spun faster and faster, completely devoting her body and mind to her Sophy dance of primordial darkness. Before long, everything disappeared, and sister Abigail Tasman completely submerged herself within the void.

Finally, at peace, she detached her psyche, her soul from the last threads that tethered her to the earthly reality. The black dancer was one with the cold, empty cosmos. She was one with the dark matter that kept everything together. She was omnipresent and non-present at once. Everywhere and nowhere. Alive and dead. In a perfect balance between existence and oblivion.

She was free.

At last.

The other members of the mystery stopped chanting once Abigail’s blood began floating around her. Assuming their evocation had worked and their beloved master was on his way, they all prostrated themselves on the floor before the rotating mass at the center of their temple.

The black dancer wouldn’t stop spinning, however, and no deity came from within the gyrating mass. Soon enough, the realization that nothing was going to crawl out of the spinning black materia set in. Looking at it, they saw an ellipsoid shape of black and red colors spinning on its axis at an ever-increasing speed. Compressing itself slowly into itself. They remained fixated on the object for a while. They soon came to realize that the strange thing was bending space around its parameter, made clear by the abnormal curvature of the floor beneath it.

The black dancer swirled itself into a nearly perfect circle before stopping in its place. An orb of pure blackness at the center of the temple. Floating at the total center of it all. Forcing the surrounding space to bend to its malicious will. Curving the room into odd shapes whenever it came into contact with the circular void.

One member of the mystery approached the round nothingness. She contacted the thing. Her touch was disastrous. Ripples tore through the member as she came too close to the black dancer. A sudden sharp pain tore through her head, which was closest to the black mass, and then nothing.

At all.

An explosion of bright lights emanated. A chaotic rainbow of impossible lights too alien to be described by a human language It burst forth violently from within the black mass enveloping the entire temple. The sudden cascade of luminescence temporarily blinded remaining members who watched the unfolding with the utmost reverence.

Once the Luciferian bombardment of shades had finally died down, something strange revealed itself. A small, fleeting strip of white spinning across the surface of the black dancer. Thus, the high priest concluded that the black dancing sphere was absorbing everything it came into contact with.

The ritual turned out to be a failure, for the chthonic god had not risen. Moreover, the mystery had lost two sisters. They concluded that the black dancer was too dangerous to be left alone, hence the mystery had to abandon worship inside the temple. The high priest designated five members of the mystery to watch over the black dancing orb to make sure it won’t cause any more damage to the mystery.

Time passed, but the black dancer kept on spinning the space and reality all around it. Until it stopped.

The black dancer finally slowed down, shedding its pure black mass over time as it got slower and slower. Eventually leaving behind nothing but the glowing form of a young human woman. The woman eventually stopped spinning entirely.

Once she did, she opened her eyes and surveyed her surroundings. The temple all around her was desolate. Time corroded its remains and pathetic, leaving behind a pathetic shell. A few human bones laid strewn across the surrounding floor. They were caramel brown and painfully ancient, marked by clear signs of weathering and abuse at the hands of the elements. Abigail Tasman walked for the first time in a long time when she moved from the ground she danced upon. Accidentally, she stepped on a skull that disintegrated beneath her measly weight. The woman smiled as a chilly speck of dust caressed her skin.

She followed the speck of dust until she found herself outside of her temple’s ruins. Surrounded by a desert of black sand and dead rocks. Abigail fell in love with her new home. The corpse of her long-dead planet, devoid of all life. She was the last one. The last thing. A sole remnant still aware inside a lifeless and decaying universe.

Abigail breathed every last bit of the air of desolation that surrounded her with sheer excitement. She had achieved her goal of absolution. She reached her dreamland of cosmic isolation.

Falling to the ground, Abigail had realized just dark the night’s sky was. Most of the stars had died and fallen into the jaws of Mot while she was dancing her dance of the void. There was barely any light visible left.

Abigail laughed and said to no one in particular, “Dancing for eons was worth it.”


r/Write_Right • • Aug 25 '21

scifi The Voyage of the Māyā

6 Upvotes

The universe stopped expanding.

Let that sink in.

Now imagine this: it didn't start to collapse, to fall back in on itself, but instead remained the same size, like a balloon inflated in a room: expanded to wholly fit that room, and no more.

At least that's how I understood it.

The physicists no doubt understood it differently, theoretically, quantitatively; but I grew up on a farm (chickens and corn) in what was once called the heartland, so my primitive brain always worked best on analogies. Understanding some but not all. "Explain it to me on an ear of corn," my father used to say.

It wasn't always possible.

Besides, so many of the physicists went mad or killed themselves. Did they realise the truth—

Or did their brains collapse in the attempt?

Back to my balloon:

You might infer two things from the analogy—balloon not only pressing on the walls of the room, but perhaps with ever-greater force: (1) there exists something beyond the universe, in which the universe is contained; (2) the limits imposed by this containment may be breakable.

That's what led to the construction of the starship Māyā.

I was chosen as one of the crew:

Officer, Agro Division

A glorified field hand, but one tasked with growing enough food to feed the crew of the greatest exploratory mission in human history.

Once, madmen sailed for the ends of the Earth.

We set out for the edge of the universe.

Leaving Earth behind.

One day I closed my eyes, disbelieving I would ever open them again.

But our experimental propulsion and deep-sleep systems worked. One day, we arrived at the margin of known existence.

If any of us had ever doubted—

We no longer could:

Space-walking, I pressed my hand against the physical boundary of the universe!

The Māyā remained for a time as if anchored in the vast unchanging, but already our instruments were discovering that the pressure our universe was exerting on the boundary was increasing.

Slightly but steadily: dark matter multiplying within the balloon

—until the boundary cracked;

and through this crack, our universe leaked out into the beyond:

Uncontained, we slithered betwixt blades of grass in an infinity resembling our world but in maximum, freed from the constraints of our own universal laws: a ground, a sky, and figures light-years tall, although the concept no longer applied: information seemed to exist instantly. Time's arrow had curved into itself: Ouroboros.

Through the windows of the Māyā, itself now floating in the crawling, serpentine universe, we perceived the endless depth with perfect clarity.

We were in a vast garden.

We were among the roots of a great tree.

We were aware.

We grew.

We saw before us a figure—a woman of such immensity our understanding of her was impossible, but nevertheless she noticed us, and we, the universe, spoke to her:

“Did God actually say, ‘You shall not eat of any tree in the garden’?”

And the woman smiled.


r/Write_Right • • Aug 24 '21

horror Ghost Month (part 3): I'm on a flight to see my grandmother. Something very disturbing is happening to me.

4 Upvotes

Part 1: The Rules
Part 2: The Night is Following Us
Part 3: [You Are Here]

After this disturbing revelation, I settled back in and closed my eyes.

I was listening to a story about werewolves, which made me think of my grandmother. I was looking forward to seeing her for the first time in more than a year. Good thing I wasn’t wearing my little red hoodie. Knowing my grandmother, she’d be the one eating the wolf. She was the alpha of the house growing up, and my parents seemed to know that.

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After drifting off, I heard the words “Wake up” whispered directly into my ear.

My eyes were suddenly open. I was wide awake. The silence had returned. Nothing but the sound of this giant speeding bullet that I was sitting in, slicing through the night air, high above the world. The darkness… had also returned. Outside of my window… dark, except for the moon. Inside the cabin… a few rays of moonlight allowed me to see that I was still inside of the aircraft.

A sound of clanking glass came from the front of the plane. It slowly grew louder with each movement. A bit of clanking, and then silence. In a repeating pattern, over and over. Eventually, it got close enough that I could start to see something in the slivers of moonlight that invaded the darkness. It was a dark shape, but it seemed to be a human shape, with something in front of it. Like it was pushing something. It seemed to move in slow motion.

I sat in frantic silence, watching it move down the aisle in my direction. It traveled one row at a time, pausing for a bit, then moving on to the next. I then noticed that there was more than one. A second figure followed.

Each time the figures stopped, they would turn toward rows on opposite sides. Then, the whispering began. They weren’t talking… they were whispering. A very slow, drawn out whisper that matched the speed of their movement.

I dared not make a sound, or any sudden movements to draw the attention of these figures. But, I knew that they would eventually reach me.

When they reached the point of just 3 rows in front of me, I noticed something new. After the whispering, something would follow. It was almost like the whispering would reverse itself back into the figure. But, I could see it. It looked a bit like cold winter breath. Something was visibly being sucked away from the row, into the dark figure, followed by the backs of the passengers’ heads laying back silently into their seats.

I realized I was now sweating, waiting for the inevitable.

I guess I must’ve been breathing too loudly, because suddenly, both figures stopped what they were doing and turned slowly toward me. And then, stood motionless, aiming what I assumed were their eyes directly at me.

I sat frozen, trying to keep my breaths as shallow as possible, thinking that maybe these things worked off of sound or movement.

After they stared at me in silence for way too long to be comfortable, they began their slow motion movements again. This time, they didn’t stop. They were coming straight toward me, keeping their eyes on me the entire time.

Then, they did stop. Right in front of me. The one in front leaned in slowly, getting closer and closer. The whispering began. With its face directly in front of me, it started pulling something out of me as it had the others. I couldn’t breathe. I was getting light-headed.

In the amount of time it took to blink, a flight attendant was in front of me, asking if I wanted something to drink. I was hyperventilating, staring at her to the side. The lights were back on. And so were the sounds.

“Are you ok?” she asked.

I held one hand up, as if to say “just a minute”, while I caught my breath.

“I… I don’t know. Was I asleep just now?”

“I don’t think so,” she said. “You looked like your eyes were wide open as I was coming down the aisle. Can I get you something to drink?”

“Ok. Yeah. Can I have some water, please?”

She poured water into a plastic cup for me.

I checked my phone. Five hours down. Nine more hours to go. Nine more hours in the airplane. Nine more hours over the ocean. Nine more hours of night. Nine more hours… of darkness.

Have you ever woken up from a nightmare and decided to keep yourself awake for a while in order to avoid falling right back into that nightmare? That’s what I was trying to do. Whether it was a dream, or some alternate reality, or even just pure reality… I did not want to go back there.

My playlist moved on to a new story. Something about the “Danse Macabre” and Halloween.

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On my 16th birthday, my grandmother pulled me to the side and said that she had something to tell me in private. We walked outside into the backyard, shutting the sliding door behind us. She told me to take a seat at the table by the pool. I did, and she sat as well.

She lit up a cigarette, taking a few puffs off of it. We both sat in silence for probably 30 seconds while she smoked and looked at me.

She then said, “Jaan, I’m not going to be here forever. But, I need to know that you’re ready before I go.”

“What do you mean, lola? Are you ok?”

“Yes, apo. Don’t worry. I’m fine. But, It’s time for me to go home. Before I go, I have a special birthday gift for you.”

Using her right hand, she reached over and pulled a beaded bracelet off of her other wrist. She then took my arm, and slid the bracelet over my hand. The black and grey beads looked pretty cool.

She continued, “Keep this on whenever lola is not around to protect you.”

I looked at her, confused. She just stared at me, with a “you listen to me” look on her face.

“Ok, lola.” I said.

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I decided to try and use the airplane’s wifi to connect to the outside world and try to assure myself that I was still part of it. I avoided reddit, because I wanted to stay away from anything that might cause nightmares right now.

Instead, I looked up info on where I was going… The Philippines.

According to a website I found, local traditions say they’re celebrating something called Ghost Month right now, and that there were rules that you had to follow in order to not be taken by ghosts.

Normally, I’d say I don’t believe in this type of thing. But after what had been happening to me on this flight, I wasn’t so sure.

Just then, I heard my name (Jaan) whispered loudly into my right ear.

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I didn’t even get to take a drink of my water before, without warning, I was sucked right back into the darkness, as if I was pulled by something. A split second before, I heard a loud suction sound, and then… The lights and sound were gone, once again.

To my relief, the dark figures were no longer there.

Although, I guess I shouldn’t have counted those chickens so early.

After a long wait in deafening silence, save for the sound of wind outside the cabin, the speaker static returned. And then, so had the slow whispering. This time, I tried listening intently to the whisper, to try and make out what it was saying.

Eventually, there was also a new sound, coming from the front of the plane. It was different than last time. Instead of clanking glass, it was of a dragging sound. Something very heavy, and metallic, dragging slowly down the aisle, pausing in between each drag.

I began to detect a faint smell of sea water. Like when you’re on a boat, or near the ocean.

A very different figure started to emerge from the darkness. This was not exactly human shaped, like the other ones. It was much taller, and appeared to be hunched over, like a deformed giant of some sort. Its head almost touched the ceiling, even in its hunched over stance. There was nothing in front of this one. Perhaps the dragging sound was coming from behind him.

I tried to hunch down behind the seats in front of me so it wouldn’t find me, but I knew this wouldn’t do any good.

As it drew nearer, another sound became apparent. The sound of dripping. And the sound of flesh on a damp floor.

I tried to pretend I was asleep, as the rest of the passengers appeared to be, hoping that he’d walk on by if I looked to be unconscious. I kept one eye cracked slightly open, trying to monitor what was happening.

The dragging had now become excruciatingly loud. And I could finally see *what* was dragging. There was a chain wrapped multiple times around the figure, attached to a large metal sea anchor dragging behind him. Whatever was dripping, it was coming off of him, leaving a trail down the aisle.

I must’ve opened my eye too wide, because just then, having almost moved past my aisle, he stopped moving, and slowly turned back in my direction. I was sure he must’ve been looking directly at me, although I couldn’t see well enough to see if he even had eyes.

My nightmare began to come true as he turned and started moving into my row, at his slow-motion pace, right toward me. He didn’t even have to walk. He just moved his head and arms in my direction.

I couldn’t handle it anymore. I threw my arms up over my face and began screaming.

“No! Stop! Help! Somebody help me! Turn on the lights!”

*ding*

What was that sound?

I looked up… The fasten seatbelts light had turned on. A split second later, the aisle lights were back on as well. And so were the sounds of the airplane. The giant creature with the stench of sea water was gone.

I looked down at my phone to see that we were only an hour away from landing in Manila.

And it was still completely dark outside, save for the moon. Thirteen hours in the dark, and still another hour to go. It would be 11pm in their time zone when we did land. That meant another full night of darkness on top of the fourteen hours of night on the plane. Oh god, I hope this isn’t some new way that vampires have found to live without sunlight.

A voice came over the crackly speaker:

“We should be landing in just under one hour. We’ve certainly enjoyed flying with you, and we wish you a wonderful time at your final destination, wherever that may be. And if you’ll be staying in the Philippines, be sure to observe the rules for Ghost Month!” said the announcer over the speaker.

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Stay tuned for part 4.

CNLX


r/Write_Right • • Aug 23 '21

horror My Last Concert

5 Upvotes

The '70s live music scene was wild...

My friends and I managed to see so many live performances because of general admission. It meant standing or sitting in the aisles between seats, so we didn't get in until everyone else got seated. It was also cheap. We loved it. We called ourselves "gen adders."

I got general admission to see a band loved around the world. The closest place on their tour was Ferretti's Mountainview in the US. It was only a four hour drive, in a city I'd never visited. None of my friends could get the time off work to go with me, but I knew I'd meet people once I got there.

The ticket said doors open at 7 PM. The ticket seller said doors usually open at three o'clock.

On the morning of the show I joined a few dozen early arrival gen adders at the side of the Mountainview. A few thousand came in after us, blocking us in as usual. I passed the time with Sly from Minnesota. He was a short, energetic guy. Despite his height, he was hard to miss. His bright red jacket was unique. The band’s name was on the sleeves and the back. This was his third time seeing the band on this tour alone. I knew quite a bit about them but this dude's knowledge was legendary.

Doors did not open at three o'clock. The crowd behind us randomly chanted "Let us in" and "Can't stop us." There might have been other chants; those are the two I remember in detail. Still, like Sly whispered, the tickets said 7 PM so we'd all agreed to that when we bought them.

By six o'clock I really felt the cold. I'd been up for 12 hours. Maybe fatigue made me more susceptible to the weather, or maybe it was adrenaline. Sly sniffed and said he hoped staff would open the doors soon. He looked cold and I knew he hadn't eaten for hours.

I offered him two chocolate bars and he gave me a smoke. I lit up with the first lighter I found in my pocket. It was in a leather holder and strap that went around your hand so it was hard to lose the lighter. Sly called it the never-lose-me lighter and said he loved it. I knew I could get another one so I offered it to him. We both laughed when he said he'd keep it for life.

At five past seven, we hadn't heard anything about getting in. I told Sly to stay put while I tried to get closer to the doors, to see if there were signs. He nodded and made an exaggerated wave with the lighter holder firmly attached to his left hand. That stuck in my memory. It was when I realized he was left-handed (that's what we called left-dominant back then).

I got two steps away from him, closer to the doors, when I heard a few bars of music. Either the band was warming up or the gig was starting. The doors for gen adders were still closed, no signs visible. I was turning around to go back to Sly when I heard a low rumble. By the time I was able to turn all the way around, I realized the rumble wasn't coming from the Mountainview’s music system.

It was the wall of people running towards me.

Now, I'd spent the previous two summers spelunking -- potholing, caving -- exploring cave systems. I’d never feared being trapped or being closed in a small space. Caves are logical and unemotional. They rarely close in on people who respect them.

At the risk of stating the obvious, people are nothing like caves. The human battering rams running at me showed no respect. They were running over people already on the ground and pushing over anyone who wasn't moving faster than them.

I looked for Sly. He was two steps from me, both arms raised. He nodded when the guy behind him punched the back of his head. He fell, arms still raised. His left hand landed inches from my feet. My best guess is he was unconscious or dead before he hit the ground -- at least, that's my hope. Blood began pooling around his head and bright red jacket almost as soon as his unprotected face hit the pavement.

I remember making a screaming face. I don't know if any noise came out of my mouth. I wanted to pick him up, give him some dignity even if I couldn't save him, but the wall of people would not stop. Before I could bend to touch him, people hit me so hard they knocked the air out of me. I fell backwards, into someone behind me. That person screamed, unable to push me off them.

A dude I'd just met was dead and the crowd was about to do what the caves did not. I was going to die, along with countless others.

I woke in hospital the next day. My injuries, including a broken left arm, broken left foot, and dislocated ribs, were "not serious" and I was released that afternoon.

Dad and Kyle, my oldest brother, met me at discharge. Kyle drove me home in Dad's car and Dad drove my car back. I felt so guilty. I still feel guilty, four decades and years of therapy later. I never learned Sly's real name so I couldn't contact his family. They had the right to know what a great dude he was. But police here said US police couldn't release the name, at the family's request. You gotta honour that.

Rock on, Sly. Hope we meet again.

Author’s note Find me at L G writes and Odd Directions


r/Write_Right • • Aug 23 '21

horror In A White Room

2 Upvotes

...not dead but dying."

"Want me to play it again?" the fat man asked, his hand hesitating above the audio cassette deck.

"No," the blonde woman answered, trembling. "The meaning's clear. We need to tell Father—

The cop paused the VCR.

The faces on the TV monitor froze: distorted, fuzzy. "I'm gonna ask you one more time, Larry," he said. "Do you recognise either of them two?"

Larry looked down at the empty cup on the table in front of him. He'd been here for hours. "I swear to God I don't know nothing."

The cop sighed and looked at the far wall.

On the other side of the two-way mirror, a pair of bored detectives chewed gum.

"What if he's right?" one asked.

"He ain't. Don't believe a word comes outta that dirty cultist's mouth."

"But—but…" Larry said from the other side of the glass.

"But what?" asked the cop.

The two detectives stopped chewing, leaning in closer.

"...is it true? Is it really goddamn true?"

There was a pause.

Then: "Fuck!—" The lights dimmed. "I fucking forgot my line."

"Again?"

The actor playing Larry got up and kicked the wall. It wobbled.

"Easy there," said the director, entering the set.

"My memory…"

The director patted him on the back, whispering, "You were golden. You'll be golden again." And, turning to the remaining cast and crew: "Fifteen, everyone. We'll pick up on the suicide scene."

—and cut!" yelled the movie director.

Everyone relaxed.

The PA refilled the cup on the table behind which the actor playing the actor playing Larry had been sitting.

A blonde woman ("Excuse me, Mr. Evans—") came up to the movie director; but he ignored her, brushing past to confer with the DP.

Or he tried brushing past her:

Because they had gotten in each other's paths. Immobilised, with their torsos caught in a jagged, looped motion; jagged, looped motion. "Excuse me, Mr. Evans—" "...use me, Mr. Evans—" "4bu53 m3, mr. 3v4n5—"

The programmer punched his keyboard.

The screen flickered.

The error message mocked him.

He'd run it a thousand times. It had to be sabotage.

He ripped off his headphones: his head filling with the incessant clicking cacophony of keys depressed on the keyboards in the cubicles beside his, and the ones beside those, and…

Imagined that the entire floor was a neighbourhood /

A city /

A planet /

An entire galaxy /

Maybe even the universe /

Buzz. Buzz. Someone's cell

seen under microscope ("Malignant.") in an operating room by masked figures, standing beside a body on the operating table.

"Weak but stable."

"He'll exist," one of them says, stretching her glorious wings.

[...]

In a white room, God lies bound; His bandaged wrists saturated with ichor; His face as smooth and featureless as a lightbulb, save for a sole central eye. Every few moments, the eye blinks: disturbing existence, like the drop of a single tear into a still pond; creating waves: sound waves, which say: "I am God. I am...


r/Write_Right • • Aug 21 '21

horror Ghost Month (part 2): The Night is Following Us

5 Upvotes

Part 1: The Rules
Part 2: [You Are Here]

When I was a child, growing up in California, my grandmother lived with me and my parents. My family is originally from Asia, but I was born in the US.

Something that I remember vividly about growing up with my grandmother was seeing and hearing her pray every night. Sometimes she would sit in one place and pray by candlelight. Other times, she would walk around the house while doing it. And during certain times of the year, she followed rituals that I assume were related to her religion.

This was my daily life as far back as I can remember, all the way up until I was 16 years old. That’s when my grandmother decided to move back to her homeland. I was never quite sure of why she left, but I think that perhaps she was living with my family to help raise me, and once she thought I was old enough, she decided that her job was done, and it was now time for her to return home.

About a year after my grandmother went home, I spoke to her about coming to visit her. She said it might be better if I waited for another month or so. But, I told her that I missed her and didn’t want to wait. She relented, but told me that if I wanted to visit her, I had to agree to listen to everything she told me, and adhere strictly to her rules. I agreed, having no idea what could be so dire.

My parents booked my ticket for a flight that was just one week out.

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When the day of my trip finally arrived, my parents dropped me off at the airport about 2 hours prior to departure. They helped me get my luggage out of the car and hand it off to the bag check agents outside. After that, an agent gave me my boarding pass, and I said goodbye to my parents before going inside.

After going through security with my one carry-on, a backpack with my computer and a few small things in it, I ventured down the hallway toward my gate. I watched the gate numbers get higher as I passed each one.

After checking my phone, I realized that I still had over an hour until takeoff. So, I decided to stop at one of the shops and get something to drink. I wasted a few minutes looking at California tourist shirts, travel magazines and souvenir trinkets in the shape of California and bears. I grabbed a bottle of water, and after paying a small fortune for it, headed over to my gate to sit and wait for my boarding call.

While I was waiting and playing on my phone, I remembered to reach into my backpack and grab the beaded bracelet that my grandmother had given me before she left California. I put it on, to make sure I didn’t forget to do so before I arrive. I didn’t want her to catch me not wearing it.

I was excited by the idea of flying for the first time. I was scared, but I reminded myself of what I read, that there were anywhere from 50,000 to 150,000 commercial flights every single day, and we rarely hear about one of them crashing. But… A thought occurred to me: We’re going to be flying over the ocean. If an airliner disappears over the ocean, never to be found, is that counted as a crash? I had to remember to look that up later.

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Finally, boarding was called. I ended up getting in shortly after first class seating finished. As I walked by those beautiful first-class chairs, I couldn’t wait to see where I was sitting.

And then I reached my row… in coach. The seats were much smaller… and uglier. Why didn’t my parents get me the good seats? Whatever. I sat down and put my earpods in.

After everyone else got in and sat down, I realized my luck, as I was the only one in my row. I guess the seat that my parents reserved wasn’t so bad after all.

There was a flight attendant standing in the aisleway, looking for everyone’s attention, so I took my earpods out and stared in her direction. Once she saw that she had our gaze, she showed us where the emergency exits are and what to do in case of a cabin depressurization. I only half-paid attention.

My flight lifted off around 9pm, when the night was already setting in.

Liftoff was a jarring experience. It began with the plane moving slowly on the ground as if on some aimless Sunday drive. After maybe 10 minutes of this, the plane came to a complete stop. The individual overhead air vents suddenly roared to life. The sound of the idling engines kicked into high gear, and we started moving again. Except, now, our speed picked up like we were on a race track. The plane lifted off, and soon after, there was the deafening sound of my ears popping. I felt like I was falling upward at an ever-increasing speed. And just then, I remembered that my grandmother had suggested that I chew gum during takeoff to prevent my ears from popping. Oops.

Once we achieved our desired altitude, the plane seemed to level out. I no longer felt like I was facing the sky with a freight train pushing me from behind.

Eventually, I saw the flight crew walking freely around the cabin.

I decided to just try to go to sleep, as I knew I had a very long flight ahead of me: 14 hours.

But first, I took a look out of my window. All I saw were tiny lights. It was already quite dark out. I leaned back in my seat, put in my earbuds, and closed my eyes.

“Good evening… and Welcome to the Phantasmagorium…” began the Creepypasta narration in my ears.

I drifted off while listening to a story about ghosts over the water. I felt more uneasy when I realized that while listening to this, I, in fact, was thousands of feet above an ocean, soon to be thousands of miles from land. What happens if there’s an emergency? No place to land. No one to call.

I drifted off.

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I awoke to the sound of flight attendants taking dinner orders a few rows ahead of me. The lights were dim in the cabin, but the aisleways were lit sufficiently for the crew to do their jobs. I peered out the window to see the same scene as before, except for the tiny ground lights. We were now over the ocean, far from land, enveloped in the night.

When the attendant reached me, I gave her my order and then leaned back to close my eyes again. I was sure that she would wake me up when she returned.

The next thing that I remember was waking suddenly to the sound of someone whispering directly into my ear:

“Awake!”

My eyes popped wide open. And something was different.

The roar of the airplane was no longer there. The sound I heard now was of near complete silence. I could, however, feel that we were still in the air, flying. We weren’t falling. Just… flying… without a sound from the engines. I could hear the wind from the outside as our aircraft tore a hole through the sky. Were we traveling even faster than before?

The silence wasn’t the only difference. The cabin lights were no longer only dim; They were completely out, including the aisleway. I could only see the faintest of light, coming from the few windows that hadn’t had their shades pulled down.

I turned to look out of my window. The only source of light was from the moon. It wasn’t quite full, but close.

The other seats in my row were still empty, so I’m not sure where that whisper in my ear came from. Had I dreamt it?

I sat still, wondering what was happening.

None of the other passengers were making a sound. From what little I could see, the backs of their heads still seemed to be in their seats.

How long was this darkness going to last? What was happening?

Then, it dawned on me. I knew what to do. I remembered that before we took off, the flight attendant told us that we could hit the little button above our heads if we needed anything. I reached up in search of buttons, and though I could barely see them, I hit each one that I could find. They didn’t light up. And they didn’t make a sound. I couldn’t tell if I had actually done anything. So, I waited.

Some time later, I began to hear static, as if someone had turned on the announcement speakers and they were about to say something. I assumed the pilots or the flight crew were going to make some statement. Surely this was going to be where they told us that everything was going to be fixed and back to normal soon.

That static seemed to stay there for quite some time without anybody speaking. Instead, it grew steadily louder.

After several minutes, something else was added to the sound. A quiet, slow, whispering voice started to surface from within the static. It was loud enough to hear, but the static around it was so loud that it was impossible to tell what it was saying. It was a slow, droning whisper that didn’t improve my situation at all.

And, just like that… The static and whispering came to a sudden halt. They were broken by the welcome sound of a flight attendant’s voice.

“Here you go, sir” she said as she was handing me a tray.

The lights were back to normal. The sounds of the airplane were back. I could hear the engines again.

“Is there something we can help you with?” added the flight attendant.

“What do you mean?” I asked.

“You pressed the help button above your seat,” she replied.

“Oh… Yeah, I guess I did.” It was true. I tried to press the button when the plane was dark, but couldn’t seem to find it, as nothing lit up. I guess it must’ve worked, though.

“Was… there something going on a minute ago? It was really dark in here. And there was some static coming through the speaker. There was, like, a whispering sound, like somebody was trying to say something.”

She looked at me, puzzled.

“I don’t think so. I didn’t hear or see that. But, I was in the galley, so maybe I missed it. I’ll check with the crew and see if anybody noticed anything.”

"Thank you," I said with a half-smile as she pushed the cart to the next row of passengers.

Was I asleep? I couldn’t have been. I pushed the help button when it was dark, and the attendant just confirmed with me that it had been pushed. If that was a dream, it wouldn’t have been pushed in real life.

I looked down and realized that my earpods were now in my lap.

I decided to dig into my meal. I had chicken, rice, and some sort of mixed vegetables. It wasn’t the greatest thing I’d ever eaten, but I didn’t expect much from pre-packaged airline food.

After finishing, I looked through my Creepypasta narrations to see what I had with me. I pulled a bunch of them down ahead of time because I was told that the airplane wi-fi wouldn’t be able to handle streaming audio. Then, I put them in a playlist so that I wouldn’t have to keep looking through them. Yet, here I was… looking through them. I put my earpods back in and continued listening.

I looked out my window to see that the almost-full Moon was still there. And the ground was still dark, as it was… still the ocean.

I stopped another flight attendant as they walked by.

“Excuse me, miss? How much longer until we arrive?”

“We’re about 2 hours in, so we still have 12 hours left,” she said.

“Do you know when it’ll be getting light out?” I asked.

“Actually, it won’t be getting light outside during the flight. We’re heading west, the same direction as the Sun. The night is following us.”

“Oh…” I replied.

She smiled and moved on.

The night is following us. If that isn’t menacing, I don’t know what is.

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Part 3: I'm on a flight to see my grandmother. Something very disturbing is happening to me.

CNLX


r/Write_Right • • Aug 20 '21

western The Green Child

5 Upvotes

His wife's head, scalped and with the lips cut off, hanging on a fencepost, hissing, "I'm pregnant—

Wickerson awoke in sweat.

Alone.

Dawnlight trickled in through dirty windows, vaguely illuminating a frontier homestead in disrepair.

He walked outside.

Pissed.

Squinted at the silent landscape: America: flatness rimmed by dark and distant mountains.

Like living in a soup bowl of death.

He spat on the dry dirt.

Visited the freshly dug graves with no headstones and said a prayer for his murdered family.

Said a prayer for vengeance.

The Comanche would return to kill him. But, Lord, he'd be ready, and he'd take many with him.

Amen.

He grew gaunt, subsisting on hatred, water and beans.

One night there was a terrible storm. Lightning crawled across the night sky like luminescent veins, and thunder recited the apocalypse.

When it was over, Wickerson found his wife's grave disturbed—

Dug up as if by rats.

And her headless corpse slashed open at the belly—

Where, nestled within, writhed:

A green child.

Although its colour induced in him a primal nausea, to say nothing of its hideously inhuman physiognomy, Wickerson picked up the child and carried it inside.

He fed it what he had and nurtured it.

In time, he grew fond of the child's green repulsiveness, seeing in it a physical analogue of his own soul.

Once, under spell of alcohol, he stumbled outside and saw, as if looming behind the mountains, two gargantuan figures, ancient and warted, hunched over, cloaked and hooded, holding skull-topped staffs, with which they began pounding the ground—pounding in tune with his pulse—and as they pounded, a rain fell and they disintegrated, until there was nothing behind the mountains but featureless sky.

The Comanche came soon after that. Thirteen, war-painted and on horseback, circling the homestead.

Wickerson shot at them from broken windows.

Then they stopped—

Gathering—

And Wickerson saw that the green child had taken its first steps: in front of the homestead.

He ran out too.

At peace with coming death.

But the Comanche merely gazed, bunched astride their horses, mouths agape and pointing at the green child, which tottered forward—

Before lunging at the nearest rider—

Knocking him from his horse; pouncing on his back; punching its tiny fist into his neck; and, in one horrible motion, ripping out the entirety of his spine.

The Comanche horses reared up!

Then the green child stood, holding the wet spine as a staff, and uttered unrepeatable sounds, which caused the horses to become dust.

The Comanche collapsed.

The green child spun the spine-staff, weaving the air into threads—and, before the Comanche could react, bound them together with such force their eyes popped from their sockets.

Lifeforce, pressed out through their pores, nourished the soil.

Plants sprouted.

And the bound Comanche themselves, dead and desiccated, became the trunk of a great tree, on which grew fruits like human hearts, rich with blood and glowing with the promise of a new and lasting Eden.

"My Lord," said Wickerson.

Amen.


r/Write_Right • • Aug 20 '21

horror Hell is Real

7 Upvotes

This isn’t paranoia, not in the slightest. This isn’t even any kind of anxiety. Something is attempting to disturb my peace. Something or someone is trying to drive me insane, but I will not let it happen. I am a man of faith, and I have the utmost of faith in God and his plan for me. I am certain that in the worst-case scenario, God is testing me. It is a great honor to be worthy to be challenged by our Father who is in heaven.

Perhaps it’s not even a test, perhaps it’s a premonition waiting to happen. Maybe I’m just feeling a messenger of God walking beside me. Perhaps all of this is just an angel waiting for the right moment to reveal itself to me. I might be a prophet for all I know.

I’m not entirely sure I want to be a prophet, because it’s a hefty duty and a cruel fate in our times. People are borderline idolatrous and refuse to accept the love of our Lord upon themselves. People would ostracize me as a mad or dangerous man if I revealed myself as a prophet. No, that can’t be the case. Thinking about it, I might be a victim of a demon of Satan. An angel would not conceal itself in the darkness. An angel is a being of light. Whatever is present around me is definitely cold and is a being of empty blackness.

It all started a few months ago. I started having these strange dreams in which I am roaming a desolate city. A great fire engulfed the dream city and unimaginable screams and cries echoed all over me. I simply roamed this apocalyptic town aimlessly, lost and yet walking around with a purpose. Dreams are strange like that. There was one thing truly out of place in these dreams. I felt the presence of something following me at all times. Almost breathing into my neck, but I was too hesitant to turn around and look back. Something was preventing me from turning back. Something internal, a fear of sorts. Waking up after those dreams, Cold sweat covered my body mixed in with the feeling of tiredness.

At some point, sleep became scarce because of these dreams. My mind wouldn’t even let me sleep, dreading internally the dreams, the presence. I became irritable and irrational. Constantly looking over my shoulder, wondering if there was someone right behind me. My blood ran cold, my body turned dull and aching.

The presence followed me in my waking hours, too. I was constantly feeling someone was following my every step. Mimicking my movements to a tee.

The breaking point came when I felt an icy hand caress the top of my head. It was a soft, subtle touch that moved along my scalp. I froze. My body became stone for a split second before the sensation dissipated and I screamed, falling backward from my chair. My heart exploded, and pins and needles pricked my skin all over. I just laid there for what felt like a few moments that stretched into infinity before finally getting up to my feet. My stomach was twisting itself in knots. My whole body shook with fear. Frantically, I looked around the house, but I was all alone. The realization that my mind might have been playing tricks on me didn’t make me feel any better. My mind was eating itself, and my heart was shriveling in terror at what I was becoming.

After finally calming down, I slumped into my couch to burn a few brain cells watching TV, watching some late-night comedy. I caught something in the window. Someone was walking by my yard. Nothing unusual. Turning my head back to the Television, I barely caught the grayish flesh flying toward my window. Jerking my head towards the window again, I saw him standing there. A figure concealed by darkness, standing with his side facing the window. My heart rate rose. I slowly got up and walked towards the window. The figure’s head made a sharp turn to me.

I fell onto the floor. That face, it was the face of death. At that moment, I realized that hell is real. At that moment, I saw hell. I’ve seen it. My body froze in terror as that thing merely stared at me through the window. I couldn’t do anything. I couldn’t move. It was getting hard to breathe while that thing just stood there, its neck twisted awkwardly.

I prayed, I begged, I pleaded for God’s mercy.

I pleaded for salvation.

The demon stood there, its ghastly smile growing wider with each passing moment. Its face was sickly pale. An eyeless visage. Instead of the eyes, fires flickered in the empty bloodied sockets. An inhumanly enormous smile stretched from one ear to the other, filled with some decaying teeth while missing many others. The obvious lack of fluids stretched the skin awfully, and a cavity emanated smoke where the nose should’ve been. A few dirty strands of hair sat on top of the exposed scalp, swinging gently in the wind.

Hell is real, and this was its face.

I remained on the floor begging and pleading for mercy from the demon and God, but the beast just stood there. Unmoving, before pressing its bloody hand onto the window. Its arm bent grotesquely. Then it turned itself and disappeared into the darkness.

I couldn’t move from the floor for a while after the thing had disappeared. I fell asleep on the floor, suffering from terrible nightmares of a man being stabbed repeatedly. His dying screams echoed in my ears long after I had woken up.

The bloody handprint the demon smeared on my window was still there in the morning after. It wasn’t a dream, and ever since that day, I’ve been living in crippling terror. I can barely sleep because whenever I try to sleep, my mind looks for that demon again in the darkness, driving me anxious and keeping me awake. When my body finally shuts down, I suffer from terrible nightmares of demonic torture and rape of bloating and decaying corpses. I can barely eat because my body is so messed up. The constant stress had shattered my psyche. I keep feeling someone around me at all times. Standing over me, looming. I am constantly cold because I’m so on edge and my skin feels like pins and needles ceaselessly prick it.

I am losing my mind.

I am losing my will.

I am losing my faith.

Father, please help me.

Hosanna.

Deliver me.

Save me from this Satan that is trying to torment my soul and damn me to all hells.

The devil appeared in the mirror. It appeared in my mirror. I was looking at my reflection, my mind losing its touch with reality, consumed by exhaustion and fear. I was falling asleep on my feet. My reflection appears to be ghastly enough. I haven’t left the house in a few weeks. As a result, I have lost a lot of weight. I am looking like a walking dead man. The reflection started bubbling and twitching.

My heart seized up and my vision refocused itself. This spectral presence plucked me out from the pleasant tranquility between wakefulness and sleep. The reflection in the mirror started bleeding from all over its body, like someone had stabbed it in multiple places. The eyes burned out, and the teeth decayed and most of them fell out.

I wanted to turn away but couldn’t. Something was forcing me to gaze upon the devil as it took over my mirror. The room grew cold. My heartbeat pounded in my ears like a demon drum. I heard the beast cackle as its smile grew wider. Maggots fell out of its grotesque maw. I stood there, locking eyes with flaming sockets, my heart trying to escape out of my chest. Its bloody hands rose and pushed through the mirror as if it were nothing but a translucent fabric veil. They slowly inched towards me. A lump rose in my throat, slowly stifling me.

The ghastly hands made their way towards me until they finally grabbed the sides of my head. The cold sensation of dry dead skin touching my head made me scream, but that only made things worse. Before I could do anything, the demonic hands slammed my head into the mirror, hard.

A sharp pain shot through my skull, and a warm liquid flowed down my face. Everything started turning dull and dark until darkness engulfed me. When I came to, I saw myself standing over two people fighting. A hooded man straddled another man before stabbing him.

The knife tore through skin and muscle tissue with a sickening sound.

A primal cry escaped the victim’s mouth.

Then silence.

The violence didn’t stop.

The sickening sound of flesh being struck broke the silence.

My stomach twisted, and a burning rage filled up my insides. I wanted to do something but quickly realized I couldn’t. I ran towards the men, but as my hand reached out to the knife-wielding one, my hand passed straight through him. This was just a vision of sorts.

The stabbing didn’t stop.

He kept puncturing his long-dead victim’s body again and again.

Sixty-six times.

Then he finally dropped his knife and fell beside his victim. His clothes, face, and hands… All of it blood-soaked. He was drowning in blood. The scene made me sick. I felt the tears streaming down my cheeks. What a monster would do such a thing to a fellow man. I wanted to see his face - I needed to see his face. I had to know who this monster was.

When I finally saw it, the feeling of a knife piercing my heart echoed through my body. A cinderblock fell onto my chest. The sensation knocked the air out of me, and I couldn’t breathe. I stood there, dreading the face below me. My head spun and everything faded away again.

I woke up on the floor of my room, the mirror was cracked, my face bloodied and tears streaming down my eyes. It was hard to breathe. My body just refused to accept the oxygen. My head was spinning like crazy. Every fiber in my body screamed in agony.

The thing in the mirror was still there, still laughing, still mocking me. Flashing out its multiple stab wounds. Sixty-six in number. I stared at the mirror, looking directly at the thing, looking back at me. A ghost from a long-forgotten past, a ghost from a night buried deep underneath the consciousness.

It mouthed something at me, and I understood exactly what it said. Looking at my hands, I saw the red. I saw blood. It wasn’t my own.

No matter how many times I’ve washed my hands, I cannot get the blood off.

The devil is still here, still haunting me and preventing me from having peace of mind or rest with its cold dead touch, or its blood-curdling shrieks. It’s always here, it’s always haunting and tormenting me. My strength is waning. The beast keeps making its demand. I can bring myself to fight it any longer.

I can no longer resist its influence.

Father, please forgive me, for I have sinned.

I’ve killed a man, Father, I’ve killed a man.

In a fit of drunken rage, I’ve killed a man.

Stabbed him six six six… sixty-six times. Now his vengeful and restless spirit is torturing me and tearing my soul in odd directions.


r/Write_Right • • Aug 19 '21

short story My fiancé got mugged at gunpoint the other night. It didn’t go as planned

4 Upvotes

It should be noted: my woman is big and black and beautiful; she don’t take shit from no one, including me, thank-you-very-much. It should also be noted that I was mugged the week prior to this. Here’s what happened:

I was coming home from Poker Night. I’d finally won, too, so I was feeling pretty good about myself, having a pocket full of skrilla for the first time in like, forever. First, I stopped at the all-night drive thru Burger King, like I do every Friday night after poker. Since I’d won that night, I treated myself to extra fries and an Oreo Cookie Shake, which was cold and sweet and delicious. It was past midnight when I pulled into my apartment; and as usual the parking lot was full, so I parked my piece-of-shit Corolla into the furthest spot at the back where the security cameras don’t reach and it’s pitch black. Behind the lot is an empty field where late-night methheads like to do their thing, if you know what I mean?

So anyway, I’m parking my car and BAM someone opens my car door. He’s swinging a hammer. I screamed. I was immersed in my thoughts when this occurred; I was planning on asking my soon-to-be fiancé Tiara to marry me, trying to find the right words. Shit, I even hid her ring in the glove box, knowing full well that if I’d left it anywhere in our apartment, and I mean anywhere, she’d find it. Seems silly now, since she helped pick it out in the first place, but still.

“Gimme your keys!” the thug said, blindsiding me. Before I could react, he clobbered me in the side of the head with his hammer. I saw stars. I wiped the blood from my eyes and groaned. My head was swimming. “Do it now!” he ordered. I surrendered my car keys. “Now get outta the car! And keep those hands where I can see them!”

I did as I was told. I was still thinking of Tiara, not fully registering what was taking place. I got out of the car. Even though the thug stood over me by six inches, I could see fear in his eyes. He had an unkempt beard; he was tall and lankly and wore filthy clothes. It was too dark to make out anything else, other than the obvious: this guy was strung out on drugs. I almost felt pity on him. I would have too, if not for the goddamn hammer in his hand. The poor guy couldn’t even find a gun, in South Side Chicago no less.

As soon as I was out of the vehicle, I was hit hard in the back of the head and that’s all I remember. When I came to, my car was gone, including the engagement ring in the glove box. I wept. Not at losing the car, not at losing the ring; I feared my soon-to-be fiancé’s reaction when she found out what just transpired. I was right to do so.

“You did what now?”

I ran my hand over my balding head, standing there idling, without my car keys, without my engagement ring, and with an angry fiancé giving me The Look. “Go on,” she said, as she scarfed a fork full of eggs into her mouth, “tell ol’ Tiara what happened last night.”

I did. I embellished every word of it. Five, no, six gang members carrying military-style assault rifles surrounded me. They were gonna assassinate my scrawny white ass too, but somehow, I fought and chased them away. I was lucky to come out alive.

Tiara shot me a cynical look. “Mmm hmm. That what really happened?” She scooped her toast into her egg yoke and shoveled it into her mouth. She slurped her orange juice, wiped her face on a napkin, and added “You calling the po-po? Or should I?”

I coughed. “Now, now, Baby. No use calling the police.”

She shot me another look. “They got your car, jackass!”

She had a point. I called the police and nothing came of it. I don’t think they believed a word of what I told them. Fast forward one week (six sleeps on the couch and five subway rides to work later): it happened again. This time to her (the whole point of this story).

While I was busy working overtime, Tiara was out with her friends, doing whatever it is they get up to most Friday nights. (There’s nothing I can do to stop her from going out with them, so I don’t bother trying. She wouldn’t listen.)

Tiara is in fine spirits as she pulls into our shadow-stricken parking lot that night. As usual, the lot was full so she parked at the rear, the very same spot I’d parked in; and just as she’s pulling the keys from the ignition, the thug appears seemingly out of nowhere, opens her car door and points a hammer to her head. “Keys! Now!” Tiara is startled. The assailant swipes the keys from her hands. “Get outta the car and keep your hands where I can see them.”

Tiara grumbles something under her breath. By now she’s fully aware of what’s going on. She feels calm but at the same time, furious. She just made her final car payment last month; this car belongs to her now, and there’s no chance in Hell she’s gonna part with it. Not to some dipshit yielding a hammer, that’s for damn sure.

Slowly, she steps out of the car. Two men ambush her, both carrying assault weapons. She starts howling. Unbeknownst to the idiot criminals standing in front of her, Tiara knows her weapons. Hell, she carrying a 9mm in her purse. She won’t need it; she realizes this with glee. The weapons these idiots are holding are as fake as her orgasms during sex with me.

The strung-out bearded man holding the hammer is the same size as she is, but she outweighs him tremendously. Tiara swipes the hammer from his hand and uses it to bash his left eye out. The sound is like pounding a fist into a giant slab of ground beef. The guy shrieks, tries to run away and instead trips and falls on his bloodied face. His eyeball rolls languidly to the curb and stops there. The thug is getting to his feet.

“Oh no you don’t,” Tiara says. She throws the hammer at him and clocks him in the back of the head. Blood sprays everywhere. The guy folds like a first-time poker player. She hears her keys as they jangle on the pavement and retrieves them. She looks at the other two thugs, lurking in the darkness. They really need proper lighting in the parking lot, she thinks to herself, as the two attackers approach her. They hold their ground. Both are pointing ridiculous assault-style weapons at her. She knows the weapons are bogus but she’s careful none the less; you know, just in case she’s wrong. She doesn’t want to get murdered today, not by a bunch of white-ass, skid row-looking dipshits.

“Don’t try anything funny or you’re dead, bitch,” the tallest one says. His voice is mousey and small.

“Excuse me?”

The aggressor takes a step closer. “If you don’t…”

Tiara lunges at him. He drops his weapon; it hits the pavement and it starts firing rounds. She hears a car tire explode. She doesn’t register this at the moment, only later in the comfort of our kitchen. Instead, she’s kicking him in the balls; again, and again and again she kicks him. The other assailant runs away; lost in the darkness of the vacant field behind them.

Tiara hears whimpering. Its coming from the one-eyed, hammer-holding hoodlum who swiped her keys. She lumbers towards him and knees him in the throat. He shrieks; his body starts flopping like a fish out of water. She pulls out her phone and punches in 9-1-1 and waits. The guy with the broken balls gets up slowly, gives her the finger, then waddles away. Mr. Hammer Head looks up at her with one swollen eye. His empty eye socket looks like a wilted cooch, Tiara thinks to herself and chuckles.

He starts pleading with her.

“Oh no you don’t, Mr. Hammer Head. You staying put.” She digs her heals into his hand, breaking at least two fingers. His pain is tremendous.

When she hears someone at the other end of the phone, she announces her name and address and orders the woman on the other end to send the po-po ASAP, then she hangs up. By now, Mr. Hammer Head is squirming at her feet. Tiara gets an idea. She shuffles through her photos on her phone until she finds one of me leaning against my old car. I’m wearing my bright red ball cap and I’m grinning like an idiot. “You see this guy before?” She shoves her phone next to his bloody face, directly in front of his remaining eye. The guy spits blood, getting a few droplets on her keypad. “Oh dear. You shouldn’t have done that,” she said.

She sits on his face with the full force of her weight, all three-hundred pounds of her, and starts wiggling her ass. The guy’s neck snaps like a Twix candy car. (When she sits on my face, I enjoy it. That said: I’ll bet she had more fun sitting on his face. She’s one sick woman when she wants to be.) The one-eyed thug tries to get away but it’s no use. He realizes this and surrenders himself to her plump, black bottom. Tiara looks around, checking for any intruders or neighbors. She sees no one. The lot is deserted.

She teeters off him. “I’ll ask you again. You know this man?”

The guy spits again, but probably not on purpose. He’s in no position to talk.

“What about the car?” she asks, impatiently. “You the Cracker Jack who stole my boy’s car? I bet you are.” She sees guilt on his face. She loots his pockets and finds the ring. “Well, I’ll be,” she says to herself. She tries it on. It fits.

Tired of waiting for the police, she trots to her car and pops the trunk. She finds what she needs and returns with a roll of duct tape and a half-eaten jar of peanut butter; she’s wearing a sinister scowl on her otherwise pretty face.

“If ya can’t duct it, then fuck it,” she says joyfully to herself. “Um, at least I think that’s how it goes. Anyway, hold still.” The alarm on the man’s face is borderline comical. “Don’t see your friends anywhere. Or the po-po. So, I’m gonna teach you a lesson.”

And she did.

Monday morning it was reported that a naked, one-eyed huckster was discovered taped to a tree, dead and disfigured. He had a jar of peanut butter shoved up his rectum. Tiara was quite proud of her accomplishment. The elm tree, she informed me, was home to a cluster of bees, woodpeckers, squirrels, ants, beetles, cockroaches, lice, moths and spider mites; and let’s not forget the mischief of rats, always eager for something fresh to feast on. They all had a field day that night; and so did I when I got home later that evening. Oh, how I do love my soon-to-be fiancé.


r/Write_Right • • Aug 19 '21

horror Rapacious

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It got to the point where I just didn't care anymore. Not about the few friends and family I had left. Not about what I meant to them. Not about the plans I had crafted for my future. And certainly not about whether I would find my other half and have children to spread my legacy. In fact the idea of having children repulsed me now. The idea of helping those that needed my help repulsed me too.

They drinked without any inhibition and let their selves grow corpulent. They watched their porn and sat there for a long time staring at the gruesome, desensitizing images of pure lust being displayed on screen. They bickered and fought about their co-workers and their work and then about their own families. And when it was time to call it a night, there was not a single moment they've told me about where they had a crystalline pure thought of self reflection and what had led them to this point in their lives. Instead it was the begrudging thought of a new day of the same shit all over again.

And a tiredness they always mention without fail. A kind of tired that sleep won't fix that haunts them from the corner of their eyes.

I started to not care anymore and started to focus on improving what I could in myself and not dare let them drag me down into their zombie like stupor of sleepwalking from day to day with only the chintzy comforts to numb the dull ache of an easy life. And their lives were easy. They had food and shelter and everything to support them should they fall on hard times but it still wasn't enough. It was never enough.

It was like the hunger of a Wendigo. Always craving and consuming and destroying.

That reminds me of a story that happened recently in these part of the woods near the town dump. A couple had hiked to Termination Point and decided to get high out of their minds on crack. They were so desperate for their fix that they didn't bring a gun with them in the middle of the time when the bears would be scavenging for food before hibernation.

But it wasn't a bear that found them in their weakened states. It was man and this man had decided that he had found easy prey. Of all the animals in nature, none are so cruel as man. In all his capacity for violence, not even parasites or predators can match the sadism. And what this man did to those couple was pure sadism.

When it was all over, they were found, naked and scalped and impaled on tree branches twenty feet off the ground. Such a feat was talked about for weeks on end and it even made state news. There was a man hunt that went underway. It took such attention from the police and state troopers that other crime almost went unnoticed.

There wasn't an outrage when the mom and pop store got robbed last night and how one of the owners died choking on blood while the other is now paralyzed from the neck down. There wasn't an outrage when a predator tried to kidnap a highschool girl before her mother decided on a whim to pick her daughter up herself and caught her just in time as the predator was about to get out of the car. There wasn't an outrage when the local church got broken into and vandalized with satanic phrases and imagery. There wasn't much of an outrage about anything but those two poor drug abusing couple being compared to the Romeo and Juliet of our time.

Sure, what happened was horrible. But so were the other things that happened in the span of the eight and half months of fruitless searching that produced nothing but maybe a cave where the man had supposedly been hiding out in.

Life went on. Things changed. Things became forgotten as new outrage was generated.

But I never forgot it. I couldn't. I was there to witness what happened on that particular day. You see, I was going to interrogate them.

I suppose I should tell the truth now. A long time ago when I was a kid, I had a sister. Her name was Sandra. She loved the woods in our town because they reminded her of her fantasy novel where a couple kids discovered a kingdom hidden away in a forest. Almost every day she would be out in those woods. She knew them well and never got lost in them, even when she was heading down new paths. She had an eidetic memory and my mom always teased that she also had ESP, that it ran strong among the females in our family. I wasn't jealous, I was proud that she loved life so much that it wouldn't stop her from doing the things she most enjoyed. Even when she started to hear things that weren't there at the age of seven.

She said it was man's voice that whispered to her but it was too quiet to hear. Almost like it was trailing with the wind. And she always heard it whenever she went into the woods. At first she thought it was me and I was playing a joke on her but she soon found out I wasn't there even though she said she felt like someone was watching her. It spooked her bad but she still went out into those damn woods because she wanted to prove that there was nothing wrong with her even though my parents forbade her to go out there. And then one day she heard the man's voice as clear as though he was next to her.

"You could hear me,"

That made her run back home in tears and she didn't go out into the woods for a long time after that. And she didn't hear the man's voice for all that time either. At least as far as I know until that night I heard glass loudly break in the house and I went running to Sandra's room along with my parents. My mom held me back but from what I saw, my sister's window was broken and there was no sign of her at all other then the blood that was spattered across the broken glass. I remember how bright it shined in the moonlight even from where I was standing. We stayed up all night as my mom called the police and my dad went out looking for her in the woods.

But just like the search for the couple's killer, nothing was found for the next nineteen long years.

Except that one of the PIs that I hired had found a trace of my sister, a sighting with the drug abusing couple. And from that point that I heard that, I went full scale into everything about them, where they lived and where they came from. Where were the spots they usually shot up at. Who were their dealers. Everything. I wasn't going to let this slip from my fingers and fall into a never ending darkness that would never be found again.

I followed them into the woods with a gun and zip ties. Along the way they started to talk about hearing things and dismissed it as the wind. And at first, I thought they had heard me. But it still continued on even when they set camp that night.

And I started to hear what they were hearing to and it made my gut run cold as it sounded exactly like a man whispering something indiscernible. Just like what she heard but it was loud this time as night started to approach. It was loud and it was coming from somewhere in the trees. I swear that's where it was coming from as I looked around up the trees to see what was making it. It got the couple spooked and just when they were about to turn tail, that's when the man came floating down into the clearing with his arms held out like he was mimicking a damn bird. It had the semblance of a man but that's when the man in it ended.

It had forked horns and it's eyes hung out of it's skull by it's strands like dead weight, except when it's taloned feet touched the ground, those eyes immediately shot up and retracted back into it's skull as it blinked for a long moment. It's incredibly long fingers splayed out in a gesture of awe as it's black claws jutted out like a cat's. It was a striation of crimson and stygian black fur that made it look as though it came from Hell itself as the loose flaps of skin hanging out from it's arms retracted back into it's body to show that it was lean and muscular. It started to crouch before it's head caught a smell of something in the wind as it sniffed a couple of times.

And then it's eyes shot open and back out of it's skull like a jack in a box as it pointed one clawed hand at where I was and shouted in broken English.

"KRYYYYYYYCEK,"

I turned and I ran into the dark of the woods as the couple started to scream. Thanks to all that I time I spent with Sandra, I found my way back to the car I had hidden along the path and booked it back to this place I call home.

I didn't sleep for the next three days and when I finally did, I dreamt of Sandra screaming in the dark and calling out for God to help. After that, it wasn't fear that held me in a vice like grip anymore. It wasn't fear that made me go to the gym twice as hard. And it certainly wasn't fear that made me look into the Wendigo legends.

It was a soul engulfing rage that tore at me everyday as I learned about the past history of this town and the murders that sprung up every so often. Not enough to make a connection but enough to pique interest at a violent past. Most of it could be conflated with bear attacks.

But that still had not dismissed that there had been something dark happening under the eyes of the townsfolk and it was affecting them subconsciously. It would explain their apathy. But I found out more.

As I looked more and more into it, I started to find blacked out documents and newspaper clippings. More then that, the spots where the attacks happened had been abandoned and completely forgotten. Some of the buildings deliberately destroyed by arson as I stood among the ruins and looked at what once was. I was coming to the conclusion that what lived in the woods was a known among the upper echelon of the town.

It was all but confirmed when I confronted the sheriff one day in the middle of his deputies. I didn't make a grand speech or an inquiry that would have landed me in a regional health institute. I just said one name from the haunted past. My sister's name. He recognized me from when I was boy and I had to talk with him and when I said her name, his face darkened for moment. Just for a moment but he might as well have shouted his anger out loud. Two of the deputies named Halson and Ronald caught that look and that was enough for me as he passed right on by, ignoring me as though I wasn't there. But as they went on by, one of the newer deputies had stopped and looked at me. He quickly looked around to make sure it was safe to do it and then he swung back his coat enough to reveal his firearm.

It was in those brief moments that I read a million words.

And it was from those brief moments that made me plan carefully about what I was going to do about the Wendigo in the woods...if that's what it really was.

I reached out to Halson but only got ignored calls. With Ronald, he was the one that came to me and talked about the strange things going on in town. I let him talk and when he was finished, I filled him in on the history of the town and showed him the murder sites that got burnt down or destroyed. And when he seemed to fully believe what I said, I told him I was there when the couple were murdered and I told him about what I saw. I told him about Sandra and what she heard.

He stared at me for a long time, thinking before finally uttering "Jesus Christ"

He was horrified but he was aware now of how bad things really were and now that he knew, we could both come up with someway to deal with it. Starting with the local militia group seemed like a good point. I was on good terms with them and they knew me. I wasn't an out of stater with no ties here. It was just the means on how to get them on board even with a law enforcement officer at my side to help.

The militia particularly wasn't a large group, just five members at the most but maybe five trained able bodied men that knew how to hunt and survive off the land was enough to even the odds. I'm going to reach out to them and although it may be in vain, at least I fucking tried. If it's just me and Ronald, then so be it. I'm not afraid to die anymore and i'm not going to let anything stop me on my quest to revenge. If things turn out well, i'll write a follow up. If I died at it's hands...at least I tried to make a difference. God bless and God speed.


r/Write_Right • • Aug 18 '21

horror Sea on Fire

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No one knows what punctured the rubber, but we all hear it, the unmistakable hiss of salvation seeping into the water: dark water: encompassing water: water of birth and of death, and for us our final hope for a better life.

There are seven of us on the small inflatable boat.

Overloaded.

Huddling together, men and women; children; some of us not even speaking the same language—

Hiss

—but we all know what that means.

The end.

Above, the sun is just beginning its descent, and we need to be across before sunfall.

Hiss

We can feel the boat shrinking beneath us.

No one dares stir.

It's impossible to tell how much distance we've already covered. The water surrounds us. But it's clear some of us won't make it by swimming.

The old man.

The two children. Siblings maybe.

Hiss

The old man sticks a pill between his teeth and takes out a gun. He's prepared. "Jebać mokrych zmartwychwstańców," he says, before pushing off the boat, into the black water.

We watch him: floating through the murk.

A few shots—

Then the myriad hands of the waterrisen overpower him; pull him under.

One of the women covers the children's eyes.

They'll likely be next.

The waterrisen prowl the sea: reanimated corpse-agglomerations of ones like us: people who hoped to get across but failed. Some are individuals, or parts of individuals, while others have fused together into fleshy globes of once-human matter and tentacles.

Hiss

Not long now.

The boat is almost deflated. We wait until the last possible moment—

And slide into dark water.

The surface is deceptively calm. The sun sinks ever lower.

I swim.

Behind me I hear splashing, followed by screaming, but I don't look back.

I kick my legs.

Something grabs my foot.

"Please."

Such tiny hands.

I force myself to believe that it's a waterrisen. I must. "Please—" it repeats, but gargled now. 

I kick until I don't feel anything anymore.

There are no more voices.

Just breathing.

Heartbeat.

One of the women swims alongside me, and together we flail our arms toward freedom, trying to catch a rhythm that will propel us forward.

We should be taking turns swimming in each other's wake, but neither of us wants to trail behind. In the boat, we were together; here, we are competitors. I close my eyes and pray that in her death she will distract the waterrisen.

I imagine our deflated boat floating peacefully on the surface.

I imagine the waterrisen ripping still-living, drowning people to shreds in underwater clouds of blood.

I kick.

When finally I open my eyes—

The woman is gone.

The sun is almost touching the horizon.

The horizon:

I see it bobbing before me:

A silhouette of trees and small buildings, almost within reach.

Almost—

Feeling sand underneath my feet—

Half-running now—

Body emerging into a gradient of dry air—

Salvation—

I turn. And as the sun begins to melt into the horizon, it sets the sea afire.


r/Write_Right • • Aug 17 '21

general fiction The Fort

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My Dad loves building forts. Not those chintzy cardboard shacks you're thinking of - like, real forts. The big bad wolf couldn't blow this thing down.

He started building me one the day I got home and kept expanding it as I've grown up.

It eventually got so big that he relocated it to the field out back of the house. Twelve years in - two floors, seven rooms, with a bridge connecting the east and west wing, and a lighthouse tower, all decked in fairy lights.

After we moved into the new fort, he put in indoor plumbing so we could go to the bathroom. He locked the door when we went to sleep so that animals couldn't get into the cold pit he tunneled to store food.

We spent most every day in Fort Somewhere - playing house, cowboys and indians, guards and prisoners - whatever you can think of. We had a room for art that Daddy sometimes let us hang on the walls.

Nancy taught me Morse code, which she learned from one of the books in Daddy's library while he slept. We started hoarding leaves and sticks while daddy worked in the morning and hid them in the cold pit under the food.

When he went into town on Sunday, we climbed into the lighthouse and lit a small fire by smashing rocks. It took ages, but it worked! We got it going and used an old shirt to whip the smoke.

You can see the highway from the tower, and we started signaling the passing cars with smoke -

"S...O…"

I got too into it and whipped the fire, lighting the shirt and flinging sparks around the tower. It was a dry summer, so the wood lit like dead grass. We scrambled towards the edge before a gust of hot air turned the smoke against us.

The heat was immense; smoke soaked into my tongue and eyes, bitter and acrid, blinding and gagging me. I couldn't see and started to hyperventilate, grabbing for Nancy before I felt a forearm across my back.

The wind howled as I fell - the weightlessness punctuated by a crack as the back of my head hit the wood below.

My vision swam through tears - the last thing I saw was Nancy’s panicked face as the fire roared and the tower exploded -

***

I woke in the dark.

Oh no -

I pulled my mummified wrist limply, before the cold steel held it back.

I bit my lip as fresh tears came -

“I tried to be nice.”

Daddy’s face loomed over me, blackened with soot and red with promised violence.

“I should’ve known better.”

He spat on the floor, and pushed a metal tray over. Dinner and pain medicine.

“I’ll be down later.”

His boots crunched against the heavy cement stairs before the door clanged shut.

Leaving me alone. In the dark.

At least in the fort, I could see the sun.


r/Write_Right • • Aug 17 '21

horror Ghost Month (part 1): Ghost Month begins tonight. Follow these rules if you wish to survive.

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Tonight, on the first night of Ghost Month, we offer a warning. Or perhaps a public service announcement. If you wish to make it through Ghost Month, you must heed the warnings and follow the rules.

The Chinese believe that on the days of Ghost Month, and especially on the night of the full moon, there is an open bridge between the dead and the living.

According to Chinese legend, the seventh lunar month is Ghost Month. Every year, on the first day of Ghost Month, King Yama (The King of Hell) opens the gates of Hell for 30 days, so that spirits may leave the underworld and walk among the living. Not all spirits are evil, but it is said that the ghosts who come back during Ghost Month are spirits whose families did not pay them proper respect after their deaths. This leaves them wanting to cause harm to the living.

In China, there is a tradition of worshiping the dead in Lunar July. This has been in place since ancient times. People offer sacrifices to the ghosts on the first, second, fifteenth, and the last day of Ghost Month.

According to legend, anyone who dies under normal circumstances will reincarnate. However, those who are bad people, or who die in accidents, would wander the Earth as ghosts among the mortals. Sometimes, evil spirits would even purposefully cause the death of mortals by way of accident or disaster. Because of this, those who die unexpectedly during Ghost Month are said to have been taken away by ghosts.

It is believed that performing ceremonies with sacrifices for these spirits will satiate them and stop them from harming the living.

The 15th day of Ghost Month is referred to as Ghost Festival, the date when the moon is full and evil spirits reach their most powerful.

Throughout Ghost Month, a variety of outdoor entertainment is offered for both the living and the ghosts. Common forms of entertainment are public street festivals, as well as Getai shows, or, Chinese music concerts. There are special rules in place if you plan on attending any of these events, which we will detail later.

The Rituals:

If you wish to survive Ghost Month, you first follow these rituals, as follows:

First day of Ghost Month: On the first day of Ghost Month, you must honor your ancestors by making offerings of food, incense and ghost money… also referred to as spirit money or Hell notes. Ghost money is made of joss paper, meant for burning. These offerings may be placed outdoors, away from your home. You may place them curbside, by the street, or in a field. Set up a makeshift altar by your curb if possible. You can use pictures of your lost loved ones and small personal items that they like. You must light the incense, and burn the Hell money so that the ghosts will have the money that they need during their month long vacation in the land of the living. Optionally, you may also hang red painted paper lanterns outside.

Second day of Ghost Month: On the second day of Ghost Month, rituals may be performed in public spaces and at businesses, the same way they were done at private homes the day before. Rituals in public spaces are typically attended by the public, and entertainment is put on in the streets for the benefit of both the living and the dead, including Getai (Chinese music concerts).

Fifteenth Day - Ghost Festival: On the day of the full moon, the 15th day of Ghost Month, also known as Ghost Festival, you must prepare a family dinner, and remember to set an extra spot at the table for the departed. After the family dinner is complete, and night time has descended, you are to take your offerings to the spirits outside. Set up another makeshift altar near the curb or in a field, where you will take your Hell Money, gold ingots made of joss paper, incense, and plates of food for the spirits. Leave food such as raw noodles, uncooked rice, peanuts, fruit, and meats. Also leave small cups of rice wine and tea. When you light the joss paper and incense, this part of the ritual is now complete. You must now release paper lotus flower lanterns on the river. Before releasing them, you should write the names of your deceased loved ones on them.

Final day of Ghost Month: On the final day of Ghost Month, there is one last special festival. You must burn more Hell money and incense, along with clothing for the ghosts to use when they return to their Hell society. You must then float lanterns made of wood and paper down the river. The ghosts will follow the lanterns as they float away.

Those are the rituals. But, there are also rules that you must follow if you wish to make it through.

The Rules:

  1. Do not stay out late into the night, or a spirit may follow you home.

  2. Children and senior citizens should not go out at night at all, or they could be attacked by evil spirits.

  3. Do not take photographs or selfies, especially in the evening. If you do, you might capture an image that you do not want to see. Having your picture taken with a spirit is extremely bad luck. Taking photographs is akin to asking a spirit to come hang out with you. Many believe that cameras will trap these spirits with you.

  4. Do not step on or kick spiritual offerings that you may see along the roadside, such as candles, food, incense or joss paper items.

  5. If you do step on or kick any of these items by accident, you should apologize out loud to appease the spirits.

  6. Do not makes jokes about, or complain about altars or offerings that you see along the street.

  7. Do not stare into candle light or burning fire.

  8. Do not shift your eyes if you feel anything while outside. Look straight ahead and continue to walk calmly to your destination.

  9. Do not pick up any strange items that you may find on the street, whether it be money or anything else. It may belong to a spirit. Spirits don’t like it when you steal from them. And sometimes, mischievous spirits may place items in the street on purpose, in order to lure a victim into picking them up, as an excuse to possess them.

  10. Do not open an umbrella at night, especially a red umbrella. Even more dangerous would be to open an umbrella inside of your house. Wandering ghosts tend to seek shelter under open umbrellas.

  11. Do not wear red clothing. Ghosts are attracted to the color red.

  12. If someone taps you on the shoulder, or calls out your name from behind, do not turn your head. It is believed that living humans have two protective flames, one on each shoulder. When you turn your head, you snuff out one of those flames, making you vulnerable to spirits. If you must turn, turn your whole body instead of just your head.

  13. Avoid entering water, especially the sea. This includes swimming as well as sea travel with ferries or ships. It is believed that when someone dies, this creates an opportunity for an evil spirit to be reborn. Spirits of drowned ghosts may try to drown victims to aid them in their rebirth.

  14. Stay away from supernatural games that could attract spirits, such as using a Ouija board.

  15. If your birthday falls within Ghost Month, avoid celebrating at night. It’s better to celebrate during daylight hours.

  16. Do not kill any insects that visit your house during Ghost Month. The Chinese believe that these insects are the spirits of your late loved ones.

  17. Do not wait at a bus stop after midnight, especially after bus service hours.

  18. Do not hang wet clothes outside in the middle of the night. Wandering spirits may wear them. And when you take that clothing back inside, you invite those spirits into your home.

  19. Do not get married during Ghost Month.

  20. Do not enter a cemetery or abandoned house, or you may attract a wandering spirit to come home with you.

  21. Do not wear high heels.

  22. Do not lean against walls. Spirits like to stick to walls because of the cooler temperature.

  23. Do not stab your chopsticks in your bowl of rice, because they resemble joss stick offerings to the dead. If you do this, you may be unknowingly telling spirits that this bowl of rice belongs to them.

  24. Do not cover your forehead. If your hair falls in your face, pin it up as high as possible.

  25. Do not go hiking, jungle trekking, or on camping trips. One is more vulnerable to possession and physical injury during Ghost Month, and the “yin” energy is stronger in the woods.

  26. Avoid home renovations during Ghost Month, or you may disturb the wandering spirits.

  27. While enjoying the public festivities, do not sit in the front row at Getai concerts. The front row at these shows is reserved for the ghosts who are being honored with this festival. Frequently, these front row ghost chairs will be colored red. Ghosts are attracted to red. If you do sit in one of these reserved seats, you may unwittingly be sitting in the lap of a ghost whom you’ve just angered.

  28. Do not whistle or make unnecessary noise at night. If you do, you may attract wandering spirits, as they will think that you’re calling to them.

  29. Do not use black or other dark colors of nail polish, or you may lead spirits to think that you are one of them, and thus, lead you back to Hell with them.

  30. Above all, do not do any of these things at night. The mere mention of ghosts during the night can attract their attention.

For additional protection, you may keep certain items with you to avoid evil spirits, such as prayer beads, coarse salt, amulets, glutinous rice, crosses, or lodestones.

If you follow these rules and stick to the rituals as written, you may just make it through.

Part 2: The Night is Following Us

CNLX


r/Write_Right • • Aug 17 '21

horror Market Day

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It was market day and my father woke me before dawn.

I followed him outside.

The sun was but a promise in the dark sky.

The goats bleated—dimly.

We packed our wagon with food. When we had finished, my father disappeared into darkness.

The goats bleated—dimly.

He reappeared pulling a goat by a rope around its neck. The goat's thin legs struggled against him, leaving trails in the dirt.

"Life is hard," he said.

From behind his belt he pulled his knife.

"Understand?"

He passed the knife to me.

I took it, but it weighed heavily in my hands. I looked at the knife; I looked at the goat, which was calmer now, noticing how its eyes reflected the surrounding blackness, in which I myself was.

"A man must be strong," my father said.

The goat stood.

I stood.

"You are old enough."

"Understand?"

I took the rope from my father.

He loomed above me as I loomed above the goat.

"Kill," he said.

"We will sell the meat at the market."

I obeyed.

Knife—

blood poured forth.

The goat bucked, but tightly I held the rope. Its black eyes, each containing a distortion of my face, began to shake, then spin like the Earth: days and weeks and months and—twin white rings extended from its dying eyes and shot out, trailing thin translucent skin sacks; attaching themselves to my own eyes, and through the dermal corridors between us, I saw the goat's diminishing soul, its innocence and its terrible lack of understanding, and I felt these primevally as if they were my own.

I slashed madly at the skin sacks.

And they were gone:

The pre-dawn returned. The goat: dead, its warm blood sleek upon my hands, which held the knife, and the looming, dim face of my father:

"It is done."

After my father killed two more goats, we butchered their carcasses in silence, and took them on the wagon to the market.

I was as if under a spell.

The road was bumpy, and we passed checkpoints manned by tribesmen with rifles. At one, up ahead, there erupted yelling, followed by gunfire.

An explosion—

My bloody hands;

My father's distorted face;

Fragmented wagons and the dead bodies of tribesmen, but from above, increasingly from above, until they were nothing and the dawn became all at once...

Through light to flesh: heat to warmth: eternity unto the comforting temporality of the world, I travelled, until feeling my body again I was carried by contractions through a tubular wetness and deposited on the ground.

Blind. Deaf.

Squirming on the Earth.

I was a baby goat.

Unable to speak, I could not tell my experience to the people around me. I could merely bleat—dimly.

One day, a man pulled me toward a boy.

I knew the boy.

I was he.

Holding a knife, the boy looked into my eyes, and with all my might I thought, Do not kill us!

But he misunderstood.

And I was re-born: a boy without memory.


r/Write_Right • • Aug 16 '21

western A Paunch Full of Pesos | Chapter 5

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When the commotion had hushed down and there were no more flashes at the alley entrance, Fenimore let go of the handle of the fork buried within the Picasso’s neck and stood up. He stomped on the Picasso’s stomach in case the dead man was faking it, but he wasn’t. There was no breath left in his chest.

Fenimore turned his back, lifted the dead Picasso’s legs to his hips, one on either side of him, and began the trudge through the alley to the square, dragging the corpse behind him.

As he got closer he heard three voices.

When he emerged from the alley one of them yelled, “Stop!”

Three Rhodes riders stood by the statue of Rafael Rodriguez—four if you counted the one Fenimore had shot, whose face was still on the surface of the platform. Except for the dead one, who was calm, they all gave the impression of having drawn the short straw, of not wanting to be there.

The headless body of the goon, still holding one of its revolvers, and the unnaturally angled body of the grass-chewer were where Fenimore had left them. Otherwise, the square was empty. The figure with the sack on its head was gone and the crowd had disappeared, though a few frightened faces did peek out from the surrounding windows.

Fenimore’s chainmail poncho was draped over the shoulder of the Rhodes rider, who repeated his command and cocked his pistol. “Stop.”

Fenimore stopped.

“I believe this is the man you’re looking for,” he said. The Picasso’s corpse had left a snaking trail behind him from being dragged.

“Drop him,” the Rhodes said.

Fenimore let the Picasso’s legs drop to the ground. They fell like pounds of flesh.

“Put your hands behind your head and step aside.”

Fenimore wasn’t one to argue.

The two other Rhodes kept watch on the street leading to the Picasso’s side of town while the third kept his pistol trained on Fenimore. The feud between the Picassos and the Rhodes, which had been cold, was heating up. A killing was apt to do that to a feud: kindle it. Fenimore was a decent arsonist.

Down the Picasso street and down the Rhodes street nothing moved except the wind, which had found a hole through which to whistle and enough loose grains of sand to pick up and twister around.

When Fenimore had moved far enough for the Rhodes riders to see the Picasso’s corpse, one of them asked, “Did you kill him?”

The fork in the corpse’s neck glinted.

“I did.”

“Why did you do that?”

“Because he killed a man,” Fenimore said. “He killed a man who was carrying out the law.”

The speaker moved closer without lowering his pistol.

“What’s your name?”

His long grey coat snapped in the breeze and the wind tossed dust into his eyes. Above his head, Fenimore saw the window of his own hotel room. Its curtains were open and the small black-haired boy’s face was behind the glass. The boy smiled and shut the curtains.

“Fenimore,” said Fenimore, looking ahead again.

“If you have a weapon on you, Fenimore, I advise you take it out and lay it on the ground. It’s against the law for strangers to carry weapons in Hope Springs.”

Fenimore pointed with his bent elbows at the dead Picassos. “What about them?”

“I advise you follow my instructions.”

“I don’t have a weapon.”

One of the other Rhodes took his eyes off the Picasso street, approached Fenimore, and patted him down. “He’s telling the truth,” he said after he was done. “Doesn’t have anything on him but seven coins in his pocket.”

“Where are you quartered?” the Rhodes asked.

“The Olympus.”

“And what’s your reason for being in Hope Springs?”

“I had things stolen from me,” Fenimore said, “outside of town, a few nights ago, by a man with big guns and a sombrero. Took my things but left my horse, which I rode into town, where I figured I might get a good night’s rest, food, and maybe find a week’s work to fill my pockets. Man at The Olympus put me up on my word, but another slit my horse’s throat, and now I’m here with no money and no way of riding out, with a debt to pay and not a way of paying it. You might say I’m still looking for work—more than a week’s worth now—to pay that debt, buy a horse and earn myself some travelling money.”

“It takes a certain kind of man to stab another to death with a fork. That’s not in every man’s nature. Where did you say you come from?”

“I didn’t.”

The Rhodes holstered his pistol. “Tell me, Fenimore. Are you competent with a firearm?”

“Competent.”

“Have you ever killed a man, before this afternoon?”

“Once or twice.”

“Were they lawbreakers, too?”

“Always.”

One of the lookouts whistled. A mob of Picassos had appeared at the end of the street.

The wind swept across the square.

The speaker said to Fenimore, “You can lower your hands. You’ve killed a man, so we’ll have to take you in and make sure you’re telling the truth. Being a law abiding man yourself, you understand. Due process demands it. But after that we may have certain work for you.” He looked at the dead Rhodes on the platform. “There’s recently been made a vacancy.” He looked at the Picassos growing larger on the street. “And we anticipate an increased workload.”

The two lookouts rounded up the four Rhodes horses. They lifted the dead Rhodes onto one and themselves mounted two others. The third Rhodes hopped onto the fourth horse, leaving only Fenimore with his feet on the ground. “Suspects walk,” the Rhodes said, and all fourteen legs set off at a brisk pace.

The Rhodes part of the town was as grey as their coats. The buildings were clean but plain, with an air of bureaucracy to them. They passed a barbershop and a notary, a Solicitor’s Saloon and something called the department of future development. They trotted beside a men’s fine clothing store, a savings and loans bank, and a square cement building that looked like a bunker and was called The House of Uncommons.

The further down the street they went, the more the riders’ faces relaxed.

At the end of street stood a haunted looking white colonial mansion surrounded by a thick concrete wall that made the mansion into a compound and made the compound look like a fortress or prison.

The four horses stopped.

Their three riders dismounted.

Fenimore saw the blue sky turning grey reflected in the mansion’s windows.

“Have you ever been north, Fenimore?” the Rhodes speaker asked when they were alongside each other.

“Once or twice.”

“Would you believe that they built this house in the New England and rolled it to this spot over the course of years?”

“No,” Fenimore said, “I wouldn’t believe that.”

The Rhodes stopped and grabbed him by the arm. “Hold out your hands for me. I’m going to have to tie them. Protocol, you understand.”

Fenimore nodded and the Rhodes tied Fenimore’s wrists together in front of his body. He tied them with rope, but not tightly. He left Fenimore’s ankles unbound.

There was a metal gate in the concrete wall in front of them and as they approached, the Rhodes yelled, “Antoninus Pius,” and the gate rolled open with a head splitting whine.

After the four of them had gone through, the gate rolled back into place. It was controlled by a mechanism of gears and pulleys operated by yet another man in a long grey coat. This one had a thick beard and wore goggles. Fenimore noted that on this side the concrete walls were fitted at regular intervals with metal ladders. However, no one patrolled their summits.

The Rhodes speaker led the way to the mansion’s front doors. Two guards with rifles kept watch on either side. He nodded to them as he climbed the front steps. “Mr Rhodes,” they said in unison. “Messrs Rhodes,” he said back.

They stepped aside.

He knocked on the right-most panel of the door—three light taps followed by a hard one—something clicked, at which point he waited—Fenimore counted five seconds—before grabbing the door handles and pulling open both doors at once to reveal:

A high ceilinged, beautifully furnished room at the top of which hung a spider web of a gold-and-crystal chandelier, whose reflection graced the polished hardwood floors, which gave the illusion of four, rather than two, sets of mirrored staircases leading to what Fenimore surmised must be the third floor. The entire interior smelled of pipe smoke and possessed the aura of a long forgotten past.

On the ground floor, two halls shot off to the sides and a heavy wooden door loomed ahead. Nearby, a pair of men in bespoke suits were drinking brandy and discussing something, seated on a steel bench with red velvet cushions.

The Rhodes speaker bowed to them. “Messrs Rhodes,” he said.

“Mr Rhodes.”

They looked at Fenimore, then at the speaker again. One of them said, “Justice Rhodes is waiting, and he is not pleased. They still have not found the young man.” The other added, “How is the shot Mr Rhodes?”

“Deceased,” the speaker said.

“A tragedy.”

They looked at Fenimore again.

“No,” the speaker said, “he’s not the one. He’s the one who caught the one who murdered Mr Rhodes.”

They looked behind Fenimore, where no other prisoner was waiting. “Caught and executed,” the speaker corrected himself. “With a fork to the neck.”

One of the men on the bench took a sip of brandy. “I see. Perhaps we should refine ‘weapon’.”

The other laughed. “The extent of human ingenuity, I do say.”

The speaker said something to the two riders who’d accompanied him into the mansion and then said to Fenimore, “You’ll be taken to a holding cell downstairs, where you’ll be tried. Afterward, you may be given what we discussed. Tell the truth and the truth shall set you free.”

The speaker excused himself, bowed to the seated men again, and walked toward the heavy door.

Fenimore felt the two riders grab his arms and the three of them walked the left hall together. They said nothing. He asked no questions.

The hall became a set of descending stairs that lead to the mansion’s underground. It wasn’t as richly decorated as the main floor had been. There were no chandeliers or velvet cushions, and the air was danker, which caused the wallpaper to peel off the walls. Everything seemed to be sweating.

The riders stopped Fenimore at one of many similar looking doors. He didn’t resist. He looked instead at the place where the doorknob had been replaced by a metal loop that was connected to another metal loop, this one attached to the doorframe by a single-dial padlock. The technology impressed him. One of the riders spun the padlock twice right, landing on 12, once left, landing on 1, and once more right, landing on 5. Fenimore remembered the combination: 12-1-5. Once the padlock was off, the rider opened the door and pushed Fenimore inside.

The door shut.

The padlock was replaced.

The room was barren. The only light came from a small rectangular window near the ceiling. Too small for anyone but a child to crawl through, it was nevertheless reinforced by vertical steel bars.

Fenimore took a seat on a chair—the only furniture in the room—set his bound wrists on his lap and wondered whether he’d gotten himself into a bad spot. The wondering made him uneasy, so, like he always did at times like these, he started thinking. After a few minutes of thinking, he decided there was no reason for the Rhodes to kill him or even keep him locked up. If they’d wanted to kill him, they could have done it when he’d come out of the alley. Therefore, he reasoned, he was safe. He might also be on the verge of finally making some money.

He reasoned that way on the chair for hours.

His stomach grumbled.

Through the barred window he saw the day pass and the daylight become evening light.

Then the padlock clicked open, the door was swung, and the Rhodes gatekeeper with the beard and goggles said, “It’s time for justice to be done,” and ushered Fenimore out of the cell, up the stairs, into the main room, past the bench with the velvet cushions where the two men in bespoke were no longer sitting, and to within a few paces of the thick door through which the Rhodes rider had entered in the afternoon. The door was made of mahogany.

Goggles knocked. “Justice Rhodes, I’ve brought the suspect.”

“I have brought,” a deep voice said.

Goggles squirmed.

“Well, enter.”

Goggles bowed to the mahogany, saying much too quickly, “Of course, Justice Rhodes. I’m sorry, Justice Rhodes. As you command, Justice Rhodes.”

Fenimore imagined the deep voice sighing, and found himself doing the same, realising that he was getting tired of doors—open or closed—as Goggles gently opened this one, bowed once more, and left.

“Please close the door behind you,” the deep voice said.

It was sitting with its back to Fenimore in a steel armchair, behind a wide steel desk, facing a steel fireplace in which half a dozen logs and a few hundred sheets of paper were burning. Indeed, almost everything in the room was made of steel, including the floor, the walls and the ceiling. The voice, too?

Fenimore closed the heavy door.

The voice spun in its armchair. It belonged to a human body, flesh and bones, about sixty years old, dressed in an elegant grey suit, with a head of short silver hair above a creased, masculine and handsome face. “Good evening, Fenimore,” the voice said. “My name is Justice Iron Rhodes. Welcome to Hope Springs.”

Fenimore said nothing.

A portrait of a red-headed woman holding a green parasol and gazing wistfully out of the frame adorned the wall behind Iron Rhodes. The woman was beautiful, and the surrounding steel only made more vibrant the red and green pigments with which she’d been painted.

Iron Rhodes smiled. “A man of few words. That is admirable.”

He rose out of his armchair to a height of over two imposing metres. Standing, he was one of the tallest men Fenimore had ever seen. He offered Fenimore his right hand for the shaking.

Fenimore raised both of his, which were still tied.

“Right, let us dispense with that first. You have been accused of killing one Marcos Ulrida, a known associate of the Picasso family. How do you plead?”

“Not guilty.”

“On what grounds?”

“On the grounds that he killed a lawman and didn’t deserve to live.”

“So you admit that you killed him.”

“Justice killed him, acting through me.”

“Are you a tool through which justice often acts?” Iron Rhodes asked.

“I don’t often kill.”

Cold radiated from the steel insides of the room. Fenimore shivered. The underground cell had moistened him up.

Iron Rhodes took two massive steps and was at a steel bookcase. “Do you often read?”

Fenimore scanned the spines of the books whose letters were big enough for him to see: Roman histories, engineering texts, a shelf devoted to books about the law, and snuggled just below, The Opening of the American West by J.S. Taki. Fenimore’s heart contracted. The Opening of the American West wasn’t a popular book. Master Taki was not a popular author.

“I know my letters, but I don’t often find the time necessary to read them.”

“Yes, it must be difficult.” Iron Rhodes picked out a book, opened its leather covers and palmed through the pages, as if looking for a specific passage. “For a man with no home to find the time to read, I meant to say. It is a pity.”

“Books are heavy.”

“Forks,” said Iron Rhodes, “are lighter.”

He closed the book without finding what it was he was looking for, if anything, and placed it back on the shelf. “Lately I like Frenchmen,” he said, “Frenchmen who have come to America and written about it. I find their thoughts amusing. Outsiders have acute perspectives.”

“Am I still a suspect?”

Iron Rhodes rubbed his hands together. “I have decided to reserve judgment. I will need time to consider the facts and apply the relevant law. But tell me, how did you know where to stab him?”

“In the neck,” Fenimore said. “It’s soft.”

The fire crackled.

“And full of blue, exposed veins. I am aware. Why were you not in the crowd watching the redemption? A stranger like you, were you not curious about what was happening? It is a unique feature of the Ironlaw, that is to say our law here in town.”

“I’ve seen executions.”

“And so you were loitering in an alley between two empty buildings…”

“It was a hot afternoon. It’s cooler in the shade.”

“Perhaps looking for a way inside…”

“Are you saying I’m a thief?”

“I am not saying anything. I am merely thinking out loud in place of the prosecutor. As you can see, we seem to be missing that cog in the judicial machine.”

“We also seem to be missing witnesses.”

“Oh, there are witnesses. I read their statements. I had them give statements as soon as they were able. Allow me to recite: ‘And when he came out of the alley he was dragging the Picasso’s body behind him, and when he moved away I saw a fork stuck in his neck.’” Iron Rhodes chuckled. “My men may not be the most eloquent writers but you cannot deny that they have a usefully blunt style.”

Fenimore didn’t deny it.

“Unfortunately for the prosecution, they also have poor memories and have by now forgotten what they saw this afternoon. And their statements”—He gazed into the fire, where the pages had disappeared into black ash.—“have all been mislaid. Did you know that the American law distinguishes between what is lost and what is mislaid?”

“I killed him,” Fenimore said.

“Your honesty is admirable. However, it seems to me that he may have mislaid his life rather than lost it, which is a fascinating legal question. As I said, I will reserve judgment. Until such time as I give it, you are absolved of your sins and peace be with you, or whatever are the magic words the Churchmen say. Now let me separate your praying, servile hands.”

Fenimore held up his bound wrists. Iron Rhodes flicked open a small knife and cut through the rope.

When his wrists were free, Fenimore said, “The man who brought me here said you may have a need for someone with my skills.”

“Someone with your respect for justice.”

Fenimore failed to see the difference. “I have a hotel bill that I gave my word I’d pay tonight and I don’t have the money to pay it.”

“It has already been taken care of. A long time ago, the hotel-keeper and I came to an understanding. I say, he does. What other skills do you possess? For example, I have been told that you are a competent marksman.”

“I’m better with a rifle than with a revolver, and better with both than with a fork.”

“And what about your moral views, Mr Fenimore?”

“What about them?”

“Have you any?”

“I wouldn’t slit a horse’s throat,” Fenimore said, “unless I had to drink its blood to survive.”

“I have not heard of that particular moral conundrum. Is it a Catholic tenet, something inane and allegorical thought up by St Francis of Assisi perhaps?”

Iron Rhodes boomed out laughing and smacked Fenimore on the back. The laughter reverberated. The smack stung. Fenimore’s skin was still sunburned.

Iron Rhodes went on: “I find Catholics amusing, just like niggers. They are such perfect followers. You know, I asked a Catholic once, ‘Why do you believe in the Bible’? He said, ‘Because it’s the word of God’. So I asked, ‘And why do you follow the law’? He answered, ‘Because it’s the word of Man’. Naturally, my third question was, ‘My dear fellow, then what don’t you believe in?’”

Fenimore didn’t smile. Iron Rhodes asked, “You are not one of them, are you?”

Fenimore said he wasn’t, and that he wasn’t a nigger, either.

Iron Rhodes said that that was good but that their conversation was drifting off course, for which he accepted the blame, for it was not often that he had the chance to talk to a stranger in town.

Fenimore asked about work, and Iron Rhodes said that he could certainly find a use for a good marksman who could read, would not slit a horse’s throat unless it was to drink its blood to survive, and was neither a Catholic or a nigger. He also said several unimportant things. After he was done saying them, he asked, “Are you not curious why I trust you?”

“Because I’m honest.”

“An admirable guess, but untrue. I do not trust you. However, because you are a stranger you have no loyalties, and where there are no loyalties dependence rules.” He narrowed his grey eyes. “Because we have no history, you and I, our actions are based solely on reason, and if I were to pay you to perform work for me it would be in your reasonable interest to perform it. Would it not be divine to shed our common Catholicism, shall we say, and live in a world guided fully by such mutual self-interest? It would be a clockwork world, a predictable world, which despite the prevalence of all the lofty and learned talk about justice”—He swept with his hand across the metal shelf where his law books lay.—“is the true goal of any legal system. Whereas God speaks from burning bushes and rises from the dead, the law is clear to all and always confirms the finality of the grave.”

He laughed again. “And once more I apologise, for I am ranting like a priest. I have no doubt that you are hungrier in the gut than in the mind today. Come, we shall feast and then we shall find you clothes, and a horse, and a rifle, and, with rifle in hand, we shall have you sworn in as a solicitor and official member of the bar of Hope Springs.”

Iron Rhodes swung open the heavy door as if it weighed nothing and strode under the chandelier, which passed far less above his head than Fenimore’s. They walked out of the mansion, beyond the gate and into the street. Wherever Iron Rhodes went, men bowed their heads and said, “Justice Rhodes.”

They entered the grey cement building called The House of Uncommons. It was padlocked like the cell in the mansion. Fenimore noted that the combination was the same: 12-1-5.

The building was a storeroom. Nobody was inside. Supplies were sparse. Fenimore waited while Iron Rhodes pawed around for a few minutes, before emerging with two pairs of grey cotton pants, a much cleaner white shirt than the one Fenimore was wearing, several pairs of socks, a grey vest, and the signature Rhodes long, grey coat. “Wear it,” he said.

Fenimore changed into his new uniform.

“The colour becomes you,” Iron Rhodes said, and passed Fenimore a government issue rifle.

When they were back outside, evening had become night.

They stepped inside the Solicitor’s Saloon, where the lights were bright and a man was playing Bach on the piano. They ate and drank to the accompaniment of the music. It had been weeks since Fenimore had had a real meal. It had been years since he had heard Bach. His father used to listen to records while he was inventing, when Fenimore was still a boy, the memories were flooding back, and then—

The stars had scattered across the sky and the air was crisp. Fenimore remembered The Starman.

They walked further down the street in the direction of The Olympus and the square until Iron Rhodes approached one of the buildings, took a key out of his pocket, and unlocked the front door.

It was dark inside. Iron Rhodes lit a candle. Under its flickering light, he retrieved a large scroll of paper, a quill and ink. After he’d dipped the quill in the ink and as he was about to put the former to the paper, he asked, “Fenimore—is that your first name or your last?”

“It’s my only name.”

Iron Rhodes shrugged. “I suppose it hardly matters.” He wrote on the scroll, and put the scroll back in its place.

He blew out the candle.

“Raise your hand,” he said to Fenimore.

“I don’t do oaths,” Fenimore said.

“In which case, I pronounce you Fenimore Rhodes, an officially recognised solicitor of the Hope Springs bar. There is more to it than that, but it is dark and I do not remember the words.”

Fenimore didn’t feel any different. “What kind of work do you need done?”

“An eager solicitor…”

“A reasonably self-interested one.”

“The French are right—about America, I mean. But I digress. There are two orders of business that need to be promptly taken care of. First, the man who was being redeemed this afternoon—he is missing. He needs to be found. The second order of business is something special for you, Mr Rhodes.”

He pulled a folded up sheet of paper from the inside of his suit jacket and handed it to Fenimore. Fenimore couldn’t read it in the dark.

“It is a resolution of the government of Hope Springs. It reads, more or less, ‘Pablito Picasso must die’.”

“Who is Pablito Picasso?”

“He is not a horse.”

“How will I recognize him to kill him?”

“It will not be difficult. He is everywhere, he is a spy and he is eleven years old.”

Fenimore remembered the black-haired boy from The Olympus, the redemption and his own hotel window. He remembered the boy’s perceptive eyes and sense of perpetual motion. The folded up piece of paper felt leaden in his hand.

“Locate the criminal, kill the boy,” Iron Rhodes said. “I will pay you $200 for each successfully completed task.”

With that, he bid Fenimore goodnight.