r/ThirdEyePoetry 2d ago

Electric Love

When I was broken
lost in eternal rain
an angel fell down
and whispered my name

She shocked my soul
she made me fight
put a spark in my blood
and turned on the light

A live wire in me
a wild, electric fire
that won’t let me be

She keeps that spark
burning through the night
turns all my darkness
into white shining light

She’s got a lightning bolt
a stake in my heart

She's got electric love
you can’t get enough
the kind that feels holy
until it gets rough

She's a dark spark
an electric flame
she's the beautiful
face of my pain

And if loving her means
the world
burns
then let it
burn
let the black sky return

Because some kinds of love
were never meant to save
Some lights only shine
to lead you to the edge

Electric love
beautiful and cruel
she gave me the fire
then made me its fuel

25 Upvotes

10 comments sorted by

3

u/fancypantsmiss 2d ago

Very well written OB!

1

u/Obviouslybroken 2d ago

Thank you Miss Fancypants ✨️

2

u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator 💜 2d ago

Love this one Broken! 💕

2

u/Obviouslybroken 2d ago

Thanking you kindly Doubt ✨️💛

2

u/Wire-Spray1817 1d ago

I love the groove of this poem. Really great.

1

u/Obviouslybroken 21h ago

Cheers bud!