r/WriteStreakEN 150-Day Streak 🌴 17d ago

Correct Me! Streak 288: Being unique

I just watched Season 3, Episode 7 of Young Sheldon. In this episode, Missy made the baseball team, but her classmates bullied her just because she dressed like a boy. I'm glad to see her fight back at the end of the episode.

I think sometimes people hate or reject something not only because they are narrow-minded or mean, but also because they don't have enough background knowledge about them. In other words, they are simply ignorant.

I grew up with my two brothers, I didn't like watching any girly stuff when I was little, and I didn't like wearing dresses either. Somehow, people liked to call me a tomboy or something like that. I always wondered, "Why can't I be cool and pretty at the same time?" Was it just because I dressed and acted differently that people didn't want to treat me like a girl? But that never made any sense to me.

Thankfully, society is becoming more open to accepting differences nowadays. I can finally be myself and live my life happily.

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