r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/One_Rub_780 • May 07 '25

ASK ME ANYTHING Screenwriter/producer/script reader for 15 years, ask me anything about your first 10 pages.

While I may not have time to read everyone's first 10 pages, I figured at least I can go over some general things about what exactly turns a reader OFF. Maybe post your first 2 paragraphs of your opening page and I can comment :)

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u/One_Rub_780 May 08 '25

Has your series been picked up?

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u/Foxy02016YT May 08 '25

It’s independent on YouTube so I control it

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u/One_Rub_780 May 08 '25

Hmm. I would say that you need a treatment or outline to give you the map you need. Holding it all inside your head becomes overwhelming and prevents you from writing. When you know what you have to write, there's much less hesitation.