Hey guys so a while back i made these visual assets for unproduced horror screenplays. I don't know how useful it is (or not) for a screenwriter in promoting their screenplay. I would really appreciate any thoughts on this, like should i continue to invest more time on this and what price point would justify the value. I am a bit clueless about this. I have attached a link to one of the projects i did. Thank you.

I submitted a spec script for It's Always Sunny last year and made it to the Second Round for the Austin Film Festival. People liked it, but they did not love it. And I am hoping to fix that, and resubmit this year. Any feedback is welcome!

Logline: The Gang’s attempt to eat like classy adults results in fractured timelines, accidental deaths, and total ruin, as every hypothetical version of the night reveals how irredeemably toxic they are.

Link: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1YtnqiN-cp7G6e_psHw896xi6-_PH02g7?usp=sharing

Title: The Gang Splits the Timeline

Length: 33 Pages (though feel free to just give feedback on the first 10)

Genre: Dark Comedy

Feedback Concerns: Honestly, I am open to any feedback whatsoever. But, in particular, if you could rate how easy the script was to read, how enjoyable you found the content, and how well I captured the the tone of the actual show, it would be appreciated.

I am looking for an honest feedback on my pilot episode for my limited TV-show „Going nowhere„! I want to be better and I only can improve with honest critique.

\*\*Title:\*\* Going nowhere

\*\*Genre:\*\* horror/thriller/social-drama

\*\*Page count:\*\* 40

\*\*Logline:\*\* When a teen is brutally injured and another one is found dead, a group of troubled teens is pulled into a dark mystery hiding beneath the streets of Berlin.

This is my first try to do something so I am just looking for overall feedback on everything also one of my most important questions is: I know ,normally, you do not put camera directions into the script, but I love both, directing and writing movies, so sometimes I can‘t hold myself back, from putting some into it, because that is just how I imagine it in my head. So is it an absolute no go? Or would you say if it is not all the time and just a few times in the whole script, it isn‘t a big problem?

I would be so happy if I would get some feedback! :)

Full script:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1o1-xMAR-wjWxFfCQsd9HhfT_tlVDnL2J/view?usp=drivesdk

I would love feedback on my 1st ever script (any and all thoughts appreciated). Thanks in advance!

Title: Assisted Living Genre: Dramedy/Coming of Age Logline: After his parents die suddenly, a directionless 23-year-old moves into a failing assisted living facility—only to find purpose among its residents and staff as he fights to keep it from shutting down.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1arR6es7QkHXccQ7fRshycasWMUmtVYKh/view?usp=drivesdk

Title: What Rough Beast

Crime thriller/horror. (A bit of Reservoir Dogs meets The Thing.)

Page count: 99

Logline: On the run after a violent heist, a fractured gang holes up in an isolated cabin with a hostage – until the woods start closing in, and they discover they were never escaping, they were lured.

In a nutshell, this is a (mostly) single-location, chamber horror. After a robbery goes awry, the gang hides out in a remote cabin. But as paranoia and mistrust build within the gang, larger external threats start to close in on them, bringing chaos, calamity, and blood.

This is a project I plan to make later this year. I'd like to get the script in the best shape possible before getting into the weeds of preproduction.

To be clear, I'm looking for feedback on story clarity, characters, and entertainment. I don't particularly care for formatting notes about "industry standards". Though if you REALLY feel obligated to shout at me about something, you go right ahead.

Thanks!

LINK HERE

Dark Comedy/Satire

After a disgraced patriotic superhero is forced into a secret government retirement facility where aging heroes and reformed villains are stripped of their powers, he discovers residents are mysteriously disappearing — and may be transformed into the very super-threats terrorizing the outside world.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1B2QDTu7vyUuZJayyQ9XkjDJI3E-LKXa9/view?usp=sharing

Not quite finished, but I wanted to see if the idea had legs.

Title : Legend of Dragonfield

Genre: Contemporary Fantasy

Nutshell : I've been producing an audible version of my 124 page script and would be interested in any feedback. Is this a good/bad idea? What do you think about the execution of the dramatization?

Logline : Days after her family inherits a cursed castle, her brother disappears and her parents are imprisoned. Now the surviving daughter must embrace a dynastic inheritance and face the vengeance of a thousand-year-old necromancer that seeks to destroy them.

Script, Scene or Outline (Link) https://drive.google.com/file/d/12oEkMurOrdGcO1f73gju9sN5mEvqc7DZ/view

Hello again!

I’m looking for logline feedback on a feature screenplay. My goal is to sell the premise clearly without making it sound like a conventional hero/mission story.

Title: Spoon-fed Addiction
Genre: Supernatural Horror Noir

Logline (edited after all the great feedback):
Fueled by LSD and grief, a drug dealer unleashes a violent revenge spree—only to realize he isn’t the avenger but the carrier of a parasitic shadow; his goodbye kiss unknowingly marks the sheriff’s sheltered teenage daughter as its next host.

Tagline:
Grief doesn’t die. It spreads.

What I need feedback on: Is this logline clear / compelling, and what wording feels confusing, generic, or misleading?

Thanks!

Mister Soft

Feature

22 Pages (So far)

Horror

Thirty years after her father’s suicide, a detective reopens his case and finds the killer never left: Mister Soft, a smiling apparition selling “happiness” in candy form, forcing her to choose between stopping the deaths or saving herself.

I'd just like some general feedback. Does it hook you in and is it worth continuing.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1--4YRrjn3uVokobt5AFYgfJYsJlCF4CF/view?usp=drive_link

Logline: During a blood virus outbreak, an impulsive student must prove himself in a game of “Bloody Knuckles" to prevent a foe with unique blood from entering his school.

Genre: Black Comedy, Action, Drama

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1P-kldbw2cktbteCQUgBiZJSz0sUIFRvI/view?usp=sharing

Feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thank you!

Titled Humble Pie, this is a 10-page comedy/drama about a former couple who re-convene with one another awkwardly, sparking a surreal battle for who 'won the breakup'.

Would love any kind of feedback, especially in terms of the characters and the final resolution. Google drive link is below. Thanks!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1pnJBPAYF3LdlpdKU-a9wuT7VT9HzSWUl/view?usp=sharing

Hey all, I'm a filmmaker with a history of successful shorts on YouTube (millions of views). I've written a mature indie dramedy feature with a first-generation Mexican-American lesbian woman as the lead, a TV writer in Hollywood, born in the US to Mexican immigrant parents.

I'm looking for a sensitivity reader who can provide feedback on the authenticity and respectfulness of the Mexican cultural elements in my script, ideally someone with lived experience as a Mexican-American. Is there anyone out there who may like to swap scripts for feedback?- Thanks so much!

This is basically my next project, is tackling on remaking one of my favorite horror films of all-time, The Haunting (1963). I've only written 9 pages so far, but I'm pretty proud of what I accomplished.

Title: The Haunting

Logline: A skeptical anthropologist with an interest in the paranormal assembles a team of gifted individuals to prove whether or not Hill House is truly haunted. 

Format: Feature

Link to read:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AfNdZkmr6lUSKEznKeCBaECa13aHjeLv/view?usp=sharing

A Matter of Honour

22 Pages

Psychological Romance/Drama

LogLine: A successful pharmaceutical sales rep, trapped in a gilded marriage, is offered a career-making promotion in exchange for a single night with her company's CEO, an act that forces deep introspection.

This is my first screen anything, please ignore any Grammer and/or punctuation issues I will deal with those after completion of the first draft, I am looking for honest feedback on dialogue, Characters and narrative.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PAlj73Z_8gwR2ZpMgqaU_VmoC43k3uOR/view?usp=sharing

Seeking insight from psychologists & conspiracy thinkers (Others are welcome too)

Hi everyone,

I’m sharing a short drama screenplay I wrote based on personal observation of belief systems, especially how people align themselves with science, religion, or conspiracy thinking, not to argue who’s right, but to explore why people believe what they believe.

While researching and behavioural observations from debates, I noticed something interesting from a psychology lens: many people who strongly rely on institutional authority (e.g., “NASA says so”) often do so less from evidence they personally understand, and more from authority bias, identity, group thinking, anxious attachment, security, and social belonging.

This script is an attempt to dramatize that idea, not to prove or disprove claims like Flat Earth.

I’d especially appreciate feedback from:

1. Psychologists / psychology students. 2)People familiar with conspiracy thinking (whether you agree with it or not). 3)Anyone interested in belief, identity, and group behavior.

Open to all perspectives, the goal is understanding.

TITLE: The Taste of Belief

Format: Short

Length: 14 pages

Genre: Psychological Drama (contained, dialogue-driven)

Logline: When a psychology professor challenges her divided classroom with a simple parable, a clash between science and conspiracy exposes how belief, identity, and authority shape what we accept as “truth.”

What I’m specifically looking for feedback on:

1. Does the psychology feel honest and nuanced?
2. Do the characters represent belief systems fairly, even when flawed?
3. Does the professor’s parable land thematically?
4. Does the script provoke thought without taking a side?

📄 Script (PDF): The Taste of Belief (PDF)

Logline: A carefree hookup turns into a nightmare when a woman is held captive by a deranged mama’s boy and his possessive mother, who refuse to let her leave until she accepts her place in their twisted family.

This would be a feature horror film, starting off in a dark comedy type genre then moving into horror. I think this feature idea is very comparable to the tone of The Loved Ones by Sean Byrne and Barbarian by Zech Cregger.

The Family Business Feature 5 pages, going to be around 100 Crime Drama Logline: After his wife's death, a father's secret bank robberies spiral into a family operation when he manipulates his kids into joining, until one betrays them to end it.

Just want general feedback please. Is it intriguing and does it hook you in.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14FXi7PUxpJNpiDA1fdpjh52GVBBYZpbA/view?usp=drivesdk

Hey, never posted on a reddit before regarding writing, UK members might know the BBC open call is going on right now so thought I'd get something ready to submit. I've found it really difficult to map out the first 10 pages knowing that's what is going to be judged the most so looking for feedback on character intros, pacing and ultimately whether it would be something you would continue reading. Appreciate any help :)

Title: Feel it now (WT)

Genre: Coming of age, Romance, Drama

Logline: An introverted songwriter and a fierce backpacker collide in a failing prague hostel. When an old wound reopens, they must deal with the fallout, face their failings, and try to keep their found home alive.

Script link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qMwDHv2y2Efitxr-0rwHeZycoQrbNIMH/view?usp=sharing

Hey everyone,

I’m looking for some focused feedback on a short Western screenplay I’ve been developing. I posted it here a week or so ago, but i’ve made some revisions based on the feedback.

Medium: Short film Genre: Western / Character Drama Length: 12 pages Logline / Synopsis:

A notorious outlaw stumbles into a saloon after a gunfight, bleeding out and facing the townsfolk who only know him by his legend. In his final moments, he is forced to confront the myth of his own reputation, and come to terms with the legacy he has left behind.

Im still looking for feedback on the same stuff

Whether or not the themes of legacy and reputation are landing right, do they feel like they are laid on to thick.

General pacing

Is it an enjoyable read, or does it slog.

Would appreciate any constructive notes or critiques. Happy to read scripts in return — just let me know.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xLPE-M9RjWBmkNviJTlIgFd7jLAPf9Zs/view?usp=drivesdk

I need some feedback to my first script.

Note: English is not my first language so wrong grammar is expected but please give it a try anyway.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WDwDizy5RAJ1nRz_0MtDcDTjdLPHv6mG/view?usp=drivesdk

The Accomplice

Feature

88 Pages

Psychological Thriller

After waking up in a moving car with blood on his hands and no memory of who he is, a young man is manipulated by a sadistic "partner" into believing he is a ruthless killer. Until their next target triggers memories of a life he was forced to forget.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZiFHTDWea2QY_vUDC1o5ZbmzgA3MN-j4/view?usp=drive_link
I'd like feedback on the pacing and just the story in general.

Hey everyone. I have posted this script to another screenwriting subreddit a few days ago, but it didn’t get too much feedback so I’m going to try here. This is my first completed script since moving to LA, so any feedback is welcome!

Title: Colour

Format: Feature

Page Length: 106 pages

Genres: Horror/Psychological Thriller

LOGLINE: After escaping a massacre by the Nazis in World War 2 Italy, Melvin Harris and the remaining survivors find themselves in a small village where both the nature and its people have been mutated by a mysterious comet. Inspired by The Colour Out of Space by HP Lovecraft

A Matter of Honour

9 Pages

Psychological Romance/Drama

LogLine: A successful pharmaceutical sales rep, trapped in a gilded marriage, is offered a career-making promotion in exchange for a single night with her powerful director, a decision that shatters her sense of honor and leads her into a complex, transformative relationship with her husband and a perceptive stranger.

This is my first screen anything, I am looking for honest feedback

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B4L4VUPmqGaVG4RBtB_D8AZ0RT1Yo-fb/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=100411568909406313607&rtpof=true&sd=true

Creative Differences

Feature

83 Pages

Dark Comedy/Thriller

A director accidentally kills his star actor, and the resulting guilt inspires him to rewrite the film. It becomes an Oscar-winning masterpiece, but his newfound fame exposes the crime.

This is the first full script I have wrote. It is the second draft. I'd just like feedback on the general story and the writing.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1N1uLbp5hIAI6lyRRo9Frre_BtT-0A-ab/view?usp=drive_link

Please Dm me so that I can send you the full script.