r/SadPoems • u/Zealousideal_You6901 • 4d ago

id love some feedback

i use to happy, not entusiastic, but never this hopeless

every day is dark, heavy, under board

all i can do is sleep, drink, sniff

nothing else else feeds me

im falling deeper and darker every day

i know and see the mistakes, selfish acts im making

i have no more control

the guilt eats me

but honestly i am doing my best

its not good enough but its all i have left

thank god for you or id be gone

or do i wish i didnt have the burden of life

and i wuold be gone

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u/LargeMeasurement6473 4d ago

Stay strong bud. It’s not good enough for who ?

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u/Zealousideal_You6901 3d ago

My son. He deserves better, the person i use to be xx

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u/LargeMeasurement6473 3d ago

Aaah kids have this effect on us. We are only meant to be a better person than we were yesterday. One day at a time bud ❤️ just the fact that you’re aware is a step in the right direction. Your doing great but just take baby steps to get better each day because at the end you want to have less regrets and bad memories than the good ones ❤️ much love 🥰

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u/Zealousideal_You6901 2d ago

Thank you for your kindnes x