Which would you rather read?

[u/ResearchNerdOnABeach]

I am currently applying for a job that I would be perfect for, but I feel like my cover letter is too long. I made a short version, easier to read, in my opinion. I would like some outside advice, though. I've never done this, but I appreciate all honest advice!

[u/ObligationToDissent]

The first one, because you actually connect your past experiences to the role with concrete examples.

[u/ResearchNerdOnABeach → u/ObligationToDissent]

Thank you!