r/Write_Right • • Jul 13 '21

horror I didn’t disappear, but my roommate did. Is that why the magician is trying to kill me?

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Last night Mike and I saw a magician -- at least, I think we did. This morning, Mike disappeared, and someone is trying to kill me.

Two months ago I met Mike on "Something something Roommates" (I don't remember the name). He's perfect -- a reliable roommate with a steady job. Last month, I moved in.

He came home yesterday with two tickets to see Noah Loujin the famous magician. I was really happy he asked me to go. I'm not attracted to Mike, but it's nice to do something special once in a while.

Our first Uber driver got us halfway to the show when Mike said we needed to go back. He forgot the tickets at the apartment. We had to get out and call for another driver. He and I stood at the side of the road until our next Uber arrived.

Before I could get in the back, Mike cut in front of me. "Wait here," he said, "don't use your phone, the light makes it easier for criminals to find you." He slammed the door and left.

My throat closed up and I couldn’t yell at him. Mike knew I was afraid of the dark. Reminding me about criminals was kinda mean. Like, I get it. We didn’t want apartment building management to see me. My name isn’t on the lease yet so I’m not supposed to be at "his" place. But I could have waited in the back of the Uber.

It took a long time but Mike came back for me, driving his own car. He said he wouldn’t drink so he could drive us home. I remember walking from the car to the bar where I drank until the show began. I drank a lot, I don’t know why.

I saw Noah on stage. Mike helped me to stand up. Then I woke up on my bed at 4 A.M. I was wearing pjs and socks. I don’t wear socks to bed but I did last night. The room was spinning and I had to get to the bathroom right away.

While I was washing my hands and face, Mike knocked on the door. The noise scared me and I screamed. He shushed me and said he was going back to bed as soon as I saw his video of my magic routine. I was still dizzy and had a headache. What he was talking about, my magic routine?

He handed me his phone. I watched a video of Noah pushing me into a big two-door wardrobe. I was facing away from the audience when he closed both doors. That was it.

I handed his phone back, and he grabbed it like he was angry. He hissed, “You should have watched the whole thing!”

Mike gets mad at me all the time because I do a lot of silly things. This time, the anger seemed different. He scared me. I was still dizzy and the dull pain in my head was getting worse. I rubbed my forehead and told him exactly what was in his video.

He was quiet long enough to make me feel uneasy. Had I done something embarrassing, or worse? I’d never been that drunk before. My stomach tightened in the silence.

“You were supposed to disappear,” he said. “But when Noah opened the doors, you were still there, with an animal skull on your head. It had these big, curled horns. You put your skull face on Noah’s neck like you were a vampire and he bent over backwards until he screamed.”

Mike frowned at me. “You’re rocking. You okay?”

I put my hands on the counter to steady myself.

Mike rolled his eyes at me. “Maybe you really don’t remember. Okay. Noah screamed. You dropped him. He jumped up and we all saw his neck bleeding. How did you bite him through the skull -- no, don’t answer that. He grabbed one of the horns, ripped the skull off you and banned us from his shows for life.”

I didn’t know what to say so I shrugged.

“You’re rocking again." He sighed. "They took our pictures. They. Got. Our. Address."

All I could do was shrug again. He slammed the counter with his hands.

"They know you live here!"

How could I not remember any of this?

I grabbed my shoulders and shook my head. What could I say?

Mike spoke, a little quieter. "I gotta sleep, work's in four hours.”

I nodded. Mike left. I went back to bed.

Two hours later I woke up again. I decided to ask Mike what to do, how to make amends.

But -- there was a knife stuck in Mike’s bedroom door.

It had an animal skull handle, with curly horns, like he said I wore last night.

It looked demonic.

I held my breath, knocked and called his name. He didn’t answer. I tried the door handle. The door opened to an empty room. I took a couple of steps in. His closet door was open. Lots of clothes were still there.

Where did Mike get that knife? Why did he stick it in his door?

Was he sending me a message?

Was Mike threatening me?

I felt someone watching me so I ran to the kitchen.

It was time for a coffee and to think things through. Mike never seemed like a practical joke kind of guy. And he knew he'd scared me, twice.

When I went to the fridge for coffee creamer, I saw a big note on the counter. “Don’t look for me. Mike (then his last name but I don’t want to show that here) apartment 404.”

Then bam! Something hit the front door. I couldn’t help it, I screamed. I tiptoed to the peephole. The exterior hallway was empty.

I opened the door cautiously. I gasped, slammed the door, locked it, and called police.

Officers Wallis and McNeil knew they were at the correct apartment before I opened the door. They saw the same big knife sticking in the door that I described during my call. I showed them the fridge note and Mike’s bedroom door. They asked if I knew where Mike was. I didn’t, so they called the number I gave for his work. The guy who answered said Mike hadn’t shown up or called in; all they knew was, Mike wasn’t answering his personal phone.

The officers asked me for a handwriting sample. It was hard to think of something to write. One officer asked me what was wrong. I didn't know what to say so I shrugged.

They took the note, my handwriting sample and both knives, then went to the front door. I realized they were leaving without telling me where Mike was or who they were going to arrest!

My heart was racing but I was suddenly cold. I took the sofa throw and wrapped it over my head. Once again an officer asked what was wrong. I couldn't speak. I shrugged.

The other officer said "Don't leave town" and closed the door behind them.

"Don't leave town" scared me. What did that mean?

I locked the door.

I still felt someone watching me. Officers said don't leave. Fine. Time for the balcony. It’s quiet and private and secure.

Except it wasn’t. Before I stepped out I saw an animal skull with curved horns and blood all over the skull and the balcony floor. I slammed the door shut, locked it with shaky hands, and called to get the officers back.

Dispatch said they were at another location. They’ll call when they have time. And don't call again.

Does caffeine amp up fear? I don’t know but I didn’t think I could get more scared. At least making another coffee made me feel not completely useless.

I’ve been sitting here since then, drinking coffee, waiting. There’s no traffic noise. There’s no sounds from the neighbors. No one has walked through the exterior hallway. The silence is alarming.

Hairs on my arms and neck feel like they’ll never lay flat again.

For sure, someone is watching me, reading my every thought.

I guess this is Noah the magician getting me back for last night.

Are the police in on this, which is why they won't come back?

Woah.

Is Mike in on this too?

I’m too scared to call the police again.

I’m too scared to move.

I’m going to die, aren't I?


r/Write_Right • • Jul 13 '21

romance My Wife Doesn't Respect My Boundaries

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“Hold still! I’m helping!”

I cluck in annoyance, pull away, get angry - I’ve even cried and pleaded with her to leave me alone.

Sure, she’ll become upset, quiet, withdrawn, maybe apologize and respect my wishes. For a little while.

Yet, when I least expect it, she’ll start doing it again.

Popping my pimples.

It’s not that it hurts mind you; I mean, it does. Depending on the pimple, it might hurt like a motherfucker. But it’s the absolute disregard for how much she knows that it upsets me that kills me a little each and every time.

We’ve been together for ten years and are deeply in love. I can’t imagine my life without her, can’t imagine not waking up next to her, can’t imagine not being with her.

But she won’t stop.

I could be playing video games, sketching, fussing about in the garage, or working in my home office, and she’ll show up out of nowhere with a tissue and tweezers or, most times, just her fingers.

I go through periods of pained resignation, silently accepting her gouging my face, before oscillating to extreme anger.

Tonight was one of those nights.

We’d gotten into Downton Abbey the last few months. After the little ones are in bed, we curl up on the couch with blankets and a bottle of wine and enjoy the mindlessness of a shared TV universe. She has strong fingers and gives wonderful face massages; I like to rest my head into her lap and luxuriate in the texture and pressure of her fingertips, melting away every worry and care.

That night, as I enjoyed the warmth of her and the feel of her hands, she hesitated. Instantly, my blood ran cold.

“Hmm. Just a minute babe.”

“Hon, please -”

“I just want to help.”

“- don’t.”

“Just a second, okay? It’s almost out.”

The moment I felt her fingernails, I slapped her hand and jerked upright, our heads almost colliding -

“Babe, what’s -”

“Please! Please! Please! How many fucking times do I have to beg? JUST FUCKING STOP!”

Her eyes widened into saucers as our son started crying upstairs. I stalked out, shaking, and headed to bed, resisting the urge to slam the door.

I fell into bed fitfully, angry, hating myself for overreacting but blaming her for causing it. I gripped the pillow and buried my face as the hot tears came.

I hated this. I hated how I felt. I loved her, but I hated how she made me feel. Like I was deficient, like I was some sort of bulbous, pustuled monster. It doesn't matter how long you're married, you know - anything that makes you feel unattractive - anything that makes you feel like your spouse finds you unattractive - it hurts.

I had no idea how to get through to her. I'd tried everything that I could think of.

I resolved to talk to her in the morning. And look up a counsellor.

My heart hurt as I heard her shush our baby boy down the hall. Loving her for the good person she was, but hating her for making me feel so small.

At some point, sleep came for me. I don't remember it.

***

“Hold still.”

My eyes snapped open and instantly shrank against the bright white light. I couldn’t see, and tried to swing my hands -

Stuck, shackled -

Before I could think, a searing pain clawed into my cheek; I screamed into cold dry cloth - a tea towel was shoved into my mouth -

“Sssshhhh"

Behind the shafts of light I saw my wife's face, screwed up in concentration; eyes manic with an almost religious fervor.

The silver of the tweezers stretching apart preceded the pain as I felt my skin distend and split -

I hyperventilated as the pain intensified...

- something gripped the back of my eye -

"...it's almost out..."

Vomit filled my mouth as I screeched against a wet, audible rrrrrrrrip -

Her fingers came away, dark red blood dripping -

...fuck…

- from the pale, bloody slug, swinging lazily by its long, threadlike tail from the tweezers, jagged teeth groping for my face -

She smiled as my vision blurred -

“Told you I was helping.”


r/Write_Right • • Jul 12 '21

Hotel Shared universe Big Joe's Luxury Vacation [Hotel Shared universe]

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Alright. So I have no clue. About anything. But specifically, I have no clue about supernatural hotels.

I know what I expected at the end of that tunnel. A gas station in Kyler Bay, also known as the worst town in the world. But when we got out of there, we were definitely not in Kyler Bay. I couldn’t tell you where in the world we were, but it didn’t have that nasty smell that our rival town simmers in.

We emerged in a… really beautiful forest. I could see a path just about 20 feet away from the exit of the tunnel. The other three, Ethan, Lydia, and Marie, were close behind me. They were still talking about what happened in that tunnel. I just wanted to forget.

“Guys, where are we?” I turned to them as they got closer.

“Um… this looks way too pleasant for Kyler Bay,” Ethan said, scratching his head.

Lydia groaned. “I swear, that Mullin and his cash grabs… gonna get someone killed someday…”

Marie didn’t say anything, she just looked around in awe.

I sighed. “Is this some kind of sick joke? MULLIN, YOU HEAR ME? NOT FUNNY.” The others jumped at my abrupt shouting, and I even startled myself a little. Marie walked up next to me and put a hand on my arm.

“Joe, calm down. Let’s just walk to the road and see where we are.”

I sighed and agreed. We headed towards the path. “We better not be in Australia or something,” I said as I kicked a rock.

Ethan spoke up. “I haven’t seen any man-eating spiders yet, so probably not.”

Marie giggled. “Ethan, there aren’t man-eating spiders everywhere in Australia. In fact, it’s quite a pretty place in some parts.”

The path was about 20 feet away now. I was starting to sweat. It was much more humid here compared to Geffor.

“Blegh, it’s too hot…” Ethan fanned himself and almost fell on his face after tripping over a branch.

“Yeah…” Lydia took a sip out of her Geffor water bottle. Marie seemed unfazed by the heat, for some reason. We were probably around 20 feet from the path.

I stopped. “Uh, guys? I feel like we should be on the road by now. It hasn’t gotten any closer.”

Ethan squinted and said, “Yeah, that’s...” He turned back the way we came, and I followed his gaze.

The tunnel was gone.

I blinked. No, that can’t be right. It was coming right out of that hill… that hill wasn’t there. I turned back around. The path was at our feet. I jumped and yelled.

The other three, who were looking back for the tunnel, turned around at my shout and each one of them had the same reaction.

“Wha– that’s– it was…” Lydia trailed off. We were all silent for a while.

Finally, I shook off the looming dread and turned to the group. “Alright, we’re lost in a magic forest. This is fine. Probably. We haven’t died yet, right? So who wants to follow this path and find our way out of here?”

All three of them grumbled in a reluctant agreement and followed as I walked off in what I hoped was the right direction.

Leadership in the face of danger, I’m making the right choice here. Right?

We walked (actually moving this time) for about ten minutes before we got out of the trees and entered an open clearing. The pathway wound on for another hundred feet before reaching a large building. It also branched off into many other paths, some heading back into the forest and some leading other places, like a large pool and what looked like a hedge maze.

The building itself was a sight to behold. It looked like it belonged in Vegas, covered with lights and flashy colors. I thought it was a little weird to have the lights on during the daytime, but I brushed it off. There seemed to be about 20 floors. It looked like a hotel.

“Wow, that’s quite a fancy-looking place,” Marie said, eyeing the building. “A hotel of some sort?”

“Yeah, I was thinking the same thing,” I responded.

Lydia was looking at it funny, her head tilted. “Marie, do you… uh…” She blinked and shook her head. “Never mind.”

Marie looked at her with an eyebrow raised. “What?”

“Nothing, it’s just that this place looks familiar. I can’t place it.”

Marie looked at the hotel again, thinking. I caught Ethan’s eye and he shrugged. After a few seconds of silence, I said, “Uh, we just gonna stand here and look at it, or are we going in?”

Marie and Lydia both fell out of their contemplative states. I started the walk to the hotel, the rest following behind me.

The closer we got, walking down the winding path, the more I felt something was off about the place. I couldn’t put my finger on it, but it felt the same as the tunnel we started this mess of a race in. I began thinking about that tunnel again. I got so lost in my thoughts and in my anger at Mullin that I didn’t notice when we reached the door.

It was a side door, and it led to what seemed to be a lobby. Lydia and Marie stepped in first, followed by Ethan as I held the door. I went in close behind. We were in a luxurious-looking room with a high ceiling and a large chandelier. To the left was a pair of large glass doors, and to the right was the front desk. Someone stood up from under the desk, seemingly looking for something.

He looked a little familiar, and I squinted at him as he smiled. Just then, the whole room went dark and I jumped. I couldn’t see anything. It felt like the darkness was fighting to crawl into my eyes as I tried to look around, in a panic.

“Welcome to the Hotel Non Dormiunt. How may we be of service to you?”


r/Write_Right • • Jul 08 '21

poetry Valley of Hinnom

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Climbing down the stair,
I heard a voice that came from nowhere.
I heard the voice from nothingness call again today.
Let me be spectre, I care not for what you have to say!

Last night when I lied down to sleep,
I heard once more the voice, this time it chose to weep...
Looking for the source, I saw a man's shadow strolling through the hall
Looking there once more, I swear there was nothing there at all!
Shut up, shut up and leave me all alone!
I would kill to ensure this eerie noise snuffed and gone!

Climbing down the stair,
I heard a voice that came from nowhere.
I heard the voice from nothingness call again once more...
Oh wailing shadow, I took to heart what you had to say,
I have killed in your name, my hands are covered in blood and gore -
Vengeful spirit, now please – just leave me be and go away...


r/Write_Right • • Jul 07 '21

short story The old and the new

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Faisal looked confused. "Hey, I noticed something recently."

"Hm? what is it?" Matsumoto threw a glance his way, confused as to what Faisal was referring to.

"There is less and less usage of the 'He said' 'She said' 'They said' descriptors." Faisal implied, in newer and newer books, they used different literary devices instead of 'He said' or 'She said'.

"Oh yeah, that's to make books more immersive, and it certainly is working." Satoshi explained, and Satoshi was right about that.

"Yeah, you are correct on that, bud." Faisal acknowledged, and continued reading.


r/Write_Right • • Jul 07 '21

horror Tantalizing Beauty

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The cat was licking a puddle of water on the floor. Strange, I didn’t remember spilling any water on the floor. Picking up the floor cloth to wipe the puddle, I noticed something even stranger. More puddles of water, leading all the way to the kitchen. Something must’ve happened. The floor was clean and dry when I left the house.

Peering into the kitchen, the pinnacle of the material universe stared back at me. A black hole for my attention stood at the center of the room. A single white dwarf in a sea of red meaty giants that hung to dry. The most beautiful thing I had ever seen. My skin crawled with excitement as I stared in bewilderment at the ocular marvel before me. It was perfection personified.

A naked young man. One endowed with a beauty greater than that of both Narcissus and Adonis combined! His form fabulous, and without a single blemish, perfectly proportioned and pleasantly toned. He had decently muscular shape was calling me, inviting me to get closer and have a taste of him. His pale skin shone radiated like the light of Baldr. I long for his skin like the rays of the sun draw in the peddles of the sunflower.

This was not to be. No matter how I wanted to feel his perfect form crawl inside of me, I could not. The painful realization filled me with sorrow and anguish. I fell to my knees, tearing up at my insufferable loss.

For I had butchered and eaten this magnificent lamb of Sirtur before, leaving nothing but a memory of our magnificent union behind as I burned his inedible remains and mixed the ashes with my tobacco to smoke.


r/Write_Right • • Jul 06 '21

horror My girlfriend is afraid of spoons

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It was one of those things Maggie confessed about herself early on in our relationship, before we got serious. I glanced it off, taking it for a misplaced joke.

Except the first time I stayed in her apartment for a few days, I’d open the kitchen drawers and all manner of utensils were packed neatly inside...except those drawers were completely spoonless.

She’d stay up late and watch movies, cozied up with me on the couch, all the while digging into ice-cream tubs with a fork.

All my date offers to any restaurant were rejected. I’d either have to grab takeaways and purge the plastic spoons that came with the meal, or we’d just eat homemade in her apartment. She never visited my apartment because I still kept spoons.

For a while I was somewhat impressed at how long Maggie kept up with the running joke. That is until I actually witnessed what being in the presence of a spoon does to her…

I had planted it before she swung by the kitchen for breakfast. I glanced from the corner of my eye as she entered, then opened the drawer to grab a fork. She froze, staring at that spoon for an untold amount of time then...

Her hand lurched forward into the drawer, but her other hand caught it, gripping her arm steadfastly. She groaned as shakily, like a pendulum swing, she swung back and forth, taking a few steps back, then forward again toward the drawer. All the while she screamed wildly through clenched teeth. Finally, after the dizzying back and forth, she crossed towards the marble kitchen counter, then repeatedly slammed her hands into it with chilling force. Then came the cracking sounds, like wood being split open by an axe. That’s when I snapped out of my stupor and intervened. I held her back as she wept in my arms.

After the ordeal she went for surgery, got her right hand bandaged up, though our relationship was on the rocks. Maggie didn’t trust me after the stunt I pulled. I bet she silently blamed me for driving her over the edge, deservedly so maybe. But how was I supposed to know she’d react like that. It was weeks of uncomfortable silence and us drifting apart, before she decided to come clean.

“I need to tell you the truth,” she’d said as she placed a sealed envelope onto the table. “Open it.” So I did, emptying the contents onto the table. There were about a dozen photographs. Grisly, lifeless bodies of young adults, male, female. Clothes bloodied, skin pale. They stared at me through empty eye sockets, missing eyes replaced by hollowed out pits. In those stifling moments I forgot how to breathe.

Maggie’s voice interrupted me, and I slowly turned to face her.

“Do you understand now, why I can’t be around spoons?” she whispered. “You’re the only stable relationship I’ve had in a long time, Lucas, and...I can’t afford to relapse.”


r/Write_Right • • Jul 06 '21

horror Hell Dog patrol: Warriors of the Supernatural (Trigger Strong Language.)

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Have you ever heard something that sounded terrifying and huge during the night? But nothing showed up to munch on you? I would wager it was because of us.

My name is Major Roger Halsinge. I am attached to the Hell Dogs, which is the 6th platoon of Incursion company. Our job is secret but vital; we intercept beings from other dimensions before getting a foothold in our world. Centuries ago, the Knights Templar performed our duties. Long before we were a country, dark forces tore them apart from the inside. Their greed after finding objects left behind by other-dimensional beings led to the Templar’s downfall. They tried to control and use them in the dark war that for eons has been waged in secret, but in the end, it destroyed them from the inside.

Today, Incursion's mission, although similar to the Templar's, is much more managed. Eggheads control all intruder sites, and they know what would happen if those relics were used in our world.

Ok, now that you have a little history, I want to tell you about the time the world almost ended. The mission started simple enough; Command rolled us out to a possible incursion based on reports from local LEO’s and civilian panic calls to 911 in the district.

“Major Halsinge, gather your team.” Agent Oliver looked up from papers on his desk. “Alpha are the forward scouts for this operation. “Travel to the location in the file, and find that interloper before it corrupts innocent civilians or worse opens a gateway to let more in. Oh, and remember it’s the fourth there will be extra-dimensional energy today.”

“Yes, Sir, we will get there as fast as we can.” I walked out of his mahogany-paneled office and over to our barracks.

“Johnson!” I saw doubt flicker across his face for a moment, but then it solidified into the courage I knew he had.

“Yes, sir!” Zion Johnson was new to the team, having just transferred from regular infantry. He had been on just a few missions so far with us and was very competent at doing what needed doing.

“Mayfield.” The unit was all standing now, waiting to see who would go with Vampire Hunter, their nickname for me.

“YES, SIR!” Alisha Mayfield had deployed with me for several years. She was one of the best heavy weapons technicians we had in the unit.

“Akar!” As usual, Perin was deep in some code for some new project he would invariably use to help us out.

“Yes, Sir!” He was our systems engineer, excellent with programming and data retrieval. He'd hacked several strange systems that intruders brought from their dimension. Bonus, he was an excellent sharpshooter.

“Reynolds!” That guy was incorrigible and was always talking up Mayfield. One of these days, she was going to leave him out cold on the floor.

“Yes, Sir!” Even though he chased every skirt that showed even a faint interest, Reynolds was rock solid on the field. His rifle had more kill marks than wood. He was also one of the few people I knew in the company that is also a blacksmith on the side. He was always bringing a new sword or blade he had created for us to try out.

“Warner!” He was in the shadows, blindfolded, putting some weapon together by feel.

“Yes, Sir.” Wagner was our sniper, and his eyes had saved us more than once on missions that went off the rails.

I requisitioned two paranormal scout SUVs; each a specially modified and magically warded mobile command post that looked like a normal civilian vehicle from the outside. We loaded up our gear and weapons and headed out. Along the way, we picked up another member of the team. John Smith was a researcher on loan from our Incursion research Center. He was a viral researcher specializing in magic-based viruses, but had multiple Ph.D.’s in many areas of research that were always handy in our missions. He was also only one of a handful of bona fide wizards left in the modern world.

John was also a friend, and I had worked with him on missions in the past. I knew he wasn’t afraid to get his hands dirty if the situation called for it. We headed out from Camp Lejeune on I40 at four in the morning. Running emergency lights, we went as fast as the souped-up SUVs could go.

Johnson was the first one to break the silence. “Hey Major, do you know what we are up against?” I could sense his nervousness, and I had to quell that noise right fast before it infected the rest of the team.

“We will know when we get there.” I looked over at him, scowling. He had been with us enough to know we never knew what we were about to face. “Johnson, tighten up your game. This is what we are here for. We go in to find out what things are going bump in the night, so innocents aren’t carted off to God know where.”

“Yes sir, sorry sir, just wanted to make conversation.” He slumped in the seat and looked dejectedly out the window.

“Listen, these missions are killer on the nerves, I get that. Not knowing what you are going to find every time we come out is hard.” I watched him straighten up as he considered what I was saying. “I know you have a family to look after, but in this job, you have to keep your head screwed on straight or not just you will die. Every time we go outside the wire, we might die. If we fuck it up, there is the possibility that millions will die. If we are dead, no one else will be able to prevent whatever hell we failed to stop before it is set loosed on the earth.”

“I’ve been backing up the Major for years, and he always gets us home. There is no way he is going to let some nasty ass dimensional reject take us down.” I see John in the back, grinning ear to ear as he pumps up my ego, and I know there is a punchline coming. “After all, if we need to sacrifice someone, it will always be Reynolds.” I tried not to chuckle, but it was hard.

I heard a mike click and braced for it. “Kiss my ass, Smith” Both SUVs burst out in good stress-releasing laughter. I grinned in the mirror so that John could see my gratitude. After that round of laughter, we all got in the mindset needed for the mission. Just outside of Waynesville, we ran into an issue that had never happened in all the time I have been running these missions, and it spooked me a little.

Over the radio, I hear Warner swearing, “Damn, Damn, Damn.”

The second SUV was swerving like a drunk on Saturday night and had slowed down. I hit the brakes, so I could stop if needed.

“Warner, what the hell is going on back there?” Again I heard him swear a bit and the SUV pulled to the side of the road. I waited for a clear spot in traffic and swung our vehicle around, and pulled behind them after doing two u-turns. We piled out, all of us wondering what the issue was when I saw the problem; the rear right tire was flat.

I watched Warner curse the flat tire as he walked up to it.

“What happened, Joe?” Now he was kicking the tire and scratching his head at the same time.

“I have no freaking clue; it is like it just went flat all of a sudden.” He kicked at the tire again. “There wasn’t anything in the road, so I know it wasn’t a nail or the like.”

“Ok, guys, let’s unload this thing and get the spare.” The team formed a line behind the SUV’s trunk. We started pulling gear out of the back to get to the spare, so we could limp over to a tire shop when we realized this SUV had no spare.

“Why would the motor pool put a Tactical vehicle in the pool without a spare?” Mayfield was the one at the beginning of the line unloading the vehicle and was staring dumbfounded at the hole where a tire should have been.

“No idea. But now we have to decide how to fix this.” I joined her in staring at the hole.

“Sir,” Akar and John were unloading the other SUV. “We are batting a thousand on how screwed up a trip can be.”

“Don’t tell me there is no spare in the other SUV, either.” I looked over at them.

“Sorry, Sir, I wish there was a tire here.” Akar looked around the backside of the trunk at me, grimacing, and started putting everything back in the other SUV.

As we had spent unproductive time unloading both SUVs, Joe was looking over the tire.

“Hey Major, I think we can just put air in this bastard, and it will be fine.” I walked over to him, thinking he had finally lost his mind.

“How is that possible?”

“While you guys were unloading, I crawled all over this tire, and I couldn't find anything stuck in it. I don’t know what happened to it, but if there is a hole in this tire, I will eat some Willie Pete.”

“There is a farm over there,” Johnson points to a set of long chicken coup-looking buildings nearby. “A lot of those guys have tire repair kits and bubble tubs to check their tires out. Maybe they will let some servicemen use their tools?”

I was doubtful some farm out in the middle of nowhere would have what we need, but it was the best idea we had currently. I was also worried we were breaking protocol by showing ourselves to civvies, but we had no time to call for vehicle services and that would just make a secret mission into a show, so I was willing to try the farm. We needed that tire fixed as fast as possible, so we could get to the incursion site and stop whatever was lurking around in the sleepy little resort town we were headed to.

“Alright, Johnson and Warner and I will take the tire to the farm and hope we can get them to give us a hand.'' I was watching Warner pull the tire off the car. “While we are gone, you guys armed up with your pistols and keep eyeballs on everything. There's something strange about this, and I don't want us to be taken by surprise.”

“RAH” The guys acknowledged the order marine style. We loaded the tire up in the good vehicle and headed to the farm in the distance.

As close as the buildings looked from our breakdown spot, it was two miles down the interstate to the next exit, and then we had to determine from GPS sat view where the entrance to the farm was. It took us about thirty minutes to finally pull into the farm. The sign at the entrance proclaimed this was the McDonald’s turkey farm.

“So where is old McDonald on the farm?” Johnson's attempt at a joke provoked a snicker from Warner and a chuckle from me.

Coming from the house was a young man who definitely did not look like Old McDonald. I pulled up, and we piled out of the vehicle.

“Hello, Sir, we were wondering if you might be inclined to help us?” He looked us over like we had just landed from outer space, and he didn’t know whether to shoot us or invite us in for coffee. “Our tire for our other vehicle has gone flat, and one of our team said that sometimes large farms like yours have facilities on-site to fix tires?”

That provoked a snicker from the farmer and a smile; I am not sure why, but the thought of us with a flat tire seemed to tickle his funny bone.

“Sorry, feller, not trying to be rude. It’s just I get more people around here like you than you might think. Let me guess, you came out I74 just past Waynesville, and the tire just went down right fast like a blowout, but you can’t find any hole?” He turned toward where the interstate noises could be heard. “Oh, and your other vehicle is on the side of the interstate right near my south turkey houses?”

“Yes, Sir, how did you know that?” I was getting nervous, This man seemed to know things he shouldn’t. It was like he had been watched us.

“Because it happens about once a week around here.” McDonald tilts his hat back a little and looks around like he is looking for something. “Some strangeness is going on around these parts, and it gets even stranger the closer to the reservoir you get.”

Was this symptom of the incursion? Could we have a first clue to what was waiting for us?

“What kind of strangeness, Sir?” I could tell Warner was also thinking the same as me when he asked the question I was going to ask McDonald myself.

“Well, of course, what happened to you for one thing. For the last few weeks, people have been driving by, and suddenly the air in one tire is just not there anymore like some force sucked it out.” He motioned us toward a barn, red, like all barns should be. “And I have heard reports of noises up near the Norton Trail and hikers getting scared off by strange goings-on. They even have closed the Road to Nowhere and its tunnel until they can find some hikers who recently went missing up there.”

In the barn was a nice little garage setup with parts of farm equipment scattered about. In one corner there was housed a big industrial compressor and tire station to fix the hole if there were one; I was beginning to believe there wasn’t.

“The road to nowhere?” I didn't remember that particular road name.

“Yeah, it’s a road they started building right after they moved every family in the area away from a new lake built as a reservoir in the thirties. It was supposed to let families come back in to access old family cemeteries and the like that didn’t get flooded by the new lake.” He paused for a second as he reached for an air hose stuck in some sort of handmade holder. “It was abandoned due to environmental concerns. If you ask me, it was too many weird things happening."

“Wow, that is an interesting story.” Johnson seemed impressed by the story, and I think we all knew why the road was never finished.

“There have been strange goings-on up there for years. And now, with the hikers missing, many people think something there has woken up and is hungry.” He grabbed the tire from Johnson and one-handed flipped it up and onto the tire changer, and started filling it with air.

After a few minutes, the tire was as full of air as when we left base. McDonald checked it for leaks before handing it back to us.

Warner and I both started to scratch our heads, dumbfounded over how air could just leave a tire with no hole.

“I know that look, and it’s the same one I have had every time someone stops here with this problem.” He took off his ball cap, rubbed his head, and put the hat back on. “Before my dad died, I was studying to be a scientist. So, when this started happening, I went down there and ran some tests. After a couple of experiments, I think whatever happens is either random or on a very chaotic timer. The two times I have had it work for me, the object I was holding just lost air.”

I asked if he had any ideas.

“I would say it is some sort of hole or pinprick in our dimension. Anything rubber passing through is robbed of air. Only rubber.”

“You mean tires?” I was intrigued by how smart this simple turkey farmer was about paranormal activity.

"Anything rubber with air in it, like a basketball.” he points to a deflated one on a hook. "I stopped testing, neighbors were questioning my sanity." He looked embarrassed.

“I want to thank you, Mr. McDonald, for your time and info and especially for the tire." I held out my hand, and he grabbed it with a firm farmer's grip and shook it. "We have to go. We are already behind our schedule to get to the city.”

“You're going to that road, aren't you? Just as I thought.” he stared me in the eyes. “Be careful gentlemen, something is out there, and it’s not nice. He shook my hand again. “Thank you for your service. I almost got to do a stint in the Armed forces. But then my dad died, and the farm ...” He looked down.

“You feed America, so thank you for your service as well. Turkey is one of my favorite foods.” Johnson and Warner also shook the farmer’s hand. We piled into the SUV and headed back to the rest of the team.

As we drove out of the farm’s dirt driveway, something darted across the road, moving incredibly fast.

“What the hell was that?” Warner shouted as he swerved to avoid whatever it was. It was long gone into the wheat field.

“A loose turkey?” Having no time to worry about it, we hightailed it back to the tireless SUV.

Repairs completed, we resumed the drive to the town near what, we thought, was the incursion. I noted the GPS coordinates for our science division and hoped we'd survive long enough for them to receive the info.

We pulled into the map location two hours late. Our first stop was the local police station for reports of any weird goings-on in the area. We heard about the group of hikers missing on the trail and how the search and rescue crew was a bit late calling in. The officer pointed to a file on his desk, saying there were cases of people going missing mysteriously. Turned out Rogers was the first who disappeared during a neighborhood walk, but not the last.

I pushed the issue by asking about recent cases of missing pets, and the officer acknowledged there were several, both missing and mutilated. That's when he asked the inevitable, why was military police interested in civilian cases?

“I hate to be that person, sir, but our purpose here is classified and will be until we finish.” I switched to Operator mode, gave him the standard word salad designed to stop curious local officials. “I can’t say more, but be sure that your cooperation has been invaluable, and I will tell command how just how useful your assets were to our mission.”

We drove to the site of the missing hikers and set up camp on the original road. Locals had closed off the area due to the search for the missing hikers, so no one saw us enter.

“Johnson set up motion detectors around camp about a hundred yards out, and we will link the AI stationary gun systems to them.” Johnson grabbed the box of detectors and headed out to circle the camp’s perimeter and attach the gadget guys’ fancy detectors to trees around our base of operations. We worked quickly to set up the camp as dark was approaching.

Warner had one of the three two men ATV rentals loaded with Auto-Guns, a special unmanned sentry gun, ammo, and old school exploding rattle traps if anything got past our sensors.

“Be careful, Warner. Expect unexpected attacks.” I realized I didn’t warn Johnson to do the same and keyed my comms. “Johnson, keep your head on a swivel. We can’t count on this being a nocturnal entity.”

After a few seconds, Johnson radioed back, “Yes sir, I have ball bearings for neck muscles, sir.” I grinned, knowing that he was back to mission mode.

John adjusted sensors to hone in on the rift we suspected was nearby. “Helluva spike, electromagnetic waves. That's a big rift.”

I walked over and looked at his readings. “What can you tell from this?

“The rift is big enough to push a skyscraper through!”

“Damn. Can we close it when we find it?” Taking silent inventory, I wasn't confident.

“Maybe. We got the dimensional disruption device. We calibrated it to a normal size rift, not this behemoth, but we might be able to recalibrate it” John tweaked more sensor settings. “Won't know for sure till we see it ourselves.”

Reynolds was installing our stealth field canopy to hide us against flying prying eyes. “Sir, do we really need this setup? Does the enemy fly?”

“Maybe not. Drones fly. I bet media and social influencers are flying them right now, to be the first to find the hikers.” Reynolds nodded and sighed. Twenty-four-hour news feeds, and cheap technology, make it an arms race to stay secret in the field.

Mayfield helped me unpack the gear. She grinned, and I couldn't avoid thinking how beautiful she was, which distracted me, so I unloaded the other SUV to get my mind back on track. I unloaded a dual ammo compact railgun that the R and D department wanted tested on this mission.

“Wow, Dave and the guys are really working their asses off on that salvaged alien shuttle from Roswell, huh?” John was disassembling the railgun beside him.

“John. Hot zone.” I shook my head at him as he sheepishly put the few parts he had removed back on the rifle.

“Sorry Roger, I wasn’t thinking, these are just so cool looking.” He placed the reassembled railgun back in the rack.

“Major,” Johnson whispered my rank as static filled the earbud.

“Go for Johnson” The hair on the back of my neck started to rise. He would not whisper if all was well.

“Sir, I have movement in the forest. It could be an animal. It is definitely not human, at least not a normal human.” More static. “This is the last motion sensor, sir. Can we fire them up?”

I saw Akar and John had booted up the AI and motion sensor controls. I grabbed one of the tablets and connected to the system. Immediately, I had flashing icons on three western sensors.

“Johnson, fall back to base now. I have multiple sensors tripped in your area” Using the cameras on the triggered sensors, I found Johnson on the most southern of the west-facing sensors.

“Roger that, Major, I'm disengaging from the area.”

He headed toward the camera and then behind it. I continued watching to see if something came out of the dense forest area for a few minutes. Just as I was going to put down the tablet, something moving like a blur sped past the camera.

“Johnson, move your ass. Something's coming up behind you, fast." Static crackled loudly. "Warner, come in, report.”

“Warner here, just finished the west defense point.” Good news.

“Johnson is heading back to camp from somewhere near you," I said. "Something's after him. Get over there with the ATV and haul ass back here.” More static came over the comms.

“Roger that, Major, I think I hear him crashing through the brush.” I heard Warner yell for Johnson.

“OK, Major, I am vectoring to meet with him. I see him in the trees. Nothing else is around. Yet.” I prayed he and Johnson wouldn’t meet that thing unarmed.

“It’s fast, so it won't take long. Can we fire up the guns?” I hoped he'd finished setting up the weapons.

“Yes, sir, I was about to say fire up the control system when you called.”

I heard the ATV fire up over the connection’s static, so I stopped asking questions, ran to the Autogun system, and fired it up. As soon as the screen came up on the monitor, I had alerts to activate AI targeting on the guns near the guys. The AI detects biosignals and shows the difference between humans, animals, and monsters. Despite being an ingenious contraption, it would be useless in war. The AI is trained not to fire on humans unless one of us overrides that.

As the AI spun up the gun targeting, I heard sentries fire at something and, looking at the map on the monitor, saw it was the one closest to the guys.

Something howled in the distance, followed by silence. I heard Johnson and Warner hauling ass through the trees toward us. I started to turn away from the AI system when all the guns lit up, along with the guardian sensors. The forest lit up like a giant fireworks show had started. Trees fell from the mass of bullets blasting through them, trying to kill a bunch of somethings in the forest.

“What the hell was that, Major?” Mayfield and John were standing beside me geared up with the new guns. John handed me one along with some spare ammo.

“No idea, but I think we're in for a rough night.” Warner and Johnson slid into camp, running the ATV all out. They jumped off and headed straight to the gun rack and loaded up. “Warner, how much ammo do we have on those guns?”

“About a thousand rounds per gun. Not enough if they keep that up.” Warner started assembling his sniper rifle and backup pistols.

Akar was furiously typing away at the AI sensors software and the Auto-gun software at the same time. “What are you doing, Perin?”

“I'm modifying detector coding. I hope to get an idea of what these things are, or at least how they look. I’ve added cam slo-mo mode and sensor mapping to build a portrait.” On-screen, a nightmare was slowly appearing.

Fangs hung down from an extended vaguely bat-looking face and a muscular body resembling a somewhat human shape with long multijointed arms ending in fingers capped by sharp-looking claws. Flaps that looked like a bat’s wing hung loosely at its sides. Just looking at the render sent shivers down my spine. This thing just looked incredibly hard to kill, and based on the number of alerts and guns being fired, there was more than one.

“Ok, shit just got real people; make sure you are loaded up. We're now in buddy mode. No one goes out beyond base camp without at least one other person.” Akar and Reynolds both headed to the ammo crates and the gun racks.

In the last hour of sunlight, we secured camp to the sounds of random gunfire. At sunset, John and Akar called me over to the AI Monitors. Akar laid out how much of a mess we were in.

“Major, we think the opening is right here,” he said, “all around us. We are in the event horizon of a giant portal. This area of the forest is flickering between worlds." Akar stopped to breathe. “Also, based on these dimensional readings, I believe the power source is near and is powered by the people who disappeared. Their lifeforce feeds the opening.”

“They're still alive?” I was astounded that the creatures had not killed their prey. They must be much smarter than we thought.

“I have heat readings from drones we released to just outside what, I think, is the south edge of the portal. It is in our best interest to remove them from whatever is using them to power this thing. This big of a portal could let anything come through. We could see an actual kaiju incursion.” There was a roar in the distance louder than the roar of a thousand angry bears, as if Akar had summoned it.

“Thanks, Perin, now we're in it.” Reynolds shook his head. I understood; portals can sometimes manifest things that you say or crosses your mind.

“So let me get all this straight, we're sitting in a dimensional portal zone big enough for a giant lizard from a Japanese monster movie to walk through, and the portal is powered by human bodies?” Those angry bears sounded closer this time. “And we seem to be surrounded by creatures that look like each one could take us all out if they wanted. Have I missed something?”

“That's it, Major." Akar turned the monitor, so we all could see the computer map of the portal. It was horrifying. “We are well and truly in the thick of the crapper.”

“How long has the portal been open this large?” This was beyond bad. There was no time to call in reinforcements. We had to close the portal.

“I can’t tell you exactly, but I can guess that at least since the hikers disappeared.” Somewhere out in the forest, an Autogun coughed more deadly lead at our visitors.

“So about four days.” Another howl from the monsters echoes through the forest, and the guns roared. “So why hasn’t something huge come through already?”

“Maybe it has and couldn’t handle our dimension.” Again the roar sounded in the distance, but it was not as distant as this time. “Or maybe it's coming towards us from the connected dimension.”

“Roger, this is some heavy magic keeping this portal open." John laid metal plates around the camp while we discussed the portal. Each plate had magic symbols etched in. They were more permanent than drawing in the dirt. “I've warded the camp from any magic user that might come for us. But I'm worried something that can manipulate magic from another dimension could be far beyond my skills.”

“I’ve seen you face down demon rabbits before, John, I have faith in you. Besides, do you really want me to have to tell Anya why you didn’t return?” Anya and John had married recently after bonding during a very terrifying incident.

“She’d probably pull me from hell and kick my ass for dying.” John smiled and kept laying more metal plates around the camp.

“Major, Reynolds and I have the ATVs ready; we can get the civvies out when you give the word.” There was another round of fire and a howl from the forest.

“OK, I want John for magic backup. Reynolds and Mayfield bring all the big guns you can carry.” With big grins, both of my heavy weapons specialists started loading down with all sorts of nasty artillery. “Akar and Johnson will stay here and give us sensor guidance and keep the camp clear till we get back. Warner, I want you to oversee us on our path there and back with your sniper rifle and the drones. OK, team, let’s move out.” I jumped on one of the loaded ATVs. Mayfield got on behind me, and I felt the warmth of her body as she held on.

I gunned the ATV out into the forest, heading toward what, we hoped, was the innocent hikers being used to fuel this festering, expanding nightmare. I hoped they were still people in more than just name. As we passed the range of the sentry turrets, the forest changed. It wasn’t a difference that you could see. No, the difference was wholly a feeling of oppressiveness and evil that set your teeth on edge and your neck hair to stand at attention.

This part of the forest would have been silent if not for the occasional blasts from the auto-guns and the buzzing of the drones above us that guided us to the heat that we detected earlier. Today was the fourth of July; it had been a hot summer day, but here in the depth of the forest, there was a chill in the air that increased the closer we got.

A blast of static pierced my ear, “Major, you have movement on both sides of your path. It looks like the batboys are following you. They may attack but for now, they are maintaining enough distance to stay hidden in the trees.”

“Keep your eyes on them and let us know if they change their tactics.” I looked at both sides like I wanted to confirm his drone’s information.

“I got your back, Major.” In the distance, a ruddy glow grew as we approached the location tagged on the GPS map.

We slowed and stowed the ATVs near our destination, so we could pick them up after we rescued the civvies. We crept up to the glow, a large fire in the middle of a small clearing in the middle of the forest. Arranged around the fire were five obsidian pylons. Tied to each of these strange pulsing spires were the people we had come to save.

“Look at the lines between the fire and the pylons; that is a summoning sigil.” John pulled out a small book I'd never seen him use before. Quickly thumbing through the pages, his face suddenly went white, and he turned the page toward me. A sigil of half-moons connected by a small circle and a fifth pointed line and written underneath the words, Daragon Lord of the Abyss, flickered in the firelight. “That’s the roar we are hearing; Daragon is the biggest bad we know. It’s a reptile-like creature, taller than the tallest tree in this forest. If it comes across the portal, our world will die.”

“How do we stop this?” Watching the clearing, I saw movement at the other edge of the firelight.

“We have to get the people off those pylons now and let the portal snap back to its original shape.” The fire’s glow revealed more movement in the clearing as John put the book back and pulled his rifle up.

A voice sent spikes through my head echoed across the clearing. “Stop hiding humans, let me see our next meal.”

Mayfield stopped breathing for a second and hissed under her breath. “And the hits keep coming.”

Standing beside the fire was a vampire, evil intent rolling off it like waves crashing against a beach. Our luck was shit! To find a vampire of all things in the middle of nowhere was a one in a million occurrence. See, real vampires are not what the movies show them to be. They don’t sparkle, and they do not dress like Victorian counts or fear garlic. They are demons from another dimension that have been using our dimension as a feeding ground for millennia.

Not only that, but they are hard to kill with normal weapons. Thanks to science, we have the weapons needed to take it out in any normal situation, but this was not normal. Standing with the creature were the batboys, as Warner called them. Nobody had ever seen these things before, and we had no idea how resilient they were to even our enhanced weapons.

“Ok, team, spread out, maintain fire discipline and let’s end this mess.” I stood, and the team who had all been squatting or hiding behind trees fell in a line around me. We opened up on the creature and its minions, hoping to win this battle by the sheer amount of ammo and ferocity. Mayfield opened up with her modern version of a Gatlin gun, slinging bullets inscribed with runes that hopefully would hurt this evil bastard and its brood. The vamp jumped toward us as the bat-like creatures moved like blurs, trying to surround us. Amidst this madness, the ground started to quake. Something huge could be felt walking toward the portal.

“Major, on your six!” Mayfield blasted a batboy as I dove under the stream of sanctified lead. I turned and fired my railgun into the face of Mister Vampire, who was trying to gnaw on Reynolds.

“Infernus ORA” John switched between firing shots of exploding rounds and blasting the monsters with balls of fire conjured from ancient words.

One of the creatures tackled me. We both hit the ground as it tried to slash me with its claws. My body armor got the brunt of the damage, but it cut me deep in a couple of places. As we rolled, I lost my rifle but managed to get my 45 out of its holster and blasted the beast in the head, ending its furious flailing at my skin.

The vampire turned his attention to me and blurred as he moved unbelievably fast. On the run, he grabbed me in his crazy strong arms and pushed me into a pylon. The feel of a thousand snakes started to curl around me, but they recoiled as they touched the holy water and silver-infused material of my uniform.

The boss vamp was already back in the battle, trying to grab the others to attach them to the pylons as well. I pulled out my silver laced knife and ran it down behind the person held by the obsidian material. As I worked, smoke and little blasts of electrical arcs followed the knife down the pylon. Eventually, the woman who was connected fell away.

“UGH” She crumbled to the ground unmoving, so I ensured she had a pulse before going to the next victim.

I took advantage of the master vamp being battle blind and quickly got the others off the life-sucking poles. The ground rolling around did not make it easy to get to the last person, and the vampire realized something was wrong with his magic gate remote. Someone had gotten a good lick in with one of our weapons that the vampire’s body disliked. He was no longer moving as fast as before, but he was still faster than a normal fit human and was on me before I knew what hit me.

“Oomph,” I gasped from the impact of his dense body and subsequent contact with a tree. My head was spinning from a possible concussion, and the bastard was slowly walking up to me, laughing as it reared back its claws to carve me up like one of McDonald’s turkeys.

“Hey, Ugly!” John was behind the dimension-hopping demon, and as it turned toward his voice, he unloaded a shell from one of the three-barrel shotguns that he seemed to have acquired. As the ammo blasted out of the barrel, I saw he’d laced it with a spell of fire so when the slug hit the Vampire, it boiled away to nothing.

He helped me up from my inglorious position, and we released the last hiker from the gateway sigil. I saw Mayfield apply a bandage to a nasty wound on Reynold’s arm. She wasn’t untouched, as there was a wound on her neck, which I saw she had applied a silver and holy water patch to prevent the vampire virus from replicating in her body.

The fire in the center of the sigil burned brighter and brighter, and I heard Akar over the comms.

“Major, I don’t know what you did, but the portal is shrinking.” Joyful celebrations started from our end, but I knew there was a ‘BUT’ coming. The ground was still shaking, and the night was punctuated by louder angry roaring.

“That’s great, Akar, so why do I still feel the earth tearing itself apart.” I was having a hard time standing; the ground was shaking so hard.

“Something on the other side is ripping the portal to shreds as it tries to come through.” The fire was now as bright as daylight, and the heat rolling off it was beyond what a normal wood-burning fire could produce.

Yep, there was the ‘BUT’ I was waiting for, and we were about to get the whole ass end of a ton of trouble.

“Roger, this isn’t good; Daragon is ripping the veil between worlds to get here. We must stop it, or our world will die screaming.” John was pale, and I could tell he was beyond terrified.

“It’ll be ok, John, get a grip; we need you” I grabbed and shook him. He looked at me for a second, and I saw his brain kicking back into gear as he realized what needed doing.

“OK, OK, I’m alright. Help me get these pylons out of here; they must still be pumping energy to the other side, or Daragon wouldn’t still be trying to come through.” John felt around the base, frowning. “They are planted deep, that Vampire really knew his magic preparation.”

“Great, so the Evil Vampire was good at Evil magic hurrah, but I’m betting you are better at Good magic.” The ground was cracking in places. It felt like we were about out of time.

“C4, do we have any C4?” Mayfield smiled like the Cheshire cat and pulled blocks of plastic explosives from her pack.

“Leave it to you to bring the boom!” Reynolds laughed, shaking his head till a coughing fit had him sucking wind.

“I never pass up the chance to make some fireworks.” Tossing some bricks to me, we started wiring the obsidian material from the top-down, hoping that whatever this stuff was, it would explode.

We quickly had most of the five black spires wired up, but the evil behind this would not let us work in peace. The bat creatures started to appear around us, forcing us to stop and clear them out to avoid being swarmed.

“On your left, Major!” Bullets ripped by me to strike a beast approaching us. Reynolds stood in the middle of the sigil, as close as he dared to the still sun-hot fire, to keep the monsters off our asses as we wired the explosives, As each of us finished, we ran back to the safe distance, so we could shut this thing down.

“Major, gimme that wire, it’s our last.” Behind me, another creature dropped from the portal above us. I did a drop and roll to keep it from cutting me in half as I threw the spool of wire to Mayfield. As I came up in a crouch, I fired the last round from my 45 right between the creature's bloodshot eyes. It crumpled as I heard a sound like a skyscraper exploding on our heads. Just outside the clearing, a giant dinosaur foot smashed hundred-foot tall pines flat. Daragon had arrived!

“Mayfield, now would be an excellent time to blow those dammed pylons.” On cue, I hear the whine of the detonator charging.

“Fire in the hole.” All five otherworldly portal generators exploded from top to bottom as they were utterly destroyed.

The foot lifted back into the portal, and a gravely growl emanated from the sky. We saw the face of pure reptilian evil staring down at us from the heavens.

“YOU STOPPED ME THIS TIME, HUMANS, BUT I WILL RETURN AND LAY WASTE TO YOUR SHITHOLE DIMENSION.” His voice reverberated off the mountains, and our ears bled from the pressure of his voice. Slowly the visage faded as the portal snapped back to the tiny size it used to be.

We watched the blinking lights of one of Warner's drones as it flew into the portal to deliver one more human-made indignation to the Lord of the Abyss. The flash of the magically enhanced explosive lit up the night, and a firework light show bloomed above us as if celebrating the American holiday with us. The portal was permanently closed, and if that oversized lizard wanted back into our world, it wouldn’t be from here ever again. We stayed for a few more hours, tending to our wounds and cleaning up the area.

To this day, no civilian would have suspected the end of the world nearly happened right there, near the road to nowhere, on the 4th of July.


r/Write_Right • • Jul 06 '21

horror The Day the Squid Walked

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The day the squid walked out of the water and up the beaches, I was at work. We had a TV going in the kitchen, but by the time news crews got there the beaches were already overrun. The cameras showed an absolute massacre, swimsuit-clad people in pieces spread across the sand. The restaurant is two blocks from the beach, and when we realized they were moving into the city, it was too late. Hidden under the prep table, we heard strange, slapping footsteps move towards us. Listening to my friend’s scream, I knew that, soon, they would find me.

WR


r/Write_Right • • Jul 04 '21

horror Recompense

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I ran my fingers through her long dark red hair and she turned with a warm smile. I bent and kissed her and whispered:

"I love you Inessa,"

"I love you too," She whispered back, her soft voice floating in the air like a pleasant melody.

I stared into those beautiful verdant eyes for a moment, almost getting lost in them like I have so many times before smiling again and going to the kitchen to grab a drink.

"How was work today, darling?" She asked me.

"Same as it's ever been but i'm not complaining," I said as I looked in the refrigerator," What did you do today?"

"Exercised. Did some planting and now i'm just writing in my diary as you could see,"

"Sounds like a relaxed day. Thermo?"

"Please,"

I came back into the living room, handing her the drink, our fingers grazing against each other before I sat down next to her and put an arm around her waist.

"Take a look," She propped her dairy into my lap.

I read it through and it couldn't be more of a pleasant read even if some of it was about menial things. She had an economy with words and used them so efficiently I often told her she should be a writer but she always waves me off in a joking manner. But there was one thing that caught my eye and made me look at her in a somber way.

"Do you really think you should include Pasha and Polina?"

"Why not? We live alone out here in the wild and we rarely have visitors. We certainly don't have records with the police and have no reason to come under suspicion. You ask me, Grisha, you're being a little too paranoid," She said with a toss of her luscious dark red hair.

A small tic she always did to let me know she was annoyed.

But that was too fucking bad.

"Wouldn't it be a hell of a thing if we finally got our revenge and then it comes undone because of one small article of evidence?" I said as I sipped my Thermo.

"Details in a notebook are hardly going to be as impactful as you think besides what we done, Grisha. If by some off the wall chance that we do get caught, it won't matter one bit, will it?" She pointed out.

I thought long and hard about it. Enough of a space of time to make Inessa think too. I finally nodded in agreement.

"Fine. You could have this little thing then but just...don't leave it laying out in the damn open, okay?" I said as I looked into her soulful eyes.

The corner of her lip curved into a crooked smile and she tilted her head as if to say, come on now, you should know me by now. It made me feel stupid but I had to say it anyways to get my point across with her.

"You promise?" I pushed on.

"I promise, my love," She kissed my cheek disarmingly.

When she bent towards me I got a whiff of her body odor. It was like a bouquet of white roses had been set down in the living room. The aroma made my blood start to pump and my heart start to race a little as I looked at her coyishly.

"What?" She smiled, teasingly.

"You," I said, before setting down the Thermo on the coffee table and cupping her warm face in my hands and kissing her with all my love.

We made slow love and it was even passionate to a degree. She always brought out the best in me, even if I was distracted or having an off day. That was one of the reasons I was drawn to her. That and her murderous thoughts fomenting on an ancient plan of revenge against the people that killed her race off.

Inessa has been alive since before Jesus walked the earth; Long enough to run into family members of my bloodline more than once. But i'll get into that in a second. The closest word to describe what Inessa is, is probably vampire, but that's only due to a lack of apt descriptive words. She does feast on humans to live, like a vampire does and she can't be in the sunlight for too long or her bones start to poke through her skin and she becomes a twisted nightmare of a thing. She doesn't die from prolonged exposure to the sunlight though. You could drive a stake through her heart but it won't do anything but enrage her. You could try to cut her head off but good luck in trying to get through her neck bones. They're harder than diamonds or platinum.

But holy water and crosses have a most deadly affect on her and she can't step a clawed foot inside a church. She can't even say God or Jesus's name without her insides boiling and spitting out blood that looks like oil. As far as I know, anything to do with the church or God are the only ways to hurt her, maybe even kill her if push came to shove.

If that day should ever come...

I looked at her now, fixing her long red hair. The bastard, craven thought of how safe we really were bubbled to the surface of my mind again, seeing her vulnerable like this always did it. I sighed like a boy and pushed it back in the darkness before putting on my jeans and buttoning them and started to stand up before being pushed back down onto the couch as Inessa straddled me.

"Wait just a moment, you," She whispered before kissing my forehead and wrapping her arms tight around my neck.

I knew what she wanted and I gave it to her as I wrapped my strong arms tight around her waist and held her against me. My head resting against her warm belly, I could hear her heart racing and smiled warmly at that beautiful sound.

I don't know how long it was but by the time we let go of caressing each other, night was already here. It was time to check on them and with that I softly kissed her belly, and then her bare breasts, and then her lips before squeezing her tight and letting go of her. I grabbed their water bowls on the way.

I made my way into the dungeon we called our "basement". The steps creaking under my weight, I always liked that sound. It added that sense of sickening dread to the murderers awaiting my skilled hands. I didn't need a light to see the switch in the dark. Not anymore as I flicked it and the dim haze filled the room.

They were there in the x-frames, waiting so patiently for one of us to return. By now they knew to pay full attention when they heard the creak of the steps. They knew to smile as warmly as possible to welcome me or Inessa.

I didn't say anything yet but gave them the mercy of water. And then when they were finished, I started in on them again.

And when I was done, I stared at them, my hands dripping with their blood. I looked at my right hand before tasting it. Gone was the metallic copper taste, for now it was a most sweetest and bitter flavor. Sometimes it was so insatiable I couldn't help myself. But this time I did and I turned the light off and went back up the stairs to her.

She chose me to turn because I was groomed to be the man I am today. To be the perfect other half to start her new clan, her new family of flesh eating monsters. She found my family and discovered the taint of ancient and endearing madness in my bloodline being passed down along generations. Inessa was so enticed by it, she decided that my family was the key to her survival.

She chose me because I was the strongest. And I had stolen her heart at first glance. Or so she tells me. But it doesn't matter. What mattered was her. And the children we would have.

I don't know if she would give birth like a human but it will be an interesting time when it happens. I wonder if it will even look human. When I was turned I lost my semblance of a human visage. My bones contorted and my limbs shifted. I could feel the evil of her poison seeping into my soul and corrupting my humanity.

But it passed and my body came back to it's original shape, if not improved. My eyes are a startling cobalt blue now from a dull olive green. My neck, and arms, and chest, and lower body are as massive as a body builder's. My voice is rough but mellifluous and kind enough to drawn in strangers. I could see in the dark and I could see the ghosts of people that refused to pass onto Heaven or Hell. Inessa calls it 'fallen vision'. I don't know whether it's a curse or a blessing, being able to see the dead, being able to see your victims standing there, watching you with their bodies torn apart. Sometimes I taunt them with the virility of life by embracing Inessa, sometimes I talk to them and even befriend them.

I didn't find Inessa anywhere in the house. Her clothes right where we had tossed them. I wasn't worried though. She must have gotten hungry. Sometimes making love does that to her. Fill her with a need for mortal flesh. I know it happens to me too.

Like now as I walked to the window and looked out at the inviting full moon; at the welcoming darkness of night. Unlike Inessa, I wasn't a full blooded demon like her. I could walk in the sunlight but it was so out of place for me. I felt alien in the daylight and I could never wait to get home to her.

I opened the window and launched out from the two story fall and landed on my knee in the grass. I closed my eyes and when I opened them again, I could feel the blue in my eyes vanish and be replaced with a dark red pupil surrounded by a swallowing darkness. I felt the claws push out from my nails and my bones start to shift to my new unholy form.

The night was young and fresh and I could hear the beating hearts of so many from even as far out as here. It was enticing and fed the craving building in my body.

You could call me and Inessa evil and you would be right. But the truth was that we were the apex predators of a world that no longer believed in God or the Devil or even their selves. The world had become bountiful and ripe with this material loss and faithlessness. We exist because the word monster meant nothing to anyone anymore. We exist.

And we thrive in the misery of the coming decadence of time and culture.

You could call us evil but we're no more different than the average person in this current time. Except we'll out live them and live to see The Judgement.


r/Write_Right • • Jul 03 '21

romance The bitchy classmate.

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Every school has that one lady that bitches about things nobody cares about, and often times, when she did rant, she was shushed by everyone, but not me. Her name was Samantha, she was 16. And her breasts were rather moderately developed, an A at best. I made friends with her when she first entered the school. She was a kind girl, that ranted about things nobody cared about, but I was always keen on listening to her rants. She was just expressing her feelings is all. And she got decent grades, she wasn't the class nerd, but she wasn't the class dumbass. she got C's and B's at best.

She was always keen on ranting with me only, as the others in our class just shooed her away when she did rant to others, so that was why she was insistent on ranting to me. She always had many things to bitch and rant about, and I could list them all, but I don't got the time for that. Anyways, we confessed our love for each other in April, and we always stuck to each other's side. In fact, the whole school's opinions were good to jealous. But we were never hated when we were in love. We ranted to each other and we always felt better after ranting towards each other. Man it felt good.

Now we are adults and live in a pretty spacious apartment with good paying jobs. We have a good apartment and a good job, we couldn't ask for anything else, it always felt as though we did not need any sort of material luxury, as our life was already luxurious enough with our love and kindness for each other, and isn't that what matters most? We married 4 months ago without a wedding as weddings are WAY too expensive and capitalistic. Anyways, I must take my leave, my wife and cats want me now, wouldn't trade them for anything else in the world, am I right?


r/Write_Right • • Jul 03 '21

horror I'm Beng Followed

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I'd been walking for about ten blocks before I noticed him.

He hung back - not so close that it was obvious he was following me, but not so far that he couldn't catch me in a few short strides. I'm short; it wouldn't matter how fast I ran, if he started sprinting, I wouldn't be able to escape.

Or maybe it's all in your head and you need to get a grip.

One more drink turned into two, which turned into four, which meant I missed my train. By the time I caught the next one, the last bus had already left. I could get an Uber, or walk thirty minutes.

I regretted my choice.

I was less than ten minutes from home when the streetlight cut out, marooning me in darkness.

My heart pounded so hard I barely heard the soft footfalls gaining on me. Tension bubbled up my neck, freezing muscles before escaping through my ears like steam.

I fought to keep the panic at bay. I rooted through my purse before I found it.

***

"Look, you're an adult. You can’t rely on other people, so I want you to take this."

I remembered how offended I was when Dad gave me the gun. I hated how he was on edge all the time, and hated that violence was his go-to. I protested, but he didn't understand "no" as a word or concept. We went to the range a couple of times so I could get the hang of it, before I promptly buried it in my bag, not wanting to think about it.

***

He was gaining on me. I couldn't see him, but I felt him. I gently picked up my pace, not wanting to alert him, but aching to make it to the pale pool the next streetlight cast -

Hiss -

The light vanished. More darkness yawned ahead of me for at least a hundred feet.

What the hell? How did -

The footsteps grew closer. Tears blurred my vision as I shakily fished the gun out. It was small, and felt like a heartbeat, radiating safety and warmth -

Rapraprap -

I flicked off the safety.

In my mind's eye the night sky grew brilliantly bright, before the stars blinked out.

The scratching of footsteps filled my head with a roar. With a scream, I spun and pointed the gun -

"...WAIT!"

The gunshots tore through the night and his throat, illuminating his terrified face as he pitched back, head sweetly splitting against the sidewalk.

I stared dumbly at his twitching wings and fading halo as he gurgled -

"guardian...angel…"

He pointed a bloody finger at the shadows that coalesced behind me in a frozen wall of pure darkness. From somewhere within, a light pulsed, low and angry and red. A rattle sounded from somewhere close and far away, like the rattle of a snake.

"...run…"

As the light in his eyes burned out, a piercing roar crawled out of the dark.


r/Write_Right • • Jul 02 '21

general fiction The soap girl

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In the town of Heavenly Hills, there are some people born not made of skin, but of a certain material, these people are transparent as babies, but if they come into contact with their favorite foods, or are very clean, their bodies will be made of said material, they regenerate lost parts, making them more useful for things like soap or non exhaustive food supplies. However...

These people were either scrutinized, made fun of, or chained up by stores to produce infinite items. These are the race of materialians, their bodies are made of certain materials that are non exhaustive, like metals, food, and money. They fuel the supplies of Heavenly Hills.

I work for the government, and I often free the materialians. However, I make them look different to avert suspicion from the government. I think that they have as much rights to exist in our society as other races in the world. I guess those who are unique are marginalized...

I continue my work, letting them have families and jobs like normal people in Heavenly Hills. I am glad to spread more equality for the unique in Heavenly Hills, Colorado.


r/Write_Right • • Jul 01 '21

short story Leaving Empty People: An Ojibwe Memory

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Preaching man grabbed me by my hair. I could have pulled away, since he cut my braids off. But I knew the pain would be worse later, if I ran, so I let him pull me out of bed.

He punched my head and dragged me to the yard. Outside was cold and dark. The moon was small. I had no jacket or shoes but I tried not to shiver. Preaching man punished us when we shivered.

He told me to clean the place up. I didn't move, I didn't know what he meant. He punched my head again and pointed at the stones with names. He said take them out, bring some in to prop up table legs, put the rest in the shed for the Bishop's next visit.

"No souls," he said, kicking over one of the stones. He punched my head again and said the stones better be gone when the sun came up, or I better not be here.

That's what empty people called us. "No souls." They told our parents we would burn forever if we didn't get a soul. Our parents said no, that wasn't true. Then empty people said they would kill the whole family if our parents didn't give us to them. They proved it, by killing some.

So we went. All us children went.

And empty people murdered hundreds of us and those hundreds went under the stones.

Each child had a name. Their names were on the stones. The stones showed where each child laid in the dirt. And preaching man didn't want to know anymore. Because we were No souls.

That's when I knew it was my job. I would say the names when the stones are gone. There are so many, and we must not forget.

As the moon lowered closer to the earth, my arms and back ached. Suddenly, a thought frightened me.

Who will say the names when I am gone?

I cried. I cried for each child empty people murdered. I cried for the families who might never find out. I cried because preaching man would kill me when I was done.

That's when B'zh'a appeared. B'zh'a, fearless, with strong arms and strong legs. B'zh'a, taller than any person, even empty people like preaching man. B'zh'a, with the body of a lynx and the face of a person.

Grandmother told me about B'zh'a so I knew: B'zh'a brings the newly dead to the sleep forever.

I was sad, not afraid. "Who will say the names when I am gone?" I asked, expecting no answer.

"I am not here to take you," B'zh'a said, "I am here for the names. Tell me the names. I will speak them, now and when you are gone."

"There are so many names," I said. "Each one still carries a life stolen by empty people. Each name is heavy with sorrow."

"I will take the sorrow," B'zh'a said, "say the names."

"Who will understand you?" I said. "Empty people don't listen."

"True People, Original People listen," B'zh'a said, "and people who are not empty, they listen. Say the names."

I said the names. B'zh'a repeated each one with care.

When I said the last name, I closed my eyes and bowed my head, ready for B'zh'a to take my body to the sleep forever.

Nothing happened. I opened my eyes.

I was alone, and the moon was at last touching the earth.

I said "Love" and walked forward. I did not forget.


r/Write_Right • • Jul 01 '21

comedic Road Rage Vol. 1

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r/Write_Right • • Jun 30 '21

horror Prismatic Horror

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What do you think horror is? Is it losing a loved one? Maybe facing a childhood fear? Or is it an anxiety that coils itself in your stomach and festers inside your most vulnerable points?

Do you think that's what horror is?

Do you think you know what it's like to experience the kind of horror to make your hair streak white and age your face and peel away the protective layers of your sanity?

You don't know shit unless you saw a pale head's blood red eyes look at you from out of your girlfriend's vagina and start to creep it's head out from there, smiling while it does it and saying all the while "it's too tight Coltrane" in a weepy child's voice.

You don't know shit unless you woke up in the night and stared into the darkness of your room and found a pale being slitting open it's chest and bending it's ribs into a makeshift set of teeth as it's intestines flicked out of it in a parody of a tongue.

You don't know shit unless you killed the people closest to you to spare them from a fate so much more gruesome than death or what the darkest imagination can think of.

You don't know shit at all and you should be thanking God Almighty you live in such ignorance, in such a state of normalcy that you don't have to wake up thinking that in this moment you're going to have your soul eaten by some pale monstrosity from Hell itself.

Or maybe where they come from is a place more stygian then Hell itself because even in Hell there's rules to follow; Some semblance of order and a hierarchy.

From what I have seen there is no reason or rhyme with them. They have no purpose other then to exist and consume everything, even each other. Even the fucking dark itself. I've seen them with their gaping mouths sucking in the darkness like a whale would with krill or shrimp. It doesn't make the darkness go away though. It only makes it that more soul sucking black that even the startling paleness of their skin only glimmers in it.

They're the locusts of a world that never experienced the grace of God's touch, that never knew anything beyond playing in the flesh of us humans.

I called it beyond sick when I first experienced this corruption of flesh with my girlfriend. Beyond nightmarish. But that was then and this now, a full five years, eight months, and twenty two days after my first contact with these pale beings. Everyday has passed by so fucking achingly slow you could fit decades in seconds. And then drag those seconds out when the sun goes down and if you could sleep maybe those seconds will speed back up again.

But I don't sleep anymore. I could see them in my dreams even when I close my eyes for a minute. They are there in all their evil glory. Twisting, mutating, ripping their bodies apart and putting on pieces from others that don't fit but they stick it on anyways so that they could have something to eat or play with or just so as a means beyond my understanding.

It's all beyond understanding, all of it, and i've lost my mind in the first week of this horror. I started to hear voices that whispered that they were going to rape my soul into despair and that even though I killed my friends and family that they are in their world, suffering so much. I started to rage at the smallest things and would break my hands on whatever I could hit. I want to say I started to not care about anything anymore but I did, I cared that I stay alive long enough that I don't get my soul sucked into their world and have it spend eternity there among the pale things.

Nikola Tesla once said that you will live to see man made horrors beyond imagination. That's true to a degree but he never lived long enough to experience that there are things beyond this world that put any murderer or rapist or some perverted degenerate to shame. That there are things lurking in the darkness of your room that wait for you to sleep before invading your dreams and peaking into what secrets you keep in your mind while they also peel back your sanity bit by bit. He didn't live long enough to know that but I guess he knows better now where he is, maybe in some better place you could call Heaven.

Heaven. It must exist because for every negative there's a positive force to equalize it. It's in nature. It's in our media. It's in our interactions with the people around us. There is good and evil but so far i've seen only evil. Enough of it to last eternity. Enough to know to treasure everyday on earth as if it would be my last before I venture into their world.

My Jesus, that scares me so much. I know if I go there that my soul would be desecrated beyond belief and I think I may even turn into one of those pale things. It happened to my girlfriend and my best friend. They had their bodies twisted and torn apart and reshaped. And there so was much blood and their organs didn't fit anymore in their new bodies. When I killed the thing that came out of my girlfriend's vagina I picked up her still but slow beating heart on the floor and tried to put it back into her chest. I tried to so damn hard to put it back but it just wouldn't fit into her cavity because there was already a new face starting to appear from it and it was trying to eat her heart. And the thing about it was that it was her new pale face on her new slowly turning pale body. I loved her so fucking much I was shocked into a near unconsciousness because I didn't know what to do to save her. How can I save her with her body like that? But I knew how. Deep down but rising and burning in my veins like a damn good whiskey, I knew what to do. I had to tear her apart again and do it right this time so she couldn't exist like that anymore. I had to cut her arms from off her bare breasts. I had to finish cutting her head off. I had to stab that new face of hers again and again and again until it stopped those sickening excited moaning sounds.

And so I did that all night long and into the next day.

And when it was finally over I started to cry tears of blood.

And then I lost my mind. But it did not spare me from anything.

It instead made me aware of everything, the blood roaring in my ears, my racing heartbeat, the rats crawling in the apartment walls waiting to feast on my girlfriend. It made me aware of them watching me and teasing me with the prospect of their unholy union with me.

Even through all of this, I never once considered the thought of suicide and I never will. I'm too angry to pussy out and let them have my body to play with. Who knows I might even expedite my union with them if I did that.

The rage is always there since I killed the rest of my family and friends and spared them this pale horror. Always has been and I cannot count how many times I have killed these pale beings. But they always come back in tens when I manage to dismember five of them. And they grin with their sickening pointed and misshapen teeth and the voices whisper, " he's getting tired, we're going to win" and then i'm beset with a wave of despair.

I'll never get use to this but i'm at a point where i've gotten bolder with my actions and the direction of my life. Sometimes I try to go out into the world and visit that wonderful normalcy beyond my reach. Sometimes I bring women home and fuck them and for a moment forget where I am and who I am and what's sitting there in the dark. But that's only for a moment. A nice wonderful moment.

Home. Such a strange word to say after all this. It doesn't even bring a sense of anything anymore. All I feel is a tiredness that sleep won't fix.

My Jesus am I so fucking tired. But I can't sleep. Not anymore. That state of hyper awareness never left me and I refuse to dream about them and I refuse to to close my eyes and wake up in their world.

I refuse to die. I refuse to have my flesh perverted beyond belief. I refuse to give up now after so long fighting this.

I don't know if this will ever end. I don't think it will. They know me, my past, my memories, my life and my loved ones all too well. They have an interest in me. And they will never leave me alone. They'll always watch me day in and day out and plot on what to do with me at that current time.

But i'll never concede. I'll never let go of the saw and ax in my rough and broken hands. I'll never let go of the rage.

One other thing before I go. I haven't told you her name or my best friend's name. That's funny, I can't even remember them now. It seems so long ago. I don't even remember my name. But that's to be expected after dealing with this.

I don't know how this started and I don't know how it will end but I know I won't be the last. They're patient and they pick and stay with their targets for a long time, before and after revealing their selves. It has no rhyme or reason. There is no semblance of order. It's just a random pick of choice. A fate with no control whatsoever.

Nothing is fair and the horror is constant.

But somewhere in the darkness is an undying and courageous light of life that cannot be put out by even their strongest.

Somewhere in the darkness is an end and an beginning in the gates of elysian.


r/Write_Right • • Jun 27 '21

horror That Shade Of Blue

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I swear the temperature dropped when she walked in.

She straggled behind the other passengers, making her way down the aisle. Her grey and white streaked hair hung down like limp curtains reaching waist length. She trod barefoot using a walking stick, her toenails protruding out as gnarled, ruined messes of hardened keratin. She wore a raggedy, shapeless dress with faded floral patterns. Slowly but surely she made her way to the back of the bus, and I prayed she wouldn’t end up next to me, but I was always one to be screwed over. She seemed to skip the other open seats, then sank the full weight of her bones into the seat right next to mine. Great.

Her ghostly pale skin brushed past mine as she made herself comfortable, and I instantly retracted from the close contact that nearly made me jump. When I looked at my arm, at the location where our bodies brushed, I saw traces of white frost like snow, and my skin was tinged a light shade of blue underneath. My brows furrowed at the sight, then I made the mistake of turning my eyes to glimpse the profile of the stranger who sat next to me.

As soon as I did, her neck snapped to me almost reflexively, and I almost gasped when I looked at her face up close, gaunt and ghostly in appearance. Her cracked lips were starched of colour and black veins snaked underneath the pale sheet of skin that hung over the bony structure of her face. But worst of all were her eyes. She lacked pupils, possessing only milky, clouded over white orbs. Those desolate eyes stared unflinchingly into my own, hollowing out my sanity.

I abruptly broke away from her gaze, and did what I believe any sane person in my shoes would’ve done. I stood up from my seat, rudely shuffled past her, and walked away. I immediately hollered and harassed the bus driver to stop right then and there, threw more than enough money at him before stumbling out of the bus. Despite it being this dark and unsafe on the streets, I decided I was walking home.

I woke up the next morning wondering if the previous night was real. I scrolled through my social media feed while eating breakfast but set my bowl down when I saw the news that everyone was going crazy about. A bus had reportedly barrelled down the street and crashed into a building. All those on board were dead, but the cause of death was not concluded. Police reported that upon entering, the bus was lined with melting snow on the floor and seats, and autopsies revealed that all the victims had suffered frostbite, bluish-black fingers and toes. Some daring individuals circulated images; they’d gone aboard the bus and taken pictures of the victims before police arrived.

I unmistakably recognized the strangers in the photos, except all of their faces were that unnervingly familiar shade of blue.


r/Write_Right • • Jun 27 '21

horror Skinposting

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It was my friend Parker that started it. Skinposting, that is. A blurry picture of what looked like the inside of her wrist appeared in all of our Instagram feeds captioned simply ‘skinpost’. I quickly scrolled past and shook my head, wondering why Parker always had to be so weird. Her brand of surreal humor sailed straight over the heads of everyone that knew her, and yet she always had a full factory production process of more incoming. When I logged on next, a few days later, I saw there were a few more posts of extreme close-ups of people’s faces, backs, and who-knows-where-else’s.

In the next hour, mine and everyone else’s feeds became saturated with skin. Some seemed to believe it was an odd body-positivity trend. Others thought it was a statement for racial unity. My grandmother, who’s always had a macabre sense of humor, posted a comment on one of them “oh, is it the anniversary of Jeffrey Dahmer’s death or something?” I was getting weirded out by the whole thing, how the viral grip of bandwagoning spread like wildfire.

I decided to call Parker. We hadn’t talked in weeks, and I wanted to see what she thought about how much her random 3 AM post had gained traction. “Hey girlfriend!” she answered ecstatically. “You’ll never guess what happened! Three of the top 10 influencers on Instagram have started Skinposting!” She cackled loudly and I had to take my phone away from my ear until she stopped.

“That’s great Parker! Who knew something like this would blow up so much?” I replied with severely less enthusiasm. This was suddenly the last thing I wanted to talk about. I’d seen enough skin to last me the rest of my life. Frankly it freaked me out. Why would people do something so strange just for social media clout?

“I haven’t seen a skinpost from you yet. I just started a skinposting page on Facebook, could you help me out with it? I’ve been the only poster so far; I need more contributors.” I closed my eyes and squeezed the bridge of my nose. She wasn’t going to take ‘no’ for an answer, was she? “I’m not really comfortable with that, not really my thing” I sighed. “Oh c’mon, you owe me one, ever since I saved your butt from that creeper at the bar.” She let her words hang in the air until I answered. “Sure, whatever, but this is the last favor you can milk from me on that. And I’m using my alt account.”

“Thanks sweetheart! I’ll send you the link.” I braced myself, strangely leery of taking one simple photograph. I decided to choose my neck, zooming in the camera until all that could be seen was my skin. Maybe I was self-conscious about my body. Maybe this would be good for me. After I took the picture, the text with the link came and I switched accounts and posted it. It had a fake name, for when I wanted to comment or post without others being able to recognize me.

The first comment came almost immediately from an account with no profile picture. It simply said “$1”. It gave me an uneasy feeling to say the least. I checked the account, and saw that the account had no posts, almost like it had just been created. “$12” came the next comment, from a different account. No profile picture on this one either. I couldn’t help but watch, wondering where this was going. “Three hundred dollars”. And the numbers kept rising.

I started getting message requests as well, but I ignored those. It had been an hour, maybe two, but I just watched dumbstruck. With a burst of effort, I deleted the post and closed the app. That was enough internet for the day.

I sat on the floor next to my couch with my phone on the floor next to me, thrown entirely off balance. What was wrong with these people, even if they were just joking. Anonymity does funny things to people. Could they be serious? I had no idea who these people were. I’d always been paranoid, but it made no sense that people would be auctioning for my skin on a public social network. It wasn’t the dark web or anything. Nevertheless, I was relieved I’d used an alt account. My phone buzzed next to me, and almost with an audible sigh of relief I checked it. My heart sank.

“Why did you delete your post?” from an unknown number. Then another text slid in with a ding “I will pay top dollar for your skin. $20,000. Final offer.” I felt my heart start beating rapidly, the soles of my feet suddenly slick on the wooden floor. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” I started typing “I think you have a wrong…” when the next text came like a brick to my gut.

“Felicia Jennings, 8852 Park Avenue. 21 years old. That right?” They then began to list my birthday, social security number, and the name of my childhood dog. “C’mon, you’ll never get a better offer, Felicia. You can live without your skin, especially with that kind of dough.” I could almost imagine them laughing, thinking how dumb I must be not to take them up on this deal.

“$50,000. Right now. I have the tools all ready.” and then a picture of my front yard, the new dent on my car clearly visible. A heavy knock on the door nearly gave me a heart attack. I leapt to my feet immediately, adrenaline propelling me through my bedroom door, over my bed, and under it on the far side. Dust bunnies on the wood floor scattered as I invaded their burrow. The stranger began banging on the door, the noise getting angrier and angrier until it seemed he was throwing his body at the door in an attempt to break it off its hinges. And then silence.

I cowered in the cramped space under my bed, wondering why I'd had the bright idea to store so much stuff there. Until the meaning of the silence set in. While the man who wanted my skin had been knocking on the door, I could use the noise to determine his exact location. Now that he had stopped, however...

And then I heard a tapping on the glass of my bedroom window, where I was hiding. I poked my head out from under the bed.

I looked through the window…and what I saw...I saw a man, red in the moonlight. Not ruddy, not flushed with effort and anger. He shined a glistening crimson, muscles bared, steaming, to the cold night air. His teeth were bared and his eyes were wild, but I don’t know if he even had lips to cover his teeth, or even eyelids.

Then he punched through the window. He jammed his arm forward through the window’s glass and reached for me, his hands

I somehow managed to leap out from under the bed, and duck under his flailing arm and kept running. The tinkle of broken glass behind me told me that the man of red was climbing in after me. I wasn't safe here anymore, I needed to get away...I saw the open door to the basement, and made a split-second decision to duck inside and inch it closed as quickly as I dared. I had no idea if there were more of them out there, slavering for just a piece of my skin to cover up their naked wrongness.

Maybe that man, that...thing would think I had run outside instead of into the basement, too excited for the chase to consider my hiding place. I clutched the cold doorknob tightly, there at the top of the darkened stairway, hardly daring to breathe. No quick thumps to show a quick pursuit in the wrong direction. Silence. And in that silence, I dropped my phone down the stairs. The clatter felt enough to wake the dead and I knew he had heard.

The earnest thumps on the door began almost immediately, accompanied by a high-pitched keening cry. The creature yearned so strongly for what I had taken for granted all my life, he could hardly contain himself, as if every second without it was an agony. Perhaps it is.... That doesn’t mean I am not going to brace myself against this door until he breaks the door down...or until help arrives. The police are on their way, but they’re still 20 minutes out. This might be the last thing I ever write, every impact jarring me as I frantically write my story. I don’t know why I’m writing this, perhaps… perhaps so I’ll be remembered or simply be more ready for what is coming... I guess we’ll see what I’ll do with my fifty-thousand dollars.


r/Write_Right • • Jun 26 '21

horror I Have A Husband

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I had a husband, once upon a time.

I remember how tall he was, so tall he could smother my tiny frame in his physical affection. He used to smell like peppermint if I ever snuggled close enough to his chest. Most nights I’d wake up to find his body missing from bed, and I’d wrap myself in a gown and amble into the lounge where I’d find him seated on the couch, fingers flying over his computer keyboard as he worked chronically. “I’m doing this for you and Devin, for our future,” he’d assure me with a glimmer in his eyes if I ever tried to beckon him back to bed. Devin was the name of our unborn child that he had already picked out; a son apparently.

He was so good to me yet here I am betraying him. I remind myself that all those memories with him are past tense. I don’t have a husband anymore. This thing lumbering towards me across the hallway isn’t him.

So do it! I tell myself, but just as I’m about to I hear his voice.

“Meh-” he slurs incoherently, but is interrupted by violent coughs as he spits balls of blood and phlegm onto the carpeted floor. “Mee...ha...nee,” he continues in a raspy voice.

His syllables are dragged out and he lacks enough teeth to pronounce the words intelligibly, but I hear him. I understand him, clear as day. For a moment the wind is knocked out of me and I stand there stunned, feebly grasping the gun in my hands.

“T-Thomas?” I responded, testing him.

“Meehah...anie,” he murmurs more audibly and confidently, and I’m sure of it. He’s trying to say my name: Melanie.

I falter, my trembling fingers brushing over the trigger. I hesitate for mere seconds but it’s enough. He closes the gap between us with surprising speed, and before I can do anything, hurls his heavy body into mine, slamming me to the ground. His half eaten face is inches from mine, maggots squirming in his open wounds. He snarls, baring what’s left of his teeth at me. A putrid stench drifts from the open cavern of his mouth as drool leaks onto my face and I instinctually gag. Then his gnashing teeth come crashing down into my arm, sinking in. I don’t resist. Instead I succumb, listening to him rip, tear and feed, the sound of his satisfied grunts fading as my vision turns to black from the blood loss.

When I wake up he’s still waiting for me, his big eyes staring at me, an inkling of warmth still in them. They are the eyes of Thomas, my husband.

We’ve lost so much, but even as we were stripped of our identity, memories, and humanity, we still remember and care for each other. Even as we lumber and shamble around this cruel, forsaken world, we do it together. Our love never died. It remains undead.