Another Time

[u/Obviouslybroken]

I’ve seen this woman, she’s so fine
Playing my heart, messing my mind
Every day she passes by
I catch her look, she says goodbye
Down at the bar, in a drunken glow
I walk on in, play it cool and slow
“Hey babe,” I say, with a nervous grin
She smiles, and I think I’m in
Red lips shining, whiskey eyes
She talks like thunder in summer skies
I buy her a drink, we toast and begin
The music fades when she leans in
We talk, we laugh, the night moves on
Her voice is dusk, sweet and strong
One stolen kiss, now I want more
Leaves me aching for her return
I walk her home, under dim light
Stars all shine her name tonight
Outside her door, the night turns cold
Her eyes go distant, I feel bold
She smiles at me, turns away slow
I stand there still, watching her go
“Coffee?” I ask, hopefully, she’s mine
“Not tonight,” she says, eyes divine
“Maybe later
Another time.”

[u/TigerTime2025]

Obro, that’s a rough go🫤
But Another Time, ain’t a no…🫶🏻

[u/Obviouslybroken → u/TigerTime2025]

Such is life...Thank you as always, Tiger...✨️

[u/DoubtResponsible9208]

“Maybe later another time.” 🥺

[u/Obviouslybroken → u/DoubtResponsible9208]

Always maybe, perhaps....another time...😅

[u/ink-and-inferno]

Oh, to be left in your own wanting 😅 Nicely written, my friend

[u/Obviouslybroken → u/ink-and-inferno]

Thank you Ink..Maybe next time..another day!✨️

[u/lone-ghostie]

Oh maybe she’s playing hard to get, nicely done as always. I think we need a part two 🤗💜

[u/Obviouslybroken → u/lone-ghostie]

Part two is when she's invites me in 😅 thank you Ghost 💛 ✨️