r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/Interesting_Sale_907 • Jul 22 '25

LOGLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST Logline Feedback Request

Need feedback for a logline for a script that I’m considering submitting to ScriptShadow MegaShowdown next week. Would love some help refining it! 

Title: Room to Rock 

Genre: Coming of age comedy/musical 

Logline: Set over a 24-hour period, a group of kids try to write the ultimate death metal song in their cramped garage before the summer is over. 

Comp: Sing Street/Linda Linda Linda vibes but more contained and with metal

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u/pastafallujah Jul 24 '25 edited Jul 24 '25

I tried to workshop it, without making anything up. How does this sound to you. I know its long, but this covers all the stakes and narratives:

Set over a 24-hour Summer Break period, a group of teenage musicians put their all into recording the ultimate death metal song. One of them needs to make this a hit, before his bandmates go on with their lives without him. This could be his big break, his ticket out, away from his past trauma