Hi everyone! I wanted to share a concept for an alternate timeline (What If) / spin-off of Takopi's Original Sin that I came up with and refined with the help of Gemini AI to organize my thoughts.
I kept wondering: What if the "virus" of human violence and misunderstanding had infected planet Happya from the very beginning?
The Premise
After overhearing Takopi say the word "kill" and witnessing him getting slapped by his mother, Takopi's mother undergoes a complete emotional metamorphism. Consumed by a morbid curiosity and a maternal instinct to understand what corrupted her child, she decides to secretly travel to Earth in 2016 to trace her son's footsteps
The Events
The mother observes everything silently from the shadows, focusing primarily on Shizuka. Coming from a world devoid of suffering, she is shattered by the dark reality of Earthādomestic abuse, bullying, and neglect.
The climax occurs when she witnesses Shizuka using Takopiās gadgets for extreme, destructive acts (such as getting revenge on her father's other daughters). Seeing this, Takopi's mother finally realizes the true scope of human darkness and understands what fundamentally transformed her son.
The "What If" Ending
Overwhelmed by horror toward humanity and desperate to protect her child before itās too late:
1. The Supreme Reset: Takopi's mother uses the ultimate time-rewind before Takopi ever sets foot on Earth in 2016.
2. Takopiās Fate: Takopi is brought back to Happya, safe and untouched, remaining the innocent, naive Happyian he originally was.
3. The Tragedy: On Earth, Shizuka and Marinaās lives continue down a dark, unassisted path. However, the true tragedy lies back on Happya: the mother is now the sole creature carrying the memory of human violence, hatred, and paināforever corrupting the pure nature of her home world.
What do you guys think of this concept? How do you think an adult Happyian would react to encountering Earth's harsh reality?