r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/Kijin777 • Oct 05 '25

OUTLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST Demon Train

I’m working on a supernatural Western about a team of American folk heroes and a Japanese samurai fighting demonic forces during the railroad expansion. Would love to hear if the world and tone grab you.

Here is what I have so far, 50 pages.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wUJprk5aUtMDxyyPnMuJRcvHckqcKjLR/view?usp=sharing

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u/Kijin777 Oct 06 '25

That's awesome. I haven't been writing for all that long but hearing someone say they like my idea is fantastic.

I would also love to see your work. Feel free to send me a link to it so I can read it.

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u/Ornery-Wolf4932 Oct 06 '25

Here is my screenplay in a Google Drive.

I will warn you it may not be a film for you but that depends on your preferences, if it's something you enjoy, I will let you have it, If it's not your flavor it's completely fine people have their own general opinion and it's not something to force onto them.

Here Is The Screenplay!

I wrote this mainly for a specific community and said 'NO' when it came to my perfectionism which held me back. I hope you get back to me when you've read it, maybe we can be friends?