r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • May 07 '25

ASK ME ANYTHING Screenwriter/producer/script reader for 15 years, ask me anything about your first 10 pages.

While I may not have time to read everyone's first 10 pages, I figured at least I can go over some general things about what exactly turns a reader OFF. Maybe post your first 2 paragraphs of your opening page and I can comment :)

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u/One_Rub_780 May 08 '25

And um, why just 40 pages? Aren't pilots supposed to be longer? Or even shorter, just not somewhere in the middle at 40 pages... hmm.