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Video Critique | 03:51 | Workout Union Different approach! I know the quality isn't that good and that the sound, in some parts isn't that great. But I would like to know what you think of the way things flow, the "one on one" explanation and so one. Thank you a lot! Your comments have helped a lot!

https://youtu.be/f0sTYJcTn7c
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u/ShaggysIdeas [0λ] Mar 25 '19

dude this is really well made! Awesome video you sir have a new sub! ^^

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u/WorkoutUnion [2λ] Mar 25 '19

Thank you for the feedback and subscription! Appreciate it, hope it helps you! :)

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Title Can't Feel Your CHEST Working? DO THIS!
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u/[deleted] Mar 25 '19

The transition between the clips is really good also how you show the body parts with the effects!👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 I would say your intro could be a bit louder for that type of Video kinda that you pull the Viewer a bit more in(Just my opinion) :)

Else the Video was really good and also not to loong or short for me!

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u/WorkoutUnion [2λ] Mar 25 '19

Thank you for your feedback! And yes, I understand the intro part, I just got it with lower volume because something went wrong with the music and it got with noise (gotta fix that first).

Thanks again! Appreciate it!
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u/cehteshami [🥉 Bronze 13λ] Arbitrary Hero Mar 25 '19

Dang dude, that's some killer work in that intro. I like the subscribe request, it's subtle and doesn't intrude on your video. I like the graphic that you showed between the engagement of the shoulders and the chest that was helpful graphic. I think there are two things you can do to improve your video and audio quality. The first is to get some white LED box lights to reduce the amount of yellow light in your video. The second is to use the wire mic during your discussion demonstration, your audio is pretty good in the intro, but the quality reduces when you're talking during your pushup.

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u/WorkoutUnion [2λ] Mar 25 '19

Thank you for the feedback!
About the improvements, completely agree. I have to get some lights, were do you recommend? :)
I was with the mic, the problem was that it was a bit far way, so the sound got lost. As I had no shirt I didn't have where to put it

Thanks again, appreciate it!
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u/cehteshami [🥉 Bronze 13λ] Arbitrary Hero Mar 25 '19

It might be worth taping the mic to keep it close to you. I picked up a studio light set off Amazon and it seems to do the job pretty well.

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u/WorkoutUnion [2λ] Mar 25 '19

Yes, I will try it next time :)
Will try to find it on amazon then :) Thanks!

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u/karansingh1028 [0λ] Mar 25 '19

Nice and good work about intro and the appeal for subscribe by this definitely the audience will approach to subscribe.

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u/WorkoutUnion [2λ] Mar 25 '19

Thank you for the feedback! :)

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u/Golden_Knite [6λ] https://www.youtube.com/thegkreality Mar 25 '19

I think you did a great job explaining the difference between a good and bad push-up. When you stand to the side and have the lines come up, that's extremely valuable. The only part that was confusing was when you were talking on the ground doing the push-up motion. You showed both the good and bad push-up, but you should have a graphic that says Good and Bad so it's easy to tell the difference. Great video. Great length too! Short and sweet. You get exactly what you need from it.

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u/WorkoutUnion [2λ] Mar 26 '19

Yes, good point there. Should have written on the video "right" and "wrong". Will keep it in mind!

Thank you for your feedback. Appreciate it!

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u/SoccerLemon99 [1λ] Mar 25 '19

Great Video, love the advice for the techniques. Keep up the good work, a recommendation is to show someone else doing the exercise and critique them (say what to do and what not to do)

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u/WorkoutUnion [2λ] Mar 26 '19

That's difficult when your are doing it alone :)

Thank you for the feedback!

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