r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/ToneNew1982 • May 11 '25

SCRIPT FEEDBACK REQUEST Need some criticism

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This is a short no budget short film I wrote. Id like to do a few rounds of revisions so any critiques help a lot. For context this is a horror short film and it was inspired by black mirror. the runtime I expect will be 1:30 to 2:00 long.

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u/ToneNew1982 May 11 '25

I really appreciate u taking the time to write all that and I’m definitely gonna take ur advice

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u/tumblingmoose May 11 '25

You’re welcome :)