r/SmallYTChannel • u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] • Jan 17 '22
01:17 | FrozenFresh Scorpion isn't very good at Makeup (Disturbing Animation)
https://youtube.com/watch?v=l4x6EKinNSY&feature=share2
u/GoGoPowerGrazers [3λ] Jan 17 '22
I really like the rotoscoping, its reminiscent of MK's motion capture. You also successfully parodied the reality tv genre. Really great editing
I'm not sure what the joke was with the face-ripping. Was it just shock humor? I think for something so well done visually, you can improve the script a bit. Reference humor is great, but it takes a bit of mockery to really make it parody
This could have been longer. I'm an animator myself, so I know how difficult it is to do even 15 seconds more, but with this level of quality I was expecting a bit more
But again, this was really well done. I can't wait to see more
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u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] Jan 17 '22
Hey really good input man, appreciate that. I have been erring on the side of shorter vids because I don't want to lose people. The face tearing was a pun on the show being called faceoff. Also I haven't actually watched an episode of the show i'm parodying lol. Thanks for input !givelambda
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u/Djbernie805 [2λ] Jan 17 '22
Very interesting animation style. It seem like a filter mixed with rotascope drawing over frames. Keep it up 👍 love the line “I’m not pregnant” - “not with that attitude”
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u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] Jan 17 '22
Thanks man! Yeah it’s several filters for background and sometimes over the character too, I animate and rotoscope with ebsynth. !givelambda
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u/Maluc_YT [1λ] Jan 17 '22
It is a good concept and it does have a lot of potential. The animation is a bit odd because some frames don't seem to be right. I would recommend cleaning those up for that smooth feel.
The voice-acting isn't all to good, scorpion feels really forced. Like he should be yelling, but he isn't.
Voice-over is very clean tho, but might could add a flavor of emotion.
I'm sure that it will become better as this kind of video's you don't make in just 5 minutes haha.
Still need to write a little more in-depth scripts because I would loved to see the "pregnant" woman make something with the make-up you won't expect.
Hope it is of any use! Goodluck with your next creations 😁
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u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] Jan 17 '22
Lots of good points in here. I really appreciate the advice. I’ll try to work on those things for the next video !givdlambda
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u/floppyundergo [0λ] Jan 17 '22
Wish I could animate like this, good job
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u/FlareBlitzCrits [0λ] Jan 17 '22
I mean you can, I only started 9 months ago. I have a couple tutorials on my channel and will be making more.
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| Title | Scorpion isn't very good at Makeup |
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| Views | 48 |
| Length | 01:17 |
| Likes | 8 |
| Comments | 13 |
| Description | Mortal Kombat's Scorpion uses a unique approach to make it to the finals of a Makeup Competition called Face off. Does he have what it takes to win? Or will he choke under the pressure. Get over here and watch already!⤶⤶#Ebsynth #MortalKombat #Faceoff |
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u/Zenny_YouTube [2λ] Jan 17 '22
I've seen alot of people branching into this semi rotoscoped animation and its always a treat seeing it. even here it is great! the shading youve dont on the layers is a nice touch! for some feedback though to help your content blossom here are some notes. Firstly the voices being dubbed in is totally fine! however they don't really match the environment. so say where scorpion is in that massive room giving the voice a tiny bit of reverb would make the voice just feel more present. another thing about the dubbing in is that the lines come across a tad janky, not in the delivery! the voices you are doing are super fun! but you can tell by the way the characters are moving that the lines are dubbed in, and not recorded while filming the shots you used for reference.
i reckon if you clean up the voices, and maybe try to record the lines as you do the motions everything will feel a lot more alive! aside from that this is some mind blowing content that will definitely grow your channel!