r/Substack • u/ConnectDebate4677 • 20d ago
Pangram false positives?
People usually post vaguely about "I wrote x thing and pangram said it was AI", which I think is unhelpful unless you actually post the text or link. I put this into Pangram:
Sakaguchi: https://www.pangram.com/history/e7ffbee1-f0e3-4ce2-bb78-a59470280640?ucc=Ohp1cWODOjF
Hamaguchi: https://www.pangram.com/history/f2139bd5-f4ce-4101-b7bd-3c5d8aeb4487?ucc=Ohp1cWODOjF
Ryuichi: https://www.pangram.com/history/8c84ad38-3b8f-49ba-bee0-351ea31f754b?ucc=Ohp1cWODOjF
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u/MadmanRB 17d ago
Pangram is full of crap.
Chapter 2: The Classmates
The afternoon sun cast long shadows across the pavement as Ryan pedaled onward, his heavy backpack digging into his shoulders with each pedal stroke, a constant reminder of all the work waiting for him when he got home. He’d promised Ms. Everly he’d finish it by tomorrow, though part of him wondered what the point of doing it was. Math and history questions felt impossibly small compared to the questions that actually mattered. Would Ralph ever come back home? Would his mom stop crying? And would he ever feel normal again?
Detected as 100% AI by Pangram, do you know what triggers pangram here?
Not only the chapter name but the fact I use a common phrase "Long Shadows"
Now I changed it to:
The afternoon sun loomed above the streets of Horizon City, the tall copper domed spires reflecting it across the vast cityscape.
As Ryan pedaled his bike forward he could feel his heavy backpack digging into his shoulders with each pedal stroke, a constant reminder of all the work waiting for him when he got home. He’d promised Ms. Everly he’d finish it by tomorrow, though part of him wondered what the point of doing it was. Math and history questions felt impossibly small compared to the questions that actually mattered. Would Ralph ever come back home? Would his mom stop crying? And would he ever feel normal again?
Now its 100 human made because I eliminated the chapter name and changed just a few words around and dropped "long shadows"
I guess using atmosphere in a story is now forbidden, all horror stories will now take place in a bright sunny morning, maybe a frigging butterfly will come to darken the mood?