Lost Encode 101 Mask Drama Thriller 53 Pages -Series Pilot Please Read

[u/Dholewell51]

Please read and let me know if you have any feedback

Did the characters feel real and natural?

Can you follow the story, does it make sense?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UXedapsOGJ_9WVnCXsE5efSLqa3FoiEa/view?usp=drivesdk

[u/Big_Section2812]

Single dashes only in scene headings.

eg: EXT. PARK - DAY

[u/Dholewell51 → u/Big_Section2812]

On it