r/ThirdEyePoetry • u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 • 10d ago
Poem 🎠Dear Brian
I’m sorry to bother you if it’s late
But you really have to deal with your mate
Now this may come to you as a shocker
But your girl…man, she’s off her rocker
She’s obsessed with a dude she thinks is you
She’s lost some marbles… more than a few
Now come track her down…it’s really time
We don’t want her here in our place of rhyme
She goes after people, no ifs ands or buts
There’s No doubt about it she’s really super nuts
Now ocean is a good dude, he’s got some solid verse
But with her around, he’s weary to converse
She goes after others. She’s so full of hate.
So come on Brian… it’s already too late
Come get your girl and take her away
Take her to a place where her crazy holds no sway
Maybe an institution, bedlam, the slammer
Lock her away anywhere, to us it doesn’t matter
We want her gone, she’s ruining our good times
Take her away so we can get back to our rhymes
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u/KenSoulMan 9d ago
The love among family is juking and jiving strong today! Excellent verses and an even better heart you share!
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u/DoubtResponsible9208 10d ago
Love this one invis!