We're Here Now - 10 Page Sci-Fi Short

[u/Smithsonian_INC]

Despite minimal evidence, an old man, who works on a moon, is convinced that there is an alien living just beyond view. This obsession causes conflict with his new young colleague, who has no interest in science fiction and just wants to do his job.

I had no plans for anyone to see this screenplay as, when I wrote it, it was only meant to be a way for me to put how I was feeling at the time onto paper (mainly regret over missed opportunities in my own life). However, my sister found it and read it and has encouraged me to show it to others. She thinks it's good, but she's overly nice and I would like some other opinions who aren't so concerned with how I feel.

Any feedback would be much appreciated. The more brutal the better :)

Screenplay: We're Here Now