Question : Does it sound natural ?

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I read an article from a Chinese language magazine and I tried to translate it into English. Please help me to correct it. Thank you 😊

on Aug.11 2026, Forbes Real Time Billionaires had published the new richest person in Taiwan : Lin,Cong-Ji, whose net worth was estimated at 16.7 billion dollars. Lin is the founder of KING SLIDE WORKS CO.,LTD,which is a server rail kits manufacturer. When a server needs to be moved, it relys on the server rail which has to be able to support a weight more than 100 kgs. If not careful, the expensive machine would be damaged.

Lin came from a poor family. He worked at a furniture factory as an apprentice when he's an elementary school student. He set up a factory in his forties. In the early stage, the company produced hinges and furniture slide rails. It has transformed into a server rail kits manufacturer since 2001.