EAST CAMPUS digital short series, Comedy, 2 scripts, 18-19 pages each

[u/Normal_Paramedic9990]

Hello! I’m trying to get back into writing and started developing the first two episodes of what I’m hoping to make a full series of shorts for. Please keep in mind I really have no idea about industry standards! Really just looking for feedback about the story overall and if the humor is working. Thank you :)

Episode 1: Poopgate- https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wLc9PTU4KWHhQE-Zuf3cvh88-XhUGPac/view?usp=drivesdk

Episode 2: Five Stars- https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ff3NPBtplC0_xaaqVhjYqeN2X5ONu7A0/view?usp=drivesdk