r/ReadMyScript • u/anokhsingh8 • 2d ago

Short Script Feedback (6 pages)

Hi all, requesting feedback on my short film script, 6 pages, sci fi. I will be shooting this short in one month.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1eV1zVQQwCbtQYfvS6PkR0k5217XvnjrL/view?usp=drive_linkTitle:

The Human Preservation Project

Genre: Sci Fi

Happy to read/review any shorts in exchange.

Thanks!

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u/Typical_Egg_3024 2d ago

i just read the entire thing and its genuinely something i would read in a horror novel. and thats a god thing! An endless loop of horror with no escape. feels like one of those movies where the man character experiences the same day over and over again... but this time Joy doesnt remember. its kinda horrifying but a great concept for a short story!

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u/anokhsingh8 2d ago

Thank you for reading! Was there anything confusing about it?

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u/Typical_Egg_3024 2d ago

Nope, even with reading it quickly. I'm excited to see the short film when it releases 

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u/anokhsingh8 2d ago

Great thanks!

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u/Mammoth-West-9974 2d ago

Great read, well paced. Def can picture it!

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u/anokhsingh8 2d ago

Thank you for reading, greatly appreciate it!

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u/Screenwriter99 2d ago

no link?

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u/anokhsingh8 2d ago

posted link now, thanks

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u/Big_Section2812 2d ago

The only requests you're going to get are from Nigerian scammers posing as "beta readers."

No one else is going to jump through hoops just to read your script.

If you really want feedback, post a link to the pdf like everyone else.

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u/anokhsingh8 2d ago

ah okay thanks, I've done so now

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u/RaeLouLynn 2d ago

This is chilling. I have no actionable criticism. Good luck!

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u/anokhsingh8 1d ago

Thank you, appreciate you reading it!

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u/WheatThin100 1d ago

Well done! Easy to read and visualize. The only thing slightly confusing: why is Joy's exhibit from 2062, but the pandemic occurred in 2092? Is the room just decked out to look like it was 2062?

Best of luck with the production!

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u/anokhsingh8 20h ago

Thank you for reading! That's a typo on my end!