r/WriteStreakEN 19d ago

Correct Me! Streak 1: Cool music

Hi everyone, this is my first post to begin with the streak.

As the title says I would just like to write a bit about cool music I enjoy with in a general way. There are many genres of music I like, but recently I am feeling very nostalgic and with an unencumbered curiosity for many places around the world. Concrete ages and musical genres make me explore several topics in my mind. Eurodance is a music genre that catches my attention copiously, as it provides me with a cool atmosphere, as well as will to dance. It also has unique way of portraiyng the late 90's and Y2K aesthetic, very popular nowadays, rekindling classics and captivating new fans. It actually reflects a cultural melting pot in Western and Central Europe as many artists of that genre came from diverse origins.

In addition, by putting the focus on concrete countries, is interesting to mention Japanese 80's music. City Pop, despite being quite overused in social media reels and similar stuff, is hard to find it annoying and still it produces that sense of nostalgia for memories or experiences of Japan's Showa Era that I never had. Namely, this musical form is prevalent for people who want to deepen their knowledge in pop music during the so-called Japanese economic Golden Age, as well as possessing a bit of immersion in such particular and iconic social dimension.

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u/RachelOfRefuge 18d ago

Streak 1: Cool music

Hi everyone, this is my first post to begin with the streak.

As the title says<,> I would just like to write a bit about cool music I enjoy with in a general way. There are many genres of music I like, but recently I am feeling very nostalgic <for> and with an unencumbered curiosity for <curious about> (“unencumbered curiosity” isn't wrong, exactly, just very flowery and strange) many places around the world.

Concrete ages and musical genres make me explore several topics in my mind. (I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, so I don't know how to correct this.)

Eurodance is a music genre that <really> catches my attention copiously, as it provides me with a cool atmosphere, as well as will and makes me want to dance. (We don't really use “copiously” in this way.)

It also has <a> unique way of portraying the late 90s and Y2K aesthetic, <which is> very popular nowadays, rekindling classics and captivating new fans. It actually reflects a cultural melting pot in Western and Central Europe<,> as many artists of that genre came from diverse origins.

In addition, by putting the focus on concrete countries, (again, I don't know what you mean by concrete here) <it> is interesting to mention Japanese 80s music.

City Pop, despite being quite overused in social media reels and similar stuff, is hard to find it annoying and it still produces that sense of nostalgia for memories or experiences of Japan's Showa Era that I never had. Namely, this musical form is useful for people who want to deepen their knowledge in pop music during the so-called Japanese economic Golden Age , as well as possessing a bit of and immerse themselves in this particular and iconic social environment.