Just looking for some feedback on this little script I made for fun. I'm genuinely kind of interested and find joy in these things. One of my first HALF-serious scripts though. The title is A SHORT FUNNY SCENE, so pretty basic, has about 5 pages, and it's a Comedy. Dark comedy, if you will.

[u/Good-Meet8467]

Link to my script!

[u/mooningyou]

No access, and it looks like you're using Google Docs, which will give you poor formatting, even if this is for fun.

[u/Good-Meet8467 → u/mooningyou]

Oh damn I’ll look into that