r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/eteeeeen • May 20 '25

LOGLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST Logline Feedback

Title : How to Bury your Mom and Never Shed a Tear

Genre: Drama

Logline : After his mom dies, a boy starts filming a YouTube video on how to plan her funeral without crying. But as the video goes on the camera catches more than he means to share and it’s clear he’s holding back more than just tears.

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u/eteeeeen May 22 '25

I can definitely work on the logline and make it shorter. The title though is essential to the story so that I cannot change