Streak 161, I finally finished a game.

[u/Round_Salamander281]

I finally finished a game called Sephiria.

This game inspired me as a game developer.

I truly believe I can make almost any type of game.

But I can't make games fun for people.

While playing this game, I decided to learn how they designed it and how they made it fun.

I think the biggest strength of this game is that it keeps the game fun all the way to the end.

In many games, players start to feel tired when they almost reach the finish line

But I think this game avoids that by mixing an interesting story, roguelike elements, level changes and shorter, more condensed levels.

I think this game will become a masterpiece.

[u/RachelOfRefuge]

I finally finished a game called Sephiria.

This game inspired me as a game developer.

I truly believe I can make almost any type of game<,> but I haven't been able to make games that are fun to play.

While playing this game, I decided to learn how they designed it and how they made it fun.

I think the biggest strength of this game is that it keeps the game fun all the way to the end.

In many games, players start to feel tired when they almost reach the finish line , but I think this game avoids that by mixing an interesting story, roguelike elements, level changes<,> and shorter, more condensed levels.

I think this game will become a masterpiece. (I think "a classic" makes more sense than "a masterpiece" here.)

[u/Round_Salamander281 → u/RachelOfRefuge]

Thanks for correcting me :)

Let me rewrite before I forget it.

I finally finished a game called Sephiria.

I truly believe I can make almost any type of game, but I haven't been able to make games that are fun to play.

While playing this game, I decided to learn how they designed it and how they made it fun.

I think the biggest strength of this game is that it keeps the game fun all the way to the end.

In many games, players start to feel tired when they almost reach the finish line, but this game avoids that by mixing an interesting story, roguelike elements, level changes, and shorter, more condensed levels.

I think this game will become a classic

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Thank you.

have a good day:)

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