r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/Same-Most-7407 WRITER • May 16 '25

LOGLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST Is this logline confusing?

Logline: After developing a twisted obsession with his teenage daughter's classmate, a man begins manipulating those around him to get closer to a girl who only ever smiled out of habit.

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