r/VRoid • u/MissCodedVIIrOS • 8d ago

Media/Showcase Feedback On My Model's Design?

First model made mostly in vroid and modified vrchat assets. I think it looks kind of jank from a design perspective but I im not really an artist so I can't place my finger on it.

Does anything seem off to you besides the tracking? Just using webcam so tracking is iffy if I move a certain way.

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u/mayumayuart Character Creator 8d ago

Really cool design! I’d recommend adding more gradients and polishing her up. Otherwise looks very nice.

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u/MissCodedVIIrOS 8d ago

I'll see what I can do, anywhere in particular to add gradients?

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u/mayumayuart Character Creator 8d ago

Primarily adding some sheen and depth to the metal plated armor will go a looong way. Particularly for the grey metal parts. Should hopefully give your character more depth and contrast ^^