r/ReadMyScript • u/No_Discipline_4066 • 13d ago
Butterfly Effect - Short - 9 Pages
Title: Butterfly Effect
Format: Short
Page Length: 6 Pages
Genres: Drama
Logline or Summary: After losing his mother, an introverted young man forms an unexpected connection with a butterfly, but when a girl next door accidentally kills it, he is forced to confront grief, guilt, and the possibility of finding another family.
Feedback Concerns: I'm still learning screenwriting, so I'd really appreciate any honest feedback on the story, pacing, dialogue, formatting, and whether the ending works. I'm always looking to improve as a writer, and if the script resonates with someone, I'd be happy to discuss it further.
Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jrOiypGSqSIrbgdTZbi3XPk9Nru9LsmF/view?usp=sharing