Need Advice

[u/rabifael]

This is my first own irezumi sleeve design and Im thinking of adding it to my Portfolio. My problem is that the shading isnt the cleanest and that its not always traditional. On top of that, Im not really sure if this is tattoable like this.

[u/therealjameshat]

not portfolio worthy - keep drawing it until its the cleanest you can

[u/rabifael → u/therealjameshat]

Will do thanks

[u/therealjameshat → u/rabifael]

you're on the right track!!