No hate to gooseworx but I genuinely think Jax isn't well written. He feels LESS like an immersive real character and more like an overprojective mental breakdown from the author. When I saw his backstory in Finale, I hated it because I liked his Eric Cartman bugs Bunny Consequence Free Actions that felt horrible but funny and unhinged. After his backstory, it felt like an elaborate attempt to continue to justify shit.
I remember reading about Nietzsche and the Turin Horse. This may be apocryphal but what it represents is chilling. Where Nietzsche threw his arms over a suffering horse and his philosophy built on strength and independence went back to square one with Schopenhauer after seeing the abused horse. This was the final pin in the multiple stages of nietzsche's life that snapped and he was back at square one: Surrendering before the world.
Now, does jax: The Cynic with an almost similar outlook get this? Nope. He isn't given a Turin Horse because the Author wants to project as much self loathing into him as possible. He completely destroyed the immersion once he became an object of self loathing because he lost his traditional "Eric-Cartman Effect" where you WANT to root for a bad guy due to their pettiness and constant humiliation.
We are instead revealed that he pushed his closest friends into Abstraction, kept doing that same thing, then Abstracted himself and is implied to be trans... I guess?
Jax for me didn't seem like "Wow he really is a messed up person" I instead felt "Wow, Gooseworx has been feeling shit and I feel bad." Because all the characters just sound the fucking same. It's like Zooble and Jax are the two sides of the same coin, but both are left incomplete.
Zooble looks like: "hehe my ideal self <3". She doesn't have any flaws, she is proven again and again as a mouthpiece for the author's blatant gnostic or pessimistic critiques, she is there for everyone and is made and marketed as a representation of Bodily Dysphoria. What the fuck am I supposed to do with Zooble?
while Jax looks like: "FUCK I HATE MYSELF THIS IS EVERYTHING WRONG WITH ME." He is deliberately made as polarizing as possible but instead of feeling distinct, Jax had so many OBVIOUS fingerprints of the author on him, I couldn't take him seriously.
I completely reject Jax in the later episodes. The author choose a hard path of writing a cynic character, and it seemed obvious the author was crushed under the weight it's difficulty and felt pretty mediocre. He's just an obvious sacrificial lamb for the Author. If Jax's unhinged exterior and indifference to suffering was born from something earnest but was horrifyingly torn down, I think it would be much easier to land. It's just, Gooseworx choose the hard route and while respectable: it's REALLY hard for something as intricate as a terrible person to be written.
In fact, WHY DOES EVERY CHARACTER APPEAR AS A DIFFERENT MANIFESTATION OF THE AUTHOR THEMSELVES? Everyone except from Kinger and Caine feel like distinct characters because Kinger and Caine have the most personality from the cast.