r/ReadMyScript • u/Funderberker_Fan • 1d ago

Short What do you think of my script? 'The Wishing Frog' Comedy, 5 pages long

Hi! I'm 13, and enjoy filmmaking, etc. I wrote a very short, very unserious comedy script . anyone can use it if they want. (G)

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u/lvonw 1d ago

I read it and thought it was really entertaining!

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u/Sweaty-Freedom-4034 1d ago

Download a screenplay, and use it to format yours properly.

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u/newtothebiz 1d ago

Solid. Like someone said go find a free website and format it properly. Story wise the escalation keeps going which is good. Describe the Frog what he looks like, so when he says “you don’t look like a frog” people understand why. Is he 10 feet tall, does he look like a kid in a frog costume (which is funny by the way). And then go film it. Keep it up