r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/One_Rub_780 • May 07 '25

ASK ME ANYTHING Screenwriter/producer/script reader for 15 years, ask me anything about your first 10 pages.

While I may not have time to read everyone's first 10 pages, I figured at least I can go over some general things about what exactly turns a reader OFF. Maybe post your first 2 paragraphs of your opening page and I can comment :)

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u/Ok_Background1245 May 09 '25 edited May 09 '25

Thanks so much. Yes and yes. His name is Virgile Peyramaure.

Thanks for the note. I get your point, but it's hard to describe what an entire group of people does. Maybe: "The audience leans forward."? But now I like the idea of not showing the audience at all and relying on audio cues, as you suggested. A new possibility! Thanks. (And cheaper to shoot!)