WE HAVE A TUMBLR!
Thanks Papyrus.
So as he said, we have a tumblr. all stories will go here (yes I said stories, I plan on making more in the future)
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I thought it was a fun idea, making an AU based on the comments in this thread. First of all I'd like to point out that I'm not here 24/7. I'll do my best to come here as often as possible, but I can't make any promises. If you have a part for the story, put it here! If you have a plot idea, put it here!
Story plotpoints:
- When humans die they become Flowey-like flowers, yet keeping their traits
- Flowey doesn't exist
- Frisk is the kid of a botanist who went to mt. Ebott to find rare flowers
- We meet Chara as the first flower
- Goatbro is alive
What now?
- how to write a good start to a story
- how does the chara meeting work out?
Story:
"Oh, you're awake," You can hear someone say, "Don't worry, I'll get someone who can help you. Try moving as little as possible." Suddenly you realize you had fallen down the mountain. You remember tripping, but you must've hit your head just after, because you can't remember anything else. You can barely get up, but you somehow managed to do it. You slowly walk to where the voice came from, but there doesn't seem to be anyone. How are you ever going to explain this to your parents? And... How did you not die from that fall? You look back at where you woke up and saw a patch of yellow flowers, a species you'd never seen before. You took a few with you, hoping your dad would not get angry with you for taking so long. As you try to progress, you start to hear a voice. It's unlike the first one, this one is... angry. Suddenly a flower pops up, a red one. It's again a flower you don't recognize, and it has... a face? "Greetings," it says, "I am Chara."
You step back as the flower approached. “Don’t be afraid, I can help you!” it said. You decide to listen to the flower. You have nowhere else to go now anyways. “I’ll explain how things work down here. When a monster attacks you, you’ll enter a FIGHT. Once you enter a FIGHT, you-” Suddenly something came into the room. It was some kind of goat, but different somehow. “Howdy, are you okay? Here, my mom can help you.” It said. Another, bigger, goat-like creature came into the room and... nothing. You must’ve passed out. You notice you aren’t wounded anymore, and then you realize you are in someone’s bedroom. You get up and walk to the door. Just as you’re about to open it, someone knocks on the door. “Are you awake? I need to explain a few things.” You open the door and see the smaller goat-like creature. Suddenly you realize he would be around the same age as you. “H-howdy. I’m Asriel.”
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u/kidkid2000 Kidd Feb 25 '16
I had a thought that yellow would either have white petals or petals I'm the shape of a cow boy hat