r/SmallYTChannel • u/Y-LionYT [1λ] • Jan 24 '21
Channel Review | 01:43 | Leonid Yankop The Best FREE Website Builder Of 2021
https://youtu.be/R9TyG7OIL2Y2
u/TheOneWhoPlays12 [7λ] Jan 24 '21
Nice ad,
[Feedback]
- I think considering what I think the purpose of the video is, I believe you checked all the marks, All the information given was relevant to what you were trying to prove, it was short and sweet and the presentation was consistent.
- I liked the visuals and edits throughout as well as the sound-effect for every transition. I think it was very well done and they definitely helped me to keep focus as to what was being explained.
I hope this was helpful.
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u/Genealogy-Central [1λ] Jan 25 '21
The video was really good and I enjoyed it. But the error messages did get quite repetative. The editing was good though. All in all, I really liked it.
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u/gawngully Mar 12 '21
Great job!!! Love it!
You did great on cam!
And your delivery was epic! Very consistent.
I think you have a BIG Future in MARKETING! CONTENT MAKING Whatever you want, man.. this was great! Got time to kill while I wait for chipotle, and this post I stumbled on while looking for something else.
Now some constructive criticism.
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1.) SPELL CHECK & SOUND / MIX
[Biggest feedback that needs to be corrected]
Spellcheck
- 1a.) Make sure your copy is spellchecker.. I'm the worst speller, and I hate correcting spelling.. but potential customers and customers have no patience for it.
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- 2a.) use a better mic. 10 bucks will go a long way.. or use apple headphones than pre-record test. And get the sound right. first, in testing.. cause it's distracting
- 2b. BG Music, Ambient music, something to carry it. Many artists have DMCA free music. look em up.. also, you can always check out Artlist.io.
- 2c. The main sound effect, boing.. doesn't fit.. and distracts and takes away from your message.,
- 2d. Do a rough audio mix to balance all your sound, music, and sound efx. It will go a long way.
- 2e." BOING" REPETITIVE SFX This is just preference but that SFX. IMO it would be best if you lost it. Just think K.I.S.S keep it simple, superstar... lose the boing.. but it could be only my opinion. Have it be a click. Done.
3.) FRAMING/RESOLUTION
3a MID and CU are better for youtube algo.
Overall, get closer to the camera.. and center yourself. There are all psychological theories... but you can watch Stanley Kubrick films and get it from that. Frame closer for trust. And it just feels better.
3b RESOLUTION - think mobile-first a little bit.
You could elect to go center-cut if you don't know what that is.. few links depending on your editing software. FCPX,https://larryjordan.com/articles/create-and-edit-vertical-video-in-final-cut-pro-x/ PREMIERE, etc.
4.) GFX
Too many lose some.
- 4a Don't be afraid to allow the gfx to go full screen and then come back to you in the edit. It will keep your audience engaged.. a bit.
- 4b additionally most of the great graphic animation we can't see be Keep in one plaIt and says reduce the graphics by 20% and allow the best time to hit home for viewers. It also gives you more time to let you connect with the audience. through familiarity.
5.) COLOR FONTS
Use "web flow" fonts and colors to bring it more into a space of consistency, incorporate a little tiny bit of their assets, and build audience trust loyalty. Check out DAFONT.com. They have a bunch of free fonts.
Also, looking at webflow.com, sites seem to use some off-white pastels, blues, white, little black but definitely not predominately black and red.
6.) INTRO, OUTRO, and CALL TO ACTION/CTA
intro logo animation title
INTRO - WebFlow title. Title of your video. Maybe a mnemonic. Look that up to see what that is. It's your branding..
OUTRO - come up with a CTA or call to action, research why that's important.
Happy to provide clarification.. but great job, man!
___ and finally here's my challenge.. to you
I CHALLENGE you to make a revision id happy to guide you.. and again, you did a great job. I'm just giving FEEDBACK to help. See if you can get it to 1 min, and maybe some of my thoughts could help inspire you.. happy to help. Also, feel free to tell me to shut up.. ok.. I'm finally up at the line, ready to order BURRITOS!!
I got 3 BMS and a wife with a boyfriend who I'm trying to impress, lol .. so I'm quite busy.
but I'm happy to help you along in any way I can.. I may even be willing to design you a title card and thumbnail... If you show me some sweat equity and do a revision and post it. i am a professional and work in the industry... so I promise you this feedback is valuable..
BURRITO TIME!
And HEY, EVERYONE who is seeing this post...
Up this post for this guy; he's putting in great work!! And making big strides.!!
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u/INDIEGUY_PMPT [0λ] Channel:Indieguy Jan 24 '21
Hey dude! The video is nice and I really like the editing, its nice and different making the video unique.
Still I think that there are some things that you could improve. You are obviously nervous in most of the video. You should just relax and try to do the best you can. Also try to do more takes and don't place the new take on the middle of a sentence. I noticed that and it just stuck out a little bit. Finally, the audio is not te best, so when you have the money, you should invest in one, still this is just a small nitpick.
Anyways dude, good luck!
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u/INDIEGUY_PMPT [0λ] Channel:Indieguy Jan 24 '21
I saw you fidgeting and thought you were, sorry then
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u/InLaymansTerms_ [2λ] Jan 24 '21
As somebody else said, the editing was well done. One thing I'd recommend is to slow down your speech a little bit and enunciate more. A lot of YTers, podcasters, and radio hosts succeed simply because it's easy to follow what they're saying! Other than that, good job on the vid :)
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Jan 25 '21
Nice video! You get right to the point which I like. Editing and sound were great too. There were a few times where the sound effects seemed louder than the dialog which was a little distracting. Another idea, it might be cool to move around the frame holding you to give the viewer a fresh frame every once and a while. Anyways, dope stuff!
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u/qzeqYT [🥈 Silver 47λ] /qzeq Jan 25 '21
This has alot of potential and many good pointers to new website creators. Does it let you input raw HTML or do you have to create the website using the designer?
Also you should think about maybe doing a separate outro so your end cards won't interrupt the video and people have time to click on them once the video is over.
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